Run: 2026-02-19-01KHVPNEQSSEZFQ5KY1HYJX4FY

Run Details

Duration:
1m 25s
Cost:
$0.068930
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The descent into the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden felt like stepping into the belly of a concrete beast. Damp air, heavy with the scent of ozone and ancient dust, clung to Detective Harlow Quinn as she navigated the rusted maintenance ladder. She moved with military precision, her boots finding the metal rungs in the dark with practiced certainty. At the bottom, she clicked on her heavy tactical flashlight, letting the stark white beam sweep across the cavernous space. She paused, checking the worn leather watch strapped to her left wrist. It was just past three in the morning. At forty-one, with eighteen years of decorated service in the Metropolitan Police, Quinn had seen her fair share of subterranean nightmares, but this scene was different. This place felt entirely wrong. Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair brushed against the collar of her trench coat as she turned her head, surveying the sprawling platform. This was no ordinary disused transit hub. The wide expanse of cracked subway tiles had been transformed into a bizarre, labyrinthine bazaar. Smashed canvas stalls were scattered in a haphazard ring. Wooden crates lay splintered, spilling strange powders that smelled sharply of sulfur and crushed lavender. Constable Miller stood near a tangle of yellow police tape at the center of the platform. He looked entirely out of his depth. "Squatter dispute, Detective," Miller called out, his voice echoing too loudly against the curved ceramic walls. "Looks like they set up some kind of underground flea market. A turf war broke out. We found the victim right over there. Multiple lacerations. The killers made a mess turning the place over, then dragged the body to the edge of the pit and tossed the weapon down the shaft." Quinn approached the center of the platform. Her sharp jaw tightened as she swept her flashlight over the debris. She did not say a word to Miller. Instead, her dark brown eyes tracked the physical evidence on the floor. "You are entirely missing the architecture of the violence, Miller," Quinn finally said, her tone flat and uncompromising. "Pardon, ma'am?" Quinn did not bother to repeat herself. She was already crouching beside a shattered glass display case. The evidence did not point to a frantic, disorganized squatter brawl. The damage was strangely localized. The stalls on the periphery were untouched, their wares carefully laid out, while the center of the platform looked as though a pressurized explosion had occurred. Yet, there were no blast marks, no soot, no smell of accelerants. Footsteps echoed softly from the darkness behind her. Quinn did not need to turn around to know who it was. She recognized the hesitant, uneven cadence. "It is not a flea market, Detective." The voice was quiet but carried a distinct weight of authority. Eva Kowalski stepped into the glow of the halogen work lights the forensics team had set up. At twenty-six, Eva looked more like a lost university student than an occult researcher. She stood at a modest five foot four, a heavy, worn leather satchel full of books slung across her shoulder, weighing her down. She reached up with a pale hand, tucking a stray lock of curly red hair behind her left ear. It was a nervous habit Quinn had noted the first time they met. Behind round glasses, Eva's green eyes scanned the wreckage with a mixture of awe and absolute terror. The harsh construction lights washed out her freckled complexion. Quinn stood up to face her. She had pulled Eva away from her desk at the British Museum's restricted archives an hour ago, needing someone who understood the bizarre artifacts the initial patrol officers had reported. "Tell me what I am looking at, Eva," Quinn demanded. Eva swallowed hard. Her grip tightened on the thick leather strap of her satchel. "You are standing in the Veil Market. Or, at least, what is left of it. It is an underground supernatural black market. They sell enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, information. They operate out of the sight of ordinary London." Miller let out a brief, condescending scoff. "Right. Magic potions. Let us just log the bloody broken glass and find the gang that did this." "It is not a gang," Eva insisted, stepping closer to Quinn and ignoring the patrolman. She pointed toward a rusted iron turnstile near the far end of the station. "You cannot even get down here without a bone token. The market shifts locations every full moon to avoid detection. They only set up in Camden three days ago." Quinn looked at the turnstile, then back to the ground. She relied on logic, on the absolute indisputable truth of physical evidence. Yet, she could not ignore the hollow ache in her chest. Three years ago, she had lost her partner, Detective Sergeant Morris, during a case that defied all rational explanation. Morris had been found in a sealed room, surrounded by symbols burned into the floor, an impossible victim of an unseen force. Ever since then, Quinn had been chasing shadows, specifically a tight-knit clique of individuals she suspected were operating outside the laws of natural science. Eva's childhood friend was part of that clique, which was the only reason Quinn tolerated the young historian's presence. "If it is a hidden market, Eva, then someone found it," Quinn said, her voice dropping to a low, commanding register. She turned her attention back to the crime scene. "And they did not come here to steal. Whatever happened here was an