Run: 2026-02-19-01KHVPM08BYBBPFFZTK0677KRF

Run Details

Duration:
1m 8s
Cost:
$0.076128
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The first deadbolt stuck, demanding a hard twist of the wrist. The second yielded with a metallic clank. The third slid back smoothly. Rory pulled the heavy door inward, expecting to see her downstairs neighbor complaining about water pipes, or perhaps one of Yu-Fei Cheung's delivery boys dropping off a misdirected shift schedule from the Golden Empress. Instead, Lucien Moreau stood in the narrow, dimly lit hallway. Rory froze, her hand tightening on the edge of the door. The heavy scent of roasted cumin, garlic, and coriander drifting up from the Brick Lane curry house below seemed to evaporate instantly, replaced by the crisp, ozone-and-cedar scent that always clung to him. He looked exactly the same as the night he had walked out of Silas's bar without a backward glance. He wore a tailored charcoal suit that fit his lean frame perfectly, an impeccable contrast to the grimy, peeling wallpaper of the East London corridor. His platinum blond hair was slicked back, unruffled by the wind outside. Both hands rested on the carved ivory handle of his cane, the one Rory knew concealed a blade thin and sharp enough to sever bone. And then there were his eyes. One striking amber, the other pitch black. They fixed on her, calculating and utterly unreadable. Rory maintained her grip on the door. Her bright blue eyes narrowed. She had spent the last three months convincing herself she was over the sting of his abrupt departure. She had kept her head down, worked her delivery shifts, and spent her evenings house-sitting for Eva among piles of occult research. She had survived an abusive ex like Evan; she could certainly survive a French half-demon who treated people like chess pieces. He did not say anything at first. He simply looked at her, his gaze lingering on her straight, shoulder-length black hair before dropping to the faded Golden Empress t-shirt she wore. "You are going to let me in, Aurora," he said. Not a question. A statement delivered in that quiet, silken baritone, the French lilt smoothing the harsh edges of the English syllables. "I don't remember inviting you," she said, keeping her voice cool and steady. Lucien shifted his weight, the rubber tip of his cane squeaking faintly against the floorboards. "You are house-sitting for Eva. I know she is in Prague. I also know you have nowhere else to go right now, and that keeping me standing in a hallway where anyone could see us is a very poor tactical decision." Rory felt the familiar flare of irritation that only Lucien could ignite. He was always three steps ahead, always in control. She wanted to slam the door in his perfect face. But she saw the tight lines around his mouth, the faint shadow of exhaustion beneath his mismatched eyes. He was an underworld fixer, an information broker who prided himself on never being caught off guard. For him to show up here, unannounced, meant something had gone drastically wrong. With a sharp exhale, she stepped back and pulled the door wide. Lucien stepped inside, bringing the crisp chill of the London night with him. Rory shut the door, throwing the three deadbolts back into place with swift, practiced motions. When she turned around, Lucien was already observing the cramped one-bedroom flat. Every available surface in Eva's living room was buried under precarious stacks of books, yellowed scrolls, and frantic research notes. The only clear space was a small patch of the faded Persian rug where Ptolemy, Eva's massive tabby cat, sat grooming a paw. Ptolemy paused, yellow eyes locking onto Lucien. The cat did not hiss, but he did not approach either, sensing the predatory stillness beneath the charcoal suit. "It is cramped," Lucien noted, turning his attention back to Rory. "It is a flat, not a palace," she retorted. "And I like the crampedness. It keeps uninvited guests from overstaying their welcome. State your business, Lucien. I have an early delivery shift tomorrow." He leaned slightly on his cane. "You are still angry." "Angry?" Rory let out a short, hollow laugh. "I am not angry. I just prefer people who do not vanish into the night the moment a situation requires actual human emotion." "I am only half human, Aurora." "Do not use semantics to dodge the issue. You used me to get the cipher from the Avaros cult, and when the job was done, you disappeared. You left me waiting at Silas's at the absolute worst possible time." For a fraction of a second, the cool facade cracked. The amber eye flared, bright and intense, while the black eye seemed to swallow the dim light of the overhead bulb. He closed the distance between them in two long, silent strides. Rory held her ground, refusing to step back, even as she had to tilt her head up to meet his gaze. He was five foot eleven, towering over her five foot six, but she squared her shoulders. "I left because of what happened at the docks," he said, his voice dropping to a harsh whisper. "I left because the cult knew who you were. If I had stayed, if I had continued to operate with you by my side, they would have butchered you. I severed the