Run: 2026-02-19-01KHVPRP3HT702CC3YPVE2HCC3

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Yellow police tape slashed a bright diagonal line across the rusted iron gates of the abandoned Camden Tube station. Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the plastic barrier, her boots crunching over decades of undisturbed subterranean grit. The air down deep in the tunnels smelled alien. Ozone and scorched copper masked the expected dampness of deep London dirt. Quinn squared her shoulders, her military precision dictating her rigid posture as she navigated the descended access stairwell. Flickering halogen work lights cast aggressive, elongated shadows against the curved ceramic tiles from the nineteen-nineties. She smoothed a stray strand of her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair flat against her scalp. Her sharp jaw set as the platform came into view. Sergeant Davies stood near the platform edge, a clipboard pressed against his uniform chest. He gestured to the center of the cracked concrete expanse. An opaque plastic tarp covered an irregular lump. Quinn approached the center of the platform. She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. Three hours had passed since the emergency switchboard routed the initial anonymous call. Davies flipped a page on his clipboard. "Standard squatter dispute. Gangs use these old tunnels to move product. Looks like a transaction fractured. Victim took a knife, and the assailant torched the remains to ruin our forensics gathering." Quinn crouched next to the tarp. She snapped on a pair of blue nitrile gloves and peeled back the opaque plastic. The victim lay curled in a fetal arrangement. Flames spared the clothing—a heavy wool overcoat, pressed trousers, polished oxfords remained pristine. Deep, geometric burns scarred the exposed flesh at the hands and neck. Concentric circles seared through the epidermis down to the muscle tissue. Not a single thread of the wool collar showed heat damage. Quinn stood. She swept her brown eyes across the platform, tracking the dust patterns coating the ground. "Fire climbs." Quinn pointed a gloved finger at the untouched overcoat. "Flames consume fabric before melting subcutaneous fat. We have no splash pattern on the concrete. Acid throws droplets upon impact. These wounds are surgical. Clean." Davies clicked his pen. "Chemical reaction from a bad batch of amphetamines. Blew up in his face." "Drug labs require equipment. Beakers. Heat sources. We stand in an empty void." Quinn paced the perimeter of the tarp. She scanned the floor, finding no footprints originating from the tunnels leading back to the active Northern Line. The accumulated dust lay undisturbed in a ten-foot radius around the victim, save for the dragging marks left by the uniform officers. A young woman stood near the stairwell, flanked by a bored-looking constable. The woman clutched a worn leather satchel full of heavy, awkward shapes against her chest. She shifted her weight, tucking a strand of curly red hair behind her left ear. Green eyes darted behind round glasses. Freckles stood out stark against her pale, subterranean-lit complexion. Quinn tipped her chin toward the girl. "Identify the bystander." "Caught her loitering near the surface access grate." Davies scoffed, kicking a crushed beer can across the tracks. "Claims she heard an explosion and came down to investigate." Quinn approached the young woman. The girl gripped the leather strap of her satchel tight enough to turn her knuckles white. "Name." Quinn demanded. "Eva. Eva Kowalski." "A concerned citizen wandering abandoned infrastructure." Quinn stopped two feet away from Eva, invading her personal space to establish uncontested authority. "I conduct research." Eva cleared her throat. "British Museum. Restricted archives. I hold a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford." "An Oxford degree fails to explain your presence in a sealed access tunnel at two in the morning, Ms. Kowalski." Quinn let the silence stretch. The tremor in Eva’s hands betrayed her panic. "Fascinating hours for historical documentation." Quinn returned her attention to the body. Something glinted near the victim’s outstretched left hand. She knelt and plucked a small object from a crack in the soot-stained concrete. A small brass compass rested heavy in her palm. A thick patina of verdigris obscured the outer edges, but the face remained legible. Deep, intricate protective sigils scarred the brass casing. They shared zero resemblance with standard cardinal direction markers. Quinn rotated the instrument. The needle jumped. It spun in a frenetic circle before snapping hard to the right. It pointed straight at a solid, bricked-up archway thirty yards down the platform. "Drop piece." Davies stepped closer, shining his heavy tactical flashlight on the brass instrument. "Junkie pawn fodder. The needle is snapped." Quinn shifted her stance ninety degrees. The needle remained locked on the brick wall. She pivoted a full hundred and eighty degrees. The needle fought the movement, trembling as it forced itself back to align with the blocked archway. "Compasses track magnetic north." Quinn held the device steady. "The Northern Line runs south of us. All the electrical cabling, the active tracks, the iron deposits—they sit behind me. This instrument tracks a different anomaly." "Magnets in the bricks." Davies gave a dismissive grunt. "Old construction wiring." Quinn ran her thumb over the etched face. The ambient room temperature plummeted against her cheeks. The air tasted metallic near the object. A memory hijacked her focus—DS Morris bleeding out on a warehouse floor three years ago, surrounded by impossible, frost-covered symbols drawn in his own blood. The department brass called it a syndicate hit. Quinn knew otherwise. She walked toward the bricked-up archway. Her boots left sharp, fresh prints in the ancient dust. The needle inside the casing vibrated, transmitting a low, aggressive hum through the brass into her palm. Eva hurried forward, her leather satchel slapping against her hip. "You must avoid that wall. The structural integrity risks immediate collapse." Quinn stopped a foot from the barrier. The compass needle strained against its central pin, vibrating with frantic energy. She examined the floor directly beneath the archway. A crescent-shaped groove scored the concrete, leading from the solid brick face outward, mimicking the exact trajectory of a heavy door swinging on a drop-hinge. "Bricks fail to swing open." Quinn traced the groove with the steel toe of her boot. "Observe the dust layer. Disturbed within the last six hours. A crowd walked through this space." She turned back to the victim. She analyzed the dragging marks beneath the tarp. The perfect concentric burns. The sheer lack of entry footprints from the stairwell. Quinn retraced the distance from the wall to the body. She found a second anomaly lodged in the grating near the victim's heel. She pried it out. A small piece of ivory, carved with a crude set of intersecting, ritualistic lines. A smooth bone token. Eva gasped. She slapped a hand over her mouth, her green eyes wide behind the round glass lenses. Quinn held the bone token up beneath the halogen light. "Identify this object, Ms. Kowalski." "It constitutes an antiquity." Eva stepped back, hitting the barrier of the uniform constable behind her. "A replica. Simple scrimshaw." "You lie with zero conviction." Quinn placed the bone token inside a plastic evidence bag. She dropped the brass compass into another bag, noting the needle still pulled hard toward the brick surface. Davies pinched the bridge of his nose. "Boss, we have a dead body. We need to process the splatter and bag the deceased. Stop indulging the museum clerk." "The victim never fell." Quinn projected her voice through the cavernous space, forcing Davies to abandon his clipboard. "Analyze the posture. The orientation of the limbs. He crawled. He sustained the thermal injuries over there." Quinn pointed at the solid brick wall. "He dragged himself backward, away from the archway." Quinn traced the imaginary line with her hand. "He dropped the compass tool. He dropped the entry token. The assailant attacked him elsewhere." Davies stared at the bricked-over tunnel. "City planners sealed that wall during the Blitz. Zero architecture exists behind it." Quinn pulled a high-powered tactical flashlight from her belt. She aimed the tight, blinding beam at the seam where the brick met the original tile of the archway. The mortar lacked the porous texture of cement. It possessed a strange, iridescent sheen, catching the light like crushed beetle shells. "My partner died three years ago inside a warehouse containing zero physical exits," Quinn addressed the blank wall, though she targeted her words at the terrified researcher. "The incident report blamed Russian organized crime. Syndicates leave shell casings. They discard footprints. They refrain from locking victims inside sealed, windowless rooms with mid-July frostbite." Eva tucked her curly red hair behind her left ear. Her breathing hitched, echoing loud and uneven in the silence of the underground. "You understand the nature of this location." Quinn turned her intense gaze on Eva, piecing the fragments together. The heavy satchel of archaic literature. The protective signs covering the compass facade. The entry token carved from human bone. "This station functions as a thoroughfare. A market." Eva squeezed her eyes shut. She gripped the leather flap of her satchel tightly. Quinn stepped into Eva's line of sight. "The needle points to a rift. A doorway opening into a geographical space Davies cannot perceive. The assailant attacked the victim inside that concealed space. The victim crawled back out before the door shut. That explains the terminal cutoff of the burn marks without surrounding environmental damage." Davies laughed, a harsh, dismissive sound bounding off the tiles. "Magic doorways. I will type that into the official report. Step away from the wall, Detective." Quinn ignored him. She never broke eye contact with Eva. She understood the footprint patterns now. The hidden layers of London overlapping with the mundane architecture. "An underground black market." Quinn outlined the facts, watching the blood drain from Eva's freckled face. "Selling illicit goods. Banned substances. Information. The dust trails reveal heavy foot traffic dating back exactly one week. Nothing older. A mobile settlement." Eva opened her eyes. She released a shaky, uneven breath. "A market that moves on a strict schedule to avoid detection," Quinn continued, tapping the plastic evidence bag against her thigh. "Using temporary entrances. Requiring this specific bone token to grant entry."

