| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 97.10% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1724 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1724 | | totalAiIsms | 36 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "searing" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "loomed" | | 4 | "chill" | | 5 | "oppressive" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "amidst" | | 8 | "stark" | | 9 | "echoed" | | 10 | "throbbed" | | 11 | "navigated" | | 12 | "footsteps" | | 13 | "flawless" | | 14 | "roaring" | | 15 | "pristine" | | 16 | "maw" | | 17 | "traced" | | 18 | "velvet" | | 19 | "warmth" | | 20 | "resonance" | | 21 | "shattered" | | 22 | "rhythmic" | | 23 | "vibrated" | | 24 | "profound" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 139 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 139 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 167 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1708 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 68 | | wordCount | 1423 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.9 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 3 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 27 | | Veil | 2 | | London | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Isolde | 10 | | Overseer | 3 | | Fae | 4 | | Courts | 1 | | Seer | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Nyx | 9 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Blade" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Overseer" | | 5 | "Courts" | | 6 | "Seer" | | 7 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Veil" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Earth" |
| | globalScore | 0.551 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 112 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1708 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 167 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 56 | | mean | 30.5 | | std | 19.16 | | cv | 0.628 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 35 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 100 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 90 | | 9 | 47 | | 10 | 38 | | 11 | 68 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 60 | | 15 | 55 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 66 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 35 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 56 | | 28 | 55 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 27 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 45 | | 39 | 38 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 34 | | 42 | 23 | | 43 | 27 | | 44 | 33 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 33 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 234 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 167 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1438 | | adjectiveStacks | 4 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "passing violet-winged moth." | | 1 | "long, distorted double shadows." | | 2 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 3 | "nearest red-skinned warden" |
| | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.019471488178025034 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009040333796940195 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 167 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 167 | | mean | 10.23 | | std | 5.34 | | cv | 0.522 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 46.41% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.2994011976047904 | | totalSentences | 167 | | uniqueOpeners | 50 | |
| 24.88% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 134 | | matches | | 0 | "Just an infinite, glowing expanse" |
| | ratio | 0.007 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 134 | | matches | | 0 | "She stumbled out of the" | | 1 | "Her bare feet left no" | | 2 | "Their violet eyes flared like" | | 3 | "They thrashed at a microscopic" | | 4 | "It anchored her amidst the" | | 5 | "They trudged deeper into the" | | 6 | "It reeked of marrow and" | | 7 | "Her left wrist throbbed." | | 8 | "They navigated a series of" | | 9 | "They crested a small ridge" | | 10 | "They carried long, hooked poles," | | 11 | "He gnawed on a severed," | | 12 | "It radiated a dull warmth," | | 13 | "She looked at her Fae-Forged" | | 14 | "She studied the fire pits." | | 15 | "She darted behind a stacked" | | 16 | "They overflowed with twitching, iridescent" | | 17 | "She pressed her back against" | | 18 | "They scattered, waving cleavers and" | | 19 | "She sprinted through the bedlam," |
| | ratio | 0.201 | |
| 1.04% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 123 | | totalSentences | 134 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory pressed the Heartstone against" | | 1 | "The deep crimson gem pulsed," | | 2 | "A localized heat haze hung" | | 3 | "Isolde tracked the invisible distortions" | | 4 | "A whisper scraped against Rory's" | | 5 | "Nyx loomed beside them, shifting" | | 6 | "Rory stepped forward." | | 7 | "The shimmering distortion snapped over" | | 8 | "The transition tore the remaining" | | 9 | "She stumbled out of the" | | 10 | "The Heartstone’s inner glow faded" | | 11 | "The damp chill of London" | | 12 | "A wave of oppressive, honeyed" | | 13 | "The light possessed a physical" | | 14 | "Rory swatted away a sluggish," | | 15 | "Isolde glided through the rift." | | 16 | "Her bare feet left no" | | 17 | "Nyx materialized last." | | 18 | "Their violet eyes flared like" | | 19 | "The landscape unfolded in sprawling" |
| | ratio | 0.918 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 134 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "An orchard stretched to their right, populated by trees bearing fruit that wept rivers of clear, viscous sap onto the ground." | | 1 | "The air rode a continuous, humid breeze that tasted of burnt sugar on the tongue." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |