| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 66 | | tagDensity | 0.045 | | leniency | 0.091 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1743 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 5.34% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1743 | | totalAiIsms | 33 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | word | "practiced ease" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "navigated" | | 1 | "treacherous" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "abyssal" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "profound" | | 6 | "searing" | | 7 | "flawless" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "charm" | | 11 | "practiced ease" | | 12 | "chaotic" | | 13 | "velvet" | | 14 | "sanctuary" | | 15 | "familiar" | | 16 | "intensity" | | 17 | "ceaseless" | | 18 | "racing" | | 19 | "standard" | | 20 | "echoed" | | 21 | "depths" | | 22 | "fractured" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 103 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 166 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1730 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 36 | | wordCount | 1018 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.47 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Aramaic | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | Oxford | 1 | | French | 1 | | Eva | 3 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Lucien | 10 | | Rory | 15 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Moreau" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.763 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1730 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 166 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 93 | | mean | 18.6 | | std | 15.55 | | cv | 0.836 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 38 | | 1 | 51 | | 2 | 32 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 73 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 50 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 54 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 50 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 33 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 36 | | 45 | 35 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 156 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 166 | | ratio | 0.006 | | matches | | 0 | "The mental image of the mahogany bar—her former refuge and home—engulfed in supernatural hellfire rooted her in place." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1028 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 8 | | adverbRatio | 0.007782101167315175 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 166 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 166 | | mean | 10.42 | | std | 6.01 | | cv | 0.577 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 43.37% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.26506024096385544 | | totalSentences | 166 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 94.51% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "She navigated the treacherous labyrinth" | | 1 | "She gripped the bottom deadbolt." | | 2 | "She twisted the middle lock." | | 3 | "Her fingers moved to the" | | 4 | "His left eye, an abyssal" | | 5 | "His right eye burned a" | | 6 | "He wore a bespoke charcoal" | | 7 | "His posture remained rigid, both" | | 8 | "Her pulse drummed a relentless" | | 9 | "She met his dual-colored stare" | | 10 | "His cologne, a crisp blend" | | 11 | "She abandoned it the night" | | 12 | "He dominated the confined space." | | 13 | "He navigated the chaotic ocean" | | 14 | "She secured the first deadbolt." | | 15 | "He reached out to inspect" | | 16 | "Her right thumb found the" | | 17 | "His gaze anchored onto her" | | 18 | "He backed her up." | | 19 | "He dropped his cane." |
| | ratio | 0.314 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 96 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "The brass knocker thudded against" | | 1 | "Ptolemy abandoned his perch on" | | 2 | "The tabby cat bolted beneath" | | 3 | "Rory set down her carton" | | 4 | "The scent of cumin, ginger," | | 5 | "Rory wiped her hands on" | | 6 | "She navigated the treacherous labyrinth" | | 7 | "She gripped the bottom deadbolt." | | 8 | "The cast-iron mechanism clanked back." | | 9 | "She twisted the middle lock." | | 10 | "Her fingers moved to the" | | 11 | "Rory pulled the door open." | | 12 | "Lucien Moreau stood on the" | | 13 | "The stairwell bulb flickered, throwing" | | 14 | "His left eye, an abyssal" | | 15 | "His right eye burned a" | | 16 | "He wore a bespoke charcoal" | | 17 | "His posture remained rigid, both" | | 18 | "Rory blocked the doorway with" | | 19 | "Intimidation tactics held zero weight" |
| | ratio | 0.941 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "His gaze anchored onto her face with an intensity that caused the room’s temperature to spike." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien switched, the syllables slipping off his tongue with practiced ease" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |