Run: 2026-02-19-01KHVPNNWKPQ7XRJ8RB40KX4A1

Run Details

Duration:
1m 49s
Cost:
$0.091308
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The distinctive green neon sign buzzed outside The Raven's Nest, bleeding emerald light through the rain-streaked window. Inside, shadows clung to the corners of the ceiling. Framed black-and-white photographs of unnamed soldiers and yellowed ordnance maps from the Blitz covered the brickwork. Rory pressed her thumb against the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. She traced the pale groove, feeling the pulse beneath the skin. The aroma of sesame oil and burnt garlic clung to her clothes, a steadfast reminder of her six-hour delivery shift navigating the slick streets of Soho. She shrugged off her Golden Empress windbreaker, leaving the wet yellow vinyl draped over the adjacent stool. Behind the bar, Silas shifted his weight, favoring his good leg. A silver signet ring clicked against the side of a heavy tumbler. He ran a cotton cloth over the glass, his hazel eyes fixed on a spot far beyond the rows of liquor bottles. His grey-streaked auburn hair caught the faint amber glow of the antique pendant lamps above. The front door groaned on heavy iron hinges. A rush of cold, damp air swept into the room, rattling the beer taps. A man stepped across the threshold. He swiped rainwater from the lapels of a charcoal wool suit. He unbuttoned the jacket, revealing a tailored waist-coat and a crisp poplin shirt. Rory gripped the edge of the mahogany counter. Three years ago, Declan Hughes wore stained Cardiff University hoodies. He subsisted on instant noodles. He argued corporate malfeasance until his voice turned hoarse. The man standing by the entrance looked like an imposter wearing Declan’s skin. Deep tracks ran beneath his eyes. Grey streaked the hair at his temples. He carried the posture of a man dragging an iron vault strapped to his shoulders. Declan scanned the empty booths. His gaze caught the movement of the bar towel in Silas’s hand, then slid down the length of the polished wood until it landed on Rory. He froze. The heavy door clicked shut behind him, plunging the entryway back into shadow. Declan crossed the floorboards. His leather-soled shoes produced sharp, rhythmic thuds. He stopped one stool away from Rory. Rory dropped her hand from her wrist. She met his stare. Her bright blue eyes swept over his expensive silk tie. Declan parted his lips, exhaling a breath smelling of peppermint and expensive gin. "Aurora." Rory tilted her chin. "Declan. It's Rory now." Silas stepped forward, bracing a hand on the counter. His neat beard twitched as he assessed the newcomer. He set a cardboard coaster onto the wood with a flick of his wrist. Declan placed a hand on the back of the empty stool between them. He stared down at her frayed black t-shirt and the scuffed waterproof boots resting on the brass rail. "A double Macallan. Neat." Declan addressed Silas. "Put her drink on my tab." Rory tapped the brass rail with her boot. "I pay for my own pints." Silas reached for a bottle on the top shelf, poured the amber liquid, and slid the glass across the varnished wood. Declan picked up the tumbler. He brought it to his lips and drained half the glass in one motion. A shudder grabbed his neck. "Brendan had the Cardiff police dragging the River Taff for weeks." Declan set the glass down. "Your mother stopped speaking to people. We all assumed you ended up at the bottom of a quarry." "I took a train." "You vanished." "I packed a bag. I bought a ticket at Central Station. I left." Declan gripped the tumbler, his knuckles turning white. "In the middle of third year. Two months before the Pre-Law finals. You threw away everything." Rory swirled the remnants of her ale. "I threw away a path I never chose, laid out by a father who viewed me as a prop for his legacy. And I survived Evan." Declan flinched. The muscles in his jaw knotted. He broke eye contact, shifting his focus to an aged map of the London Underground taped behind the register. "Evan told the faculty you suffered a nervous breakdown." Rory leaned closer. "He fractured my collarbone and gave me a concussion. You knew. You saw the bruises." "He claimed you fell off your bike." "You saw the hand-shaped marks on my arm, Dec. You looked right at them." The ambient noise of the pub rushed to fill the void between them. Tires hissed over the wet asphalt outside. Silas reached beneath the register and depressed a hidden latch. The heavy oak bookshelf behind the counter swung backward with a metallic click. He carried an empty liquor crate into the clandestine back room, leaving them alone beneath the pendant lights. Declan unclasped his watch—a heavy platinum Rolex. He placed it on the counter. The metal snapped against the wood. Declan stared at the face of the watch. "I make three hundred thousand pounds a year." "Congratulations. You own a flat in Kensington." "I own nothing." He dragged a hand down his face, pulling at the skin. "The firm owns me. I drafted a settlement out of court yesterday for a chemical conglomerate. They tipped carcinogenic waste into a municipal water supply in Yorkshire. Six children developed leukemia." Rory studied the sharp angles of his face. The righteous fire that once defined him during late-night debates at the student union had turned to ash. "I negotiated their payout." Declan swallowed hard. "I got the conglomerate a protective order to seal the findings. I saved them twenty million pounds. The partners bought me a bottle of Dom Pérignon." Rory pushed her pint glass aside. She rested her forearms on the bar. "You planned to work civil rights. Pro bono." Declan picked up the glass and downed the rest of the scotch. "I sit in a beige room for fourteen hours a day. I find loopholes for monsters. I stood in front of a mirror this morning. I stared at my reflection until my eyes watered. I didn't recognize the man looking back." Rory picked up a napkin. She folded the paper into a neat square, pressing the crease with her thumbnail. "You chose the paved route. Brendan Carter wrote you a letter of recommendation. You took the chambers pupilage, you chased the tailored suits, and you shed your morals along the way." Declan pointed at the yellow vinyl jacket. "And you deliver takeaways. You possess a brilliant legal mind. You solved the Montgomery tort case in ten minutes during our first year. Now you run food." Rory tossed the folded napkin onto the coaster. "I breathe oxygen. I wake up without checking the locks three times. I walk down