tie to make you uninteresting to them." Rory swallowed hard, the proximity muddling her thoughts. She could see the faint pulse beating at the base of his throat. She could feel the heat radiating through the fine wool of his suit. "And you couldn't have told me that?" she demanded, though her voice lacked its previous venom. "You couldn't have trusted me to handle it? I am twenty-five years old, Lucien. I am not a child, and I am not fragile." Lucien reached out. The movement was slow, deliberate, allowing her every opportunity to pull away. When she did not move, his gloved fingers brushed the inside of her left wrist. He traced the small, crescent-shaped scar there, the faint white mark from a childhood accident that seemed so mundane compared to the violent supernatural underworld she had been dragged into. "I know you are not fragile," he murmured, his thumb resting gently against her pulse point. "You are the most fiercely intelligent woman I have ever met. You think faster and more creatively than any demon I know. But intelligence does not stop a blade in the dark." Rory looked down at his hand on her wrist, then back up to his face. The touch was burning her skin, a stark reminder of the nights they had spent pouring over maps and texts, the accidental brushes of shoulders, the lingering glances that had bordered on something profoundly dangerous. She had fled Cardiff to take control of her own life. She hated being managed. She hated being protected without her consent. "Take your hand off me," she said, but it came out as a breathy command, devoid of force. Lucien did not remove his hand. Instead, his grip shifted, his fingers wrapping lightly around her wrist, grounding her. "I need your help, Rory." The use of her nickname, the one her friends used, the one he had stubbornly avoided in favor of her full name, sent a jolt straight to her chest. "With what?" she asked, refusing to look away from his mismatched eyes. "Someone has broken into my vault," he said, his voice tightening. "They took a ledger. A ledger that lists every favor, every debt, and every weakness of London's supernatural elite. If it is made public, there will be a war that will spill over into the human streets. I need someone who can think outside the rigid boxes of the demonic syndicates. I need someone who can track the thief through the human and supernatural channels simultaneously." "You mean you need a delivery girl who knows every back alley in London and can solve puzzles faster than your bruisers." "I mean I need you," he corrected quietly. "Only you." Rory pulled her wrist from his grasp, turning her back to him to walk toward the small kitchenette. She needed distance. She picked up a stack of Eva's translation scrolls and straightened the edges, staring blindly at the ancient Aramaic script. Her heart was hammering against her ribs. Stepping back into Lucien's world was a guarantee of danger, sleepless nights, and the devastating risk of letting him back into her head. "What makes you think I will help you?" she asked to the room at large. "Because you hate unresolved mysteries," Lucien said, his footsteps quiet behind her. "And because despite your very justified anger, you know we work perfectly together." He was standing right behind her now. She could feel him there, an immovable worldly force in the center of the chaotic flat. "And what happens when the job is done this time, Luc?" she asked, the old nickname slipping out before she could stop it. "Do you slip back into the shadows? Do you decide I am in danger again and cut me out of my own life?" He reached past her, placing his bare hand on the counter next to hers. He had removed his glove. His skin was pale, his long fingers elegant and strong. "I made a mistake, Aurora. I thought distance would bring me peace of mind. It did not. It only brought me a very profound, very frustrating distraction." Rory turned around. She was trapped between the counter and his body. The air in the flat felt infinitely thicker, the smell of old paper and dust completely overwhelmed by his presence. His amber eye caught the light, golden and burning, entirely focused on her. She chewed on her lower lip, a habit she had never quite been able to break. She saw the tension in his jaw, the raw vulnerability he was fighting to keep buried beneath his tailored suit and collected demeanor. "If we do this," she said, her voice dropping to match his quiet intensity, "we do it my way. No secrets. No vanishing acts. If we hit a wall, we break it down together. You do not get to dictate my safety." Lucien looked at her, his expression softening just enough to reveal the man beneath the fixer's mask. He slowly raised his hand, his knuckles lightly grazing her cheekbone. She shivered despite herself. "You have my word," he said softly. Rory held his gaze for a long moment, searching the black and the amber for any hint of deception. She found none. Only a quiet, desperate honesty that terrified her more than the prospect of any underworld war. "Fine," Rory breathed, her cool-headedness finally fracturing just enough to let the thrill of the danger, and him, seep back in. "Tell me everything you know."
