Run: 2026-02-19-01KHVP5YF67ZE5E054F8P377AG

Run Details

Duration:
48.5s
Cost:
$0.052536
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The distinctive green neon sign above the entrance hummed, bleeding an unnatural emerald light through the rain-streaked window of The Raven's Nest. Inside the dimly lit Soho pub, dust motes danced in the sparse illumination hanging over the mahogany bar. Rory sat on a worn leather stool. She scraped her thumbnail across the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. Her windbreaker carried the thick, lingering scent of fried garlic and soy sauce from her shift delivering for the Golden Empress. Silas stood across the counter, wiping down the wood with a rag. His silver signet ring clacked rhythmically against the glass he polished. The grey streaks in his auburn hair caught the low amber light. He moved down the length of the bar, favoring his right side, a slight limp in his left leg disrupting his otherwise smooth, authoritative gait. He slid a rocks glass toward Rory. Amber liquid sloshed against the brim. The brass bell above the door chimed. A rush of damp October wind swept into the room, rattling the frames of the black-and-white photographs and antique maps plastered across the walls. Rory kept her bright blue eyes fixed on the condensation weeping down her glass. Footsteps fell heavy against the floorboards, lacking the shuffle of a regular patron. The newcomer stopped behind Rory. A scent of expensive bergamot perfume pierced the stale aroma of spilled ale and old paper. "Aurora?" Rory stiffened. The syllables carried a crisp Welsh lilt, polished round the edges by years of corporate elocution. She turned. Her straight, shoulder-length black hair brushed the collar of her nylon jacket. Gemma stood two feet away. She wore a tailored camel hair coat, belted tight at the waist. Raindrops beaded on the silk scarf draped around her neck. Her posture mirrored the rigid mannequins in the high-end boutiques of Mayfair. Rory offered a flat, unblinking stare. "It is you." Gemma stepped closer, her gaze dragging down the cheap synthetic fabric of Rory's windbreaker, lingering on the faded takeout logo embroidered over her chest. "My god. I haven't seen you since second year. You just vanished." "I moved to London." "You abandoned your flat in Cardiff in the middle of the night. You left your textbooks on the kitchen table." Gemma pulled out the stool next to Rory and lowered herself onto the cracked leather. "Brendan and Jennifer called my parents. They thought you were dead. We all did." Silas materialized from the shadows near the taps. He set a fresh coaster in front of Gemma, his hazel eyes locking onto her for a fraction of a second before sweeping the rest of the room. He didn't ask for her order. "Gin and tonic." Gemma tapped a manicured fingernail against the wood. Silas turned his back. The clinking of bottles resumed. "I sent an email," Rory shifted her weight, rolling the heavy glass between her palms. "Three weeks later. A blank message with an attachment saying you were fine." Gemma gripped the edge of the bar. "You threw away the Pre-Law program. You were top of the class, Rory. We were supposed to take the bar together. Look at you now." "I have a job." "You deliver takeout." "It pays the rent." Silas set the gin and tonic over the coaster. He retreated to the far end of the counter, picking up a newspaper and leaning against the heavy oak bookshelf that concealed the back room. Gemma took a sip. Her nose wrinkled at the sharp taste of the cheap well gin. She set the glass down and leaned forward. The ambient light carved hollow shadows under her cheekbones. She looked older, burdened by the endless hours of billable corporate litigation. "I made junior partner at Hughes & Davies last month." "Congratulations. You always wanted that." "I had to work twice as hard to fill the vacuum you left," Gemma shot back. Her knuckles whitened around the glass. "You had a natural mind for it. Out-of-the-box thinking, the professors called it. You could dissect a tort case in ten minutes. I stayed up until four in the morning memorizing precedents just to keep pace with you." Rory took a slow pull of her whiskey. The alcohol burned a familiar, jagged path down her throat. She set the glass down, her movements deliberate and precise. "Cardiff is a long time ago." "It's three years ago, Aurora." Gemma let out a sharp, bitter laugh. "It's not a lifetime." "It feels like one." "Because of Evan?" The air in the bar thickened. Rory dug her nail back into the crescent scar on her wrist. The ambient hum of the neon sign outside felt deafening. Silas turned a page of his newspaper. The rustle of paper cut through the silence. Gemma watched Rory's face. "He came looking for you," Gemma continued, her voice dropping. "He cornered me outside the library. He looked awful. Drunk. Said you stole money from him. Said you lost your mind." "Evan said a lot of things." Rory kept her voice entirely level. "He smashed your apartment windows. The police came. After that, he packed up and went back to Swansea." Gemma reached out, hovering a hand over Rory's arm before pulling it back, unsure of the boundary. "You could have told me. You could have stayed. I would have let you sleep on my sofa." "I didn't need a sofa." "You needed help. Instead, you fled." Gemma gestured to the dim, empty bar. "To this. Hiding in