Run: 2026-02-19-01KHVPNWEDCQ94253RN6WR4TXJ

Run Details

Duration:
2m 4s
Cost:
$0.156886
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
I twisted my shoulder away from the colossal oak trunk and shoved myself through the invisible barrier. Mud splattered against my calves. The roaring hum of London traffic vanished, replaced instantly by the suffocating silence of the Fae Grove. I caught my balance and wiped a smear of dirt from my cheek. The Heartstone rested against my collarbone. A faint inner glow radiated from the deep crimson gemstone. It pulsed with a dull rhythm beneath the silver chain. A steady thump, thump, thump against my skin. Richmond Park lay behind the boundary, but the air in this pocket dimension felt entirely different. Copper stung my tongue. Ozone prickled my arms. The atmosphere pressed down with the weight of deep water. I checked my watch. The second hand ticked backwards, hesitated, and stopped completely. Time held no authority here. A single hour wandering these ancient oak standing stones could cost me a week of perfectly fine Earth days. I needed to finish this fast. I marched deeper into the clearing. Dense clusters of wildflowers swallowed my combat boots. Foxgloves and bluebells thrived in a bizarre criss-cross pattern, blooming vibrantly without any sunlight. Bright greens and violent violets clashed against the gloom. The pendant grew warmer. Hel portals did not belong in Fae territory. The two realms mixed like oil and acid. But the small artifact never lied. My mysterious benefactor made certain of that. A job required doing, and Yu-Fei's hazard pay at the Golden Empress barely covered the cost of new boots, let alone risking my life investigating localized unnatural disasters. A rustle in the brambles halted my progress. I gripped the heavy delivery bar. A brilliant white stag stepped from behind a towering oak. Its antlers branched into intricate, glowing fractal patterns. A true Fae resident. The magnificent beast observed me with pale, intelligent eyes. It radiated an aura of ancient, untamed power. Then, the stag flinched. Black frost crept up its silver hooves. The creature opened its mouth to scream. No sound emerged. The dark ice consumed its front legs rapidly, traveling up its flank and freezing the luminous antlers into dead, brittle twigs. The stag shattered. It didn't bleed. It simply collapsed into a pile of lifeless grey ash. A cold puff of air scattered the remains across the crushed bluebells. Rotten egg stink cut through the floral perfume. Sulfur. I pulled the collar of my jacket up over my nose. The Fae naturally smelled of wet earth and sweet rot. Sulfur meant Hel. I tracked the ash cloud's trajectory. A sleek, impossibly long shadow darted between the violet blooms. It moved without disturbing a single leaf. Predators in the Fae Grove usually hunted with extravagant displays of magic, flashing vibrant colors to mesmerise their prey. This thing embraced the absolute dark. It slipped through the undergrowth with a silent, calculated efficiency. The Heartstone answered the creature's presence. The deep crimson gem against my chest flared, emitting a sharp prick of heat. Something tapped against a distant stone. A rhythmic, deliberate sequence. Clack. Clack. Clack. It sounded exactly like long nails drumming against a chalkboard. I adjusted my grip on the iron bar. "If you want the crispy duck, you missed the window." I projected my voice toward the sound. "It's cold." "Cold is entirely relative." The raspy whisper lacked a single point of origin. It drifted from the canopy above, seeped from the roots below, and brushed past my left ear. I narrowed my bright blue eyes, scanning the dense tree line. "I don't play hide and seek." "You hide from him every day, Aurora." My jaw locked. Evan. The name tasted like ash in my mouth. I kept my breathing steady. Panic served no purpose here. "Keep talking. It makes you easier to find." "We already found you." The whispering ceased. The temperature plummeted. The damp earth froze into treacherous ridges of solid mud. I exhaled, watching my breath plume into a thick white cloud. A gorgeous little old curled brown oak leaf tumbled from the darkness above. Thanks to the grove's warped time stream, it fell in extreme slow motion. It drifted a millimeter per second, suspended in the unnatural gravity. I stepped around the floating leaf. The clearing widened ahead. A perfect ring of ancient oak standing stones marked the absolute boundary of the inner grove. A thick patch of bluebells lay flattened against the mud near the closest stone. I crouched next to the crushed stems. Black frost coated the petals. The dark ice crackled, creeping along the grass like a living disease. It sought out the vibrant colors and snuffed them out in seconds. I stood up and backed away. My heel struck a solid rock. I kept my footing, but the sudden impact sent a