| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.26% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1054 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 19.35% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1054 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "quickened" | | 3 | "traced" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "scanning" | | 9 | "echoed" | | 10 | "trembled" | | 11 | "silk" | | 12 | "familiar" | | 13 | "eyebrow" | | 14 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 108 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 108 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 116 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 21 | | markdownWords | 34 | | totalWords | 1044 | | ratio | 0.033 | | matches | | 0 | "Midnight. Alone. The stones will guide you." | | 1 | "Get a grip. It’s just the wind." | | 2 | "wrong" | | 3 | "drip" | | 4 | "plink" | | 5 | "wrong" | | 6 | "unfold" | | 7 | "through" | | 8 | "laughed" | | 9 | "had" | | 10 | "deepened" | | 11 | "everywhere" | | 12 | "moving" | | 13 | "Crawling" | | 14 | "squelch" | | 15 | "felt" | | 16 | "owes" | | 17 | "Evan." | | 18 | "knew" | | 19 | "hell" | | 20 | "actual fuck" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.55% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 15 | | wordCount | 981 | | uniqueNames | 1 | | maxNameDensity | 1.53 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.735 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1044 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 24.86 | | std | 22.7 | | cv | 0.913 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 90 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 59 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 52 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 51 | | 9 | 47 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 61 | | 12 | 46 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 56 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 48 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 41 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 57 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 34 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 32 | | 28 | 38 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 51 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 37 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 41 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 12 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 181 | | matches | | 0 | "was savoring" | | 1 | "was following" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 116 | | ratio | 0.069 | | matches | | 0 | "The boundary hummed—just faintly, like a plucked violin string left to vibrate in the dark." | | 1 | "And the pendant—warm now against her collarbone, pulsing in time with her quickened heartbeat—had all but dragged her here." | | 2 | "It wasn’t uncomfortable—just *wrong*, like standing too close to a fire and feeling the heat sink into your skin instead of singeing it." | | 3 | "Too tall, too *wrong*—a smear of darkness detaching itself from the trunk of an oak twenty feet away." | | 4 | "The shadow tilted its head—if it *had* a head—and the darkness *deepened*, as if it had leaned closer." | | 5 | "The laughter came again, closer now, and this time she *felt* it—the vibration of something vast and hungry coiling around her, testing her edges." | | 6 | "The pressure in the air shifted—just for a second, just enough for Rory to suck in a ragged breath." | | 7 | "Then—" |
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| 94.34% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 990 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 46 | | adverbRatio | 0.046464646464646465 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00404040404040404 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 116 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 116 | | mean | 9 | | std | 6.79 | | cv | 0.754 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 36 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 47.41% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.33620689655172414 | | totalSentences | 116 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "More like a sigh, drawn" | | 1 | "Just the slow, deliberate *drip*" | | 2 | "Too tall, too *wrong*—a smear" | | 3 | "Then it *laughed*." |
| | ratio | 0.045 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn’t need the pendant" | | 1 | "She shouldn’t have come at" | | 2 | "She turned slowly, fingers flexing" | | 3 | "Her voice sounded too loud." | | 4 | "She exhaled through her nose" | | 5 | "It’s just the wind.* But" | | 6 | "It wasn’t uncomfortable—just *wrong*, like" | | 7 | "She spun, scanning the tree" | | 8 | "She reached into her bag," | | 9 | "It didn’t walk so much" | | 10 | "She took a step back," | | 11 | "It came from *everywhere*, vibrating" | | 12 | "She gasped, stumbling back until" | | 13 | "She didn’t look down." | | 14 | "It knew, and it was" | | 15 | "She didn’t dare look back." | | 16 | "She crashed to her knees," | | 17 | "His grip tightened, hauling her" | | 18 | "He didn’t wait for an" |
| | ratio | 0.216 | |
| 11.14% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 79 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak trees loomed like" | | 1 | "Rory’s breath fogged in the" | | 2 | "The boundary hummed—just faintly, like" | | 3 | "She didn’t need the pendant" | | 4 | "The air itself tasted different" | | 5 | "She shouldn’t have come at" | | 6 | "The thought slithered in, unwelcome," | | 7 | "The note had been clear:" | | 8 | "The stones will guide you.*" | | 9 | "A twig snapped." | | 10 | "The sound had come from" | | 11 | "She turned slowly, fingers flexing" | | 12 | "The grove stretched empty, the" | | 13 | "Moonlight bled through the canopy," | | 14 | "Her voice sounded too loud." | | 15 | "The flowers stilled." | | 16 | "She exhaled through her nose" | | 17 | "It’s just the wind.* But" | | 18 | "The pendant’s glow flickered." | | 19 | "Rory frowned and pinched the" |
| | ratio | 0.898 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the slow, deliberate *drip* of water from somewhere unseen, each drop landing with a wet *plink* that echoed too long." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "She reached, fingers closing around the torch she’d brought" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "it murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Rory panted (pant)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.167 | | leniency | 0.333 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |