NC Bench
Overview
About
Tests
Models
Vendors
Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPD5Y2NSAKDF114403WDR5
Run Details
Model:
Mistral Small 3.2 24B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
19.5s
Cost:
$0.000807
Provider:
Mistral
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
91.33%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
1.73%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
0.00%
Cliché density
(details)
62.28%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
16.67%
Name drop frequency
(details)
32.35%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
48.66%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
99.57%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
19.14%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
72.1909%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The Raven's Nest hummed with
the low murmur of conversation and the clink of glasses.
The dim light cast long
shadows across the worn wooden floor, and the scent of aged whiskey mingled with the faint tang of rain from outside.
Aurora Carter, her black hair
damp from the evening drizzle, pushed open the door and stepped inside, her bright blue eyes
scanning
the room.
She hadn't been here in
years, but the place
was unchanged
, a
sanctuary
of nostalgia in the heart of Soho.
She made her way to
the bar, her boots
echoing
slightly
on the wooden floor.
The bartender, a man with
a neatly trimmed beard and grey-streaked auburn hair, looked up as she approached. His hazel eyes met hers, and for a moment, time
seemed to
stand still. "Well, look what the cat dragged in,"
Silas Blackwood said, his voice
a low rumble. He leaned against the bar, his slight limp barely noticeable. "Aurora Carter, as I live and breathe."
Rory smiled, but it didn't
reach her eyes. "Silas. It's been a while." "Too long,"
he replied, his gaze flicking
to the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. "What brings you back to the Nest?"
She shrugged, her fingers tracing
the rim of a coaster. "Just passing through. Thought I'd stop in, see if the old place still stood."
Silas chuckled, pouring her a
whiskey without asking. "Still take it neat, I presume?" "Some things never change,"
she said, taking the glass
from him. The whiskey burned her throat,
familiar
and
comforting
.
Silas leaned in, his voice
dropping to a conspiratorial tone. "You know, I always wondered what happened to you after... well, after everything."
Rory's fingers tightened around the
glass. "You mean after Evan?" Silas nodded, his expression
unreadable
. "Yeah. After Evan." She took a deep breath, her eyes flicking to the old maps and photographs on the walls. "I left. Went to London, started over. Tried to put it all behind me." "Did it work?"
Silas asked, his gaze searching
her face. Rory met his eyes, her own reflecting a mix of pain and resilience. "Some days, yeah. Other days, not so much." Silas reached out, his hand covering hers. "You know, you don't have to carry it all alone. Not anymore."
She looked down at his
hand, then back up at him. "I know. It's just... hard, you know? To let go." Silas nodded, his thumb
tracing
the scar on her wrist. "I get it. But you're not that scared girl anymore, Rory. You're stronger now."
She smiled, this time it
reached her eyes. "Thanks, Silas. I needed to hear that."
He squeezed her hand, then
let go. "Anytime, kid. Anytime."
They sat in comfortable silence
for a while, the
weight
of the past hanging between them. But there was also
a sense of hope
, of new beginnings. "Hey, Silas,"
Rory said, her voice soft
. "Do you remember that time we snuck out to the rooftop and watched the sunrise?" Silas laughed, his eyes crinkling at the corners. "How could I forget? Your dad was livid when he found out." Rory grinned, her eyes sparkling with mischief. "Yeah, well, it was worth it. That was one of the best nights of my life." Silas looked at her, his expression serious. "You know, Rory, you deserve to have more nights like that. Nights filled with joy and laughter, not regret and pain."
She looked down at her
glass, her fingers
tracing
the rim. "I know, Silas. I just... I don't know how to let go of the past." Silas reached out, his hand covering hers. "You take it one day at a time, kid. One day at a time." Rory looked up at him, her eyes filled with gratitude. "Thanks, Silas. I don't know what I'd do without you." He smiled, his eyes warm. "You'll never have to find out, kid. I'll always be here for you."
They sat in silence for
a while longer, the
weight
of the past still hanging between them. But there was also
a sense of hope
, of new beginnings. And for the first time in a long time, Rory
felt like maybe, just maybe, she could
let go of the past and embrace the future. Silas looked at her, his expression serious. "You know, Rory, you deserve to have more nights like that. Nights filled with joy and laughter, not regret and pain."
