Run: 2026-02-19-01KHVPKXSW9DETAK9QY7HGCZ49

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Water sheeted off Harlow’s shoulders. The distinctive green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest sizzled overhead, casting sickly emerald reflections across Soho’s flooded gutters. Harlow watched from a darkened stoop. She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. Midnight approached. The heavy oak door swung open with a groan. Tomás Herrera stepped onto the slick pavement. He pulled the collar of his coat tight against his throat. The Saint Christopher medallion swung loose around his neck, snagging the amber glow of a distant streetlight. Harlow stepped from the mouth of the alley. Her sharp jaw set. She squared her shoulders, bringing eighteen years of decorated police service into a single, focused stance. Her military precision demanded absolute control. "Tomás Herrera. Metropolitan Police." Tomás flinched. His warm brown eyes widened in sudden panic. He spun on his heel and launched himself down the street. Harlow broke into a sprint. Wet winter air tore at her lungs. Her heavy boots crushed discarded takeout cups and shattered murky puddles. Ahead, Tomás wove through a cluster of late-night revelers exiting a pub. "Police. Out of the way." Harlow shoved past a stumbling tourist. She kept her eyes locked on his fleeing form. Tomás hooked a sharp left into Greek Street. He cast a frantic look over his shoulder. Rainwater slicked his olive skin. His short, curly, dark brown hair plastered flat against his forehead. He pushed a rolling garbage bin into her path. Rubbish spilled across the asphalt in a stinking wave. Harlow vaulted the plastic lid. Her boots hit the concrete, maintaining rhythm. She closed the distance. Discipline dictated her breathing. In through the nose, out through the mouth. Conserve stamina. Let the desperate suspect burn essential energy. They burst out of Soho, tearing north toward Fitzrovia. The sky opened, dumping sheets of freezing rain onto the sleeping city. Tomás ducked into a narrow service passage. Harlow followed, drawing her damp coat tight to clear the jagged brick. The passage narrowed further. Blank, windowless walls choked out the remaining ambient light. Tomás hit a tall chain-link fence. The gate rattled, held fast by a thick padlock. He whipped around. His chest heaved. Harlow unclipped her holster. She kept her hands empty but hovered near her belt. "Wall. Hands high." Tomás backed against the rusted wire. He rubbed the pale scar running along his left forearm, the remnant of a vicious knife attack. "You cross a line tonight, Quinn." "Turn around." "I patch people up. That's it." The silver medallion shook on his heaving chest. "You drag me in, bodies pile up." "Your patients end up in the morgue anyway." Harlow advanced a single step. "DS Morris. Three years. You hold the only connection to his last open case file." Tomás gripped the wire fence behind him. "Your partner chased absolute nightmares. Those nightmares bit back. I patched up the survivors. I didn't kill him." "You know who did." "I know how to survive." Tomás grabbed a stack of discarded shipping pallets. He hurled the top wooden frame at her knees. Harlow sidestepped, but the heavy corner clipped her shin. She unleashed a sharp breath, stumbling against the wet brick. Tomás scrambled up the fence, boots finding the diamond gaps. He vaulted the coiled wire at the top. Harlow recovered her balance. She hit the mesh and climbed, ignoring the sharp sting in her leg. Drop down. Roll on the wet concrete. Rise. The chase stretched deep into the dead hours of the night. They crossed the boundary into Camden. The familiar urban gloss dissolved. Neon gave way to sodium-orange street lamps. Pedestrian traffic evaporated. Derelict storefronts stared out onto abandoned roads with boarded eyes. Rain hammered the corrugated steel roofs of the lock-ups around the canal. Tomás stumbled near the water's edge. His stamina drained faster than hers. He clutched his side, dragging his left leg, shoes slipping on wet cobblestones. He swerved toward an overgrown lot tucked behind a row of graffitied warehouses. Wrought iron fencing stood buckled and bent. A faded sign warned against trespassing. Beneath the tangled weeds and concrete rubble sat an old, arched stone entry—an abandoned conduit into the sprawling London Underground. Harlow halted at the edge of the lot. Rain dripped from her short salt-and-pepper hair. Tomás descended the cracked tile stairs. Complete darkness swallowed him. Harlow crossed the desolate lot. She stood at the dark threshold. A cold draft drifted from the subterranean depths. It carried the smell of burnt ozone, dried copper, and an unnatural, rotting sweetness. She looked down. Faint, flickering light painted the curved tunnel walls beneath the surface. Echoes of hushed, distorted voices vibrated through the floorboards. The graffiti on the upper walls gave way to strange, carved symbols near the base of the stairwell. She touched her leather watch. The glass face froze against her fingertips. Morris died in a place exactly like this. A forgotten, sealed cellar beneath the modern city. The precinct found him torn apart, flesh twisted into impossible shapes. The brass wrote it off as a wild animal attack. Harlow knew better. A rhythmic thumping echoed up the hollow stairwell. Harlow drew her baton. She snapped her wrist, letting the heavy steel telescope out with a brutal clack. She descended the first flight of stairs. Shadows danced on ancient advertisement posters peeling from the curved tiles. The air grew dense, pressing a heavy weight against her eardrums. She reached the bottom. The old turnstile hall stretched impossibly wide, transformed into a sprawling, underground bazaar. Candles burned in iron cages hung from the vaulted ceiling. Makeshift stalls lined the platforms where commuter trains used to thunder past. Cloaked figures huddled over tables laden with strange, foul wares. Glass jars bubbled with luminescent fluids, casting a sickly blue glow over pale, emaciated merchants. Dried animal parts—claws, wings, and disturbingly human limbs—hung from rusted wire. Patrons traded thick, gold coins and vials of dark red liquid instead of cash. The Veil Market. Harlow flattened her back against a tiled pillar. Tomás stood at a makeshift barricade ten yards away. Two massive figures flanked him. Heavy cowls hid their faces. Tomás unzipped a hidden pocket in his jacket. He pulled out a smooth, yellowed object. A bone token. He handed it to the figure on the left. The hooded giant inspected the artifact. He stepped aside. "Go." The guard's voice sounded like grinding millstones. Tomás passed through a