| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 29 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Lucien pulled back [back]" | | 1 | "Lucien's composure cracked again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 76 | | tagDensity | 0.382 | | leniency | 0.763 | | rawRatio | 0.069 | | effectiveRatio | 0.053 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2072 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 20.37% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2072 | | totalAiIsms | 33 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "shattered" | | 2 | "pristine" | | 3 | "navigated" | | 4 | "tension" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "facade" | | 7 | "flawless" | | 8 | "traced" | | 9 | "chill" | | 10 | "chaotic" | | 11 | "resonated" | | 12 | "unreadable" | | 13 | "tracing" | | 14 | "echoed" | | 15 | "firmly" | | 16 | "perfect" | | 17 | "eyebrow" | | 18 | "fascinating" | | 19 | "intensity" | | 20 | "weight" | | 21 | "simmering" | | 22 | "echoing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 131 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 131 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 178 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2055 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 30.03% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 76 | | wordCount | 1417 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 2.4 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aramaic | 1 | | Lucien | 23 | | Brick | 2 | | Lane | 2 | | Sumerian | 2 | | Eva | 4 | | Marseille | 1 | | Ptolemy | 3 | | Rory | 34 | | London | 3 | | Rain | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aramaic" | | 1 | "Lucien" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Ptolemy" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Rain" |
| | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "Marseille" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.3 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 107 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "tasted like expensive whiskey and bitter" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 2055 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 178 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 84 | | mean | 24.46 | | std | 15.8 | | cv | 0.646 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 48 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 53 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 39 | | 7 | 33 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 55 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 54 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 38 | | 17 | 38 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 49 | | 20 | 33 | | 21 | 53 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 31 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 53 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 32 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 30 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 29 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 57 | | 39 | 34 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 25 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 40 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 40 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 229 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 178 | | ratio | 0.006 | | matches | | 0 | "The scent of him—sandalwood and ozone—clung to the stale air of Eva’s flat." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1432 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "chaotic, book-filled apartment." | | 1 | "heavy, leather-bound volume," |
| | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.01675977653631285 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004189944134078212 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 178 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 178 | | mean | 11.54 | | std | 6.4 | | cv | 0.555 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 41.57% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.2247191011235955 | | totalSentences | 178 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 88.75% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | | 0 | "He leaned on an ivory-handled" | | 1 | "His gaze locked onto hers." | | 2 | "He stepped over a precarious" | | 3 | "He nudged an overflowing ashtray" | | 4 | "She navigated the labyrinth of" | | 5 | "It clattered against a pile" | | 6 | "His hands snapped out, gripping" | | 7 | "She refused to retreat another" | | 8 | "His voice dropped, a low" | | 9 | "It stung worse than a" | | 10 | "Her fingers curled into fists" | | 11 | "He leaned in, the ozone" | | 12 | "His gaze traced the line" | | 13 | "He caught her wrists." | | 14 | "His broad hands wrapped around" | | 15 | "He did not let go." | | 16 | "His thumbs brushed the delicate" | | 17 | "he murmured, stepping into her" | | 18 | "Her palms smoothed up the" | | 19 | "He leaned down." |
| | ratio | 0.328 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 125 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | | 0 | "The brass tumblers of the" | | 1 | "Rory pulled the heavy wooden" | | 2 | "The heavy scent of roasted" | | 3 | "The flickering overhead bulb caught" | | 4 | "He leaned on an ivory-handled" | | 5 | "His gaze locked onto hers." | | 6 | "The other remained pitch black," | | 7 | "Rory's grip tightened on the" | | 8 | "The crescent-shaped scar on her" | | 9 | "Lucien stepped forward." | | 10 | "Rory held her ground for" | | 11 | "He stepped over a precarious" | | 12 | "Ptolemy, Eva’s overweight tabby cat," | | 13 | "The cat took one look" | | 14 | "Lucien tapped the polished tip" | | 15 | "Rory pushed the door closed" | | 16 | "The three deadbolts slammed back" | | 17 | "Rory turned, leaning back against" | | 18 | "The thud of her pulse" | | 19 | "The last time they stood" |
| | ratio | 0.977 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "His gaze traced the line of her jaw, dropping to the pulse beating frantic against her throat before snapping back to her eyes." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 29 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "His voice dropped, a low rumble vibrating in his chest" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 76 | | tagDensity | 0.026 | | leniency | 0.053 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.053 | |