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.432
leniency0.864
rawRatio0.053
effectiveRatio0.045
97.05% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1697
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
35.18% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1697
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"navigated"
count1
1
word"standard"
count2
2
word"fractured"
count1
3
word"pristine"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"stark"
count1
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"fascinating"
count1
9
word"intricate"
count1
10
word"pawn"
count1
11
word"magnetic"
count1
12
word"etched"
count1
13
word"vibrated"
count1
14
word"traced"
count2
15
word"analyzed"
count1
16
word"perfect"
count1
17
word"echoing"
count1
18
word"facade"
count1
highlights
0"navigated"
1"standard"
2"fractured"
3"pristine"
4"scanned"
5"weight"
6"stark"
7"silence"
8"fascinating"
9"intricate"
10"pawn"
11"magnetic"
12"etched"
13"vibrated"
14"traced"
15"analyzed"
16"perfect"
17"echoing"
18"facade"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences119
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences119
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences144
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1679
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
10.41% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions64
wordCount1182
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.79
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Tube1
Harlow1
Quinn33
London2
Davies10
Northern1
Line1
Eva13
Morris1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Davies"
3"Eva"
4"Morris"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.104
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences101
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1679
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences144
matches(empty)
97.67% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean30.53
std15.01
cv0.492
sampleLengths
057
159
232
330
438
521
655
717
836
917
1060
1157
1210
1328
1421
153
163
1721
1821
1938
2029
2140
2232
2321
2439
2535
2612
2759
2833
2921
3052
3132
3227
3327
3418
3518
3615
3720
3833
3928
4035
417
4231
4319
4449
4553
4623
4746
4814
4954
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs192
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences144
ratio0.014
matches
0"Flames spared the clothing—a heavy wool overcoat, pressed trousers, polished oxfords remained pristine."
1"A memory hijacked her focus—DS Morris bleeding out on a warehouse floor three years ago, surrounded by impossible, frost-covered symbols drawn in his own blood."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1198
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"pale, subterranean-lit complexion."
1"impossible, frost-covered symbols"
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.010851419031719533
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005008347245409015
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences144
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences144
mean11.66
std6.71
cv0.575
sampleLengths
019
117
29
312
418
516
615
710
814
910
108
117
1210
1313
147
1531
166
1715
188
1913
2012
2111
2211
232
2415
2511
2625
274
2813
2920
3018
3122
3212
3315
3415
356
369
377
383
3918
4010
415
4216
433
443
4521
467
4714
4825
498
51.39% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3541666666666667
totalSentences144
uniqueOpeners51
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences116
matches
0"She smoothed a stray strand"
1"Her sharp jaw set as"
2"He gestured to the center"
3"She checked the worn leather"
4"She snapped on a pair"
5"She swept her brown eyes"
6"She scanned the floor, finding"
7"She shifted her weight, tucking"
8"She knelt and plucked a"
9"They shared zero resemblance with"
10"It spun in a frenetic"
11"It pointed straight at a"
12"She pivoted a full hundred"
13"She walked toward the bricked-up"
14"Her boots left sharp, fresh"
15"She examined the floor directly"
16"She turned back to the"
17"She analyzed the dragging marks"
18"She found a second anomaly"
19"She pried it out."
ratio0.25
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount108
totalSentences116
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under"
1"The air down deep in"
2"Ozone and scorched copper masked"
3"Quinn squared her shoulders, her"
4"She smoothed a stray strand"
5"Her sharp jaw set as"
6"Sergeant Davies stood near the"
7"He gestured to the center"
8"An opaque plastic tarp covered"
9"Quinn approached the center of"
10"She checked the worn leather"
11"Davies flipped a page on"
12"Quinn crouched next to the"
13"She snapped on a pair"
14"The victim lay curled in"
15"Flames spared the clothing—a heavy"
16"She swept her brown eyes"
17"Quinn pointed a gloved finger"
18"Davies clicked his pen."
19"Quinn paced the perimeter of"
ratio0.931
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
59.09% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Quinn demanded (demand)"
1"Quinn addressed (address)"
2"Quinn outlined (outline)"
3"Quinn continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.091
leniency0.182
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.182
81.2931%