Run: 2026-02-19-01KHVPDG2MNYAA051CR5E9WTTZ

Run Details

Duration:
2m 2s
Cost:
$0.094896
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed the Soho pavement, distorting the distinctive green neon sign above the entrance to The Raven’s Nest. Rory sat at the far end of the mahogany bar. Her delivery jacket reeked of Golden Empress garlic and damp wool. She traced the condensation forming on her pint glass with a single, blunt fingernail. Silas swiped a crushed rag over the varnished wood. His slight limp favored his left leg, an uneven, dragging rhythm she recognized over the low jazz thumping from the jukebox. The silver signet ring on his right hand clicked a steady beat against a stack of clean tumblers. Dim amber light from the hanging lamps caught the sharp grey streaks in his auburn beard. He caught her bright blue eyes in the mirror behind the spirits, offering a silent question. Rory shook her head, turning back to her pint. The heavy oak front door swung inward. A gust of raw, wet wind scattered a stack of paper coasters across the floorboards. Rory gripped her glass. A woman stood in the threshold, shaking water from an immaculate matte-black trench coat. Sharp, tailored slacks cut off above the ankle. Pointed stiletto boots struck the entrance mat. Platinum blonde hair, severe and ironed flat, replaced the messy chestnut waves Rory remembered tangling in the Cardiff sea breeze. Eva. Rory stiffened. Her fingers found the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, pressing deep into the familiar ridge of old tissue. Eva scanned the room. Her gaze swept past the mounted black-and-white photographs of wartime London, past the framed maps of the Underground, before snagging on the end of the bar. Silence swallowed the space between them. Eva moved across the room. The strike of her heels sounded hollow against the scuffed floor. She claimed the stool two seats down from Rory, folding her trench coat over her lap. Her perfume flooded the air, overriding the smell of stale beer—a sharp, aggressive scent of jasmine and cracked black pepper. Silas approached, wiping his hands on a towel. "Gin martini. Dry. Three olives." Eva placed a rigid fifty-pound note on the counter. Her manicured fingernails tapped the wood, a frantic, impatient rhythm. "Not much of a martini crowd in this weather." Silas pocketed the note. "I prefer the cold." Silas limped down the length of the bar to the premium spirits shelf. Eva turned her head. "You kept the black hair." "You ditched the brown." Rory kept her gaze on her pint. "Maintenance was a nightmare. Platinum commands attention in the boardroom." "It commands bleach." Eva touched her collarbone, bare beneath the sharp lapels of her blazer. "Seven years, Rory. You look the same." "I smell like Kung Pao chicken." "You smell like survival." Silas placed a frosted glass on a cocktail napkin. He pushed a toothpick loaded with three green olives across the rim. He scooped a handful of coins from the till, laid the change beside Eva’s elbow, and met Rory’s eyes again. His hazel gaze held firm, a silent offer to bounce the unwelcome guest. Rory offered a slight shake of her head. Silas gathered an empty crate. He navigated past the till and pushed a worn copy of Dickens embedded in the rear bookshelf. The structure clicked and swung inward, revealing the dark void of his private back room. He stepped through, pulling the shelf shut behind him. Eva took a measured sip. Her skin pulled tight around the corners of her mouth, lacking the chaotic, bruised warmth of their university days. Shadows lived deep under her eyes, masked by heavy, expensive concealer. "You never called." Rory addressed the peeling label on her beer bottle. "You vanished." "You told me to run." "I told you to get away from Evan. I didn't tell you to disappear off the face of the earth." "He knew all my spaces, Eva. He knew our spaces." "I sat at The Goat every Friday for six months waiting for you to walk in." "I was slinging noodles in Camden." "We were inseparable. No forwarding address, no number." "Evan smashed my phone against the kitchen tiles. You know that. I boarded a bus out of Cardiff with thirty quid and a fractured wrist." Eva rolled the olive toothpick between her thumb and forefinger. The platinum hair formed a sharp curtain over her profile, hiding her expression. "I stayed." Eva stared at the olive suspended in the clear liquor. "I stayed and finished the law degree you abandoned." "Congratulations. You wanted the courtroom." "I went corporate. Mergers and