Run: 2026-02-19-01KHVPENSYDGQHYWNHJ005Z50H

Run Details

Duration:
2m 54s
Cost:
$0.159060
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign outside buzzed a relentless, low-frequency hum against the rain-slicked window. Inside The Raven's Nest, the air hung heavy with the scent of aged leather, stale vermouth, and fragile bookbinding. Silas leaned against the mahogany counter, a white cloth clutched in his large hand. The silver signet ring on his right index finger clinked a steady tempo against a crystal highball glass. His hazel eyes tracked the handful of patrons scattered among the shadows of the velvet booths, a hardwired survival habit persisting decades after his retirement from field operations. Rory sat at the far stool, tracing the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. The Golden Empress polyester uniform clung to her skin, maintaining the damp chill of three hours spent dodging Soho traffic on a rusted moped. A steaming plate of pork buns rested untouched near her elbow. The heavy oak door at the front of the bar squealed on its iron hinges. A violent gust of London wind rushed inside, ruffling the curled edges of a black-and-white navigational map tacked to the plaster wall. A man stepped across the threshold. He shook the excess water from a bespoke charcoal overcoat. His gaze swept the dimly lit room, dismissive and sharp, calculating the net worth of the establishment in a fraction of a second. The assessment ended the moment his eyes locked onto the far stool. Rory dropped her hand from her wrist. Her spine straightened against the wooden backrest. Her bright blue eyes fixed on the man. Julian. He crossed the uneven floorboards. The reckless, arrogant grin from their Cardiff University days had evaporated. Tight, drawn lines bracketed his mouth. His hair, once a riotous blonde mop, lay plastered down in a severe, immaculate side-part. The years had sanded away the rough, vibrant edges of the boy who argued constitutional law over cheap cider in Cathays Park, leaving behind a man polished, rigid, and drained of color. "Aurora." Rory kicked the brass footrail of her stool. She pivoted her torso. "No one calls me that anymore." Julian shrugged out of his overcoat, draping the heavy wool over the adjacent barstool. A midnight-blue three-piece suit clung to his frame. The fabric screamed Savile Row. A stark departure from the threadbare hoodies and stained denim they wore during late-night cram sessions in the Bute Building. "Rory, then. You disappeared off the face of the earth." Silas approached, his left leg dragging a fraction behind him. He slid a square cardboard coaster onto the wood, shooting Rory a questioning glance under his bushy eyebrows. She gave a microscopic nod. Silas flicked the bar towel over his broad shoulder. "Name your poison." "Macallan. Neat." Julian slid onto the cracked leather cushion. The sharp scent of bergamot cologne cut through the bar's natural aroma of bitter hops. He inspected the dim lighting, the faded cartography framing the liquor shelves, and the hidden corners shrouded in obscurity. His nose wrinkled in distaste. "Fascinating dive you frequent." "It keeps the rain off my head." Silas deposited the amber liquid in front of Julian. The auburn, grey-streaked beard of the older man caught the glint of the overhead lamps. Silas offered no pleasantries, retreating down the length of the bar to leave them an island of privacy. Julian wrapped fine-boned fingers around the tumbler. "I ran into Sir Brendan at a gala last month. He was in rare form. Complaining with massive volume about the incompetence of the new crop of barristers." Rory picked up a wooden chopstick, spearing the cold bun. "I owe Dad a phone call." Julian's eyes flicked to the embroidered Golden Empress dragon on her chest. "He operates under the delusion you are finishing a clandestine paralegal course. He omitted the culinary logistics aspect of your current ventures." Rory bit down on the pork. The spice burned the roof of her mouth. "I deliver reliable comfort. The margins blow corporate litigation out of the water." Julian took a slow measure of his drink. He did not smile. The silence stretched between them, thick with the unuttered name. Evan. The late-night shouting matches in the apartment in Roath. The bruises hidden under oversized wool sweaters. The sudden flight to Paddington Station with nothing but a canvas duffel bag. Julian had stood in the dormitory hallway, hands shoved deep in his pockets, watching her leave. He had promised to keep Evan off her trail. He had promised to check in. The promises held less weight than the dust motes dancing in the neon light. "Five years, Julian." "London eats time." "It eats people, too. You provide the teeth." He set the glass down. The ice cracked, a sharp retort in the quiet space. "I made junior partner at Vance & Sterling on Tuesday." "Heartfelt congratulations. You secured the corner office overlooking the Thames." "It overlooks a brick wall in Canary Wharf, actually." Rory rested her elbows