Run: 2026-02-19-01KHVPCFYBF2GAEQWQEAR60BHD

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Veil tore like wet parchment. Isolde stepped through the shimmering metaphysical distortion, her boots untouched by the frost of Richmond Park. Nyx slid through the gap as a column of living shadow, shifting forms in the transition between realms. Rory went last. She gripped the Fae-Forged blade at her hip. The moonsilver metal chilled her palm, a freezing anchor against the sudden blast of heat. Amber light swallowed them. The winter bite of the Earth realm vanished. A thick, syrupy warmth coated the air. The sky above held no sun, revealing only a bruised, unbroken expanse of liquid gold. Rory released the hilt of the dagger and dragged a hand through her straight black hair. The Heartstone sitting against her collarbone thumped a heavy rhythm against her skin. "This isn't Richmond." Nyx bled into a solid humanoid silhouette beside a towering grapevine. Violet eyes tracked the twisting, thick vines gripping the trellis. "The boundary bleeds here. Prince Belphegor's domain thrives on the overflow." "Dymas." Isolde brushed a silver lock of hair from her shoulder. Her pale lavender eyes locked onto the sprawling landscape. "A gilded cage for the ravenous." They marched down the cobblestone path. Row upon row of colossal vineyards stretched toward the horizon. Grapes the size of bloated plums hung in heavy indigo clusters. The air carried the scent of crushed sugar, roasting marrow, and a sharp coppery tang. Rory rubbed the small crescent scar on her left wrist. The amber sky pressed down by the minute, heavy and unbroken. "We need to find the citadel." "Sound carries." Nyx condensed their shadowy form. "Listen." A low rhythmic thud echoed over the rolling hills. Clinking glass. The hiss of searing fat. A hum of a million voices united in a feeding frenzy. Rory unhooked the moonsilver blade. The chill radiating from the leaf-shaped weapon anchored her senses. She stepped over a cracked rune stone. The cobblestones gave way to soft loamy soil. Isolde glided forward. Wildflowers did not exist here. Instead, carnivorous pitcher plants with slick glowing rims lined the path. Time meant nothing in the Grove, but here it warped further. Rory broke visual contact with the bizarre flora to consult her watch. The silver hands spun in rapid clockwise circles. "Abandon the mortal clock, Aurora." Isolde did not turn her head. "Here, time counts itself in courses. The feast never ends." Nyx drifted through the dense hanging leaves of a vast orchard. They materialized near a gnarled black trunk. "Souls at labor." Rory closed the distance. Through the dense foliage, the orchard opened into a vast sunken basin. Hundreds of figures moved between the trees in frantic, synchronized patterns. They wore pristine white chef coats over tattered spectral forms. Skin stretched tight over hollow cheeks. Rory watched a man scramble up a ladder. He tore glowing golden apples from the branches, throwing them into a massive basket. A taskmaster with obsidian horns slammed a flaming tether against the dirt. "Move the harvest! The Prince demands the compote by the seventh bell!" The shadow being's whisper drifted like a cold draft against Rory's ear. "Contracted souls. Masters of the culinary arts in life. Slaves to the palate in death." "Can we slip past them?" Rory traced the edge of the basin. The perimeter featured a low stone wall covered in thorny briars. "I will weave a glamour." Isolde pressed her fingertips against the briars. The thorns curled backward, retreating from her ethereal touch. "Keep close. The Helbound sniff out mortals. Your scent equals fresh meat to them." "Right." Rory consulted the crimson gemstone on her chest. The inner glow flared bright, signaling the proximity of another rift or ward. "Lead the way." The amber sky offered no shadow, but Nyx found the crevices beneath the sprawling roots. They slid along the ground, a two-dimensional slick of darkness scouting the path ahead. Humidity coated Rory’s skin. Sweat beaded on her forehead. The scent of roasted garlic and caramelized sugar grew intoxicating. Underneath the sweet aromas lay the rot of fallen, fermented fruit. Down in the basin, the spectral chefs chanted in low broken moans. They chopped and diced at massive marble prep tables stationed under the trees. Rory stepped over a root the size of a large oak trunk. The Fae blade glowed. Pale lunar luminescence washed over the dark bark. "Put that away." Nyx rose from a puddle of spilled wine. Their six-foot solid form towered over Rory. "Moonsilver cuts through wards. It also acts as a beacon in the dark." Rory slid the dagger back into its sheath. The cold touch abandoned her