Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPDHRRKX3ZM0TC26N70VTT

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2m 32s
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$0.002388
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Mistral

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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

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Aurora Carter adjusted the strap of her bag, the weight of the Fae-Forged Blade tucked within pressing against her side. She glanced at her companions, Nyx's shadowy form shifting restlessly beside her, and Isolde's serene expression as she gazed ahead. The ancient oak standing stones loomed before them, their gnarled surfaces etched with runes that pulsed faintly, as if breathing. "Beyond lies the Grove," Isolde murmured, her voice like wind chimes in a gentle breeze. "A pocket between realms, where time dances to its own rhythm." Aurora reached out, her fingers hovering just above the rough bark of the nearest stone. A faint hum resonated beneath her fingertips, a sensation like static electricity. She withdrew her hand, rubbing her fingers together as if to dispel the lingering tingles. Nyx stepped forward, their shadowy form rippling like ink in water. "The air here is thick with magic," they whispered, their voice carrying an echo as if speaking from a great distance. "It clings to the skin, heavy and sweet." Isolde led the way, her silver hair catching the dappled sunlight filtering through the dense canopy above. The trees here were ancient, their trunks wide and twisted, bark etched with symbols that seemed to shift when not looked at directly. The ground beneath their feet was soft, a carpet of wildflowers in full bloom, their petals unfurling in vibrant hues that seemed to defy the season. Aurora knelt, brushing her fingers over the blossoms. "They're warm," she murmured, surprised by the gentle heat radiating from the flowers. She looked up, her bright blue eyes wide with wonder. "Everything here... it's alive in a way I've never felt before." As they ventured deeper, the air grew thicker, the scent of blooming flowers mingling with the earthy aroma of damp soil and ancient wood. The sounds of the Grove enveloped them—a symphony of rustling leaves, the distant trickle of water, and the occasional melodic chirp of unseen birds. Nyx reached out, their shadowy fingers brushing against a low-hanging branch. The leaves shimmered, their edges glowing faintly with an inner light. "This place is a treasure trove of magic," they murmured, their voice tinged with awe. "It's a wonder it remains hidden." Isolde paused, her pale lavender eyes scanning the surroundings. "The Grove is hidden because it chooses to be," she explained, her voice soft yet carrying a weight of ancient knowledge. "It reveals itself only to those who seek it with pure intent." Aurora's fingers brushed against the Heartstone Pendant nestled against her chest, its faint warmth a comforting presence. She could feel its pulse, a steady rhythm that seemed to resonate with the very heart of the Grove. They came upon a clearing, the center of which was dominated by a crystal-clear pool. The water's surface was still, reflecting the sky above like a mirror. Isolde approached the edge, her reflection shimmering and distorting as she knelt. "Drink," she invited, cupping her hands and scooping up the water. "The waters of the Grove grant clarity and insight." Aurora hesitated, then followed suit. The water was cool and refreshing, its taste crisp and clean. As she drank, she felt a warmth spread through her, a sense of calm and clarity washing over her. She looked up, her eyes meeting Isolde's. "Thank you," she said, her voice steady. "I feel... different." Isolde smiled, a soft curve of her lips that seemed to light up her entire face. "The Grove has accepted you," she said. "It will reveal its secrets to you in time." Nyx, meanwhile, had wandered to the edge of the clearing, their shadowy form shifting and rippling. "There's something here," they called out, their voice echoing slightly. "A disturbance in the air." Aurora and Isolde joined them, their eyes scanning the area. The trees here were denser, their branches intertwining to form a natural archway. Beyond, the light seemed to dim, the air taking on a cool, metallic tang. "Beyond lies the Veil," Isolde murmured, her voice barely audible. "The boundary between realms. It is thin here, weakened by the magic of the Grove." Aurora felt a chill run down her spine, the Heartstone Pendant pulsing warmly against her chest. She could feel the power radiating from the archway, a palpable force that seemed to push and pull at her senses. Nyx reached out, their shadowy fingers brushing against the Veil. It shimmered, the faint distortion visible even to Aurora's mortal eyes. "It's like looking through a window into another world," they whispered, their voice filled with wonder. Isolde placed a hand on Aurora's shoulder, her touch grounding. "The Veil is not to be trifled with," she warned. "It is a barrier for a reason. But here, in the Grove, we can observe it safely." Aurora nodded, her eyes fixed on the shimmering barrier. She could see movement on the other side, shadows shifting and dancing. The sounds of the Grove faded, replaced by a distant, echoing hum, like the murmur of a thousand voices. "Can you see through it?