Run: 2026-02-19-01KHVP7WFNPZ51830EY8A3RBAS

Run Details

Duration:
1m 57s
Cost:
$0.145532
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain battered the cracked asphalt of Soho, turning the narrow alleys into rushing black rivers. Harlow Quinn pounded through the deluge, her boots slapping the wet street in a steady, relentless cadence. Her trench coat hung heavy with water, slapping against her thighs with every stride. Up ahead, a long shadow darted past a rusted dumpster. "Herrera! Plant your feet!" Tomás Herrera ignored the command. He hit a stack of waterlogged wooden pallets and vaulted them. The explosive movement sent his Saint Christopher medallion swinging in wide arcs from underneath his drenched shirt. The harsh amber glare of the streetlamps illuminated his olive skin, flushed crimson with exertion. Quinn set her sharp jaw into a hard, unforgiving line. She adjusted her stride, altering her approach vector toward the mouth of the alley to cut off his escape route. The worn leather watch on her left wrist scraped the wet brick of a corner building as she tight-roped the turn. He maintained a twenty-yard lead. "Metropolitan Police! Stop running, Tomás!" She drew her ASP baton. With a forceful downward snap, the mechanism locked the steel segments into a rigid defensive rod. Tomás slipped on a sodden pile of discarded newspapers, his momentum betraying him. His left foot kicked out. He collided hard with a rusted chain-link fence. The violent impact tore his right sleeve open, but his left arm snagged the wire, revealing a pale, jagged scar running down his forearm. He grabbed the fence mesh, hauled himself upright, and threw a desperate look over his shoulder. Absolute panic widened his warm brown eyes. Wet, short curly dark brown hair plastered in a chaotic mess against his forehead. He shoved off the fence and sprinted across a flooded intersection, dodging a blaring yellow cab that threw a massive wave of gray water over his legs. Quinn maintained her precise, metered pace. Eighteen years of service drilled oxygen management into her muscle memory. Adrenaline commanded Tomás, forcing him into erratic, energy-draining bursts. Panicked suspects always burned out. Trained pursuers simply endured. She tracked his chaotic path past a row of shuttered storefronts and followed him into a claustrophobic, garbage-strewn gap between two derelict tenements on the edge of Camden. Solid sheets of water poured off the rooflines. Quinn wiped her free hand over her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair, flinging an accumulation of rainwater from her eyes. Every breath she took filled her lungs with the smell of wet decay and exhaust fumes. "You boxed yourself in, Herrera! There are no exits through this block!" No answer came. The relentless, heavy drumbeat of the rain drowned out any footfalls. Quinn slowed her approach. She lowered her center of gravity and gripped the steel baton with both hands, ready to block a sudden strike. The alley dead-ended at a sheer, windowless ten-foot concrete wall. Dumped furniture, shattered glass, and ruined mattresses littered the narrow passage. Her target had vanished from sight. She swept the area piecemeal. Her eyes scanned the trash piles and the shadows clinging to the brick walls. Behind a cluster of rotting wooden fruit crates, a heavy circular iron grate sat shoved off its hinges. A pitch-black hole gaped in the cracked pavement. Cold, stale air rushed up from the depths beneath the city, cutting fierce through the overpowering scent of wet street garbage. An old utility shaft. Or something much older. Quinn stepped to the very edge and shined her Maglite down the drop. A rusted iron ladder descended into an abyss. Fresh mud smeared the center of the top three rungs. She collapsed her baton with a sharp strike to the ground, shoved it into her tactical belt, and drew her Glock. The freezing metal met her numb, wet fingers. She slung a leg over the lip of the hole, secured her boot onto the first rung, and plunged into the dark beneath London. The storm above muffled in an instant, the torrential rain reducing to a distant, muted thrum. The descending air grew dense and heavy, carrying an unnatural, jarring blend of raw ozone, wet copper, and burning sage. Decades of thick black soot coated the rough brick walls surrounding the iron ladder. Far below her, the ladder shook under his weight. Metal clanged against metal in harsh rhythms. Tomás moved too fast, letting sheer gravity and desperation pull him down into the depths. "Herrera!" Her deep voice bounced off the circular brick walls, amplified and distorted, sounding like a dozen officers shouting at once. A harsh, bone-rattling clatter resonated from the bottom of the shaft. Boot tread struck solid stone. Tomás abandoned the ladder. Quinn slid down the remaining length of the iron rail. She ignored the rough, flaking rust tearing through the palms of her leather gloves. Her boots hit a solid concrete floor with a heavy thud. She dropped into a crouch, swinging the barrel of her weapon out in a short arc. A massive, cavernous