Soho without scanning the shadows for Evan. I pay my rent. I live." "You waste your intellect." "You sold your soul." The accusations hung over the dark oak bar. Declan slumped forward. The tailored suit crinkled at the shoulders. He looked small. "I envy you." Rory narrowed her bright blue eyes. She pointed a finger at his chest. "Do not romanticize my life. I escaped a man who intended to beat me to death. I abandoned a mother to a narcissist. I scrape by on tips and deliver noodles in the freezing rain." Declan reached out, his fingertips grazing the edge of the platinum watch. "You dictated your own terms. I put on the golden handcuffs. I locked them myself. Every time I cash a cheque, I feel another piece of my humanity rot." "Then quit." "I have a mortgage. I have a partner who demands weekends in Milan. I have expectations." Rory straightened her spine, shaking her straight black hair out of her eyes. "Expectations are a ghost story. You can walk out of Vanguard tomorrow. You can buy a ticket at Central Station." "I lack your courage." Declan rested his forehead in his palms. The polished mahogany reflected his broken posture. Rory remained still. She offered no platitudes. The ghosts of Cardiff stood between them, a graveyard of abandoned dreams and hollow victories. Silas emerged from the hidden back room. He pulled the bookshelf closed until the latch engaged. He plucked up his towel and resumed wiping the brass taps. Rory lifted her eyes to the photograph of a nameless soldier on the wall. The man in the picture stared ahead, frozen in time, marching toward a war he would never return from. Declan dragged his hands through his pristine hair, ruining the expensive styling. He turned his head sideways, resting his cheek against the cool wood of the bar.
created_at"2026-02-19T19:40:16.491Z" 2/19/2026, 7:40:16 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Declan swallowed hard [hard]"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.111
leniency0.222
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.056
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1432
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.10% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1432
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"reminder"
count1
3
word"navigating"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"rhythmic"
count1
7
word"silk"
count1
8
word"fractured"
count1
9
word"clandestine"
count1
10
word"scanning"
count1
11
word"pristine"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"pulse"
2"reminder"
3"navigating"
4"weight"
5"scanned"
6"rhythmic"
7"silk"
8"fractured"
9"clandestine"
10"scanning"
11"pristine"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences94
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences126
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1421
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions57
wordCount934
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity2.14
worstName"Declan"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Declan"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Blitz1
Soho1
Golden1
Empress1
Silas7
Declan20
Hughes1
Cardiff2
University1
Rory17
London1
Underground1
Rolex1
persons
0"Nest"
1"Silas"
2"Declan"
3"Hughes"
4"Rory"
5"Underground"
places
0"Raven"
1"Soho"
2"Cardiff"
3"London"
globalScore0.429
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like an imposter wearing Declan’s"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1421
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences126
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean23.3
std16.36
cv0.702
sampleLengths
042
167
260
322
430
58
665
731
815
918
1021
1113
121
138
1432
1531
1613
1714
1821
1924
2034
214
222
2313
2424
2533
2627
279
2818
297
3014
3161
3219
3316
347
3545
3626
3733
3813
398
4053
4119
4231
4334
4436
454
464
478
4813
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs151
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences126
ratio0.008
matches
0"Declan unclasped his watch—a heavy platinum Rolex."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount944
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.01059322033898305
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences126
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences126
mean11.28
std7.46
cv0.662
sampleLengths
017
19
216
313
411
526
617
711
812
922
1015
118
1214
136
1411
1513
168
1710
185
199
2013
216
227
2315
245
2526
262
2713
284
297
307
317
324
3310
3413
351
364
374
389
399
4014
4113
4218
437
446
458
466
4721
485
4914
44.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.23015873015873015
totalSentences126
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
ratio0
89.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences92
matches
0"She traced the pale groove,"
1"She shrugged off her Golden"
2"He ran a cotton cloth"
3"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
4"He swiped rainwater from the"
5"He unbuttoned the jacket, revealing"
6"He subsisted on instant noodles."
7"He argued corporate malfeasance until"
8"He carried the posture of"
9"His gaze caught the movement"
10"His leather-soled shoes produced sharp,"
11"He stopped one stool away"
12"She met his stare."
13"Her bright blue eyes swept"
14"His neat beard twitched as"
15"He set a cardboard coaster"
16"He stared down at her"
17"He brought it to his"
18"He broke eye contact, shifting"
19"He carried an empty liquor"
ratio0.326
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences92
matches
0"The distinctive green neon sign"
1"Rory pressed her thumb against"
2"She traced the pale groove,"
3"The aroma of sesame oil"
4"She shrugged off her Golden"
5"A silver signet ring clicked"
6"He ran a cotton cloth"
7"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
8"The front door groaned on"
9"A rush of cold, damp"
10"A man stepped across the"
11"He swiped rainwater from the"
12"He unbuttoned the jacket, revealing"
13"Rory gripped the edge of"
14"He subsisted on instant noodles."
15"He argued corporate malfeasance until"
16"The man standing by the"
17"He carried the posture of"
18"Declan scanned the empty booths."
19"His gaze caught the movement"
ratio0.935
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Declan parted his lips, exhaling a breath smelling of peppermint and expensive gin."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Declan addressed (address)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.028
leniency0.056
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.056
83.9815%