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Isolde nodded. "With practice, yes. But it is not a skill to be taken lightly. The Veil can be... deceiving." Aurora reached out, her fingers hovering just inches from the shimmering barrier. She could feel the power radiating from it, a palpable force that seemed to push against her very soul. She withdrew her hand, rubbing her fingers together as if to dispel the lingering tingles. "Let's not push our luck," she said, stepping back. "We should explore more of the Grove. There's so much to see." Isolde nodded, her eyes scanning the surroundings. "There is much to learn here," she agreed. "But remember, the Grove is a living entity. It will reveal its secrets to those who respect it." As they turned to leave, Aurora glanced back at the Veil, her eyes lingering on the shifting shadows beyond. She couldn't shake the feeling that something—or someone—was watching her from the other side. She turned away, her heart pounding in her chest, the Heartstone Pendant pulsing warmly against her skin. The trio continued their exploration, the Grove revealing its wonders one step at a time. The air grew cooler, the scent of blooming flowers giving way to the earthy aroma of damp soil and ancient wood. The sounds of the Grove enveloped them, a symphony of rustling leaves, the distant trickle of water, and the occasional melodic chirp of unseen birds. They came upon a grove of trees, their bark etched with symbols that seemed to shift when not looked at directly. The ground beneath their feet was soft, a carpet of wildflowers in full bloom, their petals unfurling in vibrant hues that seemed to defy the season. Aurora knelt, brushing her fingers over the blossoms. "They're warm," she murmured, surprised by the gentle heat radiating from the flowers. She looked up, her bright blue eyes wide with wonder. "Everything here... it's alive in a way I've never felt before." Nyx reached out, their shadowy fingers brushing against a low-hanging branch. The leaves shimmered, their edges glowing faintly with an inner light. "This place is a treasure trove of magic," they murmured, their voice tinged with awe. "It's a wonder it remains hidden." Isolde led them deeper into the grove, her silver hair catching the dappled sunlight filtering through the dense canopy above. The trees here were ancient, their trunks wide and twisted, bark etched with symbols that seemed to shift when not looked at directly. The ground beneath their feet was soft, a carpet of wildflowers in full bloom, their petals unfurling in vibrant hues that seemed to defy the season. As they ventured deeper, the air grew thicker, the scent of blooming flowers mingling with the earthy aroma of damp soil and ancient wood. The sounds of the Grove enveloped them—a symphony of rustling leaves, the distant trickle of water, and the occasional melodic chirp of unseen birds. Aurora felt a sense of peace wash over her, the worries and fears of the outside world fading away. She could feel the magic of the Grove, a palpable force that seemed to wrap around her, comforting and protective. Nyx, meanwhile, had wandered off, their shadowy form shifting and rippling as they explored. They paused by a cluster of mushrooms, their caps glowing faintly with an inner light. "These are not of this world," they murmured, their voice filled with wonder. "They are a bridge between realms, a conduit for magic." Isolde joined them, her eyes scanning the mushrooms. "They are a gift from the Fae Courts," she explained. "A symbol of the alliance between the Grove and the Fae." Aurora reached out, her fingers brushing against one of the glowing caps. A jolt of energy coursed through her, a sensation like static electricity. She withdrew her hand, rubbing her fingers together as if to dispel the lingering tingles. "Be careful," Isolde warned. "The magic of the Grove is powerful, but it is not to be trifled with." Aurora nodded, her eyes fixed on the glowing mushrooms. She could feel the power radiating from them, a palpable force that seemed to push and pull at her senses. She stepped back, her heart pounding in her chest, the Heartstone Pendant pulsing warmly against her skin. As they continued their exploration, the Grove revealed its