space opened up around her. Dusty, faded porcelain tiles formed a vast curved ceiling. A giant peeling sign clung to the filthy wall above a row of crumbling wooden benches: Camden Station - Northbound. This deep underground tunnel did not stretch into empty, forgotten darkness. Torchlight flickered. Tremendous shadows danced and morphed against the dirty porcelain tiles. Quinn flattened her back against a massive load-bearing support pillar. She kept her weapon raised, tracking the movement ahead. A sprawling, impossible bazaar choked the ancient Victorian train tracks. Ramshackle stalls constructed from scavenged Victorian ironwork, shattered gravestones, and rotted railway ties lined the length of the station platform. Glass apothecary jars filled with luminescent blue fluids illuminated the rugged faces of unearthly merchants wrapped in heavy sheepskin coats. Intricate strings of glowing bioluminescent fungus hung suspended from the arched ceiling, casting a sickly green pallor over a dense, bustling throng of bizarre bodies. Acrid, eye-watering smoke billowed up from iron braziers filled with peculiar purple coals. In a small nearby alcove, a giant man wearing a tattered trench coat traded a handful of jagged black stones for a sealed glass vial of thick, boiling crimson liquid. The Veil Market. Quinn tightened her firm grip on her sidearm. Her leather watch ticked loud against her pulse point. Three years ago, her partner DS Morris vanished off the face of the earth while tracing a blood trail into this exact sort of subterranean madness. The official metropolitan report declared a common suspect overpowered him near the Regent canal. Quinn knew the blood spatter patterns on the brickwork defied elementary physics. Morris spent his final days warning her about secret spaces existing beneath London, black markets selling alchemical poisons, stolen enchantments, and things unregulated by human law. Thirty yards down the platform, two towering figures blocked a heavy wrought-iron gate. Wicked iron spikes protruded from thick, stained leather armor strapped across their disproportionate chests. Their faces remained hidden beneath heavy burlap hoods. The imposing sentries flanked the only prominent entrance leading to the market inner concourse. Tomás stepped out from behind a long line of cloaked buyers and approached the lethal guards. He kept his hands visible above his waist, his fingers spread wide open. The towering sentries crossed a pair of heavy iron pikes, blocking his narrow path. Tomás retrieved a small, jagged white object from his damp trouser pocket. A bone token. The sentry stationed on the left leaned down and inspected the fragment. A low, guttural grunt vibrated the ancient platform floorboards and echoed up the tunnel. The sentries uncrossed their massive weapons. Tomás slipped past the towering figures without a word and disappeared into the throngs inside the inner market. Quinn abandoned the cover of the concrete pillar. "Hold your step. Present your tithe or turn back." A merchant stepped seamless from a shadowy recess right beside her position. His skin perfectly mirrored the color and texture of wet ash. Vertical, slit-like yellow eyes locked dead onto her face. Quinn leveled her Glock square at the merchant chest. "Police. Back away." The merchant smiled. Two full rows of serrated, needle-thin teeth gleamed malevolent in the ambient fungus light. "Copper and lead hold zero currency down in the dark. The full moon sits high in the sky tonight. The Market shifts domain, and you walk as a guest uninvited. You carry no bone." Quinn assessed her dire tactical situation. Thirty yards of crowded real estate stretched between her and the wrought-iron gate. Two giant, armored hostiles guarded the choke point. Hundreds of unknown, lethal entities crowded the narrow platform. A single gunshot would incite a claustrophobic riot she could never survive. "I want the man who just walked through that gate." The ash-skinned merchant leaned forward, inhaling deep through a flattened nose. "He paid his toll. You bring only the scent of surface rain and dead partners." Quinn maintained strict, unyielding trigger discipline. She clamped her sharp jaw shut. The mental image of Morris and his torn-up, blood-soaked tactical vest flashed through her memory. She holstered her weapon with deliberate, calculated slowness. She reached her empty left hand deep into her heavy coat pocket. Her fingers located the cold, jagged edge of a bleached ivory fragment. Two nights ago, she pried it from the cold fingers of a prime suspect who bled out on the wet cobblestones behind The Raven's Nest in Soho. She pulled the bone token out into the green light and held it up. The merchant mocking, serrated smile collapsed. He retreated back into the damp shadows of the recess. Quinn rolled her stiff shoulders back, shaking off the chill of the underground. She walked clear of the pillar toward the iron gates, her heavy heavy boots striking the ancient concrete with purposeful force.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
