Run: 2026-02-19-01KHVPNK4S947P83JNYTEDKHP3

Run Details

Duration:
1m 29s
Cost:
$0.105506
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory pressed the Heartstone against her palm. The deep crimson gem pulsed, searing a steady rhythm into her skin. Ahead, the air warped. A localized heat haze hung above the damp grass of Richmond Park. Isolde tracked the invisible distortions with pale lavender eyes. "The boundary thins. Winter approaches. The Solstice demands expansion." A whisper scraped against Rory's ears, devoid of vocal cords. Nyx loomed beside them, shifting between a towering humanoid silhouette and a smear of living darkness. "The tear widens. I smell sugar and slaughter." Rory stepped forward. The shimmering distortion snapped over her like a freezing wave. Reality inverted. The transition tore the remaining breath from her lungs. She stumbled out of the invisible rift and caught her balance against a gnarly, twisted tree trunk. The Heartstone’s inner glow faded to a dull spark as it dropped against her sternum, no longer agitated by the Veil. The damp chill of London vanished entirely. A wave of oppressive, honeyed heat hit her skin. Above them stretched a warm amber sky. No sun. No clouds. Just an infinite, glowing expanse of molten gold casting a perpetual twilight. The light possessed a physical weight, coating the landscape in a bruised, golden hue. Rory swatted away a sluggish, iridescent insect the size of a sparrow. "Hel." Isolde glided through the rift. Her bare feet left no imprint on the ash-white soil. "Dymas. The Prince of Gluttony’s larder." Nyx materialized last. Their violet eyes flared like twin dying stars against the amber glare. "Excess. It suffocates." The landscape unfolded in sprawling terraces of unnatural fertility. Vineyards of deep violet leaves and bloated, pulsating fruit cascaded down steep hillsides. The vines did not creep. They thrashed at a microscopic pace, coiling around trellises forged from dark, untreated iron. An orchard stretched to their right, populated by trees bearing fruit that wept rivers of clear, viscous sap onto the ground. The scent of roasted meats mixed with pungent fermented wine and crushed cinnamon. The air rode a continuous, humid breeze that tasted of burnt sugar on the tongue. Rory unclasped the Fae-Forged Blade at her hip. The leaf-shaped dagger bit into her hand with ferocious cold. A phantom frost clung to the moonsilver logic of the weapon. It anchored her amidst the hallucinogenic fever-dream of the landscape, numbing the oppressive heat radiating from the ground. Rory swept the dagger in a tight arc, carving a trail through a hanging curtain of dripping moss. "Keep close. We find the soul contracts and get out. I have a delivery shift at the Golden Empress tomorrow." They trudged deeper into the agricultural nightmare. The ash-white soil clung to Rory’s boots. It reeked of marrow and pulverized bone, a stark contrast to the saccharine air. Huge orchids bloomed along the path, unfurling to reveal jagged, tooth-like stamens coated in thick nectar. Rory edged entirely around a massive blossom. The petals snapped shut on a passing violet-winged moth. A sickening crunch echoed in the humid air. Rory shoved a stray lock of straight black hair out of her eyes. "Everything eats everything here." Nyx coalesced into a solid form beside Rory. The towering figure stood over six feet tall against the glowing sky. "Gluttony requires consumption. The flora mirrors Prince Belphegor's curse." The amber sky cast long, distorted double shadows. Nyx absorbed the ambient darkness, growing denser and sharper. Rory kept her eyes peeled, watching the shifting foliage. Her left wrist throbbed. The small crescent-shaped scar from her childhood bicycle accident forever ached in intense atmospheric conditions. Dymas possessed the pressure of a deep ocean trench, crushing her lungs with cloying sweetness. They navigated a series of immense, tiered gardens. Stalks of jagged celery the size of ancient sequoia trees towered above them. Blood-red tomatoes pulsed with actual heartbeats, vines throbbing as they pumped nutrient-rich sap through the earth. A constant, underlying squelch accompanied their footsteps. The ground behaved less like dirt and more like digesting flesh. Isolde paused to examine a massive, glowing fungus bursting from the roots of a sugar-cane cluster. "The rot feeds the bloom. A flawless cycle of gluttony." Rory slashed through a final thicket of razor-sharp lemongrass. "Stay focused. We require stealth, not a botany lesson." They crested a small ridge of calcified white stone. Below them lay a sprawling depression in the earth, fashioned into a colossal, sunken kitchen. Fire pits the size of swimming pools blazed with roaring purple flames. Dozens of figures moved frantically between metal prep stations. Some wore tattered remnants of pristine white chef's coats. Others worked stripped to the waist, skin slick with sweat and grease. Towering brutes with skin the color of dried blood and curling obsidian horns stalked the perimeter. They carried long, hooked poles, occasionally nudging a stumbling cook back to their station. Rory dropped into a crouch behind a mammoth squash the size of a boulder. "The catering staff of the damned." Isolde knelt gracefully, resting her hands on her thighs. "Belphegor demands the Grand Feast. The culinary competition begins soon. The losers become the appetizer." Rory tightened