Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPD5Y2NSAKDF114403WDR5

Run Details

Duration:
19.5s
Cost:
$0.000807
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest hummed with the low murmur of conversation and the clink of glasses. The dim light cast long shadows across the worn wooden floor, and the scent of aged whiskey mingled with the faint tang of rain from outside. Aurora Carter, her black hair damp from the evening drizzle, pushed open the door and stepped inside, her bright blue eyes scanning the room. She hadn't been here in years, but the place was unchanged, a sanctuary of nostalgia in the heart of Soho. She made her way to the bar, her boots echoing slightly on the wooden floor. The bartender, a man with a neatly trimmed beard and grey-streaked auburn hair, looked up as she approached. His hazel eyes met hers, and for a moment, time seemed to stand still. "Well, look what the cat dragged in," Silas Blackwood said, his voice a low rumble. He leaned against the bar, his slight limp barely noticeable. "Aurora Carter, as I live and breathe." Rory smiled, but it didn't reach her eyes. "Silas. It's been a while." "Too long," he replied, his gaze flicking to the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. "What brings you back to the Nest?" She shrugged, her fingers tracing the rim of a coaster. "Just passing through. Thought I'd stop in, see if the old place still stood." Silas chuckled, pouring her a whiskey without asking. "Still take it neat, I presume?" "Some things never change," she said, taking the glass from him. The whiskey burned her throat, familiar and comforting. Silas leaned in, his voice dropping to a conspiratorial tone. "You know, I always wondered what happened to you after... well, after everything." Rory's fingers tightened around the glass. "You mean after Evan?" Silas nodded, his expression unreadable. "Yeah. After Evan." She took a deep breath, her eyes flicking to the old maps and photographs on the walls. "I left. Went to London, started over. Tried to put it all behind me." "Did it work?" Silas asked, his gaze searching her face. Rory met his eyes, her own reflecting a mix of pain and resilience. "Some days, yeah. Other days, not so much." Silas reached out, his hand covering hers. "You know, you don't have to carry it all alone. Not anymore." She looked down at his hand, then back up at him. "I know. It's just... hard, you know? To let go." Silas nodded, his thumb tracing the scar on her wrist. "I get it. But you're not that scared girl anymore, Rory. You're stronger now." She smiled, this time it reached her eyes. "Thanks, Silas. I needed to hear that." He squeezed her hand, then let go. "Anytime, kid. Anytime." They sat in comfortable silence for a while, the weight of the past hanging between them. But there was also a sense of hope, of new beginnings. "Hey, Silas," Rory said, her voice soft. "Do you remember that time we snuck out to the rooftop and watched the sunrise?" Silas laughed, his eyes crinkling at the corners. "How could I forget? Your dad was livid when he found out." Rory grinned, her eyes sparkling with mischief. "Yeah, well, it was worth it. That was one of the best nights of my life." Silas looked at her, his expression serious. "You know, Rory, you deserve to have more nights like that. Nights filled with joy and laughter, not regret and pain." She looked down at her glass, her fingers tracing the rim. "I know, Silas. I just... I don't know how to let go of the past." Silas reached out, his hand covering hers. "You take it one day at a time, kid. One day at a time." Rory looked up at him, her eyes filled with gratitude. "Thanks, Silas. I don't know what I'd do without you." He smiled, his eyes warm. "You'll never have to find out, kid. I'll always be here for you." They sat in silence for a while longer, the weight of the past still hanging between them. But there was also a sense of hope, of new beginnings. And for the first time in a long time, Rory felt like maybe, just maybe, she could let go of the past and embrace the future. Silas looked at her, his expression serious. "You know, Rory, you deserve to have more nights like that. Nights filled with joy and laughter, not regret and pain." She looked down at her glass, her fingers tracing the rim. "I know, Silas. I just... I don't know how to let go of the past." Silas reached out, his hand covering hers. "You take it one day at a time, kid. One day at a time." Rory looked up at him, her eyes filled with gratitude. "Thanks, Silas. I don't know what I'd do without you." He smiled, his eyes warm. "You'll never have to find out, kid. I'll always be here for you." They sat in silence for a while longer, the weight of the past still hanging between them. But there was also a sense of hope, of new beginnings. And for the first time in a long time, Rory felt like maybe, just maybe, she could let go of the past and embrace the future. The door to the bar swung open, and a gust of cold air rushed in. Rory looked up, her eyes widening as she saw who it was. Evan, her ex, stood in the doorway, his eyes scanning the room until they landed on her. He smiled, a slow, predatory smile that sent a shiver down her spine. "Well, well, well," he said, his voice dripping with false charm. "If it isn't little Rory Carter. I thought I'd never see you again." Rory stood up, her chair scraping against the floor. "What are you doing here, Evan?" He walked towards her, his eyes never leaving hers. "I could ask you the same question. But I already know the answer. You're here to see Silas, aren't you? Your dear old friend." Rory's hands clenched into fists at her sides. "That's none of your business, Evan. Now leave, before I call the police." Evan laughed, a harsh, bitter sound. "Oh, Rory. Always so quick to run to the authorities. But you know what? I'm not here to cause trouble. I'm just here to talk." Rory's eyes narrowed. "Talk? About what?" Evan's smile faded, his expression turning serious. "About us, Rory. About what happened between us. I think it's time we had a little chat, don't you?" Rory's heart pounded in her chest, but she refused to show her fear. "There is no 'us', Evan. There hasn't been for a long time. Now leave, before I make you." Evan's eyes flashed with anger, but he took a step back. "Fine, Rory. But this isn't over. Not by a long shot." With that, he turned and walked out of the bar, the door slamming shut behind him. Rory let out a shaky breath, her hands trembling. Silas stood up, his expression concerned. "Are you okay, kid?" Rory nodded, her voice barely above a whisper. "Yeah. I'm okay." Silas reached out, his hand covering hers. "You know, Rory, you don't have to face him alone. I'm here for you, remember?" Rory looked up at him, her eyes filled with gratitude. "Thanks, Silas. I don't know what I'd do without you." He smiled, his eyes warm. "You'll never have to find out, kid. I'll always be here for you." They sat in silence for a while longer, the weight of the past still hanging between them. But there was also a sense of hope, of new beginnings. And for the first time in a long time, Rory felt like maybe, just maybe, she could let go of the past and embrace the future. The door to the bar swung open again, and a gust of cold air rushed in. Rory looked up, her eyes widening as she saw who it was. Evan, her ex, stood in the doorway, his eyes scanning the room until they landed on her. He smiled, a slow, predatory smile that sent a shiver down her spine. "Well, well, well," he said, his voice dripping with false charm. "If it isn't little Rory Carter. I thought I'd never see you again." Rory stood up, her chair scraping against the floor. "What are you doing here, Evan?" He walked towards her, his eyes never leaving hers. "I could ask you the same question. But I already know the answer. You're here to see Silas, aren't you? Your dear old friend." Rory's hands clenched into fists at her sides. "That's none of your business, Evan. Now leave, before I call the police." Evan laughed, a harsh, bitter sound. "Oh, Rory. Always so quick to run to the authorities. But you know what? I'm not here to cause trouble. I'm just here to talk." Rory's eyes narrowed. "Talk? About what?" Evan's smile faded, his expression turning serious. "About us, Rory. About what happened between us. I think it's time we had a little chat, don't you?" Rory's heart pounded in her chest, but she refused to show her fear. "There is no 'us', Evan. There hasn't been for a long time. Now leave, before I make you." Evan's eyes flashed with anger, but he took a step back. "Fine, Rory. But this isn't over. Not by a long shot." With that, he turned and walked out of the bar, the door slamming shut behind him. Rory let out a shaky breath, her hands trembling. Silas stood up, his expression concerned. "Are you okay, kid?" Rory nodded, her voice barely above a whisper. "Yeah. I'm okay." Silas reached out, his hand covering hers. "You know, Rory, you don't have to face him alone. I'm here for you, remember?" Rory looked up at him, her eyes filled with gratitude. "Thanks, Silas. I don't know what I'd do without you." He smiled, his eyes warm. "You'll never have to find out, kid. I'll always be here for you." They sat in silence for a while longer, the weight of the past still hanging between them. But there was also a sense of hope, of new beginnings. And for the first time in a long time, Rory felt like maybe, just maybe, she could let go of the past and embrace the future.