acquisitions. Bankrupting family businesses for multinational conglomerates." "Fulfilling work." "It pays for the shoes." Rory took a long swallow of her lager. The bitter draft coated her tongue. Eva radiated tension, a high-frequency hum of defensive armor. The girl who used to steal traffic cones and smoke roll-ups on the roof of the student union existed nowhere in the striking woman sitting beside her. "Are you happy, Eva?" "I am successful." "That isn't what I asked." "Happiness is a metric for children. Adults measure stability." "You sound like him." Eva’s hand froze halfway to her mouth. The martini sloshed over the rim, bleeding into the paper napkin. "Never compare me to Evan." "He fed me those exact words. Right before he started breaking the china." "I dictate the terms of my life, Rory. I answer to nobody." Rory traced her crescent scar again. The skin burned under her touch, phantom aches flaring from a past she buried under soot and London rain. "You ran into him." Rory pressed her thumb into her pulse point. Eva broke eye contact. Her posture deteriorated, shoulders slumping as she stared at the amber glow of the spirits shelf. "Two years ago. A charity gala in the Bay." "Did you speak to him?" "He approached me." Rory gripped the edge of the bar. The wood dug into her palms. "He runs his father's firm now. Bespoke suit, charming smile, pouring champagne for the partners." "He always played his part in public." "He asked about you." "What did you tell him?" "Nothing. I possessed no information to surrender. I stood in a velvet gown, staring at the man who shattered my best friend's bones, and I clinked glasses with him." Rory exhaled. The air rushed out of her lungs in a jagged, hollow breath. Eva drained the rest of her glass. She chewed the olive with mechanical repetition. "His firm considered a merger with my firm." Eva pushed the empty glass away. "I laughed at his jokes while you were hiding in London smelling like frying oil." "You made a choice for your ascent." "I compromised the only thing I cared about. I comprised us." The neon sign buzzed through the damp brick walls, casting a sickly green hue over the frosted glass. Silas re-emerged from the bookshelf room, his limp heavy as he carried a stack of fresh towels. He gave them a wide berth, stacking the linens near the till. "I didn't hide." Rory let her hand drop from her wrist to her damp jeans. "I built a life. I have this bar. I have friends." "You deliver takeaways." "Part-time. I work for Yu-Fei. She treats me well. I pay my rent for the flat upstairs." "You belong in a courtroom, Rory. You decimated the mock trials." "I belong where no one raises a hand to me." Eva reached out. Her manicured fingers hovered inches from Rory’s sleeve, stopping short of actual contact. The gesture hung suspended in the space between them, a ghost of old affection paralyzed by an ocean of unsaid betrayals. "I miss the girl who dragged me to the sea at three in the morning to scream at the waves." Eva pulled her hand back, curling her fingers into a tight fist in her lap. "She drowned in the Severn Estuary." Rory picked at the peeling wood of the bar. "Along with my law textbooks." "He ruined your potential." "He broke my wrist. He fractured my spirit. You drinking champagne with him shattered whatever remained." Eva flinched. The sharp, tailored lines of her face collapsed, exposing an exhausted, hollow shell beneath the layers of expensive foundation. She looked a decade older than twenty-five. "I requested a transfer to the London office." Eva unclasped a leather purse from her shoulder. "I arrived this morning." Rory watched a bead of condensation slide down her glass and pool on the mahogany. "London spans a wide grid." "I looked up the Golden Empress. Posed as a customer on the phone. The owner mentioned you lived above a pub in Soho. A place with a neon sign." "A significant expenditure of effort." "I want to make amends." "You cannot bill me for your lost hours, Eva." "I want my friend back." Rory turned her stool to face the entrance. Outside, the storm washed the streets clean, swirling debris down the bloated gutters. The green light flickered, throwing an eerie, submerged glow over the slick cobblestones. Silas placed a fresh martini in front of Eva. "On the house." He gathered the empty glass and retreated to the far sink. Eva stared at the fresh drink. The gin caught the dim light, clear and biting. "Nothing is ever on the house," Rory noted, keeping her gaze pinned to the dreary street outside. "Everything extracts a price."
