Run: 2026-02-19-01KHVP81NADEDGH9E6S0BNHK8Y

Run Details

Duration:
1m 33s
Cost:
$0.079482
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory pushed through the dense, tangled underbrush of Richmond Park. Briers caught the denim of her jeans. The city lights of London bled a dull orange against the low-hanging clouds, but the glow failed to penetrate the thick canopy ahead. A heavy, oppressive weight settled on her shoulders. She clutched the silver chain resting against her collarbone. The Heartstone burned. The deep crimson gem, roughly the size of a thumbnail, radiated a rhythmic, blistering heat against her sternum. She navigated the slope, tracking the invisible pull of the pendant. Yu-Fei Cheung expected her back at the Golden Empress an hour ago. The thermal delivery bags sat empty in her moped basket miles behind. Overtime was not on her schedule, but the artifact awoke during her final route. The pulse became a frantic drumbeat demanding attention. A Hel portal opened nearby. The air shifted. The damp, earthy smell of decaying autumn leaves vanished. A sickeningly sweet fragrance washed over her instead. Jasmine, foxgloves, and something sharp like crushed lavender. Wildflowers blooming in the dead of November. Two massive, petrified oak standing stones loomed in the gloom. Their gnarled roots coiled into the earth like frozen serpents. The boundary markers. She stepped between the ancient pillars. The transition ripped the ambient noise away. The distant hum of dual carriageway traffic, the planes descending toward Heathrow, the rustle of urban foxes disappeared. A vacuum of absolute, suffocating silence took their place. The Fae Grove swallowed her. Rory held the pendant in her palm. The gemstone cast a faint, blood-red inner glow. The light washed over her skin, illuminating the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. The crimson illumination pushed back the unnatural darkness just enough to reveal a carpet of vibrant bluebells and snowdrops blanketing the forest floor. The petals stood rigid, untouched by any wind. Time ceased its steady forward march. A minute here felt like dragging a stone through mud. The still air clung to her skin, thick and gelatinous. Breathing required deliberate force. She stood anchored to the spot. Her bright blue eyes scanned the black spaces between the towering ash and beech trees. A twig snapped. The sound cracked like a gunshot in the dead air. She spun toward the noise. Her straight, shoulder-length black hair whipped across her face. She dropped her hand, letting the pendant fall back against her chest. To her right, a cluster of ferns sat entirely motionless. She squinted into the impenetrable shadows. "Show yourself." Her voice lacked any tremble. A flat, clinical demand. Her Irish barrister father taught her never to show weakness in a courtroom. The rule translated well to avoiding a panic attack in an otherworldly death trap. Silence answered her. She stepped forward. Her sneaker crushed a patch of luminous bluebells. The petals burst with a wet, squelching noise. She froze. A mimicking squelch echoed from the darkness. Fifty yards away. Beyond the perimeter of the red light. Rory tracked the noise. Her hand drifted to her pocket, fingers wrapping around the cold, heavy brass of her flat keys. A makeshift weapon. The pendant pulsed violently. The heat turned searing. The stone recognized a presence. The wet footsteps began again. Pacing her. She moved parallel to the standing stones. The heavy padding matched her rhythm perfectly. A purposeful, mocking dance. A tall silhouette detached from the trunk of a massive oak. It lingered at the very edge of her vision. Limbs elongated, hanging down past malformed, knobby knees. When she turned her head to look directly at the shape, it dissolved back into the black canvas of the forest. Peripheral phantoms. Hunting tactics. She backed away slowly. The safety of her small flat above Silas' bar felt lifetimes away. The Grove separated her from Earth. Time dilated. She entered minutes ago, but the oppressive dark made it feel like days. Every shadow morphed into grasping hands. Every knot in the wood twisted into a screaming face. She reached out blindly to guide herself along the closest oak. Her palm pressed against the rough bark. The bark yielded. Warm and wet. She yanked her hand back. A thick, viscous sludge coated her skin. In the crimson light of the Heartstone, the substance shined slick and black. The smell hit the back of her throat. Copper. Spoiled meat. A slaughterhouse hiding behind the perfume of blooming jasmine. "Not an oak." She wiped her hand fiercely against her jacket. She memorized the layout of the Grove from Eva's reluctant warnings. Standing stones