Run: 2026-02-19-01KHVPM2HM637AJ65S4EJ272ZY

Run Details

Duration:
1m 38s
Cost:
$0.116662
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Harlow Quinn descended the cracked Victorian tile staircase into the bowels of the abandoned Camden Tube station. The damp air smelled of copper, mildew, and scorched sulfur. Dust motes danced in the harsh glare of the police forensic lights. Below her, the platform defied typical municipal decay. Scavenged stalls constructed from rusted scaffolding and wrought-iron grates formed a labyrinth along the defunct tracks. Baskets of crushed quartz and dried hemlock spilled across the concrete. Shattered glass vials leaked a luminescent blue liquid that hissed against the stone floor. The locals called it the Veil Market. Uniforms milled about the perimeter of the yellow tape. Harlow ignored their chatter. She crossed the platform with military precision, keeping her spine straight and her shoulders squared back. Her sharp jaw set as she surveyed the chaos. The Metropolitan Police treated the scene as a standard cartel-style execution. Harlow saw the contradictions at once. A body lay with limbs splayed beside a collapsed iron stall. Eva Kowalski crouched next to the corpse. A worn leather satchel hung heavy off her shoulder, the flap bulging with thick reference tomes. She pushed her round glasses up her pale, freckled nose. She tucked a rogue strand of curly red hair behind her left ear. "The uniforms want to bag the debris and haul the corpse to the morgue." Eva gestured to the scattered glass and torn canvas. "They label it a turf war. A territorial dispute over stolen antiquities." "The uniforms lack imagination." Harlow studied the victim. A Caucasian male in his fifties. A savage laceration severed his throat. Dark blood pooled in the deep grout lines of the platform tiles. "It is a ritualistic execution." Eva adjusted the thick strap of her satchel. "Look at the placement of the hands. Palms up. Fingers curled. The killer arranged him to mimic the Hanged Man tarot. An offering to open a spatial rift." Harlow knelt. Gritty dust coated the knees of her slacks. She examined the victim's heavy work boots. Deep scuff marks marred the leather toes. Gray ash covered the rubber soles. She shifted her gaze along the legs to the victim's chest. The forearms bare no defensive wounds. A single clean slice cut across the carotid artery. "You see the chalk lines." Eva pointed a gloved finger at a faint white circle drawn around the lifeless body. "Crushed bone. A traditional containment ring. The killer trapped him here. They performed the bloodletting to open a doorway." Harlow swept her eyes across the perimeter. A small brass casing rested in the victim’s outstretched left hand. A dense patina of verdigris coated the metal edges. "What is that object." Eva leaned closer. She inspected the metal without touching the surface. "A Veil Compass. Crafted by a Shade artisan. The face bears protective sigils." She traced the air above the artifact, highlighting the geometric etchings in the brass. "The needle seeks supernatural rifts. It points toward the nearest portal. Right now, it points at the victim's chest. The killer turned the man into a conduit." Harlow stared at the small brass compass. She checked the delicate iron needle. She checked her own worn leather watch on her left wrist. The watch displayed time. The blood displayed a timeline. Magic and rituals did not erase foundational physics. "Wrong." Harlow stood. She brushed the grit from her knees. "Wrong." Eva frowned. She tucked another red curl behind her ear. "The containment circle presents a textbook archaic invocation. The British Museum restricted archives contain identical crime scene sketches from the eighteenth century." "The archives tell you what a ritual looks like. They do not tell you how a man dies." Harlow stepped over the white dust line. She pointed to the dark blood spatter coating the rusted corrugated iron stall behind the victim. "Cast-off pattern. The killer swung the blade from left to right. The blood hit the metal wall at a sharp angle. Look at the arterial spurt on the metal ridges." Eva squinted at the rusted metal stall. "The pattern aligns with a severed artery." "It aligns with a slashing from behind." Harlow paced the short length of the stall. "The arc of the cast-off peaks at five feet nine inches. The killer is my height. The victim stood facing this wall. The killer approached from the rear. Pulled the head back. Drew the blade across the neck. The victim collapsed forward." Harlow pointed her flashlight beam at the floor beneath the victim's broad shoulders. "Notice the wide smear in the dust. The killer dragged the body backward. Flipped him over. Arranged the arms and legs. Placed the compass in his hand to complete the picture." Eva stared at the corpse. Her green eyes widened behind her thick lenses. "They staged the ritual." "They manufactured a distraction." Harlow stepped toward the entry corridor. She spotted a small object resting near the rusted turnstiles. A carved fragment of yellowed ivory. "You need a bone token to enter the Veil Market. The killer brought one, or the victim possessed one. But the victim’s pockets hang inside out." "Robbery." "A cover." Harlow turned her attention back to the compass. "You stated the needle points toward the nearest supernatural rift." "It detects and aligns with active spatial anomalies." "Look at the needle." Eva leaned over the compass. The thin iron