her grip on the frozen dagger handle. "Indentured cooks. Evan loved watching those master chef shows. My ex didn't realize half of his culinary idols traded their eternal souls for a Michelin star." Isolde navigated the labyrinth of vines with her gaze. "The bargain is absolute. One lifetime of accolades. Eternity spent feeding the bottomless maw." Nyx glided past a throbbing vine. "Sorcerers made similar pacts in my time. Back in 1643, fools bartered their essence for parlor tricks. Gluttony takes many forms." Rory traced her crescent scar. "I dropped out of Pre-Law to avoid soul-sucking contracts. Now I steal them from demons." Nyx extended a wisp of darkness, pointing a shadowy tendril toward the center of the pit. "The Overseer holds the documentation." An enormous iron desk stood amidst the cooking stations, completely incongruous with the culinary chaos. A demon sat at the desk, clad in fine velvet robes stained with grease. Ledger books towered around him like unstable skyscrapers. He gnawed on a severed, roasted leg of indeterminate origin, occasionally stamping a parchment with a glowing metal seal. Rory consulted the Heartstone. It radiated a dull warmth, humming in resonance with the demonic magic below. She looked at her Fae-Forged Blade. The moonsilver gleamed, vibrating with lethal intent against the overwhelming demonic presence. She studied the fire pits. "Four hulks on patrol. Three dozen humans armed with meat cleavers. They won't help us." Nyx flared their violet eyes. "They are broken. Driven by the whip and the flame. They will defend their torturers to protect their soufflé." Isolde stared blankly at the roaring purple fires. "The fire purifies. The contract binds." Rory shook her head and sheathed the dagger. "I need mobility over a blade. Nyx. How far do your shadows stretch down there?" The whisper grated like two stones grinding together. "In this heat, the shadows recede. The smoke provides cover." Thick, greasy smoke plumed from the fire pits, crawling up the sloped sides of the depression. Rory pointed to the iron desk. "Ride the smoke. Knock over the grease vats onto the braziers behind him. We need chaos." Nyx unraveled. Ribbons of living darkness detached from the humanoid silhouette, slithering across the bone-white dirt and diving into the nearest shadow cast by the oversized squash. Rory turned to Isolde. "You wait here. Don't touch the carnivorous plants." Isolde smiled, a haunting, ethereal upward curve of her pale lips. "The roots seek blood. I return only moonlight." Rory slipped down the earthen embankment. The heat escalated immediately. Sweat beaded on her forehead. The clatter of knives and the roar of the fire drowned out her footsteps. A suffocating wave of roasting spice and char crashed into her. The air tasted of copper. She darted behind a stacked pyramid of wooden crates. They overflowed with twitching, iridescent tubers. She pressed her back against the rough wood, watching the nearest red-skinned warden stomp past. The earth shook with each of his steps. Black smoke billowed across the far side of the kitchen basin. A deafening crash shattered the rhythmic chopping. The colossal iron vats of grease tilted, overturned by an unseen force. Hundreds of gallons of boiling golden fat dumped directly into the central purple fire pits. The flames erupted. A wall of violet fire rocketed fifty feet into the amber sky, devouring the wooden scaffolding above the prep stations. Damned souls shrieked, abandoning their stations. They scattered, waving cleavers and whisks in blind panic. The wardens roared, swinging their hooked poles to corral the terrified cooks. Rory sprang from her cover. She sprinted through the bedlam, dodging a careening cart of exotic birds. She vaulted over a prep table coated in flour and dashed toward the Overseer’s iron desk. The velvet-robed demon stood, bellowing orders at his guards. He ignored his ledger books. Rory slid onto the dirt right beside the desk. She snatched the topmost stack of parchment. The demonic seals burned against her fingertips, but she shoved the rolled contracts into her jacket pocket. A heavy thud vibrated through her spine. The Overseer turned, his yellowed eyes locking onto Rory. He dropped the roasted leg. "Thief!" Rory drew the Fae dagger. The cold moonsilver cleaved the humid air. She slashed outward in a violent backhand sweep. The blade passed cleanly through the iron corner of the desk, slicing the metal in half. The freezing magic of the Fae Courts exploded outward upon impact, frosting the Overseer's velvet robes and knocking him backward into a mountain of ledgers. Rory bolted. "Nyx!" A funnel of black shadow ripped through the scattered parchment, scooping Rory into a localized vortex of cold darkness. The oppressive heat vanished instantly. The roaring flames faded into a muffled hum. Nyx propelled them back up the embankment. They materialized next to Isolde. The Seer already walked toward the shimmering tear in the Veil, her silver hair catching the amber light. Isolde stepped through the distortion. "The ovens preheat. We depart." Rory touched the stolen contracts in her pocket. She glanced back once at the inferno ravaging the gluttonous basin, feeling the profound unnaturalness of the realm pushing against her skin, and dove through the rift back to Earth.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
97.10% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1724
