Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPD3V1RK0FPTWTGZ50JH3N

Run Details

Duration:
45.3s
Cost:
$0.005135
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked back with a metallic sigh, and Rory exhaled through her nose as she turned the handle. The flat smelled the same—dust, old paper, and the faintest trace of Eva’s lavender shampoo, lingering like a ghost. She nudged the door wider with her hip, balancing a grease-stained paper bag from the Golden Empress in one hand and her helmet in the other. Ptolemy wound between her ankles with a plaintive *mrrow*, tail flicking against the doorframe. “Yeah, yeah, I know, I’m late,” she muttered, toeing off her scuffed boots. The tabby’s fur bristled as he arched into her calf, purring like a broken motor. She bent to scratch behind his ears, the bag crinkling as she shifted it. “Miss me that much, huh? Or just after my leftovers?” A floorboard creaked. Rory froze. Not the usual groan of the building settling, not the radiator’s wheezing complaint—this was the deliberate, measured shift of weight from one foot to another. Someone was standing in Eva’s kitchen. Her fingers tightened around the helmet. Ptolemy’s back arched, his fur standing on end, a low growl rumbling in his throat. “Eva?” she called, voice steady despite the sudden hammering of her pulse. “If this is your way of telling me you’re finally robbing a bank, I *told* you that balaclava makes you look like a disgruntled badger.” No answer. Just the slow, deliberate *tap-tap* of something—fingers, maybe, or the end of a cane—against the countertop. Rory set the food down silently, her free hand sliding into her jacket pocket. Her knuckles brushed the cool metal of her bike chain lock. Not much, but better than nothing. She eased forward, each step deliberate, her socks muffling her approach on the worn hardwood. The kitchen light was off, the only illumination the sickly yellow glow of the streetlamp seeping through the grimy window, painting everything in shades of sepia. Then she saw him. Lucien Moreau leaned against the counter, one hand wrapped around a chipped mug—Eva’s favorite, the one with the cracked handle—and the other resting on the head of his cane. The ivory handle gleamed dully in the dim light, the blade inside it hidden, as always. He looked exactly as she remembered: platinum hair slicked back, heterochromatic eyes sharp as broken glass, one amber, one black. His suit was immaculate, charcoal gray, tailored to within an inch of his life, like he’d stepped out of a boardroom and into Eva’s chaotic flat without missing a beat. Her breath hitched. The air between them thickened, charged, like the moment before a storm breaks. “You,” she said. Luc’s lips quirked. Not quite a smile. “Me.” Ptolemy hissed, tail lashing, and Luc flicked his gaze downward. “Your familiar is rude.” “He’s not *my* familiar.” Rory’s fingers twitched toward the lock in her pocket. “What the hell are you doing here, Luc?” He took a slow sip from the mug—*Eva’s mug*—his dark eyes never leaving hers over the rim. The scent of whiskey curled toward her, rich and smoky. “Waiting.” “For Eva?” “For you.” The words landed like a physical blow. Rory’s stomach twisted. She hadn’t seen him in eight months. Not since that night in the alley behind Silas’s bar, when he’d pressed her against the brick wall and kissed her like he was trying to memorize the shape of her, his cane digging into her hip, his voice rough with something she hadn’t let herself name. *Stay,* he’d said. And she’d run. She swallowed. “How’d you even get in?” Luc set the mug down with a quiet *clink*. “Eva’s locks are child’s play.” “Of course they are,” Rory muttered. She should’ve known. Luc had a knack for slipping through defenses, literal and otherwise. “She’s gonna kill you.” “She’ll forgive me.” His cane tapped once against the floor. “Eventually.” Rory exhaled sharply through her nose. “You didn’t answer my question. *Why* are you here?” Luc pushed off the counter, the movement fluid, predatory. The streetlight caught the sharp angles of his face, the faint scar above his eyebrow—something she’d never asked about. He took a step forward. Then another. The space between them shrank, the air growing heavier, warmer. Rory’s back hit the wall before she realized she’d retreated. “You left something behind,” he said. Her pulse spiked. “I didn’t—” “Not *you*.” His voice dropped, low and rough. “Evan did.” The name was a bucket of ice