Run: 2026-02-19-01KHVPFF46030SJ9EDVZHSGC9A

Run Details

Duration:
1m 36s
Cost:
$0.084012
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement of Soho, washing the city grime into swirling storm drains. Detective Harlow Quinn stood in the black mouth of an alley across from The Raven's Nest, the bar's distinctive green neon sign buzzing like a dying hornet against the deluge. She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. Two in the morning. She wiped a slick of rain from her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair and set her sharp jaw. After eighteen years in the Metropolitan Police, Harlow knew when a stakeout was about to break. The heavy oak door of The Raven's Nest swung open. A man stepped out into the downpour, his collar pulled high. He moved fast, putting distance between himself and the bar's glowing green windows, which were obscured inside by old maps and black-and-white photographs hanging on the walls. Harlow knew there was a hidden room behind a bookshelf in that place, used for the clandestine meetings of the clique she was hunting. She had stared at the blueprints for days. The man beneath the streetlamp was out in the open now. Harlow recognized him immediately, the face matching the endless stack of case files on her desk. Tomás Herrera. Twenty-nine years old, born in Seville, a disgraced former paramedic who had lost his NHS license after administering unauthorized, unexplainable treatments. Tomás was the off-the-books doctor for the elusive suspects Harlow had been tracking for months. He was the loose thread she needed to pull. Harlow stepped out of the alley, her boot splashing down in a deep puddle. The loud crack of water echoed over the low rumble of thunder. Tomás flinched, snapping his head toward the noise. In the neon glare, Harlow caught the glimmer of the silver Saint Christopher medallion swinging wildly around his neck. He locked eyes with her. His warm brown eyes widened in panic, the rain plastering his short curly dark brown hair to his forehead. He did not ask questions. He bolted. Harlow broke into a sprint. The chase ripped away from the familiar layout of Soho and pushed through a labyrinthine scramble of slick side streets. Harlow ran with military precision, her footfalls measured, her breathing controlled. The rain blinded her, but she kept her focus pinned to the dark trench coat flying ahead of her. She closed the distance block by block, turning corners tight, keeping the fleeing medic in her line of sight. Tomás was fast but reckless. He slipped on a wet cobblestone corner, catching his balance against a brick wall. The streetlamp illuminated his left forearm, laid bare by his flailing jacket sleeve. The long, jagged scar from an old knife attack stood out stark white against his olive skin. He pushed off the wall and kept running, vaulting over a pile of spilled trash bags. They crossed out of the district, driving north. Half an hour later, they reached the desolate edges of Camden, the rain redoubling its assault. Harlow's lungs burned, a steady, familiar ache. At forty-one, she knew she had to rely on endurance over explosive speed. Her conditioning kept her sharper than the younger uniforms at the precinct. She refused to lose him. Tomás threw a panicked look over his shoulder, saw Harlow steadily gaining, and ducked into a narrow service alley entirely choked with shadow. Harlow did not slow down. She drew her service weapon, her thumb resting on the safety, and plunged into the dark after him. The damp stench of rotting refuse gave way to an old, metallic odor. It smelled of rusted iron and stagnant subterranean air. Her narrow flashlight beam cut through the gloom. At the end of the alley stood a heavy iron door, its heavy security padlock shattered and hanging useless on a chain. She pushed through, her weapon raised and steady. The transition was jarring. The sound of the howling London rain vanished instantly, replaced by an echoing, cavernous stillness. Harlow found herself standing on a crumbling concrete landing looking down a wide, spiraling set of stairs. He had led her into an abandoned Tube station. Faded tiles clung desperately to the curved walls, reading a fractured route name in ghost letters. She descended, her footsteps making no sound as she expertly shifted her weight from heel to toe. Dust motes danced in the pale beam of her light. Deep below, the frantic scuff of a rubber sole echoed up the stairwell. Memories clawed at the edges of Harlow's mind as the darkness deepened. Three years ago. A seemingly routine raid in a quiet borough, an abyssal darkness, and a coldness that defied the laws of physics. She had found her partner, DS Morris, dead on the concrete floor. His heart had stopped, yet his face had been frozen in absolute, inhuman terror. The autopsy had yielded nothing but medical anomalies. The precinct brass called it a stress-induced cardiac event. Harlow called it a cover-up. Since that night, her entire world had shifted. The shadows stretched too far. The suspects she pursued felt less like standard criminals and more like pieces of a vast, terrifying puzzle. Tomás Herrera, treating wounds that defied medical logic with methods not found in any medical journal, was her strongest lead to the reality of what killed Morris. Harlow reached the bottom of the long staircase. The narrow landing opened up into a massive underground cavern, the defunct tracks stretching out into pitch blackness. Up ahead, a faint, unnatural violet glow pulsed. Harlow clicked off her flashlight and holstered her weapon. She crept forward, pressing her shoulder against the damp tiled wall. A