She looked down at her
glass, her fingers
tracing
the rim. "I know, Silas. I just... I don't know how to let go of the past." Silas reached out, his hand covering hers. "You take it one day at a time, kid. One day at a time." Rory looked up at him, her eyes filled with gratitude. "Thanks, Silas. I don't know what I'd do without you." He smiled, his eyes warm. "You'll never have to find out, kid. I'll always be here for you."
They sat in silence for
a while longer, the
weight
of the past still hanging between them. But there was also
a sense of hope
, of new beginnings. And for the first time in a long time, Rory
felt like maybe, just maybe, she could
let go of the past and embrace the future. The door to the bar swung open, and a gust of cold air rushed in. Rory looked up, her eyes widening as she saw who it was. Evan, her ex, stood in the doorway, his eyes
scanning
the room until they landed on her.
He smiled, a slow, predatory
smile that
sent a shiver down
her spine. "Well, well, well,"
he said, his voice dripping
with false
charm
. "If it isn't little Rory Carter. I thought I'd never see you again." Rory stood up, her chair scraping against the floor. "What are you doing here, Evan?" He walked towards her, his eyes never leaving hers. "I could ask you the same question. But I already know the answer. You're here to see Silas, aren't you? Your dear old friend." Rory's hands
clenched into fists
at her sides. "That's none of your business, Evan. Now leave, before I call the police." Evan laughed, a harsh, bitter sound. "Oh, Rory. Always so quick to run to the authorities. But you know what? I'm not here to cause trouble. I'm just here to talk." Rory's
eyes narrowed
. "Talk? About what?" Evan's smile faded, his expression turning serious. "About us, Rory. About what happened between us. I think it's time we had a little chat, don't you?" Rory's
heart pounded in her chest
, but she refused to show her fear. "There is no 'us', Evan. There hasn't been for a long time. Now leave, before I make you." Evan's eyes flashed with anger, but he took a step back. "Fine, Rory. But this isn't over. Not by a long shot." With that, he turned and walked out of the bar, the door slamming shut behind him. Rory let out a shaky breath, her hands trembling. Silas stood up, his expression concerned. "Are you okay, kid?" Rory nodded, her voice
barely above a whisper
. "Yeah. I'm okay." Silas reached out, his hand covering hers. "You know, Rory, you don't have to face him alone. I'm here for you, remember?" Rory looked up at him, her eyes filled with gratitude. "Thanks, Silas. I don't know what I'd do without you." He smiled, his eyes warm. "You'll never have to find out, kid. I'll always be here for you."
They sat in silence for
a while longer, the
weight
of the past still hanging between them. But there was also
a sense of hope
, of new beginnings. And for the first time in a long time, Rory
felt like maybe, just maybe, she could
let go of the past and embrace the future. The door to the bar swung open again, and a gust of cold air rushed in. Rory looked up, her eyes widening as she saw who it was. Evan, her ex, stood in the doorway, his eyes
scanning
the room until they landed on her.
He smiled, a slow, predatory
smile that
sent a shiver down
her spine. "Well, well, well,"
he said, his voice dripping
with false
charm
. "If it isn't little Rory Carter. I thought I'd never see you again." Rory stood up, her chair scraping against the floor. "What are you doing here, Evan?" He walked towards her, his eyes never leaving hers. "I could ask you the same question. But I already know the answer. You're here to see Silas, aren't you? Your dear old friend." Rory's hands
clenched into fists
at her sides. "That's none of your business, Evan. Now leave, before I call the police." Evan laughed, a harsh, bitter sound. "Oh, Rory. Always so quick to run to the authorities. But you know what? I'm not here to cause trouble. I'm just here to talk." Rory's
eyes narrowed
. "Talk? About what?" Evan's smile faded, his expression turning serious. "About us, Rory. About what happened between us. I think it's time we had a little chat, don't you?" Rory's
heart pounded in her chest
, but she refused to show her fear. "There is no 'us', Evan. There hasn't been for a long time. Now leave, before I make you." Evan's eyes flashed with anger, but he took a step back. "Fine, Rory. But this isn't over. Not by a long shot." With that, he turned and walked out of the bar, the door slamming shut behind him. Rory let out a shaky breath, her hands trembling. Silas stood up, his expression concerned. "Are you okay, kid?" Rory nodded, her voice
barely above a whisper
. "Yeah. I'm okay." Silas reached out, his hand covering hers. "You know, Rory, you don't have to face him alone. I'm here for you, remember?" Rory looked up at him, her eyes filled with gratitude. "Thanks, Silas. I don't know what I'd do without you." He smiled, his eyes warm. "You'll never have to find out, kid. I'll always be here for you."