created_at"2026-02-20T14:14:07.053Z" 2/20/2026, 2:14:07 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.111
leniency0.222
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.33% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1730
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
1.73% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1730
totalAiIsms34
found
0
word"scanning"
count3
1
word"sanctuary"
count1
2
word"echoing"
count1
3
word"tracing"
count4
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"comforting"
count1
6
word"unreadable"
count1
7
word"comfortable"
count1
8
word"silence"
count5
9
word"weight"
count5
10
word"sense of"
count5
11
word"down her spine"
count2
12
word"charm"
count2
13
word"whisper"
count2
highlights
0"scanning"
1"sanctuary"
2"echoing"
3"tracing"
4"familiar"
5"comforting"
6"unreadable"
7"comfortable"
8"silence"
9"weight"
10"sense of"
11"down her spine"
12"charm"
13"whisper"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches8
maxInWindow8
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count2
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
2
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count2
3
label"sent a shiver through"
count2
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
1"eyes narrowed"
2"clenched into fists"
3"sent a shiver down"
62.28% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells7
narrationSentences93
matches
0"a sense of hope"
1"a sense of hope"
2"a sense of hope"
3"d with anger"
4"a sense of hope"
5"d with anger"
6"a sense of hope"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences93
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences149
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1728
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions56
wordCount1034
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.61
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Soho1
Blackwood1
Rory27
Silas16
Evan8
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Blackwood"
4"Rory"
5"Silas"
6"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.194
windowScore0.167
32.35% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"felt like maybe, just maybe, she could"
1"felt like maybe, just maybe, she could"
2"felt like maybe, just maybe, she could"
3"felt like maybe, just maybe, she could"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1728
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences149
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs69
mean25.04
std14.03
cv0.56
sampleLengths
085
147
232
313
423
524
614
719
823
910
108
1131
1210
1321
1419
1521
1624
1715
1810
1927
2022
2120
2223
2328
2426
2521
2620
2718
2854
2928
3026
3121
3220
3318
3454
3557
3624
3715
3833
3921
4031
416
4226
4331
4422
4525
4610
4711
4822
4920
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"was unchanged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs178
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences149
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1036
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.033783783783783786
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.004826254826254826
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences149
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences149
mean11.6
std5.57
cv0.481
sampleLengths
015
126
224
320
415
518
614
715
810
97
108
115
1216
137
1410
1514
168
176
1811
198
2010
2113
226
234
245
253
2617
2714
2810
2913
308
317
3212
3311
3410
3510
3614
378
387
397
403
4116
4211
437
4415
458
4612
477
4816
497
48.66% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.2348993288590604
totalSentences149
uniqueOpeners35
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
ratio0
99.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences93
matches
0"She hadn't been here in"
1"She made her way to"
2"His hazel eyes met hers,"
3"He leaned against the bar,"
4"he replied, his gaze flicking"
5"She shrugged, her fingers tracing"
6"she said, taking the glass"
7"She took a deep breath,"
8"She looked down at his"
9"She smiled, this time it"
10"He squeezed her hand, then"
11"They sat in comfortable silence"
12"She looked down at her"
13"He smiled, his eyes warm."
14"They sat in silence for"
15"She looked down at her"
16"He smiled, his eyes warm."
17"They sat in silence for"
18"He smiled, a slow, predatory"
19"he said, his voice dripping"
ratio0.301
19.14% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences93
matches
0"The Raven's Nest hummed with"
1"The dim light cast long"
2"Aurora Carter, her black hair"
3"She hadn't been here in"
4"She made her way to"
5"The bartender, a man with"
6"His hazel eyes met hers,"
7"Silas Blackwood said, his voice"
8"He leaned against the bar,"
9"Rory smiled, but it didn't"
10"he replied, his gaze flicking"
11"She shrugged, her fingers tracing"
12"Silas chuckled, pouring her a"
13"she said, taking the glass"
14"The whiskey burned her throat,"
15"Silas leaned in, his voice"
16"Rory's fingers tightened around the"
17"Silas nodded, his expression unreadable."
18"She took a deep breath,"
19"Silas asked, his gaze searching"
ratio0.882
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Silas Blackwood said, his voice a low rumble"
1"Silas asked, his gaze searching her face"
2"Rory said, her voice soft"
3"he said, his voice dripping with false charm"
4"he said, his voice dripping with false charm"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.111
leniency0.222
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
72.1909%