on the sticky mahogany surface. "Does the brick wall compensate for the eighty-hour work weeks and the loss of your conscience?" Julian ran a thumb along the rim of his glass. The skin around his nail was raw, chewed to the quick. A nervous habit surviving the corporate overhaul of his personality. He lifted his chin. His eyes lacked the fierce, idealistic fire that used to ignite their debates in the lecture halls. "We drafted defense arguments for an energy firm that decimated a protected wetland in Wales last week. Saved the board a hundred million in operational fines." "Incredible." "The settlement left the local farming community in absolute ruins." "Law is a blunt instrument. You wield it with precision." Julian turned his entire body to face her. His posture crumbled under the weight of the tailored wool. The impeccable armor cracked, revealing the exhausted man underneath. "You possessed the genuine intellect, Rory. You always caught the loophole the professors missed. If you had stayed at Cardiff... if we had opened that human rights practice together." Rory pushed the ceramic plate away. The porcelain scraped a harsh, grating note against the wood. "The plan was a childhood fantasy." "It was a clear direction." "Evan was going to break my neck, Jules. Staying meant ending up on a slab, not arguing cases in the High Court." Julian flinched. He stared at his distorted reflection in the smoky mirror behind the liquor bottles. "I possessed the means to intervene. I stood by and let him isolate you." "I allowed the isolation. You had your own exams. A burning ambition to stroke." Julian dragged a finger through a condensation ring left by Silas’s glass. "I saw him. Last year. In a pub near the civic center. He held court with a new girl. Spouting the same poetic garbage. Eliciting the same adoring looks." "You should have bought him a pint. You two share a lot of common ground now." Julian’s jaw tightened. "I did not put my hands on you, Aurora." "No. You just watched it happen, calculated the legal liability of getting involved, and built a lucrative career on looking the other way." Down the counter, the friction of the white cloth ceased. Silas’s gaze locked onto Julian. The old spy’s hand rested inches from an iron pipe strapped under the basin. Rory raised an open palm. Silas resumed working. Julian deflated, the fight bleeding out of him in a sudden rush. He picked up his drink and drained the contents. The liquid rushed down his throat, a desperate plunge to drown the ghost sitting beside him. "You carry a deep hatred for me." "You flatter yourself." Rory leaned back, studying the stranger wearing her oldest friend's face. "I am looking at a junior partner in a bespoke suit. I do not possess enough familiarity with you to muster hatred." A low chuckle rumbled from Julian's chest, dry and devoid of humor. "Always the cool head. The brilliant Aurora Carter. You never let a single person see you bleed." "I bled rivers. I just ceased doing it in public." Julian lifted a hand, signaling Silas for another round. Silas ignored the gesture. He placed a crate of empty gin bottles under his arm and carried them toward the large, leather-bound bookshelf in the corner. He hit a hidden latch. The shelf swung inward, revealing a pitch-black corridor. Silas stepped inside, the heavy door clicking shut behind him. "He refuses to serve you again." "Top tier hospitality in this quadrant of the city." "It is his establishment. He dictates the company." "And you merit a permanent invitation." Rory tapped the faded map near her head. "I lease the flat upstairs. I ride a moped through the rain. This place breathes. You walk in here flashing a fat wallet and hollow eyes, expecting instant absolution because you harbor guilt over a ruined wetland and a five-year-old act of cowardice. The menu here lacks an absolution section." Julian grabbed his overcoat. His knuckles went stark white as he clutched the lapels, the expensive fabric wrinkling in his tight, desperate grip. "I came to London to locate you. To offer an apology." "You entered London to run the Vance & Sterling rat race. You wandered into this specific bar because the universe wields a vicious sense of humor." "I miss the girl who debated ethics until dawn. The girl who dismantled arguments with a smile." "She died in Cardiff." Julian stood tall. He reached inside his chest pocket, producing a crisp, thick business card embossed with heavy gold lettering. He placed it dead center on the cardboard coaster. "If the authorities ever give you trouble. If you ever need a way out of here." Rory stared at the card. The neon glow from the window reflected off the pristine white surface, casting a sickly green sheen over his printed name. "I possess an out. It has two wheels and smells firmly of garlic chive sauce." Julian cast his gaze downward, the sheer gravity of the years settling over his tailored shoulders. The barrier between them solidified, built from unspoken apologies and completely separate paths of survival. The hum of the neon sign filled the silence, louder now, a constant reminder of the relentless city outside.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