low hum filled the air, rhythmic and deep, like a hive of bees submerged in water. She slid behind a thick concrete pillar near an old iron ticketing gate and peered around the edge. A few dozen yards away, Tomás stood before a makeshift barricade blocking off the deeper tunnels. A massive figure stood guard there, wrapped in a tattered leather apron over heavy clothing. Harlow strained her brown eyes to see in the dim violet light. The guard was entirely too broad in the shoulders, and an acrid, unnatural scent poured off him, masking the station's stale ozone. Tomás stepped forward, his chest heaving as he spoke rapidly in hushed tones. The massive guard merely grunted and held out an open, waiting palm. Harlow watched closely as Tomás reached into his coat pocket and produced a small, carved white object. It clattered gently into the guard's hand. Even from the distance, Harlow recognized the unmistakable curve and density of human bone. A bone token. The guard inspected the token in the violet light, grunted again, and pulled a heavy rust-covered lever. The iron barricade dragged open with a horrible screech. Beyond the gate, the dark tunnel bloomed into a sprawling, chaotic spectacle. Harlow stared, her breath catching in her throat as she completely forgot her burning lungs. The sprawling abandoned platforms were thickly lined with makeshift stalls constructed of salvaged wood, corrugated tin, and rusted metal. Lanterns containing floating, liquid spheres of colored light illuminated the darkness instead of lightbulbs. Vendors in heavy cloaks peddled jars of glowing blue substances, thick bundles of unidentifiable dried flora, and intricate brass clockwork devices that walked rapidly across the display tables on their own. It was an underground market. Hidden deep beneath the streets of London, shielded entirely from the waking world, a supernatural bazaar thrived in the wreckage of the old Tube line. She recalled cryptic fragments of wiretap transcripts detailing banned alchemical substances and stolen artifacts. Informants whispered about the Veil Market. They said it moved locations every full moon. Harlow realized why the heavy padlock on the street level door had only been broken tonight. The market had just arrived in Camden. Tomás slipped through the barricade and melted effortlessly into the dense crowd of robed and masked patrons, heading toward a stall selling thick, shimmering vials of golden draughts. Harlow pressed herself back behind the cold concrete pillar, her heart hammering a frantic rhythm against her ribs. The logical, decorated detective in her mind screamed to fall back. This was not a drug den or an underground chop shop. This was impossible. This was the dark, bleeding edge of the world that had swallowed her partner whole. Her badge meant absolutely nothing down here. Her sidearm felt like a useless plastic toy against the impossible, reality-bending sights moving beyond that iron gate. If she walked into that crowd to apprehend Tomás Herrera, there was a very high probability she would not walk out. She looked at the worn leather watch on her left wrist. The minute hand ticked forward, steady and relentless. Morris used to tap that very watch before every raid, telling her that time waits for no one just before he kicked in a door without waiting for backup. Harlow squeezed her eyes shut. She saw Morris's pale, terrified face lying on the wet concrete. She saw the subsequent years of dead-end leads, the patronizing looks from her superiors who thought her grief had made her crazy, the endless nights awake demanding answers from an empty apartment. She was forty-one years old, and she had spent the last three years living like a ghost haunting the borders of a mystery she could not prove existed. Now, the proof was right in front of her. She opened her eyes, the sharp lines of her jaw setting into iron determination. She patted her hip, feeling the reassuring weight of her holster, then studied the layout of the barricade. The massive guard was currently distracted, turning his attention to a patron in a heavy velvet cloak approaching from the deeper rail tracks. Harlow Quinn did not have a carved bone token, but she had eighteen years of tactical training and a lifetime of hunting monsters hidden in human skin. She dropped into a low crouch, moving away from the ticketing pillar and slipping into a narrow maintenance access shaft branching off the main cavern. The darkness swallowed her as she navigated the cramped secondary tunnel by touch, bypassing the main gate completely. She emerged behind a stack of rusted metal crates directly inside the perimeter of the Veil Market. The scent of burning sage, raw copper, and ozone washed over her. Harlow lifted her head, her brown eyes scanning the chaotic, shifting crowd until she spotted the curly dark hair and olive skin of Tomás Herrera moving near an apothecary stand. Taking a slow, deep breath, Harlow left the safety of the waking world behind and stepped out into the violet light.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
85.95% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1779
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count2
2
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"gently"
1"completely"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
26.93% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1779
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"clandestine"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count2
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"measured"
count1
4
word"stark"
count1
5
word"gloom"
count1
6
word"shattered"
count1