hip. The suffocating heat of Dymas rushed back in. "Just keeping it ready." "Readiness is quiet." Isolde navigated the jagged rocks bordering the basin. "We walk among the damned. Let them eat. Do not draw their hunger." They descended the slope. The loamy earth gave way to polished obsidian tile paths winding through the orchard. Strange bioluminescent fungi clung to the tree trunks. The spores pulsed in rhythm with the distant feasting drums. Rory examined a hanging fruit. It resembled a pomegranate, but the skin appeared translucent. Inside, tiny shapes swam in a thick violet syrup. "Do not touch the Dymasian fig." Isolde slapped her hand away. Pale lavender eyes locked onto Rory. "One bite burns your palate away. Mortals who eat from Belphegor's garden never taste anything again, yet starve for eternity." Rory yanked her hand back to her side. Nyx dissipated into a mist of shadow, floating ahead of the two women. The whisper of their voice carried directly into Rory's mind. "Carts approach." Rory pulled Isolde behind a pair of massive wooden vats. The reek of fermenting grapes stung her eyes. The Heartstone pendant at her throat flashed hot against her skin. A pair of towering, minotaur-like demons stomped down the obsidian path. They hauled a groaning iron wagon loaded with the glowing golden apples and massive slabs of bloody meat. The wheels ground against the stone, throwing up sparks. "Make way for the sovereign's reserve!" One of the beasts bellowed. Saliva dripped from its snaggle-toothed jaw. The acid hissed upon contact with the tiles. Rory slowed her breathing. She kept her grip on the Fae-forged blade's hilt without drawing it. The freezing metal numbed her fingers. Isolde stood still beside her. Fae glamour masked them, washing their visual presence into the background scenery. The demons passed by. The iron wagon rattled their hiding spot. A glob of gore sloughed off the cart, slapping the tile inches from Rory's boots. She stared at the pulsating muscle tissue on the ground. "What is that?" "The centerpiece." Nyx reformed from the shadows of the vat. "Belphegor’s feasts require rare ingredients. Sometimes they harvest leviathans from the boiling seas. Sometimes they harvest those who failed to cook the leviathan correctly." Rory swallowed. The thick fragrant air tasted like ash in the back of her throat. They crept out from behind the vats. The path led deeper into the subterranean kitchens of Dymas. Massive stone arches loomed ahead. The architects carved the entryways to resemble roaring maws. The heat radiating from the tunnels baked the moisture from Rory’s lips. The rhythmic pounding inside shifted from drumbeats to the relentless chopping of heavy butcher cleavers. Isolde tilted her head. Her ethereal face betrayed no emotion, but her pace against the ash-covered path sped up. "The Seer's sight catches murmurs." Isolde pointed toward the open maws. "The gate to the inner rings lies beyond the kitchens. The Wardens do not patrol the slaughterhouses." "Because nothing survives the slaughterhouse." Nyx flowed over the ground. Rory stepped into the tunnel entrance. The amber sky vanished entirely from view. Braziers filled with blue fire lined the basalt walls. They cast flickering shadows across the tunnel. Every breath drew in the scent of charred bone and exotic spices. She unclasped the Heartstone pendant and held it in her palm. The deep crimson gem pulsed hard, radiating heat into her skin. "There's a rift nearby." Rory traced the silver chain with her thumb. "The pendant reacts to something deep inside." "Hel contains thousands of weak points." Nyx drifted up the cavern wall, becoming a smudge of soot against the stone. "Or another relic approaches." A screech shattered the background hum of the kitchens. Rory dropped the pendant over her chest and drew the Fae blade. Moonsilver flooded the immediate area in a pale cold sheen. Down the tunnel, the blue flames flickered and died. A figure backed out of the kitchen archway. A spectral chef scrambled backward with a meat hook. The spirit shrieked and backed into a corner. The soul dissolved into white smoke as a heavy chained boot stepped out of the shadows.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.389
leniency0.778
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1461
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
11.02% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1461
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"chilled"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"rhythmic"
count2
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"searing"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"synchronized"
count1
7
word"pristine"
count1
8
word"spectral"