at the entrance. The clearing in the center. She drifted too far right. A whistle sliced through the heavy air. Four erratic, disjointed notes. High-pitched and entirely human. It came from directly above her. Rory tipped her head back. The canopy wove a solid, impenetrable roof of leaves. The red light barely scratched the gloom overhead. Shadows danced in the high branches. A thick branch thirty feet up sagged under a sudden, immense weight. Bark peeled away and rained down upon the wildflowers. Something crawled down the trunk. Headfirst. Rory locked her knees to stop herself from running. Running triggered the chase. The creature descended with an arachnid grace. Long, multi-jointed fingers dug deep gouges into the wood. The thing possessed the frame of a starved man stretched on a rack. Pale, grey flesh stretched taut over protruding ribs. The head pivoted. A hundred and eighty degrees. The neck let out a rapid series of sharp, sickening snaps. The face passed into the red light. Bone-white. No nose. No eyes. Just deep, ragged concavities where sensory organs belonged. The mouth stretched ear to ear, dominated by rows of translucent, needle-like teeth. It clung to the tree ten feet above her. Rory maintained her ground. She held the creature's blind gaze. The pendant surged, radiating a heat that blistered the skin beneath her shirt. The artifact compelled her to act, to seal the breach, but her analytical mind ran the grim mathematics of the situation. She possessed a set of brass keys against a subterranean apex predator. The creature's jaw unhinged. The jawbone dropped with a wet tearing sound, extending the maw to chest length. It did not roar. "Rooory." The voice belonged to Evan. A perfect, honey-smooth replication of her ex-boyfriend's manipulative tone. The sound carried the exact cadence of his midnight apologies. The acoustic precision shattered the unnatural quiet of the Grove. "Come back inside, Rory." A memory weaponized. Plucked straight from the darkest corner of her skull. "Stop hiding." Rory tightened her grip on her keys. The brass dug deep into her palm, the sharp pain grounding her to reality. The creature fed on reactions. It searched for a vulnerability. It searched for the fear that fueled it. "You don't belong here." She projected absolute certainty to the eyeless face, masking the terrified drumming in her chest. The creature's head tilted again. More bone-cracking snaps echoed into the trees. The mimicry of Evan's voice faded, replaced by a low, rattling hiss. The predator realized the psychological assault failed. The creature lifted one elongated limb from the trunk. It reached down. The needle-fingers ghosted an inch from her face. The smell of the slaughterhouse poured from its open, slavering mouth. Rory refused to flinch. She observed the trembling of the entity's hand. The red glow of the Heartstone painted the pale flesh the color of fresh blood. The gem flared. A brilliant flash of crimson light exploded outward, illuminating the entire grove. The creature shrieked. A chaotic, overlapping chorus of tortured metal, shattering glass, and human weeping blasted from the beast's throat. It scrambled backward. Multi-jointed fingers shredded the bark of the oak as it hauled its elongated body into the upper canopy. The rustling leaves marked its chaotic retreat deep into the unseen spaces where the Fae realm rotted into Hel. Rory exhaled. A white cloud of breath plumed in the cold air. The blistering heat from the pendant faded to a dull, manageable warmth. The red glow dimmed. The suffocating silence returned, heavier than before. She remained alone in the Grove. The isolation pressed against her skin. The creature fled the light, but the pulse of the Heartstone resumed. A steady, rhythmic thrum tapped against her chest. The area remained corrupted. The woods stretched endlessly into the dark. Countless more standing stones formed a jagged maze ahead. Every rustle of a wildflower petal, every shifting branch overhead, held the promise of an ambush. She stepped deeper into the blooming darkness.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
89.46% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1423
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"very"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1423
totalAiIsms31
found
0
word"oppressive"
count2
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"rhythmic"
count2
3
word"navigated"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"loomed"
count1
6
word"gloom"
count2
7
word"silence"
count3
8
word"scanned"
count1
9
word"otherworldly"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count2
11
word"pulsed"
count1
12
word"searing"
count1
13
word"footsteps"
count1
14
word"dance"