created_at"2026-02-19T19:39:21.57Z" 2/19/2026, 7:39:21 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
88.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he corrected quietly [quietly]"
1"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.514
leniency1
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.111
61.24% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1806
totalAiIsmAdverbs14
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count2
1
adverb"utterly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count4
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
4
adverb"gently"
count1
5
adverb"lightly"
count2
6
adverb"completely"
count1
7
adverb"slowly"
count1
8
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"utterly"
2"very"
3"slightly"
4"gently"
5"lightly"
6"completely"
7"slowly"
8"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.86% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1806
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"calculating"
count1
1
word"unreadable"
count1
2
word"lilt"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"perfect"
count1
6
word"chill"
count1
7
word"facade"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count2
10
word"could feel"
count2
11
word"traced"
count1
12
word"stark"
count1
13
word"reminder"
count1
14
word"footsteps"
count1
15
word"chaotic"
count1
16
word"profound"
count1
17
word"tension"
count1
18
word"intensity"
count1
highlights
0"calculating"
1"unreadable"
2"lilt"
3"weight"
4"familiar"
5"perfect"
6"chill"
7"facade"
8"whisper"
9"pulse"
10"could feel"
11"traced"
12"stark"
13"reminder"
14"footsteps"
15"chaotic"
16"profound"
17"tension"
18"intensity"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences99
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen66
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1795
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions53
wordCount1275
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity1.18
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Golden2
Empress2
Lucien12
Moreau1
Brick1
Lane1
Silas1
East1
London2
Rory15
Eva4
Evan1
French2
English1
Persian1
Ptolemy2
Cardiff1
Aramaic1
persons
0"Yu-Fei"
1"Cheung"
2"Lucien"
3"Moreau"
4"Silas"
5"Rory"
6"Eva"
7"Evan"
8"Ptolemy"
places
0"Golden"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
3"East"
4"London"
5"Cardiff"
globalScore0.912
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed so mundane compared to the violent supernatural underworld she had been dragged into"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.557
wordCount1795
matches
0"not hiss, but he did not approach either, sensing the predatory stillness"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean37.4
std21.41
cv0.573
sampleLengths
057
110
263
362
421
573
631
732
813
956
1079
1112
1240
1369
1411
1533
1610
1731
186
1939
2079
2157
2234
2340
2460
2548
2672
2718
2824
2929
3012
3177
3222
3310
3471
3515
3625
3723
3846
3929
4027
4145
4239
4342
4432
457
4638
4726
87.54% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences99
matches
0"was slicked"
1"being caught"
2"was buried"
3"been dragged"
4"was trapped"
74.21% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs212
matches
0"was burning"
1"was hammering"
2"was standing"
3"was fighting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences116
ratio0.009
matches
0"She had survived an abusive ex like Evan; she could certainly survive a French half-demon who treated people like chess pieces."
92.61% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1284
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount60
adverbRatio0.04672897196261682
lyAdverbCount28
lyAdverbRatio0.021806853582554516
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean15.47
std10.01
cv0.647
sampleLengths
011
17
25
334
410
511
633
719
825
912
1025
116
127
138
147
155
1618
1722
1821
197
2024
2110
223
2319
2413
2515
2641
2712
289
2910
3018
3117
3213
3312
3413
3515
3612
3720
3823
397
4019
4111
429
4324
446
454
468
4723
486
4939
37.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.29310344827586204
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners34
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences97
matches
0"Instead, Lucien Moreau stood in"
1"Instead, his grip shifted, his"
2"Only a quiet, desperate honesty"
ratio0.031
17.94% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences97
matches
0"He looked exactly the same"
1"He wore a tailored charcoal"
2"His platinum blond hair was"
3"They fixed on her, calculating"
4"Her bright blue eyes narrowed."
5"She had spent the last"
6"She had kept her head"
7"She had survived an abusive"
8"He did not say anything"
9"He simply looked at her,"
10"she said, keeping her voice"
11"He was always three steps"
12"She wanted to slam the"
13"He was an underworld fixer,"
14"He leaned slightly on his"
15"He closed the distance between"
16"He was five foot eleven,"
17"he said, his voice dropping"
18"She could see the faint"
19"She could feel the heat"
ratio0.505
27.01% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences97
matches
0"The first deadbolt stuck, demanding"
1"The second yielded with a"
2"The third slid back smoothly."
3"Rory pulled the heavy door"
4"Rory froze, her hand tightening"
5"The heavy scent of roasted"
6"He looked exactly the same"
7"He wore a tailored charcoal"
8"His platinum blond hair was"
9"Both hands rested on the"
10"They fixed on her, calculating"
11"Rory maintained her grip on"
12"Her bright blue eyes narrowed."
13"She had spent the last"
14"She had kept her head"
15"She had survived an abusive"
16"He did not say anything"
17"He simply looked at her,"
18"A statement delivered in that"
19"she said, keeping her voice"
ratio0.866
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
ratio0
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"He wore a tailored charcoal suit that fit his lean frame perfectly, an impeccable contrast to the grimy, peeling wallpaper of the East London corridor."
1"She had survived an abusive ex like Evan; she could certainly survive a French half-demon who treated people like chess pieces."
2"He simply looked at her, his gaze lingering on her straight, shoulder-length black hair before dropping to the faded Golden Empress t-shirt she wore."
3"He was an underworld fixer, an information broker who prided himself on never being caught off guard."
4"He traced the small, crescent-shaped scar there, the faint white mark from a childhood accident that seemed so mundane compared to the violent supernatural unde…"
5"The touch was burning her skin, a stark reminder of the nights they had spent pouring over maps and texts, the accidental brushes of shoulders, the lingering gl…"
6"Only a quiet, desperate honesty that terrified her more than the prospect of any underworld war."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"he said, his voice dropping to a harsh whisper"
1"she demanded, though her voice lacked its previous venom"
2"he murmured, his thumb resting gently against her pulse point"
3"she asked, refusing to look away from his mismatched eyes"
4"he said, his voice tightening"
5"Lucien said, his footsteps quiet behind her"
6"she asked, the old nickname slipping out before she could stop it"
7"she said, her voice dropping to match his quiet intensity,"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Lucien noted (note)"
1"she retorted (retort)"
2"she demanded (demand)"
3"he murmured (murmur)"
4"he corrected quietly (correct)"
5"Rory breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.486
leniency0.971
rawRatio0.353
effectiveRatio0.343
75.5091%