Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPC8B3ZM9QW3MDQDMDWGAH

Run Details

Duration:
25.8s
Cost:
$0.002318
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The door swung open before Rory could knock a second time, and there he stood—Lucien Moreau, leaning against the frame like he’d been expecting her. His heterochromatic eyes flicked over her, one amber, one black, sharp as the blade hidden in his cane. The scent of bergamot and something darker, something like smoke, curled into the hallway. “Aurora,” he said, voice smooth as the whiskey he favored. “I was beginning to think you’d forgotten where I live.” She hadn’t. That was the problem. Rory adjusted the strap of her messenger bag, fingers brushing the crescent scar on her wrist. “I was in the neighborhood.” A lie. She’d taken the long way, circling the block twice before working up the nerve to climb the stairs to his flat. The last time she’d seen him, she’d walked out without a word, leaving only a note on his kitchen counter—*I can’t do this.* Three words, no explanation. Cowardly, maybe, but safer than facing the way he looked at her when he thought she wasn’t watching. Lucien stepped aside, gesturing with a sweep of his hand. “Then by all means, come in.” The flat was exactly as she remembered—immaculate, minimalist, the kind of place that looked like no one lived there at all. A fire crackled in the hearth, casting long shadows over the polished hardwood. The only sign of life was the half-empty glass of whiskey on the coffee table and the open book facedown on the sofa, its pages ruffled by an absent thumb. Rory hesitated in the doorway. “I didn’t know if you’d still be here.” “Where else would I be?” He shut the door behind her, the click of the lock too loud in the silence. “You made it clear you didn’t want me following you.” She flinched. “That’s not—” “Isn’t it?” His voice was quiet, but there was an edge to it, something raw beneath the usual polish. He moved past her, the faintest brush of his sleeve against her arm, and picked up his glass. “You left, Aurora. No warning, no discussion. Just a note.” “I had to.” “Why?” Because every time he touched her, she forgot why she shouldn’t let him. Because the way he looked at her—like she was something precious, something rare—terrified her more than any demon ever could. Because she’d spent years building walls, and Lucien had a way of slipping through the cracks. She swallowed. “It was complicated.” “Everything with you is complicated.” He took a sip of whiskey, watching her over the rim of the glass. “But you’re here now. So either you’ve come to explain, or you’ve come for something else.” The air between them was thick, charged. Rory’s pulse thrummed in her throat. She should have rehearsed this. Should have planned what to say. But all she could think about was the last time she’d been in this room, the way his hands had tangled in her hair, the way his mouth had tasted like sin and salvation. “I needed to see you,” she admitted. Lucien set the glass down with a sharp *clink*. “Why?” “Because I—” She stopped. Because she missed him. Because she’d spent the last three months jumping at shadows, and the only time she’d felt safe was when he was near. Because she was tired of pretending she didn’t want him. But the words stuck in her throat. Lucien closed the distance between them in two strides. His fingers brushed her jaw, tilting her face up to his. “Tell me,” he murmured. “Or I’ll have to guess.” She should have pulled away. Should have remembered all the reasons this was a bad idea. But the heat of his body, the scent of him—it unraveled her. “I don’t know how to do this,” she whispered. “Do what?” “This. *Us.*” She gestured between them, helpless. “I don’t know how to want someone and not be afraid of it.” Something flickered in his eyes—understanding, maybe, or pity. “You think I’m not afraid?” His thumb traced the line of her cheekbone. “You think I don’t lie awake at night wondering when you’ll realize I’m not worth the trouble?” Her breath hitched. “That’s not—” “It’s true.” His voice was rough. “I’m half-demon, Aurora. I’ve done things, seen things. I’m not the kind of man you build a future with.” “And what if I don’t want a future?” The words slipped out before she could stop them. “What if I just want *now*?” Lucien went still. Then, slowly, his hand slid into her hair, fingers curling against her scalp. “You don’t mean that.” “I do.” She reached for him, her hands fisting in the lapels of his suit. “I mean it more than I’ve ever meant anything.” For a heartbeat, he didn’t move. Then his mouth crashed down on hers, hot and desperate. Rory melted into him, her fingers twisting in the fabric of his jacket as he backed her against the wall. His cane clattered to the floor, forgotten. The kiss was bruising, punishing—like he was trying to brand her, like he was afraid she’d disappear again. When he finally pulled away, his breath was ragged. “This changes nothing,” he said, voice rough. “You still walk out that door, and I still let you go.” Rory shook her head. “I’m not leaving.” “You will.” His forehead pressed against hers. “You always do.” She wanted to argue. Wanted to tell him he was wrong. But the truth was, she didn’t know if she could stay. Didn’t know if she was strong enough to face the demons—hers and his. So she kissed him again, pouring everything she couldn’t say into it. And for now, that would have to be enough.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.76% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount955
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount955
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"charged"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"silence"
2"charged"
3"pulse"
4"flickered"
5"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences68
matches
0"was afraid"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences68
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords7
totalWords947
ratio0.007
matches
0"I can’t do this."
