Run: 2026-02-19-01KHVPNVM44RZ3QFHPPDN55PNR

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
First deadbolt. Brass bit into skin. Second deadbolt. Iron scraped against a rusted strike plate. Third deadbolt. A loud snap echoed down the empty stairwell. Rory pulled the warped wooden door inward. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing. Shadows settled into the sharp lapels of his charcoal suit. The bare bulb overhead flickered, washing a pale glare over his slicked-back platinum blond hair. A distinct layer of rain darkened the wool mapping his broad shoulders. He stood tall, both gloved hands resting on the smooth ivory hook of his cane. "Rory." His voice carried a familiar rough gravel. Rory clamped her fingers around the edge of the doorframe. Her knuckles stretched raw and white against the wood. "Give me one good reason to leave these locks open." Lucien shifted his weight. The mismatched eyes caught the hallway lighting—one a depthless void of black, the other a striking predator amber. "I lack safe shelters tonight." "This constitutes Eva’s private residence. We do not run a crisis center for wayward information brokers." "Eva runs an archival dig in Edinburgh. You occupy the premises." Rory inhaled the distinct sting of roasted cumin and garlic drifting up from the ground-floor curry house. She refused to break eye contact. The humid air between them carried the weight of their last encounter on a rain-slicked rooftop. Six months of radio silence radiated from his soaked clothes. "You have ten seconds." Lucien crossed the threshold. Rory yielded, stepping back into the cramped entryway. He pulled the heavy door shut, twisting the three deadbolts back into place with practiced efficiency. "Locking us in a confined space. Bold." Ptolemy dropped from the top shelf of the bookcase. The obese tabby cat landed with a heavy thump upon a pile of unrolled papyrus. He padded forward, weaving a deliberate figure-eight around Lucien’s wet leather oxfords. Lucien removed one glove. He scratched the animal behind the ears. "Felines offer better hospitality than their caretakers." "Ptolemy lacks a survival instinct." Books smothered every flat surface in the room. Precarious towers of bound folklore texts leaned against the peeling floral wallpaper. Loose astrological charts carpeted the floorboards. Lucien navigated the chaotic maze of Eva’s research without breaking his stride. The dark rubber tip of his cane found the rare bare patches of wood. Rory crossed her arms. Her thumb found the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. The raised skin burned hot under her own touch. "State your business, Lucien." He planted the cane in front of him. "Three hounds from Avaros caught my scent outside Covent Garden. My established transit lines possess too much risk right now. I need a secured roof until sunrise." "You dragged hellhounds to Brick Lane. To me." "Your intellect outshines your defensive posturing. You mapped the ward system for this exact building." "You burned the bridge connecting us." His amber eye tracked the warm glow of the desk lamp. He moved past a stack of translating dictionaries, coming to a halt a foot away from her. The aroma of copper, ozone, and wet wool masked the ancient smell of Eva's paper hoards. "Circumstances demanded an immediate departure." "You vanished into smoke." "I insulated you from an underworld turf war." Rory stepped over a sprawling map of London ley lines. She tilted her chin up to meet his height. A vein pulsed steadily against his crisp white collar. "You assume the role of my savior. I navigated supernatural debts long before you barged into Golden Empress. I survived Evan. I outsmarted minor demons on my delivery routes. You made a choice to leave." Lucien tightened his grip on the cane handle. The leather of his glove groaned under the pressure. "I watched a low-level enforcer put a serrated blade to your throat over my miscalculated gamble. My enemies wield weapons forged in Avaros fire. You wield no armor against that." "My armor is out-thinking them." "Flesh burns despite quick wit." Rory crowded his space. The heat radiating off his imposing frame clashed with the chill she harbored in her chest. "I survived." "Because I removed the target." "By turning into a ghost." He abandoned the cane. The lacquered wood clattered against a stack of thick encyclopedias. His hands hovered inches from her shoulders. He pulled them back, clasping them tight behind his back. "My absence secured oxygen in your lungs. Do not condemn me for prioritizing your pulse." "You stole my autonomy." Silence smothered the room. Ptolemy jumped onto the solitary velvet armchair, curling into a tight ball of orange fuzz. A deep purr vibrated through the floorboards beneath their boots. Lucien looked away. He focused his attention on an astronomical calendar pinned to the corkboard. "I carry a multitude of regrets, Aurora. Ensuring your survival dodges that list." "We operated as partners." "We cultivated a spark threatening the foundation of a powder keg." Rory reached for a stack of scattered notes, aligning the paper edges with a sharp slap against the table. "You severed my trust." "I protected my heart." The confession hung heavy. Rory dropped the papers. She searched his face for any hint of deception. The depthless black eye remained an unreadable abyss. The amber eye betrayed a fractured crack in his composure. The untouchable fixer of London stood stripped of his usual defensive maneuvers. "Half-demons do not admit to possessing hearts." "I function upon logic and self-preservation. You ruin the concept of both." Rory closed the last gap of space between them. The silver buttons of his vest brushed against the fabric of her worn sweater. "I demand an apology." "I apologize for the clumsy execution. I stand by the intent." "Arrogant." "Analytical." He brought a hand forward, wrapping his fingers around her left wrist. His thumb drifted over the crescent scar. The tactile pressure sent a spike of electricity up her arm. She commanded her feet to stay rooted. "You maintained the threshold wards." "Eva dictates the security measures." "You anticipated my return." "I anticipate chaotic fallout. You embody the concept." Lucien mapped the raised ridge of the scar with his thumb. The calluses on his skin scraped against her pulse point. "The hounds hunt supernatural bloodstains. They breach the perimeter by midnight." "This flat rests upon a ley line intersection. The ambient chaos scrambles their tracking." "A masterful calculation. Your mind retains its razor edge." "Save the flattery. We reside on terrible terms." A smirk broke the severe line of his mouth. "Terrible terms suit our dynamic." Rory snatched her arm from his grip. She stepped back, shoving a heavy Latin dictionary an inch across the table to reestablish a physical barrier. "Do not project comfort onto this arrangement. You take the armchair. I maintain the bed." "A generous concession." "A tactical placement. Upon a ward breach, you become the initial barrier." Lucien retrieved his cane from the encyclopedias. A metallic chime rang out as the hidden blade shifted inside the ivory sheath. "I prefer combat with shadow beasts over intellectual fencing with you." "A predictable preference. You lack the stamina for the latter." Rory gestured toward the velvet armchair. Ptolemy cracked an eye open, shooting a territorial glare at Lucien’s approaching form. "Evict the cat. Use the chair." Lucien approached the velvet seat. He ignored the animal, opting to claim the frayed footstool beside it. He extended his long legs, maneuvering around a chaotic stack of delicate star charts. The impeccable tailoring of his suit created a harsh contrast against the squalor of the Brick Lane apartment. Rory watched his movements from the kitchen entryway. A neon sign down the street slashed a crimson line across his sharp jaw. "I require tea." "Earl Grey. Devoid of sugar." "I cataloged your orders at Golden Empress, Lucien." "A simple reaffirmation." "I possess zero Earl Grey. You endure whatever loose-leaf scraps Eva left abandoned in the pantry." "I welcome the punishment." She turned toward the rusted electric kettle. She flicked the switch. The rusted coils hummed to life. She dug her fingernails into the cracked linoleum counter. Adrenaline waned, giving way to an exhausted ache. The six-month absence dissolved into a singular tense evening. Footsteps approached. The floorboards offered no warning sound beneath his weight. "You direct lethal intention at the countertop." "I design a poison for your specific constitution." Lucien stepped into the kitchenette. He leaned his hip against the counter rim, folding his arms across his chest. He turned his attention to the rain-streaked window. "Standard strychnine fails against Avaros genetics. I suggest alternative venom." "I know an apothecary operator in Soho." "Revenge demands a personal touch. Do not outsource the labor." Rory retrieved two mismatched ceramic mugs. She brought them down against the counter. "Explain the sudden honesty. You survive terminal encounters on a weekly basis. You dodge hellhounds without seeking my physical presence." Lucien lowered his chin. He traced the rim of an empty mug with a solitary finger. "The hunting pack carried specific instructions tonight. They bypassed my transit safehouses. They struck an Earth-bound contact to draw me into the open." Rory froze. Her hand hovered above the tin canister of tea leaves. "Name the contact." "Yu-Fei Cheung." Cold dread flooded her veins. Golden Empress. Her employer. Her sanctuary. "Did they breach the restaurant?" "Yu-Fei repelled the pack. She wields enough ancestral magic to raze a city block. She triggered the alarm protocol." "She initiated contact with you." "She instructed me to contain the fallout before the fallout consumed you." Rory launched the tea canister onto the floor. Dried leaves exploded across the linoleum tiles in a green cloud. "You lied in the entryway. You sold a story of seeking shelter." Lucien focused the weight of his mismatched stare upon her bright blue eyes. "I desire no physical shelter. I desire your removal from the crossfire."

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1643
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1643
totalAiIsms40
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"weight"
count3
4
word"predator"
count1
5
word"carried the weight"
count1
6
word"encounter"
count1
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"navigated"
count2
9
word"chaotic"
count3
10
word"pulsed"
count1
11
word"imposing"
count1
12
word"chill"
count1
13
word"pulse"
count2
14
word"solitary"
count2
15
word"velvet"
count3
16
word"vibrated"
count1
17
word"ensuring"
count1
18
word"unreadable"
count1
19
word"fractured"
count1
20
word"predictable"
count1
21
word"cataloged"
count1
22
word"electric"
count1
23
word"flicked"
count1
24
word"footsteps"
count1
25
word"standard"
count1
26
word"traced"
count1
27
word"sanctuary"
count1
28
word"desire"
count2
highlights
0"echoed"
1"flickered"
2"familiar"
3"weight"
4"predator"
5"carried the weight"
6"encounter"
7"silence"
8"navigated"
9"chaotic"
10"pulsed"
11"imposing"
12"chill"
13"pulse"
14"solitary"
15"velvet"
16"vibrated"
17"ensuring"
18"unreadable"
19"fractured"
20"predictable"
21"cataloged"
22"electric"
23"flicked"
24"footsteps"
25"standard"
26"traced"
27"sanctuary"
28"desire"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences109
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences182
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1628
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
68.95% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount987
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.62
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Lucien15
Eva2
London2
Latin1
Brick1
Lane1
Empress1
Rory16
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"London"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore0.689
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1628
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences182
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs112
mean14.54
std12.33
cv0.849
sampleLengths
025
17
26
352
41
526
610
722
85
916
1011
1149
124
1328
147
1547
167
175
1852
1924
204
218
2227
238
2415
256
2644
275
284
298
3028
3135
3217
3330
345
355
3620
372
385
395
4031
4115
424
4329
4415
4513
464
4711
4819
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs153
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences182
ratio0.005
matches
0"The mismatched eyes caught the hallway lighting—one a depthless void of black, the other a striking predator amber."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount995
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.010050251256281407
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0010050251256281408
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences182
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences182
mean8.95
std5.29
cv0.592
sampleLengths
02
14
22
37
42
58
67
76
810
915
1012
1115
121
137
1410
159
1610
174
1818
195
2016
2111
2217
236
2416
2510
264
274
288
2916
307
319
3215
3312
344
357
367
375
388
3912
406
4112
4214
434
4411
459
464
478
4827
498
43.77% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.3021978021978022
totalSentences182
uniqueOpeners55
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
ratio0
97.23% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences101
matches
0"He stood tall, both gloved"
1"His voice carried a familiar"
2"Her knuckles stretched raw and"
3"She refused to break eye"
4"He pulled the heavy door"
5"He padded forward, weaving a"
6"He scratched the animal behind"
7"Her thumb found the small"
8"He planted the cane in"
9"His amber eye tracked the"
10"He moved past a stack"
11"She tilted her chin up"
12"He abandoned the cane."
13"His hands hovered inches from"
14"He pulled them back, clasping"
15"He focused his attention on"
16"She searched his face for"
17"He brought a hand forward,"
18"His thumb drifted over the"
19"She commanded her feet to"
ratio0.307
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount96
totalSentences101
matches
0"Brass bit into skin."
1"Iron scraped against a rusted"
2"A loud snap echoed down"
3"Rory pulled the warped wooden"
4"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
5"Shadows settled into the sharp"
6"The bare bulb overhead flickered,"
7"A distinct layer of rain"
8"He stood tall, both gloved"
9"His voice carried a familiar"
10"Rory clamped her fingers around"
11"Her knuckles stretched raw and"
12"Lucien shifted his weight."
13"The mismatched eyes caught the"
14"Rory inhaled the distinct sting"
15"She refused to break eye"
16"The humid air between them"
17"Lucien crossed the threshold."
18"Rory yielded, stepping back into"
19"He pulled the heavy door"
ratio0.95
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.4649%