Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPBCEYXJEPKPN89DFEVR8G

Run Details

Duration:
38.9s
Cost:
$0.003901
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon raven flickered like a dying thought as Rory pushed through the door of *The Raven’s Nest*, the evening’s chill clinging to her coat. Inside, the air smelled of aged whiskey and something sharper—polish, maybe, or the faint metallic tang of old secrets. She shook the rain from her hair and scanned the room. Most of the usuals were there: a pair of students hunched over textbooks in the corner, a man in a rumpled suit nursing a gin, and Silas behind the bar, wiping a glass with the methodical patience of someone who’d done it a thousand times before. She slid onto a stool, the wood creaking under her weight. “You’re running low on the good stuff again.” Silas didn’t look up. “Depends on what you call *good*.” “Anything that doesn’t taste like turpentine.” A ghost of a smile touched his lips. He reached beneath the counter and set a bottle of Japanese whisky between them, the amber liquid catching the dim light. “Busy night?” “Same as always.” She rolled her shoulders, the ache of another twelve-hour shift on the bike settling into her bones. “Cheung’s got me running all over the city like his personal courier service.” Silas poured two fingers into a glass and slid it toward her. “He pays well, at least.” “Barely enough to cover the rent you charge me.” “Consider it a friend’s discount.” She took a sip, let the burn settle. “Friends don’t extort friends.” Before he could retort, the door swung open again, letting in a gust of wind and the sharp laugh of a woman. Rory didn’t turn—until the voice cut through the hum of the bar like a blade. *“Oh, for God’s sake, this place hasn’t changed at all.”* The glass slipped in Rory’s grip. She caught it before it hit the counter, but not before a splash of whisky darkened the wood. Silas’ eyebrows lifted. “You know her?” Rory didn’t answer. She didn’t need to. The woman had already spotted her, her stride faltering for half a second before she recovered, smoothing her coat with the easy confidence of someone who’d spent years perfecting the art of appearing unfazed. Eva. Not the Eva from Rory’s memories—the one with scraped knees and a gap-toothed grin, the one who’d climbed trees and sworn like a sailor and promised they’d never be stuck in this bloody city. This Eva wore a tailored blazer, her dark hair pulled into a sleek chignon, her nails painted a shade of red that probably cost more than Rory’s weekly wages. A gold watch glinted at her wrist. “Rory,” Eva said, like it was the most natural thing in the world. Like five years hadn’t passed. Like Rory hadn’t stopped answering her calls after the third voicemail begging her to *just come home*. Rory wiped her palm on her jeans. “Long time.” Eva slid onto the stool beside her, close enough that Rory caught the scent of her perfume—something floral, expensive. “You look…” A pause. A flicker of something unreadable in her dark eyes. “Different.” “So do you.” A laugh, bright and hollow. “I’ll take that as a compliment.” Silas cleared his throat. “Drink?” Eva didn’t spare him a glance. “Vodka martini. Dirty. Three olives.” He nodded and moved down the bar, giving them the illusion of privacy. Eva leaned in, her voice dropping. “I heard you were in London, but I didn’t believe it. Thought you’d have gone further by now.” Rory swirled her whisky. “Didn’t have the funds for a one-way ticket to Mars.” “You always had a flair for the dramatic.” Eva’s fingers tapped against the counter, restless. “How’s your dad?” “Same. Still thinks the law is the only thing worth a damn.” “And your mum?” “Retired. Gardening, I think.” Rory took another sip, the liquor doing little to dull the edge of the past rising between them. “You’re still with the firm, then?” Eva’s lips curved. “Partner, actually.” Of course she was. Eva had always been the one with the plan, the one who knew exactly where she was going. Rory had just been along for the ride—until she wasn’t. “Congratulations,” Rory said. “Thanks.” Eva’s gaze flicked to Rory’s hands—the chipped nail polish, the scar on her wrist, the way her fingers tightened around the glass. “What about you? Still…” She gestured vaguely. “Doing whatever it is you do?” “Delivering takeout. Living above a bar. The dream, really.” Eva’s smile faltered. “You used to talk about travelling. Writing. Not… this.” Rory set her glass down a little harder than necessary. “People change.” “Do they?” Eva’s voice was quiet now, the playful edge gone. “Or do they just run out of excuses?” The words hit like a slap. Rory turned to face her fully, the old anger flaring. “You want to talk about excuses? You’re the one who—” *“Here you go.”