water. Rory’s breath stuttered. “What?” Luc’s jaw tightened, the muscle feathering beneath his skin. “He’s been asking around. About you.” The floor tilted. Rory pressed a hand to the wall to steady herself, the plaster cool beneath her palm. “That’s not—he wouldn’t—” “He would.” Luc’s cane thudded softly against the floorboards as he closed the distance between them. “And he did. Three nights ago, he walked into the Black Hound and started flashing your photo around. Offering money for information.” Rory’s stomach lurched. The Black Hound was a neutral-ground pub for London’s supernatural crowd—a place where demons, witches, and worse could drink without starting a bloodbath. If Evan had gone in there, he was either desperate or stupid. Maybe both. “How much?” she asked, her voice hollow. Luc’s eyes darkened. “Enough to make people talk.” She laughed, sharp and humorless. “Great. So now every lowlife in London knows where to find me.” “No.” Luc’s free hand came up, fingers brushing the strand of hair that had fallen across her cheek. His touch was light, barely there, but it burned like a brand. “They know where to find *him*.” Rory’s breath caught. “Luc—” “He’s at the old textile factory in Whitechapel.” His thumb traced the shell of her ear, his voice a velvet blade. “Room 307. He’s been there since last night.” Her mind raced. Evan wasn’t stupid enough to hole up in a place like that unless he had backup. Unless he *knew* someone was coming for him. Unless— “This is a trap,” she whispered. Luc’s fingers curled around the nape of her neck, his grip firm, possessive. “Probably.” “Then why tell me?” His heterochromatic gaze locked onto hers, unblinking. “Because you’d never forgive me if I didn’t.” The honesty in his voice was a physical thing, a weight pressing against her chest. Rory’s throat tightened. She should push him away. She should tell him to leave, to mind his own damn business, that she didn’t need his help. But the words died on her lips because *God*, she was tired. Tired of running, tired of looking over her shoulder, tired of pretending she wasn’t terrified that one day Evan would find her, and this time, she wouldn’t get away. Luc’s thumb stroked the pulse beneath her jaw. “Say the word, *malphora*, and I’ll walk out that door. I’ll handle Evan. You’ll never see me again.” Her breath hitched at the nickname—the demonic term of endearment he’d called her that night in the alley. *Little storm*. She should’ve hated it. Should’ve hated *him*. But she didn’t. “Or,” Luc murmured, his lips brushing the corner of her mouth, his voice a dark promise, “you could let me help you end this.” Rory’s hands found his lapels, the fine wool smooth beneath her fingers. She could shove him away. She could tell him to go to hell. But instead, she fisted the fabric and yanked him closer, their bodies pressing together, her heart hammering against her ribs. “Why do you even care?” she demanded, her voice raw. Luc’s cane clattered to the floor as his hands cupped her face, his forehead resting against hers. His breath was warm, laced with whiskey and something darker, something that made her skin prickle. “Because,” he said, his voice a rough whisper, “I haven’t stopped thinking about you since the night you left.” The admission hung between them, heavy and irrevocable. Rory’s breath trembled. She should pull away. She should *run*. But then his lips were on hers, hot and demanding, and all the reasons why this was a terrible idea dissolved like sugar in rain. Luc kissed like he did everything else—with precision, with intent, like he was staking a claim. His hands slid down to her waist, pulling her flush against him, the hard lines of his body fitting against hers like they’d been designed for it. Rory gasped, her fingers tangling in his hair, knocking his careful style into disarray. He groaned into her mouth, the sound sending a shiver down her spine, and then his teeth grazed her lower lip, sharp and possessive. She broke away, breathless. “We can’t—” “We can.” His lips trailed down her throat, his voice a dark murmur against her skin. “We *should*.” Rory’s head fell back with a thud against the wall. “Luc—” “Say *yes*,” he growled, his hand sliding up to thumb the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist, the one Evan had given her years ago. His touch was gentle, almost reverent. “Let me help you.” She swallowed hard, her pulse racing. This was insane. Reckless. *Dangerous*. But then, so was he. And God help her, she’d always had a weakness for beautiful, dangerous things. “Yes,” she whispered. Luc’s eyes burned into hers, triumph and something fiercer flickering in their depths. Then his mouth was on hers again, harder this time, like he was sealing a bargain. Rory kissed him back, her hands gripping his shoulders, her nails digging in through the fine fabric of his suit. The world narrowed to the heat of him, the taste of whiskey and sin, the steady, insistent beat of his heart against hers. When they finally broke apart, her lips were swollen, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. Luc rested his forehead against hers, his thumb brushing her cheekbone. “We’ll leave at dawn,” he murmured. “Before the streets wake up.” Rory nodded, her mind still spinning. “Eva’s gonna kill us both.” Luc’s laugh was a low, dark sound. “Then it’s a good thing I’m hard to kill.” She huffed out a shaky breath, her fingers tightening on his jacket. “Luc?” “Hmm?” “Don’t make me regret this.” His smile was slow, sharp. “Oh, *malphora*,” he purred, pressing one last kiss to the corner of her mouth, “I intend to make sure you don’t.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"His cane tapped once [once]"
1"Luc’s cane thudded softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.356
leniency0.712
rawRatio0.095
effectiveRatio0.068
94.15% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1710
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.82% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1710
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"pulse"
count4
3
word"chaotic"
count1
4
word"charged"
count1
5
word"flicked"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count2
7
word"stomach"
count2
8
word"eyebrow"
count1
9
word"lurched"
count1
10
word"traced"
count1
11
word"velvet"
count1
12
word"raced"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count1
14
word"trembled"
count1
15
word"down her spine"
count1
16
word"racing"
count1
17
word"depths"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"weight"
2"pulse"
3"chaotic"
4"charged"
5"flicked"
6"familiar"
7"stomach"
8"eyebrow"
9"lurched"
10"traced"
11"velvet"
12"raced"
13"whisper"
14"trembled"
15"down her spine"
16"racing"
17"depths"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences135
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences135
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences173
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans20
markdownWords22
totalWords1696
ratio0.013
matches
0"mrrow"
1"told"
2"tap-tap"
3"my"
4"Eva’s mug"
5"Stay,"
6"clink"
7"Why"
8"you"
9"him"
10"knew"
11"God"
12"malphora"
13"Little storm"
14"him"
15"run"
16"should"
17"yes"
18"Dangerous"
19"malphora"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions25
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions57
wordCount1399
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.36
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory19
Eva5
Golden1
Empress1
Moreau1
Luc17
Silas1
Black1
Hound1
London1
Evan4
God2
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Moreau"
3"Luc"
4"Silas"
5"Evan"
6"God"
7"Ptolemy"
places
0"Golden"
1"London"
globalScore0.821
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences87
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.59
wordCount1696
matches
0"Not much, but better than nothing"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences173
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs70
mean24.23
std22.58
cv0.932
sampleLengths
079
152
23
32
452
537
618
772
84
995
1016
113
128
1314
1421
1528
162
172
1870
197
2014
2124
2211
2315
2455
256
265
2710
2812
2915
3022
3138
3240
337
348
3517
3636
374
3829
3928
406
4114
424
4315
4482
4526
4627
473
4824
4945
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences135
matches
0"been designed"
49.85% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs222
matches
0"was standing"
1"was trying"
2"was coming"
3"was staking"
4"was sealing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences173
ratio0.058
matches
0"The flat smelled the same—dust, old paper, and the faintest trace of Eva’s lavender shampoo, lingering like a ghost."
1"Not the usual groan of the building settling, not the radiator’s wheezing complaint—this was the deliberate, measured shift of weight from one foot to another."
2"Just the slow, deliberate *tap-tap* of something—fingers, maybe, or the end of a cane—against the countertop."
3"Lucien Moreau leaned against the counter, one hand wrapped around a chipped mug—Eva’s favorite, the one with the cracked handle—and the other resting on the head of his cane."
4"He took a slow sip from the mug—*Eva’s mug*—his dark eyes never leaving hers over the rim."
5"The streetlight caught the sharp angles of his face, the faint scar above his eyebrow—something she’d never asked about."
6"The Black Hound was a neutral-ground pub for London’s supernatural crowd—a place where demons, witches, and worse could drink without starting a bloodbath."
7"Unless—"
8"Her breath hitched at the nickname—the demonic term of endearment he’d called her that night in the alley."
9"Luc kissed like he did everything else—with precision, with intent, like he was staking a claim."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1412
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.03186968838526912
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.006373937677053824
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences173
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences173
mean9.8
std7.85
cv0.801
sampleLengths
020
119
226
314
413
515
614
710
83
92
1025
116
126
1315
1412
1525
162
1716
1814
1911
206
2115
2226
234
2429
2516
2620
2730
283
2913
303
313
324
331
3410
354
3613
378
3817
3910
401
412
422
437
443
457
4647
473
483
492
51.64% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.34104046242774566
totalSentences173
uniqueOpeners59
83.33% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences120
matches
0"Just the slow, deliberate *tap-tap*"
1"Then she saw him."
2"Then his mouth was on"
ratio0.025
73.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences120
matches
0"She nudged the door wider"
1"she muttered, toeing off her"
2"She bent to scratch behind"
3"Her fingers tightened around the"
4"she called, voice steady despite"
5"Her knuckles brushed the cool"
6"She eased forward, each step"
7"He looked exactly as she"
8"His suit was immaculate, charcoal"
9"Her breath hitched."
10"He took a slow sip"
11"She hadn’t seen him in"
12"She should’ve known."
13"His cane tapped once against"
14"He took a step forward."
15"Her pulse spiked."
16"His voice dropped, low and"
17"she asked, her voice hollow"
18"She laughed, sharp and humorless."
19"His touch was light, barely"
ratio0.367
43.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount100
totalSentences120
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked back"
1"The flat smelled the same—dust,"
2"She nudged the door wider"
3"Ptolemy wound between her ankles"
4"she muttered, toeing off her"
5"The tabby’s fur bristled as"
6"She bent to scratch behind"
7"A floorboard creaked."
8"Someone was standing in Eva’s"
9"Her fingers tightened around the"
10"Ptolemy’s back arched, his fur"
11"she called, voice steady despite"
12"Rory set the food down"
13"Her knuckles brushed the cool"
14"She eased forward, each step"
15"The kitchen light was off,"
16"Lucien Moreau leaned against the"
17"The ivory handle gleamed dully"
18"He looked exactly as she"
19"His suit was immaculate, charcoal"
ratio0.833
41.67% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences120
matches
0"If Evan had gone in"
ratio0.008
64.94% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Ptolemy’s back arched, his fur standing on end, a low growl rumbling in his throat."
1"Not since that night in the alley behind Silas’s bar, when he’d pressed her against the brick wall and kissed her like he was trying to memorize the shape of he…"
2"But instead, she fisted the fabric and yanked him closer, their bodies pressing together, her heart hammering against her ribs."
3"His breath was warm, laced with whiskey and something darker, something that made her skin prickle."
4"Rory gasped, her fingers tangling in his hair, knocking his careful style into disarray."
5"Rory kissed him back, her hands gripping his shoulders, her nails digging in through the fine fabric of his suit."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"she called, voice steady despite the sudden hammering of her pulse"
1"she asked, her voice hollow"
2"His thumb traced, his voice a velvet blade"
3"she demanded, her voice raw"
4"he said, his voice a rough whisper,"
5"His lips trailed, his voice a dark murmur against her skin"
14.41% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"Rory muttered (mutter)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"Luc murmured (murmur)"
4"she demanded (demand)"
5"he growled (growl)"
6"she whispered (whisper)"
7"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.22
leniency0.441
rawRatio0.615
effectiveRatio0.271
77.1046%