Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPBCET2MF2AVAZD628ZMHR

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Duration:
18.8s
Cost:
$0.000590
Provider:
Mistral

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The door creaked open, revealing a sliver of warm, cluttered light from within. Aurora Carter, her bright blue eyes wide with surprise, stood in the doorway of her flat above Silas' bar. She had been expecting someone else—anyone else—but not him. Not Lucien Moreau, the Frenchman with heterochromatic eyes that held the weight of a thousand unsaid words. Lucien stood on the threshold, his slicked-back platinum blond hair catching the dim glow of the hallway light. He was dressed in one of his signature tailored charcoal suits, the ivory-handled cane in his hand a stark contrast to the darkness of his attire. His amber and black eyes flicked over her, taking in the sight of her straight shoulder-length black hair, the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, and the way her fingers tightened around the edge of the door. "Lucien," Aurora said, her voice cool and measured, though her heart pounded in her chest. "What are you doing here?" Lucien's gaze didn't waver. "Aurora," he acknowledged, his voice smooth and accented. "May I come in?" She hesitated, her mind racing. The last time they had seen each other, things had been left unresolved, words hanging in the air between them like a storm waiting to break. But the night was cold, and the flat was warm, and despite everything, she couldn't bring herself to shut the door in his face. "Fine," she said, stepping back to let him in. "But make it quick. I have work in the morning." Lucien nodded, stepping inside. The flat was small, cramped with books and scrolls and research notes that covered every available surface. A tabby cat, Ptolemy, lounged on the armchair, his green eyes watching Lucien with a mix of curiosity and suspicion. Aurora closed the door behind him, sliding the three deadbolts into place. The sound echoed in the small space, a reminder of the barriers that had been erected between them. "So," she said, turning to face him. "What brings you to my doorstep, Lucien?" Lucien leaned on his cane, his gaze never leaving hers. "I needed to see you," he said simply. "There are things we need to discuss." Aurora crossed her arms, her fingers brushing against the scar on her wrist. "We said everything that needed to be said the last time we spoke," she reminded him. Lucien's expression softened. "Did we?" he asked. "Because from where I stand, there's still a lot left unsaid." Aurora looked away, her eyes landing on a stack of books on the coffee table. She had been trying to forget the past, to move on from the hurt and the confusion. But Lucien's presence in her flat was a stark reminder that some things couldn't be so easily dismissed. "Fine," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "What do you want to talk about?" Lucien took a step closer, his cane clicking against the wooden floor. "Us," he said. "What happened between us. Why you left." Aurora's heart skipped a beat. She had run from Evan, from the abuse and the control, but she had also run from Lucien, from the intensity of their connection and the fear of what it could become. She had told herself it was for the best, that it was better to cut ties than to risk getting hurt again. But now, standing in front of him, she wasn't so sure. "I had my reasons," she said, her voice steady despite the turmoil inside her. Lucien nodded, his expression unreadable. "I know you did," he said. "But I think it's time we talked about them. Really talked about them." Aurora looked at him, really looked at him, and saw the vulnerability in his eyes, the unspoken fear that she would shut him out again. She took a deep breath, steeling herself for what was to come. "Alright," she said. "But not here. Not in the flat. Let's go somewhere we can talk properly." Lucien's eyes widened slightly in surprise, but he nodded. "As you wish," he said. Aurora grabbed her coat from the hook by the door, her fingers brushing against the familiar fabric. She had come a long way since she had first arrived in London, since she had first met Lucien. She was stronger now, more confident in who she was and what she wanted. And she was ready to face the past, to confront the demons that had haunted her for so long. She turned to Lucien, her eyes meeting his. "Come on," she said. "Let's go." Lucien followed her out of the flat, his cane clicking against the stairs as they descended. The night air was cold, but Aurora barely noticed. She was too focused on the man beside her, on the words that needed to be said, on the past that needed to be laid to rest. They walked in silence, the streets of London passing by in a blur. Aurora led them to a small park, a quiet oasis in the heart of the city. They sat on a bench, the cold metal seeping through their coats, and turned to face each other. "Alright," Aurora said, her voice steady. "Talk." Lucien looked at her, his heterochromatic eyes reflecting the moonlight. "I'm sorry," he said, his voice barely above a whisper. "For everything. For not being there when you needed me, for not understanding, for not fighting harder for you." Aurora's heart ached at his words, at the raw honesty in his voice. She had been so focused on her own pain, on her own fears, that she had forgotten that Lucien had been hurting too. "I'm sorry too," she said, her voice soft. "For running, for not talking to you, for not giving you a chance to explain." Lucien reached out, his fingers brushing against hers. "I understand why you did it," he said. "I understand why you ran. But I need you to know that I'm here now. That I'm not going anywhere." Aurora looked at him, really looked at him, and saw the sincerity in his eyes, the depth of his feelings. She had been so afraid of getting hurt again, of opening herself up to pain and heartache. But she realized now that she had been hurting herself by keeping him at a distance, by denying the connection that had always been there between them. "I'm scared," she admitted, her voice barely above a whisper. "Scared of getting hurt, scared of letting you in. But I'm also scared of losing you, of throwing away something that could be amazing." Lucien's fingers tightened around hers, his thumb tracing circles on her skin. "I'm scared too," he said. "But I think we owe it to ourselves to try. To give this thing between us a chance." Aurora looked at him, her heart pounding in her chest. She had spent so long running from her past, from her fears, from the possibility of love. But now, sitting beside Lucien in the quiet of the night, she realized that she was ready to face it all. Ready to take a chance, to open her heart, to let herself feel again. "Alright," she said, her voice steady. "Let's try." Lucien's eyes lit up, a small smile playing at the corners of his mouth. "Really?" he asked. Aurora nodded, her own smile mirroring his. "Really," she said. They sat there for a while, their fingers entwined, their hearts beating in sync. The night was cold, but they were warm, wrapped up in each other, in the promise of a new beginning. Eventually, Lucien stood, pulling Aurora to her feet. "Come on," he said. "Let's go back to your flat. We have a lot to talk about." Aurora nodded, her heart light with the possibility of what was to come. She took Lucien's hand, their fingers intertwining, and together they walked back into the night, ready to face whatever the future held.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said simply [simply]"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.581