* Silas set Eva’s martini in front of her, the olives bobbing in the cloudy liquid. He didn’t linger, but Rory caught the way his gaze flicked between them, assessing. Eva took a slow sip, her composure slipping back into place like armour. “I was worried about you, you know. After you left.” “Funny way of showing it.” “I called. I *tried*.” “Once. After three months.” Eva’s jaw tightened. “You think I didn’t have my own things to deal with?” Rory laughed, sharp and humourless. “Right. Because Eva Morgan’s world is *so* much harder than everyone else’s.” For a second, something raw flashed in Eva’s eyes—something that looked suspiciously like hurt. But then it was gone, replaced by that familiar, infuriating calm. “You’re still mad.” “No shit.” Eva exhaled, long and slow. “I didn’t come here to fight.” “Then why *did* you come?” Eva hesitated. Her fingers traced the rim of her glass, the gold of her watch catching the light. “I saw your name. On a delivery slip, of all things. *Golden Empress*. I thought…” She trailed off, shook her head. “It doesn’t matter.” Rory’s chest ached. “You thought what?” Eva met her gaze, and for the first time, Rory saw the cracks—the exhaustion in the lines around her eyes, the way her shoulders weren’t quite as straight as they used to be. “I thought maybe you’d want to know I’m getting married.” The words hung there, heavy and final. Rory should’ve been happy for her. Should’ve smiled, toasted, played the part of the old friend. But all she could think about was the last time they’d seen each other—Eva standing in the doorway of Rory’s flat in Cardiff, her face pale, her voice trembling as she said, *You can’t just leave like this. Not again.* Rory had left anyway. She reached for her whisky. “Congratulations.” Eva studied her for a long moment. Then, quietly: “You could’ve come back, you know. At any point.” Rory didn’t answer. The weight of everything unsaid pressed down on her, thick and suffocating. Eva finished her martini in one smooth motion and stood, adjusting her blazer. “I should go.” Rory didn’t stop her. The door swung shut behind Eva, the neon raven flickering again, as if mocking them both. Rory stared at the empty stool, the half-melted ice in Eva’s abandoned glass. Silas reappeared, wiping his hands on a towel. “Friend of yours?” Rory swallowed. “Used to be.” He nodded, like that explained everything. Then he reached for the whisky bottle and topped up her glass. Outside, the rain started again.
created_at"2026-02-20T14:13:08.35Z" 2/20/2026, 2:13:08 PM
model"mistralai/mistral-medium-3.1" 3/1/2001, 12:00:00 AM
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency666
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time38574
tokens_prompt1094
tokens_completion2040
native_tokens_prompt1013
native_tokens_completion1748
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning0
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"stop"
usage0.0039012
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"13c5002b-8c5b-490c-8a5f-52ec0242804f"
id"532f88812f3c445db3b9a01c7c61754d"
is_byokfalse
latency666
model_permaslug"mistralai/mistral-medium-3.1" 3/1/2001, 12:00:00 AM
provider_name"Mistral"
status200
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1771596788-24w6fXn60eXf0j5pUDdA"
upstream_id"532f88812f3c445db3b9a01c7c61754d"
total_cost0.0039012
cache_discount(null)
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"Mistral"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.169
leniency0.339
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.034
96.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1249
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
51.96% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1249
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"methodical"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"unreadable"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count2
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"chill"
2"scanned"
3"methodical"
4"weight"
5"flicker"
6"unreadable"
7"flicked"
8"familiar"
9"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences82
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans10
markdownWords33
totalWords1236
ratio0.027
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"good"
2"“Oh, for God’s sake, this place hasn’t changed at all.”"
3"just come home"
4"“Here you go.”"