pointer trembled. It ignored the corpse's chest. It swung hard to the left, aiming straight at a solid brick retaining wall fifty yards down the dark tunnel. "You claimed it pointed at his chest." Harlow kept her voice flat, devoid of accusation. She gathered the data. "It did." Eva pulled a heavy leather-bound tome from her satchel. She flipped the thick parchment pages. "Ten minutes ago, the needle locked onto the victim. The magnetic pull of a rift remains absolute until the rift closes." "Unless the rift relocates." Harlow tracked the invisible line from the compass needle to the brick wall. "Or unless someone carrying the anchor leaves the area." "The Veil Market relocates every full moon." Eva stared at the distant brick wall. "But the shift requires a massive catalyst. It takes hours to initiate. It does not occur on a random Tuesday afternoon. Someone triggered a localized breach." Harlow ran a hand over her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair. Her missing partner, DS Morris, chased a suspected smuggler into an alley three years ago. The alley vanished. Morris vanished. The official report cited an unspecified gas explosion. Harlow recognized the smell of scorched sulfur in the tunnel. The same scent coated the back of her throat and stung her eyes. "The killer did not perform a ritual to open a doorway." Harlow walked toward the solid brick wall. The compass needle tracked her movement, remaining locked on the masonry. "The killer murdered this man to steal whatever he carried. They arranged the body. They drew the bone dust circle. They placed the compass in his hand." "To trick us." Eva followed close behind. She clutched her leather satchel to her chest. "They wanted occult investigators to waste hours analyzing the containment circle. They wanted the uniforms to blame gang violence. It provides a diversion." "A diversion to mask their escape." Harlow reached the brick wall. Her boots crunched over shards of broken glass. "They used the real portal to leave the underground." Harlow inspected the mortar between the heavy bricks. The grit felt fresh. Warm to the touch. The scent of ozone intensified against the barrier, burning her nostrils. "They exploited the chaos." Harlow traced the rough edge of a brick. "They left the compass as part of the tableau. They forgot its primary function. They assumed the ritualistic posing would command our complete attention. A fatal tactical error." "The needle followed their exit path." Eva stood beside the detective. She adjusted her round glasses. "They passed through the wall. The compass tracks the residual energy of the thief." Harlow knelt at the base of the wall. She scanned the concrete footing. She spotted a single drop of fresh crimson blood. Not an arterial spurt. A passive drop. Falling straight down. "The killer suffered a cut during the execution." Harlow gestured to the red droplet. "They bled on their way out." Harlow placed a numbered evidence marker next to the blood drop. She pulled a sterile swab from her pocket. "They think they are untouchable." Harlow collected the sample. "This clique uses the Veil and its anomalies to hide their crimes. They employ magic to erase their tracks. But magic does not stop a bleeding wound. Magic does not un-smear the dirt on a crime scene." Eva watched the compass needle hold steady against the bricks. "Can we follow them through the barrier." Harlow pressed her palm against the wall. Solid brick. Unyielding. She turned back to the platform. The uniforms continued to photograph the staged corpse. Flashbulbs illuminated the cavernous space. The chalk lines, the arrangement of limbs, the scattered debris. All of it a lie fabricated to mask a simple, brutal exit. "We do not need to follow them through a wall." Harlow memorized the layout of the bricks and the surrounding tunnel supports. "They created an exit. Exits leave structural stress. They leave witnesses on the other side. The Metropolitan Police store blueprints of every subterranean tunnel in London." "These tunnels evade municipal blueprints." Eva gripped the thick strap of her satchel. "This is the Veil Market. London above does not map London below." "Then we consult different maps." Harlow stood. She sealed the blood swab in a plastic tube. "Pack up the compass. Take photographs of the containment circle. Let the uniforms log the body. We are leaving the underground." "Where do we go." "The British Museum." Harlow set her jaw, her military bearing returning as the mission crystallized. "You possess restricted archives. We hold a compass needle pointing to a specific geographical coordinate. We overlay your ancient maps with modern city grids. The killer exited the portal somewhere on the surface." Eva picked up the brass compass with a pair of evidence tongs. The needle continued to quiver, holding its true bearing toward the anomaly. She dropped the artifact into a clear plastic bag and sealed the rim. "It requires hundreds of cross-references." Eva tucked another lock of hair behind her ear. "The street topography changes over two centuries. A prominent tavern becomes a modern coffee shop. A mass plague pit turns into a parking garage." "We start with the blood." Harlow strode past the uniforms. She left the staged execution behind. "The killer bleeds. The compass points. The map narrows the search zone. The perpetrators believe magic shields them from consequences. They forget basic forensic reality. Every action leaves a physical trace."