They sat in silence for
a while longer, the
weight
of the past still hanging between them. But there was also
a sense of hope
, of new beginnings. And for the first time in a long time, Rory
felt like maybe, just maybe, she could
let go of the past and embrace the future.
created_at
"2026-02-20T14:14:07.053Z"
2/20/2026, 2:14:07 PM
model
"mistralai/mistral-small-3.2-24b-instruct-2506"
app_id
182717
external_user
(null)
streamed
true
cancelled
false
latency
282
moderation_latency
(null)
generation_time
19333
tokens_prompt
1094
tokens_completion
2464
native_tokens_prompt
1013
native_tokens_completion
2352
native_tokens_completion_images
(null)
native_tokens_reasoning
0
native_tokens_cached
0
num_media_prompt
(null)
num_input_audio_prompt
(null)
num_media_completion
0
num_search_results
(null)
origin
"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byok
false
finish_reason
"stop"
native_finish_reason
"stop"
usage
0.0008069
router
(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id
"23fd6b91-74d8-45fc-ac00-cf141ec7f4a5"
id
"b2ba8b394d844ee9860182bbe58f8d30"
is_byok
false
latency
282
model_permaslug
"mistralai/mistral-small-3.2-24b-instruct-2506"
provider_name
"Mistral"
status
200
api_type
"completions"
id
"gen-1771596847-2pjZIxSXhMojVyvHf8w4"
upstream_id
"b2ba8b394d844ee9860182bbe58f8d30"
total_cost
0.0008069
cache_discount
(null)
upstream_inference_cost
0
provider_name
"Mistral"
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
7
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
63
tagDensity
0.111
leniency
0.222
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
91.33%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1730
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
1
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
2
highlights
0
"slightly"
1
"barely above a whisper"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
1.73%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1730
totalAiIsms
34
found
0
word
"scanning"
count
3
1
word
"sanctuary"
count
1
2
word
"echoing"
count
1
3
word
"tracing"
count
4
4
word
"familiar"
count
1
5
word
"comforting"
count
1
6
word
"unreadable"
count
1
7
word
"comfortable"
count
1
8
word
"silence"
count
5
9
word
"weight"
count
5
10
word
"sense of"
count
5
11
word
"down her spine"
count
2
12
word
"charm"
count
2
13
word
"whisper"
count
2
highlights
0
"scanning"
1
"sanctuary"
2
"echoing"
3
"tracing"
4
"familiar"
5
"comforting"
6
"unreadable"
7
"comfortable"
8
"silence"
9
"weight"
10
"sense of"
11
"down her spine"
12
"charm"
13
"whisper"
0.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
8
maxInWindow
8
found
0
label
"heart pounded in chest"
count
2
1
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
2
2
label
"clenched jaw/fists"
count
2
3
label
"sent a shiver through"
count
2
highlights
0
"heart pounded in her chest"
1
"eyes narrowed"
2
"clenched into fists"
3
"sent a shiver down"
62.28%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
7
narrationSentences
93
matches
0
"a sense of hope"
1
"a sense of hope"
2
"a sense of hope"
3
"d with anger"
4
"a sense of hope"
5
"d with anger"
6
"a sense of hope"
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
93
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
149
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
26
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1728
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
13
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
16.67%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
56
wordCount
1034
uniqueNames
8
maxNameDensity
2.61
worstName
"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity
4.5
worstWindowName
"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven
1
Nest
1
Carter
1
Soho
1
Blackwood
1
Rory
27
Silas
16
Evan
8
persons
0
"Raven"
1
"Nest"
2
"Carter"
3
"Blackwood"
4
"Rory"
5
"Silas"
6
"Evan"
places
0
"Soho"
globalScore
0.194
windowScore
0.167