jolt up my spine. I memorized the terrain on my last visit. That rock hadn't been there a moment ago. A low scraping sound echoed from the far side of the clearing. Stone dragging against stone. "I have the details." The voice bounced between the trees, creating a dizzying auditory illusion. "We don't do blind drops." I raised the iron bar. "Your employer values promptness, Aurora." "Yu-Fei doesn't know you." "Others know you." The voice hissed. "Others watch, Malphora." Only a specific sect of monsters used that name. Evading Evan taught me to recognize the distinct tone of a predator playing with its food. This creature fed on fear. It thrived on the slow burn of anticipation. The Heartstone scorched my chest. The thumbnail-sized gem grew painfully hot. The faint inner glow deepened into an angry, bruised purple-red, casting long shadows across my chin. A colossal shadow detached itself from a towering oak. It slithered across the forest floor, completely ignoring the laws of light. The darkness pooled beneath a massive stone marker. A pale, elongated hand reached out from behind the pillar. Long, spidery fingers tapped a steady pitter-patter against the mossy surface. "I smell the iron." The voice dropped an octave. "It burns my nose." "Come closer. Let me burn the rest of you." "So aggressive. Your Irish father taught you better." "He taught me to strike first." The hand vanished. Absolute silence returned. Even the magical hum of the Fae Grove ceased. The wildflowers stopped glowing. The unnatural darkness pressed inward, acting exactly like a physical weight pushing against my shoulders. A cold gust ripped through the trees, whipping my straight shoulder-length black hair wildly across my face. I brushed the strands away to keep my field of vision clear. I stepped sideways, putting my back against a thick oak trunk. The small crescent-shaped scar on my left wrist violently throbbed. An old instinct. A phantom memory screaming danger. A horrible squelching sound broke the quiet. Footsteps. Something heavy trudged through the mud, dragging a massive weight behind it. Squelch. Drag. Squelch. Drag. The noise circled my position. Thirty feet out. Twenty feet. I tracked the sound. The gloom hid the creature's shape. I squinted, searching for any break in the darkness. A terrifying huge ancient twisted grey Fae stone gargoyle crashed through the canopy above. I dived to the right. The statue smashed into the earth exactly where I stood a second earlier. Mud exploded outward. Sharp rock fragments pelted my heavy jacket. Dirt coated my tongue. I rolled to my feet, bringing the bar up to eye level. The squelching stopped. "You missed." "A warning." The voice came from directly above me. I looked up. A humanoid figure crouched on the lowest branch of the oak tree. Its limbs bent at horrifying, unnatural angles. The creature wore a tattered golden delivery jacket. One of ours. "Where did you get that jacket." "The previous runner." The creature tilted its head. "He failed to find the door. You brought the key." "The pendant stays with me." "The pendant opens the way to Hel. We require the gate, Aurora." The creature dropped from the branch. It landed silently, absorbing the impact with its bent legs. Two milky white eyes stared at me from a face devoid of a nose or lips. Just jagged, exposed teeth snapping in the dark. It took a methodical step forward. The black frost spread outward from its bare, clawed feet. The Heartstone reached a boiling point against my skin. The faint inner glow intensified just enough to illuminate the space between us. A gaping, jagged rift tore through the thin air behind the creature. Black frost spilled from the dimensional wound, freezing the remaining wildflowers instantly. The Hel portal. The Fae Grove screamed, emitting a high-pitched frequency that rattled my teeth. "Give me the stone." "Take it." The rift violently pulled the surrounding air inward. The creature dug its long claws into the dirt, fighting the massive suction. I slammed my boot against the nearest standing stone, anchoring myself against the unnatural gravity. The monster shrieked, lunging forward with a sickening snap of its jointed arms.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.98% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1497
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"completely"
count2
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
19.84% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1497
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"roaring"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"pulsed"
count1
3
word"weight"
count3
4
word"gloom"
count2
5
word"intricate"
count1
6
word"shattered"
count1
7
word"long shadow"
count1
8
word"calculated"
count1
9
word"rhythmic"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"scanning"
count1
12
word"treacherous"
count1
13
word"perfect"
count1
