Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPBCF4QWW1ZXPH2NMVJR7Y

Run Details

Duration:
23.5s
Cost:
$0.003308
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oak trees loomed like sentinels, their gnarled branches twisting into a lattice against the bruised indigo of the sky. Rory’s breath fogged in the cold air as she stepped over the first of the standing stones, her boots sinking into damp earth. The boundary hummed—just faintly, like a plucked violin string left to vibrate in the dark. She didn’t need the pendant to tell her she’d crossed over. The air itself tasted different here, thick with the scent of crushed petals and something older, something metallic beneath the sweetness. She shouldn’t have come at night. The thought slithered in, unwelcome, but she shoved it down. The note had been clear: *Midnight. Alone. The stones will guide you.* No signature, no explanation, just the same precise handwriting as the last three messages slipped under her door. And the pendant—warm now against her collarbone, pulsing in time with her quickened heartbeat—had all but dragged her here. A twig snapped. Rory froze. The sound had come from behind her, just past the last of the standing stones. She turned slowly, fingers flexing at her sides. The grove stretched empty, the wildflowers swaying as if stirred by a breath she hadn’t felt. Moonlight bled through the canopy, painting everything in silver and shadow. “Hello?” Her voice sounded too loud. The flowers stilled. Nothing answered. She exhaled through her nose and adjusted the strap of her bag. *Get a grip. It’s just the wind.* But the wind didn’t explain the way the hair on her arms had risen, or the prickling at the back of her neck, like someone had traced a fingertip along her spine. The pendant’s glow flickered. Rory frowned and pinched the crimson stone between her thumb and forefinger. The warmth had spread, seeping into her bones. It wasn’t uncomfortable—just *wrong*, like standing too close to a fire and feeling the heat sink into your skin instead of singeing it. A whisper rustled through the leaves. Not words. Not quite. More like a sigh, drawn out and breathy, curling around the edges of her hearing. Rory’s pulse jumped. She spun, scanning the tree line. The grove was too still. No owls. No scuttling of small animals. Just the slow, deliberate *drip* of water from somewhere unseen, each drop landing with a wet *plink* that echoed too long. “Right. Enough of this.” She reached into her bag, fingers closing around the torch she’d brought. The beam cut through the dark as she switched it on, carving a harsh yellow path ahead. The flowers recoiled from the light, their petals furling tight as if burned. That wasn’t normal. Rory swallowed. The torch trembled in her grip. A shadow moved. Not hers. Too tall, too *wrong*—a smear of darkness detaching itself from the trunk of an oak twenty feet away. It didn’t walk so much as *unfold*, elongating upward until it brushed the lower branches. Rory’s breath hitched. The torchlight skittered over it, but the beam passed *through*, as if the thing were made of smoke. Then it *laughed*. A sound like dry leaves skittering over stone, like nails dragged down a windowpane. Rory’s skin crawled. She took a step back, then another, her boot catching on a root. The shadow tilted its head—if it *had* a head—and the darkness *deepened*, as if it had leaned closer. “You’re not supposed to be here.” The voice didn’t come from the shadow. It came from *everywhere*, vibrating in her ribs, her teeth, the marrow of her bones. Rory clapped her hands over her ears, but it did no good. The words slithered in, slick and cold. “This isn’t your time.” The pendant burned against her sternum. She gasped, stumbling back until her shoulders hit the rough bark of another oak. The torch slipped from her fingers, the beam wild as it swept across the grove. The flowers were *moving*. Not swaying. Not bending. *Crawling*. Petals peeling back from stems that writhed like fingers, inching toward her ankles. Rory kicked out, her boot connecting with something soft and yielding. A wet *squelch* answered her. She didn’t look down. The shadow stretched longer, its edges fraying like tattered silk. The laughter came again, closer now, and this time she *felt* it—the vibration of something vast and hungry coiling around her, testing her edges. “You carry the scent of the other place,” it murmured. “The broken one. The one who *owes*.” Rory’s throat locked. *Evan.* The name clawed up her spine, but she forced it back down. “I don’t know what you’re talking about.” A lie. A stupid, transparent lie. The thing *knew*. It knew, and it was savoring the way her pulse hammered in her throat, the way her fingers dug crescents into her palms. The pendant’s glow flared, crimson bleeding through the fabric of her shirt. The shadow hissed, recoiling as if scalded. The pressure in the air shifted—just for a second, just enough for Rory to suck in a ragged breath. She ran. Branches whipped at her face, tearing at her hair, her skin. The standing stones loomed ahead, their jagged outlines a promise of escape. She didn’t dare look back. Didn’t dare check if the thing was following. The ground sloped upward, roots snaring her ankles, but she forced herself faster, lungs burning. A hand closed around her wrist. Rory screamed, twisting free, but the grip was iron, yanking her off balance. She crashed to her knees, gravel biting through the fabric of her jeans. The torch lay a few feet away, its beam flickering weakly. “Easy, easy—it’s me!” The voice was human. Rough. Familiar. Rory blinked up. A man crouched beside her, his face half-lit by the dying torch. Dark stubble. A scar cutting through one eyebrow. Silas. Relief hit her so hard her vision blurred. “What the *hell*—?” “No time.” His grip tightened, hauling her to her feet. “We’ve got about three seconds before that thing decides you’re worth the trouble. Move.” He didn’t wait for an answer. Yanking her after him, he lunged for the standing stones. Rory barely kept her footing as they stumbled through the gap, the air resistance popping like a soap bubble breaking. The grove vanished behind them. Silence. Then— “What,” Rory panted, doubling over, hands on her knees, “the *actual fuck*—?”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.26% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1054
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
19.35% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1054
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"loomed"
count2
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"quickened"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count2
8
word"scanning"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"trembled"
count1
11
word"silk"
count1
12
word"familiar"
count1
13
word"eyebrow"
count1
14
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"sentinels"
2"quickened"
3"traced"
4"flickered"
5"warmth"
6"whisper"
7"pulse"
8"scanning"
9"echoed"
10"trembled"
11"silk"
12"familiar"
13"eyebrow"
14"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences108
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans21
markdownWords34
totalWords1044
ratio0.033
matches
0"Midnight. Alone. The stones will guide you."