count1
15
word"predator"
count2
16
word"maw"
count1
17
word"perfect"
count1
18
word"shattered"
count1
19
word"chaotic"
count2
20
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"oppressive"
1"weight"
2"rhythmic"
3"navigated"
4"pulse"
5"loomed"
6"gloom"
7"silence"
8"scanned"
9"otherworldly"
10"echoed"
11"pulsed"
12"searing"
13"footsteps"
14"dance"
15"predator"
16"maw"
17"perfect"
18"shattered"
19"chaotic"
20"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences176
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences176
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences182
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1413
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount1392
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity0.65
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
London1
Heartstone4
Cheung1
Golden1
Empress1
Hel2
November1
Heathrow1
Fae2
Grove5
Irish1
Earth1
Eva1
Evan2
Rory9
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Cheung"
2"Eva"
3"Evan"
4"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Golden"
4"Hel"
5"Heathrow"
6"Fae"
7"Grove"
8"Earth"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences115
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like dragging a stone through mud"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.708
wordCount1413
matches
0"not on her schedule, but the artifact awoke during her final route"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences182
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean23.55
std21.52
cv0.914
sampleLengths
078
162
235
323
46
534
65
761
851
93
1010
1142
122
1336
143
1521
167
1710
1837
195
202
2167
224
2353
2418
253
263
2745
283
2934
307
318
326
3349
345
351
3650
3719
387
3926
409
4156
4218
434
441
4534
464
4712
482
4939
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences176
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs217
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences182
ratio0
matches(empty)
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount623
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"faint, blood-red inner glow."
1"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.033707865168539325
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.012841091492776886
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences182
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences182
mean7.76
std4.51
cv0.581
sampleLengths
010
17
223
38
49
53
618
711
812
912
1014
118
125
133
149
158
168
177
1810
1910
203
216
227
2318
249
255
267
278
2815
2923
308
316
3210
3310
344
356
3615
373
3810
395
409
4112
4210
436
442
455
464
4713
4814
493
34.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats29
diversityRatio0.2857142857142857
totalSentences182
uniqueOpeners52
40.65% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences164
matches
0"Pale, grey flesh stretched taut"
1"Just deep, ragged concavities where"
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences164
matches
0"She clutched the silver chain"
1"She navigated the slope, tracking"
2"Their gnarled roots coiled into"
3"She stepped between the ancient"
4"She stood anchored to the"
5"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
6"She spun toward the noise."
7"Her straight, shoulder-length black hair"
8"She dropped her hand, letting"
9"She squinted into the impenetrable"
10"Her voice lacked any tremble."
11"Her Irish barrister father taught"
12"She stepped forward."
13"Her sneaker crushed a patch"
14"Her hand drifted to her"
15"She moved parallel to the"
16"It lingered at the very"
17"She backed away slowly."
18"She entered minutes ago, but"
19"She reached out blindly to"
ratio0.232
14.88% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount146
totalSentences164
matches
0"Rory pushed through the dense,"
1"Briers caught the denim of"
2"The city lights of London"
3"A heavy, oppressive weight settled"
4"She clutched the silver chain"
5"The Heartstone burned."
6"The deep crimson gem, roughly"
7"She navigated the slope, tracking"
8"Yu-Fei Cheung expected her back"
9"The thermal delivery bags sat"
10"Overtime was not on her"
11"The pulse became a frantic"
12"A Hel portal opened nearby."
13"The air shifted."
14"The damp, earthy smell of"
15"A sickeningly sweet fragrance washed"
16"Jasmine, foxgloves, and something sharp"
17"Wildflowers blooming in the dead"
18"Their gnarled roots coiled into"
19"The boundary markers."
ratio0.89
30.49% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences164
matches
0"To her right, a cluster"
ratio0.006
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The pendant surged, radiating a heat that blistered the skin beneath her shirt."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.5847%