14
word"echoed"
count1
15
word"predator"
count1
16
word"anticipation"
count1
17
word"throbbed"
count1
18
word"footsteps"
count1
19
word"methodical"
count1
highlights
0"roaring"
1"silence"
2"pulsed"
3"weight"
4"gloom"
5"intricate"
6"shattered"
7"long shadow"
8"calculated"
9"rhythmic"
10"whisper"
11"scanning"
12"treacherous"
13"perfect"
14"echoed"
15"predator"
16"anticipation"
17"throbbed"
18"footsteps"
19"methodical"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences165
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences165
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences186
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1488
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount1346
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.59
worstName"Fae"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Fae"
discoveredNames
London1
Fae8
Grove4
Heartstone4
Park1
Earth1
Yu-Fei1
Golden1
Empress1
Hel3
Evan2
Black3
Clack3
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Empress"
3"Evan"
places
0"London"
1"Fae"
2"Grove"
3"Park"
4"Golden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences112
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"tasted like ash in my mouth"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1488
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences186
matches
0"used that name"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs74
mean20.11
std15.87
cv0.789
sampleLengths
039
147
234
343
437
54
657
78
86
939
104
1154
1212
1333
1458
1520
1610
173
1818
1919
204
2126
2217
237
2422
258
264
2727
2837
2926
3050
3112
3230
3316
344
3511
3610
375
384
399
4038
4127
4229
4321
4413
459
468
476
483
4960
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences165
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs207
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences186
ratio0
matches(empty)
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1354
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"angry, bruised purple-red, casting"
1"small crescent-shaped scar"
2"terrifying huge ancient twisted grey Fae"
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.027326440177252585
lyAdverbCount23
lyAdverbRatio0.016986706056129987
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences186
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences186
mean8
std4.57
cv0.571
sampleLengths
017
15
217
313
46
510
610
78
816
94
104
1110
124
139
145
1519
166
176
188
1914
209
214
228
238
246
257
2628
278
286
2910
308
314
329
338
344
357
367
373
3821
393
403
4110
4212
438
441
4511
4610
473
486
4910
40.86% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats24
diversityRatio0.3225806451612903
totalSentences186
uniqueOpeners60
86.58% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences154
matches
0"Then, the stag flinched."
1"Only a specific sect of"
2"Even the magical hum of"
3"Just jagged, exposed teeth snapping"
ratio0.026
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences154
matches
0"I twisted my shoulder away"
1"I caught my balance and"
2"It pulsed with a dull"
3"I checked my watch."
4"I needed to finish this"
5"I marched deeper into the"
6"My mysterious benefactor made certain"
7"I gripped the heavy delivery"
8"Its antlers branched into intricate,"
9"It radiated an aura of"
10"It didn't bleed."
11"It simply collapsed into a"
12"I pulled the collar of"
13"I tracked the ash cloud's"
14"It moved without disturbing a"
15"It slipped through the undergrowth"
16"It sounded exactly like long"
17"I adjusted my grip on"
18"I projected my voice toward"
19"It drifted from the canopy"
ratio0.299
24.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount134
totalSentences154
matches
0"I twisted my shoulder away"
1"Mud splattered against my calves."
2"The roaring hum of London"
3"I caught my balance and"
4"The Heartstone rested against my"
5"A faint inner glow radiated"
6"It pulsed with a dull"
7"A steady thump, thump, thump"
8"Richmond Park lay behind the"
9"Copper stung my tongue."
10"Ozone prickled my arms."
11"The atmosphere pressed down with"
12"I checked my watch."
13"The second hand ticked backwards,"
14"Time held no authority here."
15"A single hour wandering these"
16"I needed to finish this"
17"I marched deeper into the"
18"Foxgloves and bluebells thrived in"
19"The pendant grew warmer."
ratio0.87
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences154
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"A job required doing, and Yu-Fei's hazard pay at the Golden Empress barely covered the cost of new boots, let alone risking my life investigating localized unna…"
1"The Fae Grove screamed, emitting a high-pitched frequency that rattled my teeth."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"The voice hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.037
leniency0.074
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.074
88.1398%