1"Get a grip. It’s just the wind."
2"wrong"
3"drip"
4"plink"
5"wrong"
6"unfold"
7"through"
8"laughed"
9"had"
10"deepened"
11"everywhere"
12"moving"
13"Crawling"
14"squelch"
15"felt"
16"owes"
17"Evan."
18"knew"
19"hell"
20"actual fuck"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
73.55% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount981
uniqueNames1
maxNameDensity1.53
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory15
persons
0"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore0.735
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1044
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences116
matches
0"stems that writhed"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean24.86
std22.7
cv0.913
sampleLengths
090
16
259
33
452
51
68
72
851
947
106
1161
1246
133
148
153
1656
173
1848
196
2041
214
2257
2320
2434
2517
2623
2732
2838
292
3051
316
3237
333
346
3524
3611
3724
3841
391
401
4112
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences108
matches
0"were made"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs181
matches
0"was savoring"
1"was following"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences116
ratio0.069
matches
0"The boundary hummed—just faintly, like a plucked violin string left to vibrate in the dark."
1"And the pendant—warm now against her collarbone, pulsing in time with her quickened heartbeat—had all but dragged her here."
2"It wasn’t uncomfortable—just *wrong*, like standing too close to a fire and feeling the heat sink into your skin instead of singeing it."
3"Too tall, too *wrong*—a smear of darkness detaching itself from the trunk of an oak twenty feet away."
4"The shadow tilted its head—if it *had* a head—and the darkness *deepened*, as if it had leaned closer."
5"The laughter came again, closer now, and this time she *felt* it—the vibration of something vast and hungry coiling around her, testing her edges."
6"The pressure in the air shifted—just for a second, just enough for Rory to suck in a ragged breath."
7"Then—"
94.34% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount990
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.046464646464646465
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.00404040404040404
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean9
std6.79
cv0.754
sampleLengths
020
123
215
311
421
56
610
76
81
923
1019
113
122
1315
148
1516
1611
171
185
193
202
2112
223
2336
244
2512
268
2723
286
292
302
3115
323
336
345
352
365
3721
3816
3917
4013
413
422
436
443
452
4618
4715
483
4918
47.41% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.33620689655172414
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners39
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences88
matches
0"More like a sigh, drawn"
1"Just the slow, deliberate *drip*"
2"Too tall, too *wrong*—a smear"
3"Then it *laughed*."
ratio0.045
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences88
matches
0"She didn’t need the pendant"
1"She shouldn’t have come at"
2"She turned slowly, fingers flexing"
3"Her voice sounded too loud."
4"She exhaled through her nose"
5"It’s just the wind.* But"
6"It wasn’t uncomfortable—just *wrong*, like"
7"She spun, scanning the tree"
8"She reached into her bag,"
9"It didn’t walk so much"
10"She took a step back,"
11"It came from *everywhere*, vibrating"
12"She gasped, stumbling back until"
13"She didn’t look down."
14"It knew, and it was"
15"She didn’t dare look back."
16"She crashed to her knees,"
17"His grip tightened, hauling her"
18"He didn’t wait for an"
ratio0.216
11.14% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences88
matches
0"The oak trees loomed like"
1"Rory’s breath fogged in the"
2"The boundary hummed—just faintly, like"
3"She didn’t need the pendant"
4"The air itself tasted different"
5"She shouldn’t have come at"
6"The thought slithered in, unwelcome,"
7"The note had been clear:"
8"The stones will guide you.*"
9"A twig snapped."
10"The sound had come from"
11"She turned slowly, fingers flexing"
12"The grove stretched empty, the"
13"Moonlight bled through the canopy,"
14"Her voice sounded too loud."
15"The flowers stilled."
16"She exhaled through her nose"
17"It’s just the wind.* But"
18"The pendant’s glow flickered."
19"Rory frowned and pinched the"
ratio0.898
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Just the slow, deliberate *drip* of water from somewhere unseen, each drop landing with a wet *plink* that echoed too long."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She reached, fingers closing around the torch she’d brought"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"it murmured (murmur)"
1"Rory panted (pant)"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.333
78.0351%