wonders one step at a time. They came upon a clearing, the center of which was dominated by a crystal-clear pool. The water's surface was still, reflecting the sky above like a mirror. Isolde approached the edge, her reflection shimmering and distorting as she knelt. "Drink," she invited, cupping her hands and scooping up the water. "The waters of the Grove grant clarity and insight." Aurora hesitated, then followed suit. The water was cool and refreshing, its taste crisp and clean. As she drank, she felt a warmth spread through her, a sense of calm and clarity washing over her. She looked up, her eyes meeting Isolde's. "Thank you," she said, her voice steady. "I feel... different." Isolde smiled, a soft curve of her lips that seemed to light up her entire face. "The Grove has accepted you," she said. "It will reveal its secrets to you in time." Nyx, meanwhile, had wandered to the edge of the clearing, their shadowy form shifting and rippling. "There's something here," they called out, their voice echoing slightly. "A disturbance in the air." Aurora and Isolde joined them, their eyes scanning the area. The trees here were denser, their branches intertwining to form a natural archway. Beyond, the light seemed to dim, the air taking on a cool, metallic tang. "Beyond lies the Veil," Isolde murmured, her voice barely audible. "The boundary between realms. It is thin here, weakened by the magic of the Grove." Aurora felt a chill run down her spine, the Heartstone Pendant pulsing warmly against her chest. She could feel the power radiating from the archway, a palpable force that seemed to push and pull at her senses. Nyx reached out, their shadowy fingers brushing against the Veil. It shimmered, the faint distortion visible even to Aurora's mortal eyes. "It's like looking through a window into another world," they whispered, their voice filled with wonder. Isolde placed a hand on Aurora's shoulder, her touch grounding. "The Veil is not to be trifled with," she warned. "It is a barrier for a reason. But here, in the Grove, we can observe it safely." Aurora nodded, her eyes fixed on the shimmering barrier. She could see movement on the other side, shadows shifting and dancing. The sounds of the Grove faded, replaced by a distant, echoing hum, like the murmur of a thousand voices. "Can you see through it?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Isolde nodded. "With practice, yes. But it is not a skill to be taken lightly. The Veil can be... deceiving." Aurora reached out, her fingers hovering just inches from the shimmering barrier. She could feel the power radiating from it, a palpable force that seemed to push against her very soul. She withdrew her hand, rubbing her fingers together as if to dispel the lingering tingles. "Let's not push our luck," she said, stepping back. "We should explore more of the Grove. There's so much to see." Isolde nodded, her eyes scanning the surroundings. "There is much to learn here," she agreed. "But remember, the Grove is a living entity. It will reveal its secrets to those who respect it." As they turned to leave, Aurora glanced back at the Veil, her eyes lingering on the shifting shadows beyond. She couldn't shake the feeling that something—or someone—was watching her from the other side. She turned away, her heart pounding in her chest, the Heartstone Pendant pulsing warmly against her skin. The trio continued their exploration, the Grove revealing its wonders one step at a time. The air grew cooler, the scent of blooming flowers giving way to the earthy aroma of damp soil and ancient wood. The sounds of the Grove enveloped them, a symphony of rustling leaves, the distant trickle of water, and the occasional melodic chirp of unseen birds. They came upon a grove of trees, their bark etched with symbols that seemed to shift when not looked at directly. The ground beneath their feet was soft, a carpet of wildflowers in full bloom, their petals unfurling in vibrant hues that seemed to defy the season. Aurora knelt, brushing her fingers over the blossoms. "They're warm," she murmured, surprised by the gentle heat radiating from the flowers. She looked up, her bright blue eyes wide with wonder. "Everything here... it's alive in a way I've never felt before." Nyx reached out, their shadowy fingers brushing against a low-hanging branch. The leaves shimmered, their edges glowing faintly with an inner light. "This place is a treasure trove of magic," they murmured, their voice tinged with awe. "It's a wonder it remains hidden." Isolde led them deeper into the grove, her silver hair catching the dappled sunlight filtering through the dense canopy above. The trees here were ancient, their trunks wide and twisted, bark etched with symbols that seemed to shift when not looked at directly. The ground beneath their feet was soft, a carpet of wildflowers in full bloom, their petals unfurling in vibrant hues that seemed to defy the season. As they ventured deeper, the air grew thicker, the scent of blooming flowers mingling with the earthy aroma of damp soil and ancient wood. The sounds of the Grove enveloped them—a symphony of rustling leaves, the distant trickle of water, and the occasional melodic chirp of unseen birds. Aurora felt a sense of peace wash over her, the worries and fears of the outside world fading away. She could feel the magic of the Grove, a palpable force that seemed to wrap around her, comforting and protective. Nyx, meanwhile, had wandered off, their shadowy form shifting and rippling as they explored. They paused by a cluster of mushrooms, their caps glowing faintly with an inner light. "These are not of this world," they murmured, their voice filled with wonder. "They are a bridge between realms, a conduit for magic." Isolde joined them, her eyes scanning the mushrooms. "They are a gift from the Fae Courts," she explained. "A symbol of the alliance between the Grove and the Fae." Aurora reached out, her fingers brushing against one of the glowing caps. A jolt of energy coursed through her, a sensation like static electricity. She withdrew her hand, rubbing her fingers together as if to dispel the lingering tingles. "Be careful," Isolde warned. "The magic of the Grove is powerful, but it is not to be trifled with." Aurora nodded, her eyes fixed on the glowing mushrooms. She could feel the power radiating from them, a palpable force that seemed to push and pull at her senses. She stepped back, her heart pounding in her chest, the Heartstone Pendant pulsing warmly against her skin. As they continued their exploration, the Grove revealed its wonders one step at a time. They came upon a clearing, the center of which was dominated by a crystal-clear pool. The water's surface was still, reflecting the sky above like a mirror. Isolde approached the edge, her reflection shimmering and distorting as she knelt. "Drink," she invited, cupping her hands and scooping up the water. "The waters of the Grove grant clarity and insight." Aurora hesitated, then followed suit. The water was cool and refreshing, its taste crisp and clean. As she drank, she felt a warmth spread through her, a sense of calm and clarity washing over her. She looked up, her eyes meeting Isolde's. "Thank you," she said, her voice steady. "I feel... different." Isolde smiled, a soft curve of her lips that seemed to light up her entire face. "The Grove has accepted you," she said. "It will reveal its secrets to you in time." Nyx, meanwhile, had wandered to the edge of the clearing, their shadowy form shifting and rippling. "There's something here," they called out, their voice echoing slightly. "A disturbance in the air." Aurora and Isolde joined them, their eyes scanning the area. The trees here were denser, their branches intertwining to form a natural archway. Beyond, the light seemed to dim, the air taking on a cool, metallic tang. "Beyond lies the Veil," Isolde murmured, her voice barely audible. "The boundary between realms. It is thin here, weakened by the magic of the Grove." Aurora felt a chill run down her spine, the Heartstone Pendant pulsing warmly against her chest. She could feel the power radiating from the archway, a palpable force that seemed to push and pull at her senses. Nyx reached out, their shadowy fingers brushing against the Veil. It shimmered, the faint distortion visible even to Aurora's mortal eyes. "It's like looking through a window into another world," they whispered, their voice filled with wonder. Isolde placed a hand on Aurora's shoulder, her touch grounding. "The Veil is not to be trifled with," she warned. "It is a barrier for a reason. But here, in the Grove, we can observe it safely." Aurora nodded, her eyes fixed on the shimmering barrier. She could see movement on the other side, shadows shifting and dancing. The sounds of the Grove faded, replaced by a distant, echoing hum, like the murmur of a thousand voices. "Can you see through it?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Isolde nodded. "With practice, yes. But it is not a skill to be taken lightly. The Veil can be... deceiving." Aurora reached out, her fingers hovering just inches from the shimmering barrier. She could feel the power radiating from it, a palpable force that seemed to push against her very soul. She withdrew her hand, rubbing her fingers together as if to dispel the lingering tingles. "Let's not push our luck," she said, stepping back. "We should explore more of the Grove. There's so much to see." Isolde nodded, her eyes scanning the surroundings. "There is much to learn here," she agreed. "But remember, the Grove is a living entity. It will reveal its secrets to those who respect it." As they turned to leave, Aurora