set of heavy, riveted iron doors. Harlow tightened her grip on the steel baton. The figures blocking the gate dwarfed any suspect she had ever fought. Wide shoulders, unnatural posture, hands that hung remarkably far down their thighs. She stepped out from the pillar. Her boots tapped the dirty mosaic floor. The chatter of the nearest stalls died away instantly. Cloaked patrons turned their hidden faces toward her. The twin giants focused on her steady approach. "Metropolitan Police." Harlow flashed her silver badge. "Open the gate." The right guard tilted his head sideways. A low, guttural growl rumbled deep in his chest. "No wolves allowed. Leave the meat." "I'm not asking permission." Harlow ignored the rising heat in her chest. "You harbor a fugitive behind those doors." "Show the bone." The left guard raised an enormous hand, thick with brutal calluses and dried blood. "Or we take yours." Harlow stood her ground. Shoulders back. Sharp jaw set in immovable stone. She met the black void beneath their cowls. The dense air crackled, charged with raw static electricity. Adrenaline burned the heavy fatigue from her aching muscles. She refused to retreat. Morris deserved answers. This entire hidden rot beneath London required cleansing. "I lack a token." Harlow lowered the baton, letting the steel rest against her thigh. "But I carry cuffs, and right now, you obstruct an active police manhunt." The guards chuckled. The cold sound resembled cracking river ice. A nearby vendor packed up his glowing vials and scurried into the shadows. "Little human." The guard unclasped his heavy cloak, revealing thick arms covered in jagged, glowing runic brands. "This place eats your kind. Turn back." Harlow raised the steel baton back to striking position.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1363
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.32% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1363
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"shattered"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"depths"
count1
3
word"echoes"
count1
4
word"vibrated"
count1
5
word"rhythmic"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"mosaic"
count1
9
word"charged"
count1
highlights
0"shattered"
1"familiar"
2"depths"
3"echoes"
4"vibrated"
5"rhythmic"
6"echoed"
7"weight"
8"mosaic"
9"charged"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences151
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences151
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences166
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen21
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1354
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
59.47% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions53
wordCount1215
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.81
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
Harlow22
Raven1
Nest1
Soho2
Herrera1
Saint1
Christopher1
Tomás15
Greek1
Street1
Fitzrovia1
Camden1
London2
Underground1
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Raven"
2"Nest"
3"Herrera"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Tomás"
places
0"Soho"
1"Greek"
2"Street"
3"Fitzrovia"
4"Camden"
5"London"
globalScore0.595
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences112
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like grinding millstones"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1354
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences166
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs66
mean20.52
std12.43
cv0.606
sampleLengths
042
144
234
34
421
523
612
720
832
918
1037
1121
1232
1321
1414
153
1623
176
182
1921
2028
2125
224
235
2417
2519
2618
2725
2811
2943
3025
3146
3215
3310
3433
3523
3618
3752
388
3918
407
4122
4239
4350
443
458
4619
478
4819
499
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences151
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs222
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences166
ratio0.012
matches
0"Beneath the tangled weeds and concrete rubble sat an old, arched stone entry—an abandoned conduit into the sprawling London Underground."
1"Dried animal parts—claws, wings, and disturbingly human limbs—hung from rusted wire."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1224
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.014705882352941176
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.006535947712418301
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences166
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences166
mean8.16
std3.93
cv0.482
sampleLengths
05
119
26
310
42
59
67
711
817
98
104
1116
126
134
142
158
1611
175
187
1911
2012
2111
229
238
248
255
2611
279
289
295
307
314
324
338
342
357
369
3712
387
3912
404
419
426
439
443
453
464
4710
483
496
60.24% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3795180722891566
totalSentences166
uniqueOpeners63
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences145
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences145
matches
0"She checked the worn leather"
1"He pulled the collar of"
2"Her sharp jaw set."
3"She squared her shoulders, bringing"
4"Her military precision demanded absolute"
5"His warm brown eyes widened"
6"He spun on his heel"
7"Her heavy boots crushed discarded"
8"She kept her eyes locked"
9"He cast a frantic look"
10"His short, curly, dark brown"
11"He pushed a rolling garbage"
12"Her boots hit the concrete,"
13"She closed the distance."
14"They burst out of Soho,"
15"He whipped around."
16"His chest heaved."
17"She kept her hands empty"
18"He rubbed the pale scar"
19"He hurled the top wooden"
ratio0.283
32.41% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount124
totalSentences145
matches
0"Water sheeted off Harlow’s shoulders."
1"The distinctive green neon sign"
2"Harlow watched from a darkened"
3"She checked the worn leather"
4"The heavy oak door swung"
5"Tomás Herrera stepped onto the"
6"He pulled the collar of"
7"The Saint Christopher medallion swung"
8"Harlow stepped from the mouth"
9"Her sharp jaw set."
10"She squared her shoulders, bringing"
11"Her military precision demanded absolute"
12"His warm brown eyes widened"
13"He spun on his heel"
14"Harlow broke into a sprint."
15"Her heavy boots crushed discarded"
16"Harlow shoved past a stumbling"
17"She kept her eyes locked"
18"Tomás hooked a sharp left"
19"He cast a frantic look"
ratio0.855
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences145
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He clutched his side, dragging his left leg, shoes slipping on wet cobblestones."
1"Wide shoulders, unnatural posture, hands that hung remarkably far down their thighs."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.1812%