93.88% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1634
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.68% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1634
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"long shadow"
count1
1
word"chaotic"
count2
2
word"shattered"
count2
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"depths"
count2
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"resonated"
count1
7
word"porcelain"
count2
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"constructed"
count1
10
word"intricate"
count1
11
word"pulse"
count1
12
word"tracing"
count1
13
word"imposing"
count1
14
word"vibrated"
count1
15
word"echoed"
count1
16
word"calculated"
count1
17
word"chill"
count1
highlights
0"long shadow"
1"chaotic"
2"shattered"
3"scanned"
4"depths"
5"weight"
6"resonated"
7"porcelain"
8"flickered"
9"constructed"
10"intricate"
11"pulse"
12"tracing"
13"imposing"
14"vibrated"
15"echoed"
16"calculated"
17"chill"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences124
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences124
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences133
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1616
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount1523
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity0.98
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Quinn15
Herrera1
Saint1
Christopher1
Tomás8
Camden2
Maglite1
Glock2
London2
Station1
Northbound1
Victorian2
Veil1
Market1
Morris3
Regent1
Raven1
Nest1
Two3
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Herrera"
2"Saint"
3"Christopher"
4"Tomás"
5"Morris"
6"Raven"
7"Two"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Market"
3"Regent"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences107
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1616
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences133
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean32.98
std26.66
cv0.809
sampleLengths
056
14
248
356
45
521
6114
763
843
912
1014
1151
1266
138
1431
1553
1650
1731
181
1920
2020
2151
2237
2323
2419
25118
263
2795
2849
2929
3014
3115
3250
338
349
3532
369
373
3817
3934
4048
4110
4211
4315
4435
4551
4614
4716
4834
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences124
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs243
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences133
ratio0.008
matches
0"A giant peeling sign clung to the filthy wall above a row of crumbling wooden benches: Camden Station - Northbound."
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1541
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"claustrophobic, garbage-strewn gap"
1"Acrid, eye-watering smoke"
2"small, jagged white object"
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.012329656067488644
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.004542504866969501
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences133
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences133
mean12.15
std6.44
cv0.53
sampleLengths
015
117
214
310
44
55
611
717
815
910
1020
1121
125
135
145
1516
1613
175
188
1924
2016
217
2214
2327
246
2511
269
275
284
2928
308
3119
3216
3312
343
3511
364
3720
3810
3911
406
415
4214
4318
448
4521
464
474
4813
498
66.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.41353383458646614
totalSentences133
uniqueOpeners55
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences123
matches
0"Her trench coat hung heavy"
1"He hit a stack of"
2"She adjusted her stride, altering"
3"He maintained a twenty-yard lead."
4"She drew her ASP baton."
5"His left foot kicked out."
6"He collided hard with a"
7"He grabbed the fence mesh,"
8"He shoved off the fence"
9"She tracked his chaotic path"
10"She lowered her center of"
11"Her target had vanished from"
12"She swept the area piecemeal."
13"Her eyes scanned the trash"
14"She collapsed her baton with"
15"She slung a leg over"
16"Her deep voice bounced off"
17"She ignored the rough, flaking"
18"Her boots hit a solid"
19"She dropped into a crouch,"
ratio0.26
73.82% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount95
totalSentences123
matches
0"Harlow Quinn pounded through the"
1"Her trench coat hung heavy"
2"Tomás Herrera ignored the command."
3"He hit a stack of"
4"The explosive movement sent his"
5"The harsh amber glare of"
6"Quinn set her sharp jaw"
7"She adjusted her stride, altering"
8"The worn leather watch on"
9"He maintained a twenty-yard lead."
10"She drew her ASP baton."
11"Tomás slipped on a sodden"
12"His left foot kicked out."
13"He collided hard with a"
14"The violent impact tore his"
15"He grabbed the fence mesh,"
16"He shoved off the fence"
17"Quinn maintained her precise, metered"
18"Adrenaline commanded Tomás, forcing him"
19"She tracked his chaotic path"
ratio0.772
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences80
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He shoved off the fence and sprinted across a flooded intersection, dodging a blaring yellow cab that threw a massive wave of gray water over his legs."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
88.3016%