glanced back at the Veil, her eyes lingering on the shifting shadows beyond. She couldn't shake the feeling that something—or someone—was watching her from the other side. She turned away, her heart pounding in her chest, the Heartstone Pendant pulsing warmly against her skin. The trio continued their exploration, the Grove revealing its wonders one step at a time. The air grew cooler, the scent of blooming flowers giving way to the earthy aroma of damp soil and ancient wood. The sounds of the Grove enveloped them, a symphony of rustling leaves, the distant trickle of water, and the occasional melodic chirp of unseen birds. They came upon a grove of trees, their bark etched with symbols that seemed to shift when not looked at directly. The ground beneath their feet was soft, a carpet of wildflowers in full bloom, their petals unfurling in vibrant hues that seemed to defy the season. Aurora knelt, brushing her fingers over the blossoms. "They're warm," she murmured, surprised by the gentle heat radiating from the flowers. She looked up, her bright blue eyes wide with wonder. "Everything here... it's alive in a way I've never felt before." Nyx reached out, their shadowy fingers brushing against a low-hanging branch. The leaves shimmered, their edges glowing faintly with an inner light. "This place is a treasure trove of magic," they murmured, their voice tinged with awe. "It's a wonder it remains hidden." Isolde led them deeper into the grove, her silver hair catching the dappled sunlight filtering through the dense canopy above. The trees here were ancient, their trunks wide and twisted, bark etched with symbols that seemed to shift when not looked at directly. The ground beneath their feet was soft, a carpet of wildflowers in full bloom, their petals unfurling in vibrant hues that seemed to defy the season. As they ventured deeper, the air grew thicker, the scent of blooming flowers mingling with the earthy aroma of damp soil and ancient wood. The sounds of the Grove enveloped them—a symphony of rustling leaves, the distant trickle of water, and the occasional melodic chirp of unseen birds. Aurora felt a sense of peace wash over her, the worries and fears of the outside world fading away. She could feel the magic of the Grove, a palpable force that seemed to wrap around her, comforting and protective. Nyx, meanwhile, had wandered off, their shadowy form shifting and rippling as they explored. They paused by a cluster of mushrooms, their caps glowing faintly with an inner light. "These are not of this world," they murmured, their voice filled with wonder. "They are a bridge between realms, a conduit for magic." Isolde joined them, her eyes scanning the mushrooms. "They are a gift from the Fae Courts," she explained. "A symbol of the alliance between the Grove and the Fae." Aurora reached out, her fingers brushing against one of the glowing caps. A jolt of energy coursed through her, a sensation like static electricity. She withdrew her hand, rubbing her fingers together as if to dispel the lingering tingles. "Be careful," Isolde warned. "The magic of the Grove is powerful, but it is not to be trifled with." Aurora nodded, her eyes fixed on the glowing mushrooms. She could feel the power radiating from them, a palpable force that seemed to push and pull at her senses. She stepped back, her heart pounding in her chest, the Heartstone Pendant pulsing warmly against her skin. As they continued their exploration, the Grove revealed its wonders one step at a time. They came upon a clearing, the center of which was dominated by a crystal-clear pool. The water's surface was still, reflecting the sky above like a mirror. Isolde approached the edge, her reflection shimmering and distorting as she knelt. "Drink," she invited, cupping her hands and scooping up the water. "The waters of the Grove grant clarity and insight." Aurora hesitated, then followed suit. The water was cool and refreshing, its taste crisp and clean. As she drank, she felt a warmth spread through her, a sense of calm and clarity washing over her. She looked up, her eyes meeting Isolde's. "Thank you," she said, her voice steady. "I feel... different." Isolde smiled, a soft curve of her lips that seemed to light up her entire face. "The Grove has accepted you," she said. "It will reveal its secrets to you in time." Nyx, meanwhile, had wandered to the edge of the clearing, their shadowy form shifting and rippling. "There's something here," they called out, their voice echoing slightly. "A disturbance in the air." Aurora and Isolde joined them, their eyes scanning the area. The trees here were denser, their branches intertwining to form a natural archway. Beyond, the light seemed to dim, the air taking on a cool, metallic tang. "Beyond lies the Veil," Isolde murmured, her voice barely audible. "The boundary between