Run: 2026-02-19-01KHVPR14R8X3WREGH0SPDM99T

Run Details

Duration:
3m 4s
Cost:
$0.174708
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid out of place. The heavy wooden door clicked open. I pulled it inward. Lucien stood on the threshold. "You replaced the brass fittings." His mismatched eyes, one amber, one pitch black, tracked the fresh metal on the frame. "You forgot how to use a telephone." "A regrettable oversight." He leaned heavy on his ivory-handled cane. The knuckles of his right hand were split wide open. Blood dripped onto my welcome mat. "May I come in?" "No." I slammed the door. The thick tip of his ivory cane wedged between the door and the frame. The heavy oak stopped dead. "Remove the stick, Lucien." "I am bleeding." Copper stung my nostrils. It overpowered the heavy cumin and turmeric scents rising from the brick-walled curry house downstairs. Recent blood. Demon blood. He rarely lost it. I eased my grip on the handle. He pushed past me. His tailored charcoal suit hung heavy with darker, wetter stains. He bypassed Eva's massive stacks of translated Latin scrolls and collapsed onto the faded velvet sofa. Ptolemy hissed from the top of a leaning book tower. "The cat still despises me." Lucien touched his ribs. He winced. "Ptolemy has good instincts." I secured the three deadbolts. Click-clack, one after the other. "Why are you here?" "A warm welcome." "Three months, Lucien. Not a single word. Now you bleed on my flatmate's couch." "I am bleeding on her horrible floral throw pillow." "Take off the jacket." I walked into the cramped bathroom. I dug through Eva's disastrous medicine cabinet. Bottles tipped over. Bandages fell into the sink. I grabbed the heavy black plastic emergency trauma kit and brought it back into the living room. Lucien sat bare-chested on the floral pillow. His pristine white cotton shirt lay ruined on the floor. Deep gashes ripped across his left shoulder. Five parallel lines. Claws. His demon half healed fast normally. These wounds stayed wide open. The edges puckered and burned with a faint green residue. "Someone used Avarosian weeping iron." I knelt on the hardwood floor beside him. I cracked the trauma kit open. "A lucky strike. Nothing more." "Weeping iron prevents cellular regeneration. You need holy water to clear the residue. Eva keeps a stash in the umbrella stand." I fetched the small glass vial from the hallway. I returned to his side and poured out a clean white cotton bathroom towel. "This will sting." "I have endured worse." I pressed the soaked towel against his shoulder. Lucien hissed through his teeth. His back arched. Muscles corded along his stomach and chest. His pallid skin felt burning hot to the touch. The green residue sizzled. White smoke curled toward the ceiling. The smell of rotten eggs mixed with the heavy cumin from downstairs. "Camden is neutral territory." I wiped away the last of the poison. "Syndicates do not carry weeping iron unless they plan an assassination." "The political landscape shifted during my absence." "You angered the wrong prince." "I merely renegotiated territorial lines." I grabbed a large curved silver suturing needle from the kit. I threaded it with thick black nylon cord. "Hold still." I pierced his skin. He remained completely still. I pulled the thread tight. The physical act of sewing him back together grounded me. It kept my hands from shaking. "You promised you stopped working with the syndicates, Luc." "I stopped taking their gold." I tied off the first knot. Snip. I started on the second claw mark. "I never said I stopped visiting their dens." "Semantics." "Survival." "Get out." "Rory." "I mean it. I left Cardiff to escape men who used their fists to solve arguments. I do not need a magical equivalent." I rubbed the small crescent-shaped scar on my left wrist with my forearm. My childhood accident scar always ached when my blood pressure spiked. "You swore Avaros business would never cross my doorstep." "It has not." "You drip demon blood onto my floorboards." "I came to warn you." His amber eye locked onto mine. "They know about the Golden Empress." I pulled the second knot tight. "Yu-Fei?" "Safe. For now." He leaned forward. His breath ghosted across my cheek. "They left a message on your delivery scooter. They used a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife to pin it to the leather seat." A chill ran down my spine. "Very specific hardware." "It matches the exact description of the one you kept on your bedside table." "I pawned that blade months ago." "They bought it back." I finished the last stitch. I snipped the black cord. I ripped off the latex gloves and threw them onto the coffee table. I paced the narrow stretch of floor between the bookshelf and the sofa. Flip-flop. My slippers slapped against the hardwood. Eva left her research scribbles scattered everywhere. I kicked a stray parchment out of the way. "You led them to me." "I intercepted them at Camden." He dabbed the towel against his split lip. "I sought to stop them from reaching you. They slipped away. I came straight here." "You lied to me." "I omitted certain logistical realities." "Bullshit." "Rory, listen to me." "No." I stopped pacing. "You vanished. You left me staring at an empty flat with a half-empty bottle of wine and a note. Three months of absolute silence." "I kept you safe." "I kept myself safe." "Evan found you." The name brought sheer ice to the room. My hand twitched toward my wrist. "How." "A private investigator." Lucien shifted on the sofa. "Your former partner paid quite well to scour East London. The investigator found your flat. He found your delivery route for Yu-Fei." "I saw no one." "I handled the investigator before he reported back." "And Evan?" "Breathing through a tube in a secure ward." I closed my eyes. A terrible, cold relief washed over me. I hated him for providing it. I hated myself for welcoming it. "You should have warned me." "You would have ran." "Of course I would have ran!" I grabbed a heavy brass candelabra from the table. "You beat my ex-boyfriend half to death. You triggered a turf war with demon syndicates." "I protect what is mine." "I am not your property." He stood up. The ruined jacket dropped to the floor. He crossed the distance between us before I drew another breath. His movements blurred. True demon speed. "Never