count3
9
word"whisper"
count2
10
word"traced"
count2
11
word"marble"
count1
12
word"beacon"
count1
13
word"navigated"
count1
14
word"pulsed"
count2
15
word"loomed"
count1
16
word"roaring"
count1
17
word"pounding"
count1
18
word"shattered"
count1
19
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"chilled"
1"warmth"
2"rhythmic"
3"echoed"
4"searing"
5"chill"
6"synchronized"
7"pristine"
8"spectral"
9"whisper"
10"traced"
11"marble"
12"beacon"
13"navigated"
14"pulsed"
15"loomed"
16"roaring"
17"pounding"
18"shattered"
19"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences132
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences132
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences154
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1454
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions67
wordCount1204
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity2.16
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Veil1
Richmond1
Park1
Fae-Forged1
Earth1
Heartstone3
Grove1
Nyx10
Rory26
Fae5
Dymas2
Pale2
Isolde11
Saliva1
Fae-forged1
persons
0"Veil"
1"Earth"
2"Nyx"
3"Rory"
4"Dymas"
5"Isolde"
6"Saliva"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Grove"
3"Pale"
globalScore0.42
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences109
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"appeared translucent"
1"tasted like ash in the back of her throat"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1454
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences154
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean24.23
std14.47
cv0.597
sampleLengths
066
134
229
33
421
511
626
742
821
96
108
1127
1230
1350
1421
1518
163
1743
1834
1912
2012
2115
2223
2335
2425
2529
2655
2724
283
2915
3013
3122
324
3324
3436
3523
3637
378
3823
392
4029
4138
4225
4339
4426
4510
463
4734
4815
4958
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences132
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs181
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences154
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1211
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"tight over hollow cheeks."
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.011560693641618497
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.002477291494632535
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences154
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences154
mean9.44
std4.04
cv0.428
sampleLengths
06
116
218
33
48
515
64
78
87
915
1016
1113
123
1311
1410
1511
1611
179
186
196
2010
2111
2215
2310
2411
256
267
271
289
292
305
3111
325
3310
347
358
363
375
3811
3911
4012
418
4211
4310
4411
457
463
474
4812
4911
62.99% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.4090909090909091
totalSentences154
uniqueOpeners63
25.64% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences130
matches
0"Instead, carnivorous pitcher plants with"
ratio0.008
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences130
matches
0"She gripped the Fae-Forged blade"
1"Her pale lavender eyes locked"
2"They marched down the cobblestone"
3"She stepped over a cracked"
4"They materialized near a gnarled"
5"They wore pristine white chef"
6"He tore glowing golden apples"
7"They slid along the ground,"
8"They chopped and diced at"
9"Their six-foot solid form towered"
10"They descended the slope."
11"It resembled a pomegranate, but"
12"They hauled a groaning iron"
13"She kept her grip on"
14"She stared at the pulsating"
15"They crept out from behind"
16"Her ethereal face betrayed no"
17"They cast flickering shadows across"
18"She unclasped the Heartstone pendant"
ratio0.146
2.31% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount119
totalSentences130
matches
0"The Veil tore like wet"
1"Isolde stepped through the shimmering"
2"Nyx slid through the gap"
3"Rory went last."
4"She gripped the Fae-Forged blade"
5"The moonsilver metal chilled her"
6"Amber light swallowed them."
7"The winter bite of the"
8"A thick, syrupy warmth coated"
9"The sky above held no"
10"Rory released the hilt of"
11"The Heartstone sitting against her"
12"Nyx bled into a solid"
13"Violet eyes tracked the twisting,"
14"Isolde brushed a silver lock"
15"Her pale lavender eyes locked"
16"They marched down the cobblestone"
17"Row upon row of colossal"
18"Grapes the size of bloated"
19"The air carried the scent"
ratio0.915
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences130
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
94.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Isolde pressed (press)"
1"the beasts bellowed (bellow)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.056
leniency0.111
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.111
84.1244%