97.08% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1712
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
26.99% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1712
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"crystal"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"calculating"
count1
5
word"stark"
count2
6
word"flicked"
count2
7
word"fascinating"
count1
8
word"glint"
count1
9
word"clandestine"
count1
10
word"silence"
count2
11
word"weight"
count2
12
word"dancing"
count1
13
word"porcelain"
count1
14
word"calculated"
count1
15
word"race"
count1
16
word"sense of"
count1
17
word"pristine"
count1
18
word"firmly"
count1
19
word"unspoken"
count1
20
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"crystal"
1"velvet"
2"tracing"
3"chill"
4"calculating"
5"stark"
6"flicked"
7"fascinating"
8"glint"
9"clandestine"
10"silence"
11"weight"
12"dancing"
13"porcelain"
14"calculated"
15"race"
16"sense of"
17"pristine"
18"firmly"
19"unspoken"
20"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences100
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences148
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1695
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions64
wordCount1093
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity1.83
worstName"Julian"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Julian"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Golden2
Empress2
Soho1
London1
Cardiff1
University1
Cathays1
Park1
Savile1
Row1
Bute1
Building1
Rory12
Julian20
Roath1
Paddington1
Station1
Evan2
Silas11
persons
0"Rory"
1"Julian"
2"Evan"
3"Silas"
places
0"Raven"
1"Soho"
2"London"
3"Cardiff"
4"Cathays"
5"Park"
6"Bute"
7"Building"
8"Roath"
9"Paddington"
globalScore0.585
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1695
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences148
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs90
mean18.83
std17.64
cv0.936
sampleLengths
093
115
235
337
451
522
61
769
81
912
106
1147
1210
1328
145
159
163
172
1846
194
207
2142
227
2328
2410
256
2612
2722
2814
2913
3083
3114
323
333
348
3515
3610
3710
389
399
4016
4152
4226
431
4410
4510
4627
4729
4816
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs156
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences148
ratio0
matches(empty)
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1107
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
1"large, leather-bound bookshelf"
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.007226738934056007
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0027100271002710027
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences148
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences148
mean11.45
std7.34
cv0.641
sampleLengths
014
119
214
318
428
515
624
711
815
922
106
1110
1223
1312
147
157
168
171
185
1911
206
2115
2232
231
248
254
266
2714
288
295
3020
3110
3210
3318
345
359
363
372
387
3915
4019
415
424
437
449
4515
4618
477
4828
4910
42.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.21621621621621623
totalSentences148
uniqueOpeners32
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences97
matches
0"His hazel eyes tracked the"
1"He shook the excess water"
2"His gaze swept the dimly"
3"Her spine straightened against the"
4"Her bright blue eyes fixed"
5"He crossed the uneven floorboards."
6"His hair, once a riotous"
7"She pivoted her torso."
8"He slid a square cardboard"
9"She gave a microscopic nod."
10"He inspected the dim lighting,"
11"His nose wrinkled in distaste."
12"He did not smile."
13"He had promised to keep"
14"He had promised to check"
15"He set the glass down."
16"He lifted his chin."
17"His eyes lacked the fierce,"
18"His posture crumbled under the"
19"He stared at his distorted"
ratio0.268
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount94
totalSentences97
matches
0"The green neon sign outside"
1"Silas leaned against the mahogany"
2"The silver signet ring on"
3"His hazel eyes tracked the"
4"Rory sat at the far"
5"The Golden Empress polyester uniform"
6"A steaming plate of pork"
7"The heavy oak door at"
8"A violent gust of London"
9"A man stepped across the"
10"He shook the excess water"
11"His gaze swept the dimly"
12"The assessment ended the moment"
13"Rory dropped her hand from"
14"Her spine straightened against the"
15"Her bright blue eyes fixed"
16"He crossed the uneven floorboards."
17"The reckless, arrogant grin from"
18"His hair, once a riotous"
19"The years had sanded away"
ratio0.969
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The Golden Empress polyester uniform clung to her skin, maintaining the damp chill of three hours spent dodging Soho traffic on a rusted moped."
1"The years had sanded away the rough, vibrant edges of the boy who argued constitutional law over cheap cider in Cathays Park, leaving behind a man polished, rig…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.9322%