created_at"2026-02-19T19:35:48.4Z" 2/19/2026, 7:35:48 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.191
leniency0.382
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1563
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.82% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1563
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"traced"
count2
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"navigated"
count1
5
word"structure"
count1
6
word"measured"
count1
7
word"chaotic"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"fractured"
count2
10
word"tension"
count1
11
word"pulse"
count1
12
word"velvet"
count1
13
word"shattered"
count2
14
word"mechanical"
count1
15
word"affection"
count1
16
word"potential"
count1
17
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"familiar"
2"scanned"
3"silence"
4"navigated"
5"structure"
6"measured"
7"chaotic"
8"warmth"
9"fractured"
10"tension"
11"pulse"
12"velvet"
13"shattered"
14"mechanical"
15"affection"
16"potential"
17"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences91
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences146
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1552
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
44.89% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions60
wordCount999
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.1
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Golden1
Empress1
Rory21
Cardiff1
London2
Underground1
Silas8
Eva21
Dickens1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Silas"
2"Eva"
3"Dickens"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"Cardiff"
3"London"
globalScore0.449
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1552
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences146
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs93
mean16.69
std15.36
cv0.92
sampleLengths
053
189
222
34
449
51
622
730
86
952
108
1124
1213
134
1413
159
1611
1710
183
1912
207
216
224
2362
2446
2535
2612
272
285
2920
3010
3116
326
338
3425
3523
3621
375
3812
392
405
4150
424
433
445
459
464
4718
485
4913
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs155
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences146
ratio0.007
matches
0"Her perfume flooded the air, overriding the smell of stale beer—a sharp, aggressive scent of jasmine and cracked black pepper."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1008
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.007936507936507936
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.000992063492063492
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences146
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences146
mean10.63
std6.29
cv0.591
sampleLengths
018
110
211
314
49
521
618
716
816
99
107
1115
124
1314
148
157
1620
171
182
1920
204
2126
226
235
2411
2516
2620
278
2814
2910
3013
314
3213
334
345
3511
3610
373
3812
397
406
414
429
4312
4420
4513
468
475
4817
4915
42.47% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.2808219178082192
totalSentences146
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences87
matches
0"Her delivery jacket reeked of"
1"She traced the condensation forming"
2"His slight limp favored his"
3"He caught her bright blue"
4"Her fingers found the small"
5"Her gaze swept past the"
6"She claimed the stool two"
7"Her perfume flooded the air,"
8"Her manicured fingernails tapped the"
9"He pushed a toothpick loaded"
10"He scooped a handful of"
11"His hazel gaze held firm,"
12"He navigated past the till"
13"He stepped through, pulling the"
14"Her skin pulled tight around"
15"Her posture deteriorated, shoulders slumping"
16"She chewed the olive with"
17"He gave them a wide"
18"Her manicured fingers hovered inches"
19"She looked a decade older"
ratio0.241
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount83
totalSentences87
matches
0"Rain lashed the Soho pavement,"
1"Rory sat at the far"
2"Her delivery jacket reeked of"
3"She traced the condensation forming"
4"Silas swiped a crushed rag"
5"His slight limp favored his"
6"The silver signet ring on"
7"He caught her bright blue"
8"Rory shook her head, turning"
9"The heavy oak front door"
10"A gust of raw, wet"
11"Rory gripped her glass."
12"A woman stood in the"
13"Platinum blonde hair, severe and"
14"Her fingers found the small"
15"Eva scanned the room."
16"Her gaze swept past the"
17"Silence swallowed the space between"
18"Eva moved across the room."
19"The strike of her heels"
ratio0.954
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The girl who used to steal traffic cones and smoke roll-ups on the roof of the student union existed nowhere in the striking woman sitting beside her."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Rory addressed (address)"
1"Rory pressed (press)"
2"Rory noted (note)"
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.044
leniency0.088
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.088
83.8061%