Run: 2026-02-19-01KHVPNSZPFNVYPMDY12GWJY3W

Run Details

Duration:
1m 58s
Cost:
$0.150576
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Three heavy deadbolts snicked open in rapid succession. I pulled the brass handle back. A gloved hand slammed against the wooden doorframe. The aged oak groaned under the unnatural force. "You changed the locks." Lucien Moreau stood on the threshold. Rainwater ran down his slicked platinum blond hair to soak into the sharp collar of his tailored charcoal suit. His distinctive ivory-handled cane rested heavily against the scuffed floorboards. "I changed flats, Lucien. Two years ago." "Time passes differently in Avaros." He tilted his head. One amber eye and one black eye swept over my face to settle directly on my left wrist. My instinct ordered me to hide the small crescent-shaped scar there. I kept my arm perfectly still. "You are dripping on my welcome mat." "An oversight on my part." He stepped forward. I did not move aside. The gap between us closed to a sliver of chilled air. Copper stung my nostrils. Fresh blood mingled heavily with the rich scent of turmeric and roasted cumin drifting up from the curry house downstairs. "I need exactly three hours, Rory." His French accent clipped the syllables short. It lacked his usual smooth delivery. "You left me in an abandoned dockside warehouse with five feral ghouls." "I secured the exterior perimeter." "You locked the exit doors from the outside." "They were ravenous. You are exceptionally quick. The experience built character." I slammed the door shut. A polished black Oxford shoe caught the heavy wood a fraction of an inch from the frame. Lucien did not flinch. The man pushed the heavy oak panel open and stepped into the narrow hallway. Ptolemy, Eva's oversized tabby cat, launched himself from the top of an overstuffed veneer bookshelf. The feline landed directly on a towering stack of Sumerian translation dictionaries and let out a guttural hiss. "Charming beast." Lucien stepped over a scattered pile of fragile Aramaic scrolls. "Your roommate keeps a delightful hoard of fire hazards." "Get out." He leaned heavily on the ivory cane. A crimson stain spread across the right side of his pristine silver waistcoat. Drip-drop. Thick red droplets hit the faded geometric patterned Turkish rug. "You are bleeding." "A minor disagreement regarding a rather valuable artifact." He unbuttoned his ruined suit jacket. He reached inside his breast pocket to pull out a vile heavy old rectangular black Avarosian iron tracking amulet. He tossed the dark metal onto the cluttered glass coffee table. The heavy amulet landed on a stack of final utility notices. "You brought a tracker into a warded space." "I broke the internal mechanism." He sank onto the worn green velvet sofa. The antique furniture creaked loudly under his solid weight. "Mostly." I stared at the fresh blood pooling on my rug. Part-time shifts delivering takeout for the Golden Empress restaurant paid terribly. Replacing that imported rug would cost three solid weeks of wages. I marched to the cramped kitchenette. I grabbed a clean white linen dish towel from the oven handle. "Press this to your side." I tossed the towel directly at his chest. Lucien caught the fabric with his free hand. He pressed the white cloth against his lower ribs. The linen turned bright red instantly. "Your famed hostility charms me, as always." "My hostility began the night you vanished with the bounty money." "I left you perfectly capable of survival." He watched me through hooded eyes. "You possessed the true artifact. You secured a viable exit strategy." "A rusted iron rooftop window three stories up." "You successfully made the jump." "I broke two ribs upon landing." "A harsh lesson in urban aerodynamics." He shifted his position on the cushions. A sharp intake of breath betrayed his calm facade. I crossed the small living area. Eva’s flat occupied the cramped space directly above the bustling Indian restaurant on Brick Lane. The location provided cheap rent and unparalleled anonymity in East London. Every flat surface inside the one-bedroom apartment vanished beneath a mish-mash of chaotic astrological notes, loose quartz crystals, and half-burnt white sage bundles. I navigated the familiar disastrous clutter to stand directly in front of his seated form. The air around him radiated unnatural heat. "You owe me a great deal, Lucien." "I owe you my life." He removed his soaked leather glove. He reached out to trace the small crescent scar on my left wrist with a bare thumb. The physical touch burned against my cold skin. "A permanent debt I fully intend to repay." I pulled my hand back. "Take your broken trinket and leave." He surrendered a low chuckle. "You expect me to wander the streets in this condition." "I expect you to exercise your legendary survival skills." I folded my arms over my chest. "Try the Ritz hotel. I hear the penthouse suites accommodate uninvited half-demons nicely." "The hotel management holds firm objections to my current state of dress." He gestured loosely to his ruined waistcoat. "Furthermore, human security details offer pathetic resistance against Avarosian hunting parties." "You assume I offer better protection." "I know you offer better protection." His amber eye locked onto mine. "Brendan Carter trained his daughter exceptionally well before his untimely demise." "Do not speak my father's name." "A brilliant Irish barrister." Lucien lowered his voice to a smooth purr. "A rather formidable mortal sorcerer. He taught you the intricate art of the long game. You analyze variables. You survive." "I survived Evan." The name of my abusive ex-partner slipped from my mouth before my brain could stop the syllables. Lucien gripped the head of his polished cane. The skin over the knuckles on his ungloved hand turned entirely white. "Evan suffered a tragic, permanent accident in a dark alleyway behind the Harrods department store." "You butchered him." "I reorganized his anatomy." Lucien offered a thin, cruel smile. "No one harms what belongs to me." "I do not belong to you." "A spirited debate for a less eventful evening." He surveyed the tiny apartment with open disdain. His unmatched gaze lingered on the front door. "Does the robust exterior curry scent mask the intricate demon wards inside, or do the magical wards mask the scent of unwanted supernatural guests?" "The wards exist to keep people like you outside." "Clearly, they require a substantial upgrade." I grabbed the iron amulet from the glass table. The metal felt ice-cold in my palm. The carved runes along the edges formed a zig-zag pattern. A faint pulse of dark magic leaped