Run: 2026-02-19-01KHVPBWQTV45R8KAWEKC0PTQK

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Duration:
1m 45s
Cost:
$0.132936
Provider:
Google AI Studio

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt snicked back. I pulled the heavy wooden door open. Lucien filled the doorway. He wore an immaculate tailored charcoal suit. His ivory-handled cane rested lightly against his polished leather shoe. One amber eye and one black eye swept over my flour-dusted uniform. "You look terrible." "Delivery run for Golden Empress." I kept my hand firmly on the brass doorknob. "We closed our doors to fixers yesterday." "I am a half-demon, Rory. Fixer is merely my job title." He stepped forward. I blocked his path. "My client list requires your unique perspective." "Find another perspective. We finished our business in Mayfair." "Did we?" He moved past me with unnatural speed. Brimstone and expensive cologne invaded my cramped hallway. I slammed the door shut and threw all three deadbolts back into place. "Do not invite him in," I told Ptolemy. The tabby cat hissed and scrambled under a beautiful small old rectangular green French velvet reading chair. "Animals always possess excellent judgment." Lucien walked into the main room. He stepped over a fallen stack of Sumerian translation scrolls. He ignored the piles of thick leather-bound books covering the cramped dining table. Eva treated interior design as a chaotic mish-mash of magical research. The rich aroma of cumin and roasting garlic drifted up from the curry house below. It mixed violently with Lucien's scent of ash and crisp parchment. I hated how much space he took up in my life. I fled Cardiff to escape entirely. I abandoned Pre-Law. I abandoned my parents. I hid in East London. Now this half-demon stood in my sanctuary, dictating my future. "Get out, Lucien." "You missed our meeting on Tuesday." "I quit." "You accepted a contract. You finish the contract." He ran a gloved finger along the spine of a dusty grimoire. "You used me as bait." "You survived." "That creature ruined my favourite coat." "I will buy you a new coat." "I want an apology." He turned around. The rhythmic tick-tock of the grandfather clock in the corner echoed through the silent flat. His mismatched gaze dropped to my empty hands. I folded my arms tightly over my chest. "You act like a petulant child." "You act like an arrogant bastard." "I kept you alive, Rory." "You locked me inside a dark basement with a starving ghoul." "I secured the perimeter." "You sealed the only iron exit door." "A tactical necessity." "I spent three hours dodging snapping jaws and toxic claws, Lucien. The creature tore through solid brick. It shredded my delivery uniform. I survived by hiding inside a discarded silver-lined furnace." "You displayed excellent out-of-the-box thinking." "I nearly died." "You never die." "I am completely human! My bones break. My blood spills." I grabbed my insulated delivery bag from the kitchen counter. The heavy fabric smelled of ginger and fried pork. "My evening shift starts in ten minutes. Leave before I call Eva." "Eva resides in Edinburgh this week." He unbuttoned his suit jacket. "She caught an early train on Thursday." I dropped the bag. It hit the floor with a dull thud. "How do you know that?" "I broker information in this city." "Then broker yourself a cab and get out of my flat." Lucien turned his attention to Eva's workstation. He picked up a cracked crystal vial. He sniffed the purple cork. Disgust contorted his sharp features. He placed the vial back onto the messy wooden table. "Your roommate hoards useless garbage." "Eva possesses more magical knowledge in her pinky finger than you do in your entire cane." "Knowledge remains worthless without the power to wield it." "She wields it perfectly fine. She warded this flat against intruders." "Those pathetic wards will barely hold a drunken teenager." He pointed his cane at the window. "Your magical security is a joke." "It kept you outside." "I knocked out of pure politeness." He walked slowly toward me. I backed up until my shoulders hit the cold kitchen tile. He stopped mere inches away. The dim yellow overhead light caught his slicked-back platinum blond hair. He reached out and grabbed my left wrist. His thumb brushed deliberately over my small crescent-shaped scar. Heat flared at the contact. My pulse hammered in my throat. "You run when things become complicated." His voice dropped into a gravelly whisper. "I run when people put a massive painted target on my back." "I protected you." "You abandoned me." "I stepped away to assassinate the pack leader." I snatched my hand back. "You manipulated the entire situation from the start. You knew that ghoul clan wanted a human sacrifice." "I knew they wanted an intelligent human woman with bright blue eyes and quick wits. You fit the exact profile." "So I stood as a dispensable pawn." "You stood as the only person capable of outsmarting them." He stepped even closer. His chest