Run: 2026-02-19-01KHVPARYKJRB7ZAPFHDSAHYQJ

Run Details

Duration:
1m 32s
Cost:
$0.081818
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in the abandoned Camden Tube station smelled of ozone, stagnant water, and ancient dust. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off the rusted heavy-duty service ladder, her boots hitting the cracked concrete platform with military precision. She adjusted the worn leather watch on her left wrist out of pure habit. The dial read ten minutes past three in the morning. She stood at five feet nine inches, her posture rigid as she surveyed the subterranean chaos. Arc lights set up by the forensics team threw harsh, unforgiving shadows against the filthy ceramic tiles. The illumination caught her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair and highlighted the sharp jaw that was currently set in a grim rigid line. Eighteen years of decorated service with the Metropolitan Police had trained her to read a room before anyone even spoke to her. Right now, this room was screaming that something was fundamentally wrong. Sergeant Miller, a heavy-set man with a flushed face, jogged over, ducking under a strip of yellow police tape. "Glad you made it, Quinn," Miller said, wiping sweat from his forehead. "Though I'm not sure why the superintendent woke you up for a squatter dispute. Looks like a turf war. A bad one, but standard underground rot." Harlow swept her dark brown eyes over the platform. Standard underground rot did not look like this. The platform was lined with the remnants of wooden stalls. Heavy velvet drapery, scorched by some localized flash of heat, hung rigidly from makeshift metal frames. It looked less like a homeless encampment and more like a bizarre, antiquated bazaar violently interrupted. "Walk me through it, Miller," Harlow said, her voice a flat, calm baritone that demanded facts over assumptions. "Victim is an unidentified male, late twenties," Miller pointed to a chalk outline surrounded by scattered debris near the edge of the old tracks. "Blunt force trauma, massive lacerations. We found a couple of broken bottles. I figure an illegal rave or a squatter market got out of hand. Two rival gangs fighting over the turf. We brought in a consultant to look at some of the graffiti they left behind. A historian." Harlow stepped past Miller, moving toward the center of the platform. She ignored the crime scene photographers snapping pictures of the chalk outline and focused on the periphery. At the edge of the light, a young woman was crouching near a shattered wooden display table. The woman was entirely out of place in a murder scene. She stood five foot four, dressed in an oversized tweed blazer. Her curly red hair tumbled over her shoulders. She wore round glasses that kept sliding down a freckled nose. A worn leather satchel full of books was slung cross-body over her chest, and she held it in a death grip. Harlow approached. "You the consultant?" The woman jumped, standing up quickly and turning. She possessed a distinctly nervous energy, her green eyes darting around the platform as if expecting the shadows to lunge at her. "Yes. Eva. Eva Kowalski." Harlow gave her a slow, measured assessment. "Detective Harlow Quinn. Met Police." Eva immediately reached up, tucking a stray curl of red hair behind her left ear. She cleared her throat. "I work as a research assistant at the British Museum. The restricted archives. Your department sent me photos of the symbols carved into the pillars here. They asked me to come down and identify them." "And have you?" Harlow asked, her sharp jaw tightening. "They appear to be derivative," Eva said, her voice wavering slightly. She tucked her hair behind her ear again. "Fake occultism. Probably teenagers copying things they saw in a video game. An illegal rave, just like your sergeant said. People setting up an underground club. It happens." Harlow turned her attention away from the nervous academic and looked at the shattered table. Among the splintered wood and crushed glass vials lay a small object the forensics team had marked with a yellow plastic evidence tent. Harlow pulled a pair of latex gloves from her coat pocket, snapped them on, and lifted the object. It was a small brass compass, heavy and cold in her palm. The casing had a thick patina of verdigris, mapping green chemical rot across the metal. Harlow rubbed her thumb over the face of it. The glass was cracked, but underneath, the metal face was intricately etched with protective sigils that matched the ones carved into the station pillars. "Steampunk junk," Miller said, coming up behind them. "Kids leave it everywhere down here. Makes them feel edgy." Harlow stared at the compass. Her mind flashed back three years. DS Morris, her partner, bleeding out in a rain-slicked alleyway in Soho, surrounded by impossible burn marks and symbols she could never decode. The brass in her hand felt exactly like the weird residue she had found on Morris's jacket. The department had written his death off as a gangland dispute. She had never believed it. "No," Harlow said, her voice cutting through the damp air. "This is not steampunk junk. Look at the craftsmanship." She turned the compass over, showing the back to Miller, then to Eva. "The hinges are practically seamless. The casing is solid. And look at the needle." Harlow rotated the compass slowly in her palm. A normal compass