7
word"echoing"
count1
8
word"fractured"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count1
10
word"weight"
count2
11
word"abyssal"
count1
12
word"standard"
count1
13
word"pulsed"
count1
14
word"rhythmic"
count1
15
word"chaotic"
count2
16
word"constructed"
count1
17
word"intricate"
count1
18
word"absolutely"
count1
19
word"velvet"
count1
20
word"navigated"
count1
21
word"scanning"
count1
highlights
0"clandestine"
1"echoed"
2"familiar"
3"measured"
4"stark"
5"gloom"
6"shattered"
7"echoing"
8"fractured"
9"footsteps"
10"weight"
11"abyssal"
12"standard"
13"pulsed"
14"rhythmic"
15"chaotic"
16"constructed"
17"intricate"
18"absolutely"
19"velvet"
20"navigated"
21"scanning"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences127
matches
0"d in panic"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences127
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences127
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1765
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions70
wordCount1765
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.53
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Harlow27
Quinn2
Raven2
Nest2
Metropolitan1
Police1
Herrera4
Seville1
Saint1
Christopher1
Camden2
London2
Tube2
Morris4
Tomás12
Veil2
Market2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Nest"
4"Herrera"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
7"Morris"
8"Tomás"
9"Market"
places
0"Soho"
1"Metropolitan"
2"Seville"
3"Camden"
4"London"
globalScore0.735
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences110
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"A seemingly routine raid in a q"
1"felt like a useless plastic toy against"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1765
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences127
matches(empty)
97.99% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean47.7
std23.52
cv0.493
sampleLengths
058
133
280
374
453
531
65
769
865
961
1023
1145
1238
1361
1440
1583
1658
1726
188
1937
2018
2165
2225
2341
2426
2527
2664
2781
2828
2918
3086
3148
3276
339
3455
3587
3663
96.97% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences127
matches
0"were obscured"
1"been frozen"
2"been broken"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs285
matches
0"was hunting"
1"was jarring"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences127
ratio0
matches(empty)
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1779
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"stark white against his"
1"heavy rust-covered lever."
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.025295109612141653
lyAdverbCount27
lyAdverbRatio0.01517706576728499
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences127
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences127
mean13.9
std6.93
cv0.499
sampleLengths
014
130
210
34
417
516
610
711
827
924
108
1111
1216
132
1421
1515
169
1714
1812
198
2019
215
2219
235
242
255
2620
2711
2819
2919
305
3114
3213
3317
3416
358
3616
377
3813
3912
405
4123
425
4318
4413
459
468
4722
488
494
39.76% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.28346456692913385
totalSentences127
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences125
matches(empty)
ratio0
98.40% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences125
matches
0"She checked the worn leather"
1"She wiped a slick of"
2"He moved fast, putting distance"
3"She had stared at the"
4"He was the loose thread"
5"He locked eyes with her."
6"His warm brown eyes widened"
7"He did not ask questions."
8"She closed the distance block"
9"He slipped on a wet"
10"He pushed off the wall"
11"They crossed out of the"
12"Her conditioning kept her sharper"
13"She refused to lose him."
14"She drew her service weapon,"
15"It smelled of rusted iron"
16"Her narrow flashlight beam cut"
17"She pushed through, her weapon"
18"He had led her into"
19"She descended, her footsteps making"
ratio0.304
40.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount105
totalSentences125
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stood in"
1"She checked the worn leather"
2"She wiped a slick of"
3"The heavy oak door of"
4"A man stepped out into"
5"He moved fast, putting distance"
6"Harlow knew there was a"
7"She had stared at the"
8"The man beneath the streetlamp"
9"Harlow recognized him immediately, the"
10"Tomás was the off-the-books doctor"
11"He was the loose thread"
12"Harlow stepped out of the"
13"The loud crack of water"
14"Tomás flinched, snapping his head"
15"He locked eyes with her."
16"His warm brown eyes widened"
17"He did not ask questions."
18"Harlow broke into a sprint."
19"The chase ripped away from"
ratio0.84
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences125
matches
0"Even from the distance, Harlow"
1"If she walked into that"
2"Now, the proof was right"
ratio0.024
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences88
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He moved fast, putting distance between himself and the bar's glowing green windows, which were obscured inside by old maps and black-and-white photographs hang…"
1"Tomás Herrera, treating wounds that defied medical logic with methods not found in any medical journal, was her strongest lead to the reality of what killed Mor…"
2"Vendors in heavy cloaks peddled jars of glowing blue substances, thick bundles of unidentifiable dried flora, and intricate brass clockwork devices that walked …"
3"She saw the subsequent years of dead-end leads, the patronizing looks from her superiors who thought her grief had made her crazy, the endless nights awake dema…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
88.0224%