property." His voice was a low rumble against my ear. "Always my priority." His uninjured hand reached up. Pale fingers brushed my straight shoulder-length black hair behind my ear. His thumb traced my jawline. The scent of him clouded my judgment. Ozone, expensive amber cologne, fresh copper blood. "Stop." "Stop what." "Pretending this is easy." "Nothing about you is easy, Malphora." He used the Avarosian name he gave me. Bringer of dawn. "You infuriate me. You take low-paying delivery jobs to spite my financial offers. You live in a shoebox above a spicy kitchen." "I like the kitchen." "The garlic ruins my clothes." "Then stop coming over." "I wanted to." He stood close. Too close. His height forced me to tilt my head up. His mismatched eyes searched mine for a sign of rejection. I offered none. My fingers curled into his ruined white shirt. I pulled him the rest of the way down. His mouth felt bruised. His kiss felt punishing. Teeth and heat and the sharp taste of copper. My hands traced his broad shoulders. He hissed as I brushed his open wounds. "Apologies." "Keep your hands right there." He backed me up against the door frame. He pressed his body against mine. The cold brass of the deadbolts dug into my spine. Every argument, every bitter thought from the last three months dissolved into raw friction. His hands slid down my waist. He gripped my hips tight. Wood splintered against my back. The heavy door buckled inward under a massive impact. Lucien shoved me hard against the adjacent brick wall. A massive jagged serrated black Avarosian iron war spear pierced straight through the center of the wood. It stabbed the exact spot where my chest rested a second ago. Splinters rained onto the floorboards. Ptolemy let out a feral shriek and dove under the sofa. "They followed you." I grabbed the nearest heavy iron fireplace poker. "Impossible." Lucien drew the thin silver blade hidden inside his cane. He stepped in front of me. A low guttural laugh vibrated through the cracked wood. "Nothing is impossible, half-breed." The voice on the other side sounded like grinding stones. "Open the door." Heavy iron-clad fists pounded against the wood. The hinges screamed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
93.10% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1449
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
65.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1449
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"velvet"
count1
1
word"pristine"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"political landscape"
count1
4
word"chill"
count1
5
word"down my spine"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"traced"
count2
8
word"vibrated"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"pristine"
2"stomach"
3"political landscape"
4"chill"
5"down my spine"
6"silence"
7"traced"
8"vibrated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences131
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences131
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences218
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1436
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount920
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.76
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva3
Latin1
Avarosian2
Lucien7
persons
0"Eva"
1"Latin"
2"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like grinding stones"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1436
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences218
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs129
mean11.13
std13.96
cv1.254
sampleLengths
022
15
215
37
43
523
64
71
823
94
103
1174
125
136
144
1510
164
173
1814
199
204
2187
225
2314
245
2521
2623
273
284
2954
304
318
3211
337
345
355
3619
372
3829
399
405
4114
428
431
441
452
461
4723
4824
499
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs151
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences218
ratio0
matches(empty)
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount928
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"heavy black plastic emergency"
1"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount9
adverbRatio0.009698275862068966
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.003232758620689655
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences218
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences218
mean6.59
std4.44
cv0.674
sampleLengths
07
16
24
35
45
515
67
73
87
910
106
114
121
134
1414
155
164
173
184
1915
202
212
224
237
244
2510
2616
2710
285
294
302
314
325
335
344
353
3614
379
384
396
407
413
425
4317
447
4510
467
473
481
496
45.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats23
diversityRatio0.3348623853211009
totalSentences218
uniqueOpeners73
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences124
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount75
totalSentences124
matches
0"I pulled it inward."
1"His mismatched eyes, one amber,"
2"He leaned heavy on his"
3"I slammed the door."
4"It overpowered the heavy cumin"
5"He rarely lost it."
6"I eased my grip on"
7"He pushed past me."
8"His tailored charcoal suit hung"
9"He bypassed Eva's massive stacks"
10"I secured the three deadbolts."
11"I walked into the cramped"
12"I dug through Eva's disastrous"
13"I grabbed the heavy black"
14"His pristine white cotton shirt"
15"His demon half healed fast"
16"I knelt on the hardwood"
17"I cracked the trauma kit"
18"I fetched the small glass"
19"I returned to his side"
ratio0.605
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount118
totalSentences124
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid out"
1"The heavy wooden door clicked"
2"I pulled it inward."
3"Lucien stood on the threshold."
4"His mismatched eyes, one amber,"
5"He leaned heavy on his"
6"The knuckles of his right"
7"Blood dripped onto my welcome"
8"I slammed the door."
9"The thick tip of his"
10"The heavy oak stopped dead."
11"Copper stung my nostrils."
12"It overpowered the heavy cumin"
13"He rarely lost it."
14"I eased my grip on"
15"He pushed past me."
16"His tailored charcoal suit hung"
17"He bypassed Eva's massive stacks"
18"Ptolemy hissed from the top"
19"Lucien touched his ribs."
ratio0.952
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences124
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.0617%