realms. It is thin here, weakened by the magic of the Grove." Aurora felt a chill run down her spine, the Heartstone Pendant pulsing warmly against her chest. She could feel the power radiating from the archway, a palpable force that seemed to push and pull at her senses. Nyx reached out, their shadowy fingers brushing against the Veil. It shimmered, the faint distortion visible even to Aurora's mortal eyes. "It's like looking through a window into another world," they whispered, their voice filled with wonder. Isolde placed a hand on Aurora's shoulder, her touch grounding. "The Veil is not to be trifled with," she warned. "It is a barrier for a reason. But here, in the Grove, we can observe it safely." Aurora nodded, her eyes fixed on the shimmering barrier. She could see movement on the other side, shadows shifting and dancing. The sounds of the Grove faded, replaced by a distant, echoing hum, like the murmur of a thousand voices. "Can you see through it?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Isolde nodded. "With practice, yes. But it is not a skill to be taken lightly. The Veil can be... deceiving." Aurora reached out, her fingers hovering just inches from the shimmering barrier. She could feel the power radiating from it, a palpable force that seemed to push against her very soul. She withdrew her hand, rubbing her fingers together as if to dispel the lingering tingles. "Let's not push our luck," she said, stepping back. "We should explore more of the Grove. There's so much to see." Isolde nodded, her eyes scanning the surroundings. "There is much to learn here," she agreed. "But remember, the Grove is a living entity. It will reveal its secrets to those who respect it." As they turned to leave, Aurora glanced back at the Veil, her eyes lingering on the shifting shadows beyond. She couldn't shake the feeling that something—or someone—was watching her from the other side. She turned away, her heart pounding in her chest, the Heartstone Pendant pulsing warmly against her skin. The trio continued their exploration, the Grove revealing its wonders one step at a time. The air grew cooler, the scent of blooming flowers giving way to the earthy aroma of damp soil and ancient wood. The sounds of the Grove enveloped them, a symphony of rustling leaves, the distant trickle of water, and the occasional melodic chirp of unseen birds. They came upon a grove of trees, their bark etched with symbols that seemed to shift when not looked at directly. The ground beneath their feet was soft, a carpet of wildflowers in full bloom, their petals unfurling in vibrant hues that seemed to defy the season. Aurora knelt, brushing her fingers over the blossoms. "They're warm," she murmured, surprised by the gentle heat radiating from the flowers. She looked up, her bright blue eyes wide with wonder. "Everything here... it's alive in a way I've never felt before." Nyx reached out, their shadowy fingers brushing against a low-hanging branch. The leaves shimmered, their edges glowing faintly with an inner light. "This place is a treasure trove of magic," they murmured, their voice tinged with awe. "It's a wonder it remains hidden." Isolde led them deeper into the grove, her silver hair catching the dappled sunlight filtering through the dense canopy above. The trees here were ancient, their trunks wide and twisted, bark etched with symbols that seemed to shift when not looked at directly. The ground beneath their feet was soft, a carpet of wildflowers in full bloom, their petals unfurling in vibrant hues that seemed to defy the season. As they ventured deeper, the air grew thicker, the scent of blooming flowers mingling with the earthy aroma of damp soil and ancient wood. The sounds of the Grove enveloped them—a symphony of rustling leaves, the distant trickle of water, and the occasional melodic chirp of unseen birds. Aurora felt a sense of peace wash over her, the worries and fears of the outside world fading away. She could feel the magic of the Grove, a palpable force that seemed to wrap around her, comforting and protective. Nyx, meanwhile, had wandered off, their shadowy form shifting and rippling as they explored. They paused by a cluster of mushrooms, their caps glowing faintly with an inner light. "These are not of this world," they murmured, their voice filled with wonder. "They are a bridge between realms, a conduit for magic." Isolde joined them, her eyes scanning the mushrooms. "They are a gift from the Fae Courts," she explained. "A symbol of the alliance between the Grove and the Fae." Aurora reached out, her fingers brushing against one of the glowing caps. A jolt of energy coursed through her, a sensation like static electricity. She withdrew her hand, rubbing her fingers together as if to dispel the lingering tingles. "Be careful," Isolde warned. "The magic of the