Soho. Smelling like an industrial kitchen. You let him steal your future." Rory stood up. The wooden stool scraped violently against the floorboards. She reached into her pocket, pulled out a crumpled ten-pound note, and slapped it onto the damp mahogany. "He didn't steal my future," Rory leaned over the bar, bringing her face inches from Gemma's. "He forced me to find a new one. A real one. You sit in your glass office drafting NDAs for oil companies. You think that degree makes you significant." Gemma shrank back, her eyes widening at the cold, hard edge in Rory's tone. The bubbly, driven girl from the university library was gone, replaced by someone entirely unrecognizable. Someone dangerous. "I didn't come in here to insult you," Gemma whispered. "I miss my friend." "Your friend stayed in Cardiff." Rory grabbed her empty windbreaker, turning her back on the bar. Silas looked up from his newspaper. He offered a single, almost imperceptible nod. "Rory, wait." Gemma stood, leaving her coat unbelted. "I come to London every other Tuesday for client meetings. Let me buy you a proper dinner. Somewhere nice." Rory paused at the door. Her hand gripped the tarnished brass handle. The neon light bled across her knuckles. She looked over her shoulder, her blue eyes devoid of the warmth Gemma sought. "Don't come back to this bar, Gemma. It's not the sort of place for junior partners."
created_at"2026-02-19T19:31:41.001Z" 2/19/2026, 7:31:41 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.368
leniency0.737
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1155
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1155
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"disrupting"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"lilt"
count1
3
word"silk"
count1
4
word"synthetic"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"disrupting"
1"footsteps"
2"lilt"
3"silk"
4"synthetic"
5"weight"
6"familiar"
7"silence"
8"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences75
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1148
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount767
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.48
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Golden1
Empress1
Rory19
October1
Welsh1
Mayfair1
Gemma18
Silas6
persons
0"Raven"
1"Rory"
2"Gemma"
3"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.261
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1148
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean24.96
std19.79
cv0.793
sampleLengths
081
173
27
338
434
51
632
739
86
939
104
1149
1242
1311
149
1515
1645
174
183
194
2034
2145
2210
235
2460
2528
266
2716
284
293
3043
314
3231
3312
3453
355
3629
3729
3845
3931
4014
415
4224
4327
4433
4516
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs126
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences99
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount774
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.01937984496124031
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007751937984496124
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean11.6
std7.73
cv0.666
sampleLengths
022
118
27
313
421
512
611
712
825
97
106
117
1224
1314
1413
155
1616
171
182
1916
202
2112
225
2312
2410
2512
266
2727
2812
294
3035
3114
328
3328
346
3511
364
375
3815
3920
4025
414
423
434
449
4525
464
4712
488
499
42.93% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.29292929292929293
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences71
matches
0"She scraped her thumbnail across"
1"Her windbreaker carried the thick,"
2"His silver signet ring clacked"
3"He moved down the length"
4"He slid a rocks glass"
5"Her straight, shoulder-length black hair"
6"She wore a tailored camel"
7"Her posture mirrored the rigid"
8"He set a fresh coaster"
9"He didn't ask for her"
10"He retreated to the far"
11"Her nose wrinkled at the"
12"She set the glass down"
13"She looked older, burdened by"
14"Her knuckles whitened around the"
15"She set the glass down,"
16"She reached into her pocket,"
17"He offered a single, almost"
18"Her hand gripped the tarnished"
19"She looked over her shoulder,"
ratio0.282
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences71
matches
0"The distinctive green neon sign"
1"Rory sat on a worn"
2"She scraped her thumbnail across"
3"Her windbreaker carried the thick,"
4"Silas stood across the counter,"
5"His silver signet ring clacked"
6"The grey streaks in his"
7"He moved down the length"
8"He slid a rocks glass"
9"Amber liquid sloshed against the"
10"The brass bell above the"
11"A rush of damp October"
12"Rory kept her bright blue"
13"Footsteps fell heavy against the"
14"The newcomer stopped behind Rory."
15"A scent of expensive bergamot"
16"The syllables carried a crisp"
17"Her straight, shoulder-length black hair"
18"Gemma stood two feet away."
19"She wore a tailored camel"
ratio0.986
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He retreated to the far end of the counter, picking up a newspaper and leaning against the heavy oak bookshelf that concealed the back room."
89.29% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Gemma continued, her voice dropping"
97.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Gemma continued (continue)"
1"Gemma whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.053
leniency0.105
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.105
83.3763%