created_at"2026-02-19T19:39:23.917Z" 2/19/2026, 7:39:23 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva followed close [close]"
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.435
leniency0.871
rawRatio0.037
effectiveRatio0.032
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1793
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.90% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1793
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"constructed"
count1
1
word"shattered"
count1
2
word"standard"
count1
3
word"traced"
count2
4
word"trembled"
count1
5
word"magnetic"
count1
6
word"scanned"
count1
7
word"crystallized"
count1
highlights
0"constructed"
1"shattered"
2"standard"
3"traced"
4"trembled"
5"magnetic"
6"scanned"
7"crystallized"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences121
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences121
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences155
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1785
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions59
wordCount982
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity3.05
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Quinn1
Victorian1
Camden1
Tube1
Veil1
Market1
Metropolitan1
Police1
Kowalski1
Harlow30
Caucasian1
Eva17
Morris2
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Police"
2"Kowalski"
3"Harlow"
4"Eva"
5"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences90
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1785
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences155
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean34.33
std18.9
cv0.551
sampleLengths
095
155
211
346
435
532
641
756
839
927
104
1165
1241
1310
1433
1571
1614
1757
1813
1931
2017
2152
221
2320
248
254
2635
2719
2838
2926
3040
3161
3256
3338
3428
3527
3640
3730
3832
3920
4019
4146
4217
4351
4448
4525
4637
474
4848
4937
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences121
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs152
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences155
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount987
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"heavy leather-bound tome"
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.008105369807497468
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.00303951367781155
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences155
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences155
mean11.52
std7.71
cv0.67
sampleLengths
017
110
212
38
416
511
614
77
89
94
1016
119
1211
136
1411
157
1616
1710
1813
1923
2012
218
226
236
2412
2513
2628
272
288
297
307
316
3211
336
349
3520
3619
377
3811
399
404
413
428
4327
4427
457
466
4711
484
495
42.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.3032258064516129
totalSentences155
uniqueOpeners47
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences114
matches
0"She crossed the platform with"
1"Her sharp jaw set as"
2"She pushed her round glasses"
3"She tucked a rogue strand"
4"She examined the victim's heavy"
5"She shifted her gaze along"
6"She inspected the metal without"
7"She traced the air above"
8"She checked the delicate iron"
9"She checked her own worn"
10"She brushed the grit from"
11"She tucked another red curl"
12"She pointed to the dark"
13"Her green eyes widened behind"
14"She spotted a small object"
15"It ignored the corpse's chest."
16"It swung hard to the"
17"She gathered the data."
18"She flipped the thick parchment"
19"Her missing partner, DS Morris,"
ratio0.263
8.25% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount103
totalSentences114
matches
0"Harlow Quinn descended the cracked"
1"The damp air smelled of"
2"Dust motes danced in the"
3"Baskets of crushed quartz and"
4"The locals called it the"
5"Uniforms milled about the perimeter"
6"Harlow ignored their chatter."
7"She crossed the platform with"
8"Her sharp jaw set as"
9"The Metropolitan Police treated the"
10"Harlow saw the contradictions at"
11"A body lay with limbs"
12"Eva Kowalski crouched next to"
13"A worn leather satchel hung"
14"She pushed her round glasses"
15"She tucked a rogue strand"
16"Eva gestured to the scattered"
17"Harlow studied the victim"
18"A Caucasian male in his"
19"A savage laceration severed his"
ratio0.904
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Shattered glass vials leaked a luminescent blue liquid that hissed against the stone floor."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Harlow set, her military bearing returning as the mission crystallized"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.9766%