needle would drag, attempting to reorient toward magnetic north. This needle did no such thing. It was locked solidly in place, pointing directly toward a pitch-black, bricked-up tunnel entrance at the far end of the station. She turned her body ninety degrees. The needle did not waver. It remained completely fixed toward the dark archway. "Must be rusted shut," Miller offered with a shrug. "Brass doesn't rust, Sergeant," Harlow said coldly. "And the pin inside is seated perfectly. It's pointing exactly where it wants to point." She looked at Eva. The young woman had gone noticeably pale beneath her freckled complexion. Her knuckles were white where she gripped the strap of her worn leather satchel. She was holding her breath. "Tell me, Ms. Kowalski," Harlow said, taking a step toward the historian. "If this is an illegal rave, where are the glow sticks? Where are the discarded nitrous oxide canisters? The beer cans?" "I wouldn't know," Eva stammered, tucking her hair behind her left ear for the third time in two minutes. Harlow pivoted, pacing down the length of the ruined stalls. "You don't set up heavy velvet drapes and solid table displays for a rave. You set them up for trade. This was a market. An organized, lucrative market." Harlow reached the base of the metal stairs leading to the upper concourse. She knelt down and pointed to another yellow evidence tent. "Miller, what did forensics catalog here?" "A piece of debris," Miller said, checking his notebook. "Looks like a fragment of bone. Animal, probably. A dog got down here at some point." Harlow picked up the bagged object. It was a smooth, polished piece of bone, flat and wide, drilled with a single hole in the center. An entry token. "A rave or a squatter camp is an open door," Harlow said, standing back up and addressing them both. "You wander in, you wander out. But this?" She held up the bagged bone token. "This was dropped right at the primary ingress point. It was an admission requirement. Someone controlled the door. Someone vetted the clientele. This underground market moved here for a reason, and they packed up in a hurry." Miller frowned, rubbing his chin. "You're overthinking it, Quinn. A bone? A broken compass? It's a bunch of drug addicts dressing up." "Drug addicts do not possess this level of organization, nor do they leave behind hand-crafted brass tools crafted by artisans," Harlow countered. She walked back to Eva, stopping just inches from her. The height difference allowed Harlow to look down intimidatingly beneath the glare of the arc lights. "You have a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford, don't you, Ms. Kowalski?" Harlow asked. Eva blinked, startled. "How do you know that?" "I read the liaison file in the car," Harlow lied perfectly, having only just guessed the university based on the faded crest barely visible on the inside flap of Eva's satchel. "A woman with your credentials does not look at an organized, clandestine market and call it a teenage rave. You are lying to me." "I am not," Eva said defensively. She pushed her round glasses up her nose, but she wouldn't meet Harlow's brown eyes. "You know what this place is," Harlow pressed, her voice dropping to a dangerous, quiet register. "You know what they were selling. And you know what this compass is." Harlow held the compass up. The needle was still dead-set on the bricked-up tunnel. "This compass tracks something. Energy. A signal. A portal. You arrived here before I did, and you spent your time circling the outer perimeter, not looking at the victim. You were trying to find out what the people selling their banned substances and enchanted junk left behind before my team could catalog it." Eva stood frozen, her jaw clamped shut. Panic radiated off her small frame. "My partner died three years ago," Harlow said, the grief morphing seamlessly into interrogator's steel. "He died in a scene that made no sense. Unexplained circumstances. Anomalies. Symbols carved into the brick that looked exactly like the ones on this platform. The department wrote it off. I am not writing this off." Harlow pocketed the bagged bone token and then deposited the compass securely into her own coat pocket. "Hey, that's evidence," Miller protested mildly. "I'm taking point on the investigation," Harlow snapped, not looking at Miller. She kept her gaze pinned firmly on Eva. "I suspect you and your little clique are deeply involved in this, Ms. Kowalski. You are going to tell me exactly what this underground market really was, why it needs bone tokens, and where that needle points." Eva squeezed her satchel. "You don't understand what you are dealing with, Detective." Harlow's sharp jaw set into an unyielding line. "Then you had better start educating me. Because I am not leaving the dark until I find out what is hiding in it."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
29.79% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Harlow said coldly [coldly]"
1"Harlow lied perfectly [perfectly]"
2"Eva said defensively [defensively]"
3"Miller protested mildly [mildly]"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.468
leniency0.936
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.17
76.61% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1710
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"completely"
count1
4
adverb"coldly"
count1
5
adverb"perfectly"
count2
6