5"tried"
6"so"
7"did"
8"Golden Empress"
9"You can’t just leave like this. Not again."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions63
wordCount905
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.98
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Rory27
Raven1
Silas6
Japanese1
Eva25
Like2
Cardiff1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Silas"
3"Eva"
4"Like"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore0.008
windowScore0
59.09% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite as straight as they used to be"
1"as if mocking them both"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1236
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences130
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs67
mean18.45
std17.3
cv0.938
sampleLengths
0102
119
210
36
431
533
617
79
85
912
1037
1110
1224
136
1441
151
1670
1735
189
1933
203
2111
225
2311
2413
2524
2614
2718
2812
293
3028
315
3232
333
3436
359
3612
3712
3819
3926
4032
4123
425
434
444
4514
4617
4728
482
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs162
matches
0"was going"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences130
ratio0.069
matches
0"Inside, the air smelled of aged whiskey and something sharper—polish, maybe, or the faint metallic tang of old secrets."
1"Rory didn’t turn—until the voice cut through the hum of the bar like a blade."
2"Not the Eva from Rory’s memories—the one with scraped knees and a gap-toothed grin, the one who’d climbed trees and sworn like a sailor and promised they’d never be stuck in this bloody city."
3"Eva slid onto the stool beside her, close enough that Rory caught the scent of her perfume—something floral, expensive."
4"Rory had just been along for the ride—until she wasn’t."
5"“Thanks.” Eva’s gaze flicked to Rory’s hands—the chipped nail polish, the scar on her wrist, the way her fingers tightened around the glass."
6"For a second, something raw flashed in Eva’s eyes—something that looked suspiciously like hurt."
7"Eva met her gaze, and for the first time, Rory saw the cracks—the exhaustion in the lines around her eyes, the way her shoulders weren’t quite as straight as they used to be."
8"But all she could think about was the last time they’d seen each other—Eva standing in the doorway of Rory’s flat in Cardiff, her face pale, her voice trembling as she said, *You can’t just leave like this."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount416
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.028846153846153848
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.002403846153846154
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean9.51
std8.08
cv0.85
sampleLengths
026
119
211
346
411
58
64
76
86
98
1021
112
1220
1313
1412
155
169
175
188
194
2022
2115
2210
236
2418
253
263
273
284
2934
301
3134
3229
337
3413
355
3617
377
382
3919
404
419
421
433
445
456
464
471
486
495
72.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.43846153846153846
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners57
88.89% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences75
matches
0"Of course she was."
1"Then he reached for the"
ratio0.027
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences75
matches
0"She shook the rain from"
1"She slid onto a stool,"
2"He reached beneath the counter"
3"She rolled her shoulders, the"
4"She took a sip, let"
5"She caught it before it"
6"She didn’t need to."
7"He nodded and moved down"
8"She gestured vaguely"
9"He didn’t linger, but Rory"
10"Her fingers traced the rim"
11"She trailed off, shook her"
12"She reached for her whisky."
13"He nodded, like that explained"
ratio0.187
46.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences75
matches
0"The green neon raven flickered"
1"She shook the rain from"
2"She slid onto a stool,"
3"Silas didn’t look up."
4"A ghost of a smile"
5"He reached beneath the counter"
6"She rolled her shoulders, the"
7"Silas poured two fingers into"
8"She took a sip, let"
9"Rory didn’t turn—until the voice"
10"The glass slipped in Rory’s"
11"She caught it before it"
12"Rory didn’t answer."
13"She didn’t need to."
14"The woman had already spotted"
15"This Eva wore a tailored"
16"A gold watch glinted at"
17"Eva said, like it was"
18"Rory wiped her palm on"
19"Eva slid onto the stool"
ratio0.827
66.67% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"Before he could retort, the"
ratio0.013
34.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The green neon raven flickered like a dying thought as Rory pushed through the door of *The Raven’s Nest*, the evening’s chill clinging to her coat."
1"Most of the usuals were there: a pair of students hunched over textbooks in the corner, a man in a rumpled suit nursing a gin, and Silas behind the bar, wiping …"
2"The woman had already spotted her, her stride faltering for half a second before she recovered, smoothing her coat with the easy confidence of someone who’d spe…"
3"For a second, something raw flashed in Eva’s eyes—something that looked suspiciously like hurt."
4"The door swung shut behind Eva, the neon raven flickering again, as if mocking them both."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Eva’s fingers tapped, restless"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.034
leniency0.068
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.0404%