brushed against my shoulder. The air grew perfectly still. A heavy tension stretched between us. It tasted like ash and swallowed promises. We stared at each other for a long moment. My heart hammered against my ribs. I hated his arrogance. I hated his cold logic. I hated the undeniable pull drawing me toward him. "You smell like cheap noodles," he murmured. "And you smell like terrible life choices." He laughed. The harsh sound grated against the quiet room. "Your old friend Evan asked about you today." My stomach plummeted. The room spun. All the air vanished from my lungs. "Where?" "A filthy unlit basement pub in Soho. He hired two experienced human mercenaries." "Evan knows absolutely nothing about the supernatural underworld." "He knows you disappeared. He knows an impeccably dressed man helped you escape Cardiff. He possesses money, Rory. Money buys perceptive eyes." I grabbed a heavy steel carving knife from the wooden block. My knuckles turned white. "Put your toy down." "Evan breaks bones, Lucien. He doesn't send angry letters. He sends fists. He left me in a hospital bed for two weeks." "A petty human thug." Lucien sneered at the knife. "I handled him." "You killed him?" "I sent him away with a severe warning." "Evan never stays away." I gripped the handle tighter. "Whenever someone tells him no, he takes it as a personal challenge. I spent three years running from him. You gave him a map straight to my location." "My warnings are highly persuasive. The demons in Avaros taught me well." "You do not understand human obsession. You deal in logical magical contracts. Evan deals in blind rage." Lucien lifted his ivory-handled cane. He pressed a hidden clasp. A thin silver blade slid out with a sharp metallic hiss. He examined the lethal edge under the kitchen light. "I deal in results. If he returns, I will bleed him." "I do not need your bloody protection." "Your shivering hands suggest otherwise." I lowered the knife. He spoke the truth. My entire body shook. The ghost of Evan's heavy fists still haunted my ribs. I fled Cardiff to escape that exact terror. Now it sat on my doorstep, ushered in by the man who claimed to protect me. "Why are you truly here, Lucien? You do not deliver warnings out of the goodness of your dark heart." "The ghoul pack leader had a brother." He slid the blade back into the cane. It clicked into place. "A brother who currently feels vengeful." "You said you cleaned up the mess in Mayfair." "I burned the estate to the ground. I eliminated the immediate threat." "You left loose ends." I crossed the room and checked the three deadbolts again. "And now they hunt us both." "They hunt you. I stand as merely an obstacle." "An impeccably dressed obstacle." "I appreciate your eye for fashion amid a crisis." "How much time do we have?" Lucien glanced at his silver pocket watch. "They entered the city limits an hour ago. They tracked your scent from the Mayfair property." "My scent?" "Your blood." He pointed his cane at my left shoulder. "You bled on the basement floor." I touched my shoulder. The scratches healed completely days ago, but the memory burned fresh. He watched my reaction closely. His heterochromatic eyes missed absolutely nothing. "You purposely let me bleed." "It anchored the containment spell." "You used my blood to trap them." I took a furious step toward him. "You turned me into a permanent tracking beacon for the entire London underworld." "I ensured our survival." "You ensured my absolute dependence on you!" He absorbed my rage calmly. "We survive together, or we perish apart. Gather your essential things." "I refuse to run again." "You will die in this cramped flat." "Better here than chained to a manipulative half-demon." "I never chained you, Aurora." He rarely used my full name. It commanded the space between us. "You walked into my world willingly. You chose the shadow over the mundane life. Now the shadow demands its payment." "And what do you demand?" He looked at my lips. A predatory stillness washed over his face. He lifted a gloved hand and traced my jawline. The leather felt cool against my flushed skin. "I demand exactly what I kept alive." A loud crash echoed from the street below. Glass shattered. A woman screamed outside the curry house. Ptolemy bolted from beneath the chair. The cat ran in a frantic zigzag across the faded rug. He scrambled wildly up the tall wooden bookshelves. Lucien gripped his cane. The thin blade slid out again. Heavy footsteps pounded on the stairs. They moved too fast for human legs. The wooden floorboards groaned under immense weight. The hallway light flickered. The glass bulb popped. Darkness swallowed the room. The first heavy blow struck the front door. The thick wood splintered straight down the middle.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences102
tagDensity0.137
leniency0.275
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
69.36% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1632