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
3"completely"
4"coldly"
5"perfectly"
6"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.91% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1710
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"standard"
count2
1
word"velvet"
count2
2
word"shattered"
count2
3
word"measured"
count1
4
word"wavering"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"magnetic"
count1
7
word"clandestine"
count1
8
word"firmly"
count1
highlights
0"standard"
1"velvet"
2"shattered"
3"measured"
4"wavering"
5"etched"
6"magnetic"
7"clandestine"
8"firmly"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences96
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences121
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1699
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions61
wordCount1044
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.87
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity6
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Tube1
Harlow30
Quinn1
Metropolitan1
Police1
Miller11
Eva12
Morris2
Soho1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Police"
3"Miller"
4"Eva"
5"Morris"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.063
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if expecting the shadows to lunge at her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1699
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences121
matches
0"screaming that something"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean36.15
std21.46
cv0.594
sampleLengths
060
188
219
338
459
518
673
745
862
95
1034
1112
1254
139
1447
1556
1660
1718
1867
1919
2027
2166
229
2322
2434
2533
2619
2738
2829
2925
3028
3171
3222
3348
3416
358
3655
3721
3829
3967
4013
4152
4217
436
4457
4513
4631
97.95% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences96
matches
0"was lined"
1"was locked"
91.89% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs185
matches
0"was screaming"
1"was crouching"
2"was holding"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences121
ratio0
matches(empty)
93.83% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1054
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.04079696394686907
lyAdverbCount28
lyAdverbRatio0.026565464895635674
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences121
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences121
mean14.04
std8.98
cv0.639
sampleLengths
016
120
214
310
416
517
622
722
811
919
1012
1126
129
138
1410
1516
1616
1718
1824
1949
2011
2117
2217
2311
2411
258
2611
2721
282
293
308
3122
324
337
345
3515
364
3735
389
3911
408
4128
4215
4323
4418
4512
4615
479
4824
498
61.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.38016528925619836
totalSentences121
uniqueOpeners46
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences93
matches
0"She adjusted the worn leather"
1"She stood at five feet"
2"It looked less like a"
3"She ignored the crime scene"
4"She stood five foot four,"
5"Her curly red hair tumbled"
6"She wore round glasses that"
7"She possessed a distinctly nervous"
8"She cleared her throat."
9"She tucked her hair behind"
10"It was a small brass"
11"Her mind flashed back three"
12"She had never believed it."
13"She turned the compass over,"
14"It was locked solidly in"
15"She turned her body ninety"
16"It remained completely fixed toward"
17"She looked at Eva."
18"Her knuckles were white where"
19"She was holding her breath."
ratio0.28
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences93
matches
0"The air in the abandoned"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off"
2"She adjusted the worn leather"
3"The dial read ten minutes"
4"She stood at five feet"
5"Arc lights set up by"
6"The illumination caught her closely"
7"Sergeant Miller, a heavy-set man"
8"Miller said, wiping sweat from"
9"Harlow swept her dark brown"
10"The platform was lined with"
11"It looked less like a"
12"Harlow said, her voice a"
13"Miller pointed to a chalk"
14"Harlow stepped past Miller, moving"
15"She ignored the crime scene"
16"The woman was entirely out"
17"She stood five foot four,"
18"Her curly red hair tumbled"
19"She wore round glasses that"
ratio0.935
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
ratio0
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The illumination caught her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair and highlighted the sharp jaw that was currently set in a grim rigid line."
1"She possessed a distinctly nervous energy, her green eyes darting around the platform as if expecting the shadows to lunge at her."
2"The glass was cracked, but underneath, the metal face was intricately etched with protective sigils that matched the ones carved into the station pillars."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Harlow asked, her sharp jaw tightening"
1"Eva said, her voice wavering slightly"
2"Harlow said, her voice cutting through the damp air"
3"Harlow pressed, her voice dropping to a dangerous, quiet register"
4"Harlow said, the grief morphing seamlessly into interrogator's steel"
5"Harlow snapped, not looking at Miller"
43.62% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Eva stammered (stammer)"
1"Harlow lied perfectly (lie)"
2"Harlow pressed (press)"
3"Miller protested mildly (protest)"
4"Harlow snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.383
leniency0.766
rawRatio0.278
effectiveRatio0.213
75.1849%