Grove is powerful, but it is not to be trifled with." Aurora nodded, her eyes fixed on the glowing mushrooms. She could feel the power radiating from them, a palpable force that seemed to push and pull at her senses. She stepped back, her heart pounding in her chest, the Heartstone Pendant pulsing warmly against her skin. As they continued their exploration, the Grove revealed its wonders one step at a time. They came upon a clearing, the center of which was dominated by a crystal-clear pool. The water's surface was still, reflecting the sky above like a mirror. Isolde approached the edge, her reflection shimmering and distorting as she knelt. "Drink," she invited, cupping her hands and scooping up the water. "The waters of the Grove grant clarity and insight." Aurora hesitated, then followed suit. The water was cool and refreshing, its taste crisp and clean. As she drank, she felt a warmth spread through her, a sense of calm and clarity washing over her. She looked up, her eyes meeting Isolde's. "Thank you," she said, her voice steady. "I feel... different." Isolde smiled, a soft curve of her lips that seemed to light up her entire face. "The Grove has accepted you," she said. "It will reveal its secrets to you in time." Nyx, meanwhile, had wandered to the edge of the clearing, their shadowy form shifting and rippling. "There's something here," they called out, their voice echoing slightly. "A disturbance in the air." Aurora and Isolde joined them, their eyes scanning the area. The trees here were denser, their branches intertwining to form a natural archway. Beyond, the light seemed to dim, the air taking on a cool, metallic tang. "Beyond lies the Veil," Isolde murmured, her voice barely audible. "The boundary between realms. It is thin here, weakened by the magic of the Grove." Aurora felt a chill run down her spine, the Heartstone Pendant pulsing warmly against her chest. She could feel the power radiating from the archway, a palpable force that seemed to push and pull at her senses. Nyx reached out, their shadowy fingers brushing against the Veil. It shimmered, the faint distortion visible even to Aurora's mortal eyes. "It's like looking through a window into another world," they whispered, their voice filled with wonder. Isolde placed a hand on Aurora's shoulder, her touch grounding. "The Veil is not to be trifled with," she warned. "It is a barrier for a reason. But here, in the Grove, we can observe it safely." Aurora nodded, her eyes fixed on the shimmering barrier. She could see movement on the other side, shadows shifting and dancing. The sounds of the Grove faded, replaced by a distant, echoing hum, like the murmur of a thousand voices. "Can you see through it?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Isolde nodded. "With practice, yes. But it is not a skill to be taken lightly. The Veil can be... deceiving." Aurora reached out, her fingers hovering just inches from the shimmering barrier. She could feel the power radiating from it, a palpable force that seemed to push against her very soul. She withdrew her hand, rubbing her fingers together as if to dispel the lingering tingles. "Let's not push our luck," she said, stepping back. "We should explore more of the Grove. There's so much to see." Isolde nodded, her eyes scanning the surroundings. "There is much to learn here," she agreed. "But remember, the Grove is a living entity. It will reveal its secrets to those who respect it." 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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags75
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences145
tagDensity0.517
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
68.28% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount5517
totalAiIsmAdverbs35
found
0
adverb"very"
count6
1
adverb"slightly"
count5
2
adverb"warmly"
count14
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count5
4
adverb"lightly"
count5
highlights
0"very"
1"slightly"
2"warmly"
3"barely above a whisper"
4"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount5517
totalAiIsms158
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"loomed"
count1
2
word"etched"
count10
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"dances"
count1
5
word"resonated"
count1
6
word"echo"
count1
7
word"symphony"
count9
8
word"shimmered"
count10
9
word"tinged"
count5
10
word"scanning"
count15
11
word"warmth"
count6
12
word"comforting"
count5
13
word"could feel"
count19
14
word"pulse"
count1
15
word"crystal"
count5
16
word"sense of"
count9
17
word"echoing"
count10
18
word"chill"
count5
19
word"down her spine"
count5
20
word"palpable"
count18
21
word"dancing"
count5
22
word"whisper"
count5
23
word"pounding"
count9
highlights
0"weight"
1"loomed"
2"etched"
3"pulsed"
4"dances"
5"resonated"
6"echo"
7"symphony"
8"shimmered"
9"tinged"