assassination dressed up as a robbery." "How can you be sure?" Eva asked, leaning forward, her green eyes wide behind her lenses. Quinn pointed her flashlight at the floor. "Miller says the victim was dragged toward the tracks. Look at the dust on the floor. Look at the streaks." Eva crouched beside Quinn, adjusting her glasses. "When a body is dragged," Quinn explained, pointing a gloved finger at the undisturbed patches of dirt, "the debris builds up in front of the object being moved, creating a wedge. The dust trail left behind is swept clean by the friction of the clothing. But look here. The thickest accumulation of dust and broken glass is behind the drag marks, not in front. The dirt was not pushed. It was pulled." Eva looked at Quinn, confusion knitting her brow. "I do not understand." "The victim was not dragged away from the center of the stall," Quinn said, her mind working furiously, piecing together the impossible geometry of the attack. "He was pulled backward. Sucked violently toward the ticket booth. And look at the blood spatter." Quinn moved her light over the tiled wall. The droplets were perfectly circular. "Gravity dictates that if a bleeding person is moving horizontally, the blood drops will have tails pointing in the direction of travel," Quinn droned, falling back into the comfort of absolute forensic science. "These drops are perfectly round. They fell straight down. But they are scattered over a distance of fifteen feet. The victim was bleeding, but he was not walking. He was suspended in the air. Lifted up, carried backward, and slammed against that wall." Miller shifted uncomfortably in the background. "A man cannot just float, Detective." "I am perfectly aware of the laws of physics, Constable," Quinn said sharply. She walked toward the tiled wall where the largest concentration of blood pooled. The tiles were cracked in a radial pattern, like a spiderweb emanating from a central point of devastating impact. But there was no weapon. No killer. The trail of footprints in the thick subterranean dust belonged to only one person. Someone had approached the wall, but there were no prints leading away. The assailant had simply vanished. Quinn knelt near the point of impact. Beneath a heap of scorched canvas, a glint of dull metal caught her eye. She used a pen from her breast pocket to carefully push the fabric aside. Lying in the dust was a small brass compass. The casing was heavily tarnished, bearing a thick a patina of verdigris that spoke to decades, perhaps centuries, of age. "Eva," Quinn called out. Eva hurried over, her heavy satchel thumping against her hip. She gasped when she saw the object. She dropped to her knees, tucking her unruly red hair behind her ear once more, her face inches from the device. "Do not touch it," Quinn warned. "I will not," Eva breathed. "It is a Veil compass. The casing is solid brass, but look at the face markings. Those are protective sigils etched into the glass. My ancient history texts mention these, but I have never seen one intact. They are crafted by Shade artisans." "What does it do?" Quinn asked, watching the needle. Typically, a compass needle would seek magnetic North. This needle was erratic. It spun wildly for a moment before locking firmly in one direction. It was pointing directly at the solid, unbroken brick boundary wall of the abandoned Tube tunnel. "It does not point to true North," Eva whispered, her voice trembling slightly. "It points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal. A tear in the veil between realms." Quinn stared at the needle. She slowly moved the compass to the left, then to the right. The needle tracked perfectly, remaining rigidly fixed on the blank brick wall. It was a tool. An impossible, illogical tool, but a tool nonetheless. And Quinn knew how to interpret the data a tool provided. She stood up, her military bearing returning as the pieces of the puzzle clicked together in her mind. "The killer did not run down the tunnel, Miller," Quinn called out to the constable, who was still hovering near the tape. "He did not drag the body. And he did not retreat the way he came." Quinn turned to Eva, her brown eyes hard and calculating. The mystery of her partner's death flared in her memory. The impossible locked room. The vanishing perpetrators. "Your supernatural market was raided by someone who did not need a bone token to walk through the front door," Quinn said to Eva. She pointed her flashlight directly at the brick wall. "The killer brought this compass to find a weak point in the station's boundaries. He suspended the victim, killed him, and then stepped right through solid brick, retreating into whatever rift this needle is pointing at." Eva stared at the brick wall, then back at Quinn. "You actually believe me? You believe it is a portal?" Quinn adjusted the leather watch on her wrist, her sharp jaw setting in grim determination. "I believe the physical evidence before me. The footprints stop. The blood spatter defies conventional ballistics. The dirt indicates a gravitational anomaly. The evidence tells me the impossible happened here tonight. And if the impossible is happening, it means the clique you are constantly defending is somehow tied to this." Quinn picked up an evidence bag, dropping the verdigris covered compass inside. It clinked softly. "We are done here, Miller. Seal the station," Quinn ordered, her voice echoing down the dark tunnel. She looked back at Eva. "Come along, Kowalski. You are going to tell me exactly how a Shade artisan crafts one of these tools, and then we are going to find out who opened a door in my city."