over my fingers. "Who did you steal this from?" "I repossessed stolen property on behalf of a wealthy client." "The client lied to you." I dropped the heavy metal back onto the table. "This belongs to the infernal royal court." "The previous owner lacked the proper appreciation for rare antiquities." The low hum of the protective magical wards around the flat shifted into a high-pitched mechanical whine. Ptolemy let out another piercing screech. The tabby cat bolted beneath the green sofa. Feline claws scrambled frantically against the hardwood floor. The ambient temperature in the cramped room dropped twenty degrees in a single heartbeat. Frost crept swiftly across the edges of the single window overlooking the street. The festive evening chit-chat from the busy pavement below fell utterly silent. "Did you lead them straight here?" My grip tightened on empty air. "My defensive maneuvers proved insufficient." He adjusted his grip on the smooth ivory cane. The hidden steel blade clicked softly inside the hollow shaft. "I frankly prefer the term interdimensional debt collector over royal executioner." "You brought an executioner to my front door." "I brought a common enemy to the deadliest woman I know." "I serve dumplings for a living now." "You possess the spirit of a warrior." "I possess a lease I cannot afford to break." The three newly installed deadbolts on the front door unlocked themselves simultaneously. The heavy brass cylinders spun backward with a violent metallic shriek. I looked at the trembling front door. Lucien stood up smoothly. He abandoned the bloody towel and drew the long silver sword from his cane. The thick oak door exploded inward. Splinters of sharp wood showered the narrow entryway. A massive humanoid figure stepped through the violently ruined doorway. Dense black smoke coiled around dark gray skin. Two curved bone horns scraped loudly against the low plaster ceiling. "Moreau," the creature rasped. The deep voice vibrated the floorboards directly under my leather boots. "Your three hours are up."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He gestured loosely [loosely]"
dialogueSentences67
tagDensity0.284
leniency0.567
rawRatio0.053
effectiveRatio0.03
82.29% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1412
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count2
1
adverb"loosely"
count1
2
adverb"utterly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"loosely"
2"utterly"
3"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.42% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1412
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"chilled"
count1
1
word"pristine"
count1
2
word"velvet"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"facade"
count1
5
word"chaotic"
count1
6
word"navigated"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"intricate"
count2
9
word"variables"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"mechanical"
count1
12
word"vibrated"
count1
highlights
0"chilled"
1"pristine"
2"velvet"
3"weight"
4"facade"
5"chaotic"
6"navigated"
7"familiar"
8"intricate"
9"variables"
10"pulse"
11"mechanical"
12"vibrated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences95
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences143
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1400
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount899
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity0.89
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
One1
French1
Oxford1
Eva2
Sumerian1
Aramaic1
Turkish1
Avarosian1
Golden1
Empress1
Lucien8
Indian1
Brick1
Lane1
East1
London1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"One"
2"Eva"
3"Aramaic"
4"Lucien"
places
0"Oxford"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
3"East"
4"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1400
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences143
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs76
mean18.42
std14.26
cv0.774
sampleLengths
014
116
24
335
47
544
67
75
843
919
1012
115
128
1311
145
1535
1633
1721
182
1931
203
218
2236
2311
248
2523
2650
2713
2823
297
3011
3124
328
335
346
3522
3677
377
3844
3911
4015
4129
4230
436
4423
456
4632
4720
4820
4915
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs125
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences143
ratio0
matches(empty)
82.69% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount910
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"distinctive ivory-handled cane"
1"vile heavy old rectangular black Avarosian"
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.031868131868131866
lyAdverbCount24
lyAdverbRatio0.026373626373626374
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences143
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences143
mean9.79
std4.4
cv0.449
sampleLengths
08
16
28
38
44
56
619
710
87
99
1018
1111
126
137
145
153
165
1711
184
1920
2013
216
2212
235
248
2511
265
2717
284
2914
3015
3118
3212
339
342
357
3613
371
3810
393
408
416
4219
4311
4411
458
4613
479
481
4910
48.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.32867132867132864
totalSentences143
uniqueOpeners47
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
ratio0
54.04% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences94
matches
0"I pulled the brass handle"
1"His distinctive ivory-handled cane rested"
2"He tilted his head"
3"My instinct ordered me to"
4"I kept my arm perfectly"
5"He stepped forward."
6"I did not move aside."
7"His French accent clipped the"
8"It lacked his usual smooth"
9"I slammed the door shut."
10"He leaned heavily on the"
11"He unbuttoned his ruined suit"
12"He reached inside his breast"
13"He tossed the dark metal"
14"He sank onto the worn"
15"I stared at the fresh"
16"I marched to the cramped"
17"I grabbed a clean white"
18"I tossed the towel directly"
19"He pressed the white cloth"
ratio0.415
2.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences94
matches
0"I pulled the brass handle"
1"A gloved hand slammed against"
2"The aged oak groaned under"
3"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
4"Rainwater ran down his slicked"
5"His distinctive ivory-handled cane rested"
6"He tilted his head"
7"My instinct ordered me to"
8"I kept my arm perfectly"
9"He stepped forward."
10"I did not move aside."
11"The gap between us closed"
12"Copper stung my nostrils."
13"His French accent clipped the"
14"It lacked his usual smooth"
15"I slammed the door shut."
16"A polished black Oxford shoe"
17"Lucien did not flinch."
18"The man pushed the heavy"
19"Ptolemy, Eva's oversized tabby cat,"
ratio0.915
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.0163%