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"tightly"
count1
2
adverb"completely"
count2
3
adverb"perfectly"
count2
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
5
adverb"deliberately"
count1
6
adverb"truly"
count1
7
adverb"purposely"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"tightly"
2"completely"
3"perfectly"
4"slowly"
5"deliberately"
6"truly"
7"purposely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
35.66% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1632
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"firmly"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count1
2
word"chaotic"
count1
3
word"sanctuary"
count1
4
word"rhythmic"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count2
6
word"crystal"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"pawn"
count1
10
word"tension"
count1
11
word"stomach"
count1
12
word"absolutely"
count2
13
word"beacon"
count1
14
word"traced"
count1
15
word"shattered"
count1
16
word"footsteps"
count1
17
word"weight"
count1
18
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"firmly"
1"velvet"
2"chaotic"
3"sanctuary"
4"rhythmic"
5"echoed"
6"crystal"
7"pulse"
8"whisper"
9"pawn"
10"tension"
11"stomach"
12"absolutely"
13"beacon"
14"traced"
15"shattered"
16"footsteps"
17"weight"
18"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences115
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences202
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1620
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount812
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.99
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy2
French1
Sumerian1
Lucien8
Cardiff2
Pre-Law1
East1
London1
Eva2
Evan1
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Lucien"
2"Eva"
3"Evan"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"East"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"tasted like ash and swallowed promises"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1620
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences202
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs118
mean13.73
std13.67
cv0.996
sampleLengths
012
133
23
321
411
57
67
79
82
928
108
1117
1211
1399
143
156
162
1720
185
192
206
217
224
2334
246
256
265
2711
284
297
303
3131
325
333
343
3510
3619
3712
3818
3912
405
416
4211
4334
445
4516
469
4711
4822
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs141
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences202
ratio0
matches(empty)
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount822
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"beautiful small old rectangular green French"
1"thick leather-bound books"
2"small crescent-shaped scar."
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.031630170316301706
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.01824817518248175
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences202
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences202
mean8.02
std4.64
cv0.578
sampleLengths
05
17
24
37
410
512
63
714
87
911
103
114
127
139
142
157
168
1713
188
1917
2011
2110
2213
2311
2415
2511
2611
276
283
294
305
3110
323
336
342
3520
365
372
386
397
404
413
4215
438
448
456
466
475
4811
494
40.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.21782178217821782
totalSentences202
uniqueOpeners44
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount70
totalSentences112
matches
0"I pulled the heavy wooden"
1"He wore an immaculate tailored"
2"His ivory-handled cane rested lightly"
3"I kept my hand firmly"
4"He stepped forward."
5"I blocked his path."
6"He moved past me with"
7"I slammed the door shut"
8"I told Ptolemy"
9"He stepped over a fallen"
10"He ignored the piles of"
11"It mixed violently with Lucien's"
12"I hated how much space"
13"I fled Cardiff to escape"
14"I abandoned Pre-Law."
15"I abandoned my parents."
16"I hid in East London."
17"He ran a gloved finger"
18"He turned around."
19"His mismatched gaze dropped to"
ratio0.625
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount107
totalSentences112
matches
0"The third deadbolt snicked back."
1"I pulled the heavy wooden"
2"Lucien filled the doorway."
3"He wore an immaculate tailored"
4"His ivory-handled cane rested lightly"
5"I kept my hand firmly"
6"He stepped forward."
7"I blocked his path."
8"He moved past me with"
9"Brimstone and expensive cologne invaded"
10"I slammed the door shut"
11"I told Ptolemy"
12"The tabby cat hissed and"
13"Lucien walked into the main"
14"He stepped over a fallen"
15"He ignored the piles of"
16"Eva treated interior design as"
17"The rich aroma of cumin"
18"It mixed violently with Lucien's"
19"I hated how much space"
ratio0.955
89.29% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences112
matches
0"Now this half-demon stood in"
1"Now it sat on my"
ratio0.018
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"Lucien sneered (sneer)"
dialogueSentences102
tagDensity0.029
leniency0.059
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.039
83.8803%