created_at"2026-02-19T19:40:09.171Z" 2/19/2026, 7:40:09 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
91.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Quinn finally said [finally]"
1"Quinn said sharply [sharply]"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.486
leniency0.973
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.108
68.15% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1884
totalAiIsmAdverbs12
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count2
1
adverb"carefully"
count2
2
adverb"softly"
count2
3
adverb"perfectly"
count4
4
adverb"slightly"
count1
5
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"carefully"
2"softly"
3"perfectly"
4"slightly"
5"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
62.85% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1884
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"navigated"
count1
1
word"stark"
count1
2
word"echoing"
count2
3
word"shattered"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"glint"
count1
9
word"etched"
count1
10
word"magnetic"
count1
11
word"firmly"
count1
12
word"calculating"
count1
highlights
0"navigated"
1"stark"
2"echoing"
3"shattered"
4"footsteps"
5"echoed"
6"weight"
7"scanned"
8"glint"
9"etched"
10"magnetic"
11"firmly"
12"calculating"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences110
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences128
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen72
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1879
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions73
wordCount1219
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity2.87
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube2
Camden1
Detective2
Harlow1
Quinn35
Metropolitan1
Police1
Miller5
Eva17
Kowalski1
British1
Museum1
Sergeant1
Morris2
Typically1
North1
persons
0"Camden"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Miller"
4"Eva"
5"Kowalski"
6"Museum"
7"Sergeant"
8"Morris"
places
0"Detective"
1"Metropolitan"
2"British"
globalScore0.064
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences89
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like stepping into the belly of a"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1879
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences128
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean39.98
std27.03
cv0.676
sampleLengths
079
151
268
323
467
539
618
72
871
926
1018
11112
1236
1310
1453
1525
1658
17117
1849
1916
2027
217
2272
2312
2442
2513
2676
2712
2813
2970
3035
3129
324
3338
346
3548
3649
3729
3852
3918
4037
4127
4269
4320
4465
4515
4656
89.31% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences110
matches
0"been transformed"
1"were scattered"
2"were untouched"
3"been found"
4"were cracked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs198
matches
0"were operating"
1"was pointing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences128
ratio0
matches(empty)
91.28% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1224
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount54
adverbRatio0.04411764705882353
lyAdverbCount32
lyAdverbRatio0.026143790849673203
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences128
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences128
mean14.68
std10.7
cv0.729
sampleLengths
019
123
217
320
412
58
626
75
822
97
1015
119
1215
1316
147
1516
1651
177
1812
198
2012
2118
222
237
2410
2511
265
2726
2812
298
3012
316
3218
3317
3414
3523
3619
3713
3817
399
406
4130
4210
433
4411
4539
467
4718
4815
4914
53.39% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3671875
totalSentences128
uniqueOpeners47
94.34% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences106
matches
0"Instead, her dark brown eyes"
1"Ever since then, Quinn had"
2"Typically, a compass needle would"
ratio0.028
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences106
matches
0"She moved with military precision,"
1"She paused, checking the worn"
2"It was just past three"
3"Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair"
4"He looked entirely out of"
5"Her sharp jaw tightened as"
6"She did not say a"
7"She was already crouching beside"
8"She recognized the hesitant, uneven"
9"She stood at a modest"
10"She reached up with a"
11"It was a nervous habit"
12"She had pulled Eva away"
13"Her grip tightened on the"
14"She pointed toward a rusted"
15"She relied on logic, on"
16"She turned her attention back"
17"She walked toward the tiled"
18"She used a pen from"
19"She gasped when she saw"
ratio0.274
40.19% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount89
totalSentences106
matches
0"The descent into the abandoned"
1"She moved with military precision,"
2"She paused, checking the worn"
3"It was just past three"
4"This place felt entirely wrong."
5"Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair"
6"This was no ordinary disused"
7"The wide expanse of cracked"
8"Constable Miller stood near a"
9"He looked entirely out of"
10"Miller called out, his voice"
11"Quinn approached the center of"
12"Her sharp jaw tightened as"
13"She did not say a"
14"Quinn finally said, her tone"
15"Quinn did not bother to"
16"She was already crouching beside"
17"The evidence did not point"
18"The damage was strangely localized."
19"The stalls on the periphery"
ratio0.84
94.34% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences106
matches
0"Yet, there were no blast"
1"Yet, she could not ignore"
ratio0.019
61.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Wooden crates lay splintered, spilling strange powders that smelled sharply of sulfur and crushed lavender."
1"The stalls on the periphery were untouched, their wares carefully laid out, while the center of the platform looked as though a pressurized explosion had occurr…"
2"She had pulled Eva away from her desk at the British Museum's restricted archives an hour ago, needing someone who understood the bizarre artifacts the initial …"
3"Three years ago, she had lost her partner, Detective Sergeant Morris, during a case that defied all rational explanation."
4"Eva's childhood friend was part of that clique, which was the only reason Quinn tolerated the young historian's presence."
5"The casing was heavily tarnished, bearing a thick a patina of verdigris that spoke to decades, perhaps centuries, of age."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Miller called out, his voice echoing too loudly against the curved ceramic walls"
1"Quinn finally said, her tone flat and uncompromising"
2"Quinn said, her voice dropping to a low, commanding register"
3"Eva whispered, her voice trembling slightly"
4"Quinn ordered, her voice echoing down the dark tunnel"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"Miller called out (call out)"
1"Quinn demanded (demand)"
2"Eva insisted (insist)"
3"Quinn explained (explain)"
4"Quinn warned (warn)"
5"Eva breathed (breathe)"
6"Eva whispered (whisper)"
7"Quinn called out (call out)"
8"Quinn ordered (order)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.432
leniency0.865
rawRatio0.563
effectiveRatio0.486
81.5910%