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1724
totalAiIsms36
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"searing"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count2
3
word"loomed"
count1
4
word"chill"
count1
5
word"oppressive"
count3
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"amidst"
count2
8
word"stark"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"throbbed"
count1
11
word"navigated"
count2
12
word"footsteps"
count2
13
word"flawless"
count1
14
word"roaring"
count3
15
word"pristine"
count1
16
word"maw"
count1
17
word"traced"
count1
18
word"velvet"
count3
19
word"warmth"
count1
20
word"resonance"
count1
21
word"shattered"
count1
22
word"rhythmic"
count1
23
word"vibrated"
count1
24
word"profound"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"searing"
2"whisper"
3"loomed"
4"chill"
5"oppressive"
6"weight"
7"amidst"
8"stark"
9"echoed"
10"throbbed"
11"navigated"
12"footsteps"
13"flawless"
14"roaring"
15"pristine"
16"maw"
17"traced"
18"velvet"
19"warmth"
20"resonance"
21"shattered"
22"rhythmic"
23"vibrated"
24"profound"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences139
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences139
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences167
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1708
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions68
wordCount1423
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.9
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone3
Richmond1
Park1
Rory27
Veil2
London1
Fae-Forged2
Blade2
Isolde10
Overseer3
Fae4
Courts1
Seer1
Earth1
Nyx9
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Rory"
2"Blade"
3"Isolde"
4"Overseer"
5"Courts"
6"Seer"
7"Nyx"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Veil"
3"London"
4"Earth"
globalScore0.551
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences112
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1708
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences167
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean30.5
std19.16
cv0.628
sampleLengths
035
118
234
315
4100
513
621
718
890
947
1038
1168
1217
1329
1460
1555
1626
1718
1866
1930
2020
2124
2235
2323
2427
2520
2621
2756
2855
2924
3014
3123
3218
3316
3422
3527
3612
3719
3845
3938
4011
4134
4223
4327
4433
4514
4633
477
4815
4920
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences139
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs234
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences167
ratio0
matches(empty)
76.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1438
adjectiveStacks4
stackExamples
0"passing violet-winged moth."
1"long, distorted double shadows."
2"small crescent-shaped scar"
3"nearest red-skinned warden"
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.019471488178025034
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.009040333796940195
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences167
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences167
mean10.23
std5.34
cv0.522
sampleLengths
07
112
24
312
49
59
610
716
88
93
1010
112
129
1317
1421
157
169
177
182
192
2012
2114
2212
231
245
2510
266
273
2812
293
309
3113
325
3314
3421
3513
3615
378
3810
3911
4018
4118
4220
437
447
4514
4616
477
489
498
46.41% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.2994011976047904
totalSentences167
uniqueOpeners50
24.88% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences134
matches
0"Just an infinite, glowing expanse"
ratio0.007
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences134
matches
0"She stumbled out of the"
1"Her bare feet left no"
2"Their violet eyes flared like"
3"They thrashed at a microscopic"
4"It anchored her amidst the"
5"They trudged deeper into the"
6"It reeked of marrow and"
7"Her left wrist throbbed."
8"They navigated a series of"
9"They crested a small ridge"
10"They carried long, hooked poles,"
11"He gnawed on a severed,"
12"It radiated a dull warmth,"
13"She looked at her Fae-Forged"
14"She studied the fire pits."
15"She darted behind a stacked"
16"They overflowed with twitching, iridescent"
17"She pressed her back against"
18"They scattered, waving cleavers and"
19"She sprinted through the bedlam,"
ratio0.201
1.04% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount123
totalSentences134
matches
0"Rory pressed the Heartstone against"
1"The deep crimson gem pulsed,"
2"A localized heat haze hung"
3"Isolde tracked the invisible distortions"
4"A whisper scraped against Rory's"
5"Nyx loomed beside them, shifting"
6"Rory stepped forward."
7"The shimmering distortion snapped over"
8"The transition tore the remaining"
9"She stumbled out of the"
10"The Heartstone’s inner glow faded"
11"The damp chill of London"
12"A wave of oppressive, honeyed"
13"The light possessed a physical"
14"Rory swatted away a sluggish,"
15"Isolde glided through the rift."
16"Her bare feet left no"
17"Nyx materialized last."
18"Their violet eyes flared like"
19"The landscape unfolded in sprawling"
ratio0.918
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences134
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences65
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"An orchard stretched to their right, populated by trees bearing fruit that wept rivers of clear, viscous sap onto the ground."
1"The air rode a continuous, humid breeze that tasted of burnt sugar on the tongue."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.1809%