| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde’s voice drifted back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.302 | | leniency | 0.605 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.047 | |
| 88.85% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1345 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "lightly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "quickly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 36.80% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1345 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "charged" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "glint" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "rhythmic" | | 7 | "traced" | | 8 | "glistening" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "maw" | | 11 | "flicked" | | 12 | "marveled" | | 13 | "shimmered" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "blink of an eye" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "clenched her jaw" | | 1 | "in the blink of an eye" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 133 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 133 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 162 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 61 | | markdownWords | 205 | | totalWords | 1331 | | ratio | 0.154 | | matches | | 0 | "shifted" | | 1 | "alive" | | 2 | "unfold" | | 3 | "\"You feel that?\"" | | 4 | "meant" | | 5 | "glide" | | 6 | "\"Come,\"" | | 7 | "\"The heart of the grove waits for no one.\"" | | 8 | "\"She’s enjoying this,\"" | | 9 | "\"Aren’t you?\"" | | 10 | "\"I enjoy *many* things. This is merely… interesting.\"" | | 11 | "warped" | | 12 | "sing" | | 13 | "through" | | 14 | "\"Illusion?\"" | | 15 | "\"No,\"" | | 16 | "\"Merely a different rule.\"" | | 17 | "shell" | | 18 | "Magic" | | 19 | "\"We’re getting close.\"" | | 20 | "\"To what?\"" | | 21 | "\"The *why* of this place.\"" | | 22 | "arch" | | 23 | "moving" | | 24 | "roots" | | 25 | "\"The Veil is thin here,\"" | | 26 | "\"Thinner than it’s been in centuries.\"" | | 27 | "\"You feel it, don’t you? The *pull*.\"" | | 28 | "\"What is this place?\"" | | 29 | "\"A door.\"" | | 30 | "\"One that should not be opened lightly.\"" | | 31 | "\"And yet, it *has* been opened. Recently.\"" | | 32 | "\"Someone’s been here.\"" | | 33 | "\"Or something,\"" | | 34 | "retreated" | | 35 | "\"Run.\"" | | 36 | "heaved" | | 37 | "ripped" | | 38 | "\"That was new.\"" | | 39 | "\"The grove is angry.\"" | | 40 | "\"Angry?\"" | | 41 | "\"At *us*?\"" | | 42 | "\"At the violation.\"" | | 43 | "\"Something took what wasn’t theirs to take.\"" | | 44 | "\"And left a mess behind.\"" | | 45 | "\"Hel-marked.\"" | | 46 | "\"You’re saying a *demon* was here?\"" | | 47 | "\"Or something touched by Hel.\"" | | 48 | "\"Either way, we’re not the only ones who know about this place anymore.\"" | | 49 | "\"And if *they* came through, others will follow.\"" | | 50 | "\"We need to go. Now.\"" | | 51 | "\"Back the way we came. *Quickly*.\"" | | 52 | "\"Left. The boundary’s shifting.\"" | | 53 | "\"After you, *darling*.\"" | | 54 | "snapped" | | 55 | "safe" | | 56 | "\"Welcome back.\"" | | 57 | "\"That was a mistake,\"" | | 58 | "\"We won’t be returning.\"" | | 59 | "\"What the hell was that place?\"" | | 60 | "\"A keyhole, Rory. And someone’s been *picking the lock*.\"" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 71.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 53 | | wordCount | 1144 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.57 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Rory | 18 | | November | 1 | | Nyx | 14 | | Shade | 2 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Isolde | 11 | | Veil | 1 | | Park | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Veil" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "November" | | 2 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.713 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 55.06% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "quite writing but *meant* something, deep in the gut" | | 1 | "something between the trees" | | 2 | "tasted like petrol and rain" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.751 | | wordCount | 1331 | | matches | | 0 | "not a stone, but a *shell*, spiralled" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 162 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 60 | | mean | 22.18 | | std | 18.75 | | cv | 0.845 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 75 | | 2 | 52 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 75 | | 5 | 49 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 62 | | 11 | 65 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 43 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 48 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 50 | | 21 | 36 | | 22 | 38 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 29 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 33 | | 34 | 34 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 25 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 30 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 42 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 