32.35%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
85
glossingSentenceCount
4
matches
0
"felt like maybe, just maybe, she could"
1
"felt like maybe, just maybe, she could"
2
"felt like maybe, just maybe, she could"
3
"felt like maybe, just maybe, she could"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1728
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
149
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
69
mean
25.04
std
14.03
cv
0.56
sampleLengths
0
85
1
47
2
32
3
13
4
23
5
24
6
14
7
19
8
23
9
10
10
8
11
31
12
10
13
21
14
19
15
21
16
24
17
15
18
10
19
27
20
22
21
20
22
23
23
28
24
26
25
21
26
20
27
18
28
54
29
28
30
26
31
21
32
20
33
18
34
54
35
57
36
24
37
15
38
33
39
21
40
31
41
6
42
26
43
31
44
22
45
25
46
10
47
11
48
22
49
20
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
93
matches
0
"was unchanged"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
178
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
149
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1036
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
35
adverbRatio
0.033783783783783786
lyAdverbCount
5
lyAdverbRatio
0.004826254826254826
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
149
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
149
mean
11.6
std
5.57
cv
0.481
sampleLengths
0
15
1
26
2
24
3
20
4
15
5
18
6
14
7
15
8
10
9
7
10
8
11
5
12
16
13
7
14
10
15
14
16
8
17
6
18
11
19
8
20
10
21
13
22
6
23
4
24
5
25
3
26
17
27
14
28
10
29
13
30
8
31
7
32
12
33
11
34
10
35
10
36
14
37
8
38
7
39
7
40
3
41
16
42
11
43
7
44
15
45
8
46
12
47
7
48
16
49
7
48.66%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.2348993288590604
totalSentences
149
uniqueOpeners
35
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
93
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
99.57%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
28
totalSentences
93
matches
0
"She hadn't been here in"
1
"She made her way to"
2
"His hazel eyes met hers,"
3
"He leaned against the bar,"
4
"he replied, his gaze flicking"
5
"She shrugged, her fingers tracing"
6
"she said, taking the glass"
7
"She took a deep breath,"
8
"She looked down at his"
9
"She smiled, this time it"
10
"He squeezed her hand, then"
11
"They sat in comfortable silence"
12
"She looked down at her"
13
"He smiled, his eyes warm."
14
"They sat in silence for"
15
"She looked down at her"
16
"He smiled, his eyes warm."
17
"They sat in silence for"
18
"He smiled, a slow, predatory"
19
"he said, his voice dripping"
ratio
0.301
19.14%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
82
totalSentences
93
matches
0
"The Raven's Nest hummed with"
1
"The dim light cast long"
2
"Aurora Carter, her black hair"
3
"She hadn't been here in"
4
"She made her way to"
5
"The bartender, a man with"
6
"His hazel eyes met hers,"
7
"Silas Blackwood said, his voice"
8
"He leaned against the bar,"
9
"Rory smiled, but it didn't"
10
"he replied, his gaze flicking"
11
"She shrugged, her fingers tracing"
12
"Silas chuckled, pouring her a"
13
"she said, taking the glass"
14
"The whiskey burned her throat,"
15
"Silas leaned in, his voice"
16
"Rory's fingers tightened around the"
17
"Silas nodded, his expression unreadable."
18
"She took a deep breath,"
19
"Silas asked, his gaze searching"
ratio
0.882
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
93
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
48
technicalSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
7
uselessAdditionCount
5
matches
0
"Silas Blackwood said, his voice a low rumble"
1
"Silas asked, his gaze searching her face"
2
"Rory said, her voice soft"
3
"he said, his voice dripping with false charm"
4
"he said, his voice dripping with false charm"
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
7
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
63
tagDensity
0.111
leniency
0.222
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
72.1909%