1"clink"
2"Us."
3"now"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount724
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.83
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory6
Lucien6
Moreau1
Three1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"something like smoke, curled into the hallwa"
1"looked like no one lived there at all"
2"tasted like sin and salvation"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount947
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean25.59
std19.15
cv0.748
sampleLengths
057
120
26
321
468
516
664
713
831
94
1047
113
121
1349
145
1535
1658
177
1810
1940
207
2129
2237
232
2420
2538
265
2725
2823
2920
3024
3161
3228
337
3410
3535
3621
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
99.75% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs133
matches
0"wasn’t watching"
1"was trying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences92
ratio0.087
matches
0"The door swung open before Rory could knock a second time, and there he stood—Lucien Moreau, leaning against the frame like he’d been expecting her."
1"The last time she’d seen him, she’d walked out without a word, leaving only a note on his kitchen counter—*I can’t do this.* Three words, no explanation."
2"The flat was exactly as she remembered—immaculate, minimalist, the kind of place that looked like no one lived there at all."
3"Because the way he looked at her—like she was something precious, something rare—terrified her more than any demon ever could."
4"But the heat of his body, the scent of him—it unraveled her."
5"Something flickered in his eyes—understanding, maybe, or pity."
6"The kiss was bruising, punishing—like he was trying to brand her, like he was afraid she’d disappear again."
7"Didn’t know if she was strong enough to face the demons—hers and his."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount731
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.030095759233926128
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.009575923392612859
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean10.29
std6.97
cv0.677
sampleLengths
025
118
214
310
410
52
64
716
85
92
1021
1127
1218
1310
146
1521
1613
1730
185
198
2021
2110
222
232
2419
2518
2610
273
281
2913
3020
3116
322
333
3419
3516
367
376
385
396
4034
417
429
431
444
454
4622
4710
487
499
52.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3695652173913043
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners34
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences60
matches
0"Then, slowly, his hand slid"
1"Then his mouth crashed down"
ratio0.033
93.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences60
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes flicked over"
1"he said, voice smooth as"
2"She’d taken the long way,"
3"He shut the door behind"
4"His voice was quiet, but"
5"He moved past her, the"
6"He took a sip of"
7"She should have rehearsed this."
8"His fingers brushed her jaw,"
9"She should have pulled away."
10"She gestured between them, helpless"
11"His thumb traced the line"
12"Her breath hitched."
13"His voice was rough"
14"She reached for him, her"
15"His cane clattered to the"
16"he said, voice rough"
17"His forehead pressed against hers"
18"She wanted to argue."
ratio0.317
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount39
totalSentences60
matches
0"The door swung open before"
1"His heterochromatic eyes flicked over"
2"The scent of bergamot and"
3"he said, voice smooth as"
4"That was the problem."
5"Rory adjusted the strap of"
6"She’d taken the long way,"
7"The last time she’d seen"
8"Lucien stepped aside, gesturing with"
9"The flat was exactly as"
10"A fire crackled in the"
11"The only sign of life"
12"Rory hesitated in the doorway."
13"He shut the door behind"
14"His voice was quiet, but"
15"He moved past her, the"
16"He took a sip of"
17"The air between them was"
18"Rory’s pulse thrummed in her"
19"She should have rehearsed this."
ratio0.65
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount6
totalSentences60
matches
0"Because every time he touched"
1"Because the way he looked"
2"Because she’d spent years building"
3"Because she missed him."
4"Because she’d spent the last"
5"Because she was tired of"
ratio0.1
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The flat was exactly as she remembered—immaculate, minimalist, the kind of place that looked like no one lived there at all."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"he said, voice smooth as the whiskey he favored"
1"He shut, the click of the lock too loud in the silence"
2"She gestured, helpless"
3"She reached, her hands fisting in the lapels of his suit"
4"he said, voice rough"
47.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she admitted (admit)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"His forehead pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.154
leniency0.308
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.205
85.2256%