Run: 2026-02-19-01KHVPMVWEMX9SJB6CJB1XR9B7

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Richmond Park vanishes the moment Rory steps between the ancient oak standing stones. The transformation offers no bridge. The heavy grind of night traffic rolling down the A3 cuts off. The crisp chill of a London winter dies, replaced instantly by a suffocating, heavy warmth. The air pressure spikes, popping her eardrums. Rory forces a swallow, blinking against the sudden assault on her senses. The Fae Grove refuses to obey the natural laws of the city she left behind. A bruised, starless twilight filters through an impossible canopy overhead. Wildflowers carpet the forest floor beneath her boots, a chaotic sea of color defying the season. Feverish yellows, aggressive crimsons, and sickly purples thrive in the humid dark. The scent of them coats her throat, a dense mixture of sweet honeysuckle and the rotting, metallic tang of old wet copper. Rory rubs her thumb across the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. The skin marks a childhood accident back in Cardiff. It serves as a physical anchor in a place where reality bends. The Heartstone lies heavy against her collarbone. Through her thick jacket, the thumbnail-sized gem radiates a steady, uncomfortable heat. She pulls the artifact free from her collar, letting the silver chain wrap around her knuckles. A deep crimson light bleeds out of the gem. The glow throbs against her palm. One slow pulse, followed by another. A rhythmic warning. The artifact serves as a compass. The heat signifies close proximity to a Hel portal. That logic drove her here tonight. She parked her scooter, leaving behind her delivery shift for Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress, trading the concrete safety of the restaurant for the unpredictable magic of Isolde’s hidden pocket dimension. The grove acts as a bridge between Earth and the Fae. The pendant reacts to darker thresholds. "Chart the tear. Find the source. Get out." Rory pitches her voice to break the silence. The grove swallows the sound. The words die inches from her mouth, absorbed by the dense atmosphere. She looks down at her wrist. The second hand of her watch stutters backward, catches on the twelve, and stops entirely. Time warps inside the standing stones. Hours spent walking among these ancient oaks shape-shift into mere minutes on the outside. Or worse, a five-minute detour traps the wanderer for days. The unknown variable twists a knot of cold dread deep in her gut. She drops her arm. Rory pushes deeper into the clearing. Her black boots crush a cluster of violet bellflowers. A thick, milky sap bleeds from the snapped stems, slicking the soles of her shoes. The pendant flares hot against her palm. The deep crimson light stretches further, painting the tree trunks the color of fresh blood. She pauses mid-stride. The crunch of broken stems continues. Step. Step. A deliberate pause. Rory freezes, her bright blue eyes darting toward the distant treeline. The noise did not echo from a distance. It rang out ten feet to her left, mimicking her exact weight and stride. She strains her ears. The clearing remains tomb-quiet. The thick canopy overhead refuses to sway. The air hangs completely dead. She commands her rigid muscles to relax. She forces a breath through her nose, demanding her racing heart slow down. She lowers her boot, pressing it into the damp earth. An identical footfall lands heavy behind her right shoulder. Rory pivots, dropping her center of gravity into a defensive half-crouch. She sweeps the crimson beam of the pendant across the gnarled oak trunks. Rough bark. Saturated flowers. The curtain of bruised twilight. Nothing stands among the timber. "I hear you." That is an empty threat. She carries no weapon, clutching only a piece of glowing Dymas rock. Intelligence and quick thinking saved her from her abusive ex Evan, but manipulation and sociopathy obey human rules. The Fae Grove operates outside reason. A patch of darkness shifts at the extreme boundary of her peripheral vision. She snaps her head to the right. The gap between two massive trunks holds only undisturbed shadows. She stares at the void, her lungs burning, refusing to blink. Movement registers on her left. A silhouette slides behind a thick oak trunk. It moves without the rigid constraints of human joints, pouring from one patch of darkness to another like spilled oil. Rory locks her gaze straight ahead. The air pressure drops a second time. A metallic taste floods her gums. The void detaches from the wood. It refuses to step out into the clearing. Instead, the shape bleeds onto the carpet of flowers, pooling and stretching upward into a jagged, towering verticality. Rory stares, her mind stripping gears, rejecting the geometry in front of her. The entity possesses no defined edges. It consumes the ambient red light, manifesting as a literal hole cut out of the fabric of the woods. The Heartstone sears her flesh. Rory gasps, dropping the heavy gem. It bounces against her chest, burning through the thick cotton of her shirt. The intense, blistering heat broadcasts immediate proximity. The portal stands open. Something crossed the threshold. Rory tracks the movement. The absence of light drifts parallel to her path, slipping effortlessly behind another thick trunk. It circles her to take measure of its prey. She eases backward. Her heel catches an exposed, moss-slick root. She throws her arms out, regaining her balance, keeping her line of sight locked onto the trees. Another heavy crunch of boots strikes the earth. To her left. A violent snapping of branches erupts to her right. The mimicry shreds her calm. The sounds replicate the panicked tempo of her own heart, twisting the audio into a dozen overlapping echoes. The unseen watcher traps her inside her own escalating fear. Rory abandons the search pattern and retreats toward the entrance of the grove. She visualizes the pathway in her head. Past the cluster of yellow blooms, around the split trunk, straight through the ring of standing stones. The exit requires immediate speed. She turns. A solid wall of woven bark blocks her path. Rory stumbles backward, her shoulder slamming into a low branch. The landscape rearranged itself behind her back. The boundary markers vanished entirely. A fortified maze of overgrown roots and tangled, thorny brambles seals off every possible exit route. The unnatural wildflowers stretch out in all directions, an unbroken sea of color mocking the darkness. The Heartstone pulses with violent torque, vibrating hard enough to rattle her ribs. The glow flashes frantic and erratic. A low, wet slithering noise breaches the silence. Dragging flesh sliding over damp leaves and broken stems. Rory clenches her jaw. She shifts her weight onto the balls of her feet, preparing to throw herself into the dense brush. She scans the shadows, searching for any break in the solid wall of timber. The slithering noise halts. A breath grazes the shell of her ear. The air carries the distinct stench of stagnant marsh water and old copper. "Rory." The voice belongs to Jennifer Carter. The mimicry catches her mother's specific Welsh lilt flawlessly, but the cadence falls flat. The sound lacks a soul. A recorded audio file played through a rotting throat. Rory rips herself away from the invisible speaker, throwing her back against the nearest oak. The rough bark bites deep through her jacket. She sweeps her gaze across the empty space inches from her nose. "Show yourself." The dark void detaches from the heavy branch directly over her head. It drops without a sound, a chaotic mass of elongated limbs and sharp, impossible angles folding together. The shape eclipses the bruised twilight above. White, lidless eyes ignite within the black cavity, reflecting the frantic, deep crimson pulsing of the pendant trapped against her chest. Rory presses her spine deep into the unyielding wood. The artifact hits a branding-iron temperature, burning a new mark into her skin. The creature twitches. A low, rhythmic thud echoes from within the mass of shadows. The noise captures the exact frantic speed of her own racing heart, amplifying the terrified pulse until it consumes the entire grove.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1352
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
26.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1352
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"chaotic"
count2
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"rhythmic"
count2
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"variable"
count1
7
word"echo"
count1
8
word"weight"
count2
9
word"racing"
count2
10
word"footfall"
count1
11
word"echoes"
count2
12
word"lilt"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"warmth"
2"chaotic"
3"pulse"
4"rhythmic"
5"silence"
6"variable"
7"echo"
8"weight"
9"racing"
10"footfall"
11"echoes"
12"lilt"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences139
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences139
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences143
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1342
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
89.76% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1328
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity1.2
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Park1
Rory16
London1
Fae3
Grove2
Cardiff1
Heartstone3
Hel1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Golden1
Empress1
Isolde1
Earth1
Dymas1
Evan1
Jennifer1
Carter1
Welsh1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Grove"
2"Heartstone"
3"Yu-Fei"
4"Cheung"
5"Empress"
6"Isolde"
7"Evan"
8"Jennifer"
9"Carter"
places
0"Park"
1"London"
2"Fae"
3"Cardiff"
4"Hel"
globalScore0.898
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences108
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1342
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences143
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean29.82
std22.48
cv0.754
sampleLengths
079
160
293
368
48
525
668
730
822
93
106
115
1253
1330
149
1538
163
1741
1813
1928
205
2147
2270
2339
2428
2527
2611
279
2833
2942
3011
3154
3219
3317
3436
354
3621
371
3834
3935
402
4112
4245
4322
4436
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences139
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs205
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences143
ratio0
matches(empty)
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1338
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"exposed, moss-slick root."
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.014200298953662182
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.007473841554559043
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences143
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences143
mean9.38
std5.11
cv0.544
sampleLengths
013
15
212
315
47
512
615
710
816
912
1022
1113
129
1312
147
1512
1616
179
186
196
203
216
229
236
2430
2511
266
278
288
295
3012
316
3215
336
3414
3510
3613
374
386
399
4015
417
4215
433
446
451
461
473
4811
498
34.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats22
diversityRatio0.22377622377622378
totalSentences143
uniqueOpeners32
24.88% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences134
matches
0"Instead, the shape bleeds onto"
ratio0.007
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences134
matches
0"It serves as a physical"
1"She pulls the artifact free"
2"She parked her scooter, leaving"
3"She looks down at her"
4"She drops her arm."
5"Her black boots crush a"
6"She pauses mid-stride."
7"It rang out ten feet"
8"She strains her ears."
9"She commands her rigid muscles"
10"She forces a breath through"
11"She lowers her boot, pressing"
12"She sweeps the crimson beam"
13"She carries no weapon, clutching"
14"She snaps her head to"
15"She stares at the void,"
16"It moves without the rigid"
17"It refuses to step out"
18"It consumes the ambient red"
19"It bounces against her chest,"
ratio0.216
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount125
totalSentences134
matches
0"Richmond Park vanishes the moment"
1"The transformation offers no bridge."
2"The heavy grind of night"
3"The crisp chill of a"
4"The air pressure spikes, popping"
5"Rory forces a swallow, blinking"
6"The Fae Grove refuses to"
7"A bruised, starless twilight filters"
8"Wildflowers carpet the forest floor"
9"The scent of them coats"
10"Rory rubs her thumb across"
11"The skin marks a childhood"
12"It serves as a physical"
13"The Heartstone lies heavy against"
14"She pulls the artifact free"
15"A deep crimson light bleeds"
16"The glow throbs against her"
17"A rhythmic warning."
18"The artifact serves as a"
19"The heat signifies close proximity"
ratio0.933
37.31% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences134
matches
0"To her left."
ratio0.007
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"She parked her scooter, leaving behind her delivery shift for Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress, trading the concrete safety of the restaurant for the unpredictabl…"
1"She forces a breath through her nose, demanding her racing heart slow down."
2"She stares at the void, her lungs burning, refusing to blink."
3"Rory stares, her mind stripping gears, rejecting the geometry in front of her."
4"She throws her arms out, regaining her balance, keeping her line of sight locked onto the trees."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.0078%