99.99% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "were gnarled" | | 1 | "were snapped" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 210 | | matches | | 0 | "was testing" | | 1 | "wasn’t laughing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 162 | | ratio | 0.08 | | matches | | 0 | "The hum of London traffic, the distant wail of sirens, the damp press of autumn—gone." | | 1 | "Violet eyes—too bright, too knowing—flickered toward her." | | 2 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground—bluebells, foxgloves, things with petals like spun glass—none of which should’ve been in bloom in November." | | 3 | "Time slipped—one moment, the sun hung high and golden; the next, twilight bled purple across the clearing, only to snap back to noon in the blink of an eye." | | 4 | "A sound—water, but not quite." | | 5 | "One shifted beneath her touch—not a stone, but a *shell*, spiralled and iridescent, humming faintly when she lifted it to her ear." | | 6 | "The air grew heavier, thick with the scent of crushed herbs and something metallic—blood?" | | 7 | "At its centre stood a monolith—no, not a monolith." | | 8 | "But not worms—*roots*." | | 9 | "Sap—no, not sap, something darker—beaded at the breaks." | | 10 | "She lunged, fingers scrabbling for purchase, but the edge crumbled—" | | 11 | "She veered, ducking under a low-hanging bough—" | | 12 | "—and nearly collided with the standing stones." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1158 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 39 | | adverbRatio | 0.03367875647668394 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007772020725388601 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 162 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 162 | | mean | 8.22 | | std | 5.73 | | cv | 0.697 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 29 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 22 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 48.56% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.3395061728395062 | | totalSentences | 162 | | uniqueOpeners | 55 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "It was *alive*, charged like" | | 1 | "She flexed her fingers around" | | 2 | "Their voice wasn’t sound so" | | 3 | "She didn’t need to." | | 4 | "She didn’t walk so much" | | 5 | "she called, not looking back" | | 6 | "She tugged her sleeve down." | | 7 | "Their fingers passed *through* the" | | 8 | "She tucked it into her" | | 9 | "Their bark darkened, taking on" | | 10 | "They pulsed, slow and rhythmic," | | 11 | "Her lavender eyes slid to" | | 12 | "She clenched her jaw." | | 13 | "She lunged, fingers scrabbling for" | | 14 | "Her face was pale, her" | | 15 | "They held up their hand" | | 16 | "Their fingertips were stained black." | | 17 | "She turned, her silver hair" | | 18 | "She veered, ducking under a" | | 19 | "They weren’t there before." |
| | ratio | 0.207 | |
| 11.72% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 104 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "The air thickened the moment" | | 1 | "The hum of London traffic," | | 2 | "Rory’s breath fogged in front" | | 3 | "It was *alive*, charged like" | | 4 | "She flexed her fingers around" | | 5 | "Nyx didn’t so much as" | | 6 | "Violet eyes—too bright, too knowing—flickered" | | 7 | "Their voice wasn’t sound so" | | 8 | "Rory didn’t answer." | | 9 | "She didn’t need to." | | 10 | "The grove stretched before them," | | 11 | "The trunks were gnarled, twisted" | | 12 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground—bluebells, foxgloves," | | 13 | "The air smelled of honey" | | 14 | "Isolde was already moving ahead," | | 15 | "She didn’t walk so much" | | 16 | "she called, not looking back" | | 17 | "Rory exchanged a glance with" | | 18 | "The Shade’s form flickered at" | | 19 | "A low chuckle, like wind" |
| | ratio | 0.897 | |
| 43.10% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "—and nearly collided with the" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 60.44% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx didn’t so much as step as *unfold* from the shadows at her side, their form rippling like ink in water before solidifying into something approximating human…" | | 1 | "Isolde was already moving ahead, her silver hair catching the strange, golden light that filtered through the canopy." | | 2 | "The Shade’s form flickered at the edges, as if the grove itself was testing their substance." | | 3 | "The water ran upward, defying gravity, before arcing into a pool that hung suspended midair." | | 4 | "Their fingers passed *through* the water as if it were mist." | | 5 | "Thin, seeking, burrowing in and out of the earth in a pattern that made Rory’s eyes ache if she looked too long." |
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| 86.54% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she called, not looking back" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx corrected (correct)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.116 | | leniency | 0.233 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.093 | |