leniency1
rawRatio0.04
effectiveRatio0.04
66.01% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1324
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count3
1
adverb"really"
count5
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
1"really"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
24.47% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1324
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"stark"
count2
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"measured"
count1
4
word"racing"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"reminder"
count2
7
word"whisper"
count3
8
word"skipped a beat"
count1
9
word"intensity"
count1
10
word"unreadable"
count1
11
word"unspoken"
count1
12
word"familiar"
count1
13
word"silence"
count1
14
word"tracing"
count1
15
word"pounding"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"stark"
2"flicked"
3"measured"
4"racing"
5"echoed"
6"reminder"
7"whisper"
8"skipped a beat"
9"intensity"
10"unreadable"
11"unspoken"
12"familiar"
13"silence"
14"tracing"
15"pounding"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
1"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences85
matches
0"e with surprise"
1"y in surprise"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences85
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1318
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions25
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
41.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1055
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.18
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Lucien23
Moreau1
Frenchman1
Ptolemy1
Aurora17
Evan1
London2
persons
0"Carter"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Aurora"
5"Evan"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.41
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1318
matches(empty)
70.51% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences104
matches
0"notes that covered"
1"forgotten that Lucien"
2"realized that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean32.95
std18.96
cv0.575
sampleLengths
058
182
220
316
455
519
641
730
814
925
1029
1118
1250
1316
1422
1570
1614
1724
1837
1917
2014
2169
2214
2352
2447
257
2639
2736
2823
2936
3064
3134
3235
3362
348
3517
3610
3734
3825
3935
92.88% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences85
matches
0"was dressed"
1"been left"
2"been erected"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs184
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences104
ratio0.01
matches
0"She had been expecting someone else—anyone else—but not him."
98.71% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount217
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount9
adverbRatio0.041474654377880185
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.004608294930875576
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean12.67
std7.25
cv0.572
sampleLengths
013
119
29
317
418
526
638
715
85
94
108
114
125
1326
1424
159
1610
174
1817
1920
2012
2118
227
237
2410
258
267
2713
2816
293
304
3111
3215
3317
3418
359
367
3712
383
397
405
4132
4222
4311
4414
455
466
4713
4825
4912
47.12% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.2980769230769231
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners31
45.05% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"Eventually, Lucien stood, pulling Aurora"
ratio0.014
57.84% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences74
matches
0"She had been expecting someone"
1"He was dressed in one"
2"His amber and black eyes"
3"he acknowledged, his voice smooth"
4"She hesitated, her mind racing."
5"she said, stepping back to"
6"she said, turning to face"
7"he said simply"
8"she reminded him"
9"She had been trying to"
10"she said, her voice barely"
11"She had run from Evan,"
12"She had told herself it"
13"she said, her voice steady"
14"She took a deep breath,"
15"She had come a long"
16"She was stronger now, more"
17"She turned to Lucien, her"
18"She was too focused on"
19"They walked in silence, the"
ratio0.405
20.81% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences74
matches
0"The door creaked open, revealing"
1"Aurora Carter, her bright blue"
2"She had been expecting someone"
3"Lucien stood on the threshold,"
4"He was dressed in one"
5"His amber and black eyes"
6"Aurora said, her voice cool"
7"Lucien's gaze didn't waver."
8"he acknowledged, his voice smooth"
9"She hesitated, her mind racing."
10"The last time they had"
11"she said, stepping back to"
12"Lucien nodded, stepping inside."
13"The flat was small, cramped"
14"A tabby cat, Ptolemy, lounged"
15"Aurora closed the door behind"
16"The sound echoed in the"
17"she said, turning to face"
18"Lucien leaned on his cane,"
19"he said simply"
ratio0.878
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"But she realized now that she had been hurting herself by keeping him at a distance, by denying the connection that had always been there between them."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount9
matches
0"he acknowledged, his voice smooth and accented"
1"she said, turning to face him"
2"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
3"she said, her voice steady despite the turmoil inside her"
4"Aurora said, her voice steady"
5"he said, his voice barely above a whisper"
6"she said, her voice soft"
7"she admitted, her voice barely above a whisper"
8"she said, her voice steady"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags23
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he acknowledged (acknowledge)"
1"she admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.535
leniency1
rawRatio0.087
effectiveRatio0.087
77.7019%