10"scanning"
11"warmth"
12"comforting"
13"could feel"
14"pulse"
15"crystal"
16"sense of"
17"echoing"
18"chill"
19"down her spine"
20"palpable"
21"dancing"
22"whisper"
23"pounding"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
43.64% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells33
narrationSentences338
matches
0"e with wonder"
1"d with awe"
2"felt a chill"
3"filled with wonder"
4"d with wonder"
5"e with wonder"
6"d with awe"
7"filled with wonder"
8"d with wonder"
9"felt a chill"
10"filled with wonder"
11"d with wonder"
12"e with wonder"
13"d with awe"
14"filled with wonder"
15"d with wonder"
16"felt a chill"
17"filled with wonder"
18"d with wonder"
19"e with wonder"
20"d with awe"
21"filled with wonder"
22"d with wonder"
23"felt a chill"
24"filled with wonder"
25"d with wonder"
26"e with wonder"
27"d with awe"
28"filled with wonder"
29"d with wonder"
30"felt a chill"
31"filled with wonder"
32"d with wonder"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount47
narrationSentences338
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences408
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords5491
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions86
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions207
wordCount4327
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.39
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Nyx21
Isolde56
Aurora60
Grove27
Heartstone15
Pendant15
Veil10
persons
0"Carter"
1"Blade"
2"Nyx"
3"Isolde"
4"Aurora"
5"Grove"
6"Pendant"
places
0"Veil"
globalScore0.807
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences295
glossingSentenceCount44
matches
0"as if breathing"
1"as if speaking from a great distance"
2"symbols that seemed to shift when not looked at directly"
3"hues that seemed to defy the season"
4"rhythm that seemed to resonate with the very heart of the Grove"
5"lips that seemed to light up her entire face"
6"force that seemed to push and pull at her senses"
7"force that seemed to push against her very soul"
8"symbols that seemed to shift when not looked at directly"
9"hues that seemed to defy the season"
10"symbols that seemed to shift when not looked at directly"
11"hues that seemed to defy the season"
12"force that seemed to wrap around her, comforting and protective"
13"force that seemed to push and pull at her senses"
14"lips that seemed to light up her entire face"
15"force that seemed to push and pull at her senses"
16"force that seemed to push against her very soul"
17"symbols that seemed to shift when not looked at directly"
18"hues that seemed to defy the season"
19"symbols that seemed to shift when not looked at directly"
20"hues that seemed to defy the season"
21"force that seemed to wrap around her, comforting and protective"
22"force that seemed to push and pull at her senses"
23"lips that seemed to light up her entire face"
24"force that seemed to push and pull at her senses"
25"force that seemed to push against her very soul"
26"symbols that seemed to shift when not looked at directly"
27"hues that seemed to defy the season"
28"symbols that seemed to shift when not looked at directly"
29"hues that seemed to defy the season"
30"force that seemed to wrap around her, comforting and protective"
31"force that seemed to push and pull at her senses"
32"lips that seemed to light up her entire face"
33"force that seemed to push and pull at her senses"
34"force that seemed to push against her very soul"
35"symbols that seemed to shift when not looked at directly"
36"hues that seemed to defy the season"
37"symbols that seemed to shift when not looked at directly"
38"hues that seemed to defy the season"
39"force that seemed to wrap around her, comforting and protective"
40"force that seemed to push and pull at her senses"
41"lips that seemed to light up her entire face"
42"force that seemed to push and pull at her senses"
43"force that seemed to push against her very soul"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount5491
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences408
matches(empty)
60.09% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs148
mean37.1
std13.37
cv0.36
sampleLengths
060
126
242
340
466
542
648
743
842
936
1039
1120
1242
1310
1432
1531
1637
1725
1837
1937
2037
2140
2213
2320
2446
2521
2633
2750
2861
2947
3042
3143
3269
3348
3439
3552
3629
3739
3819
3946
4054
4120
4242
4310
4432
4531
4637
4725
4837
4937
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences338
matches
0"was dominated"
1"was dominated"
2"was dominated"
3"was dominated"
4"was dominated"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs801
matches
0"was watching"
1"was watching"
2"was watching"
3"was watching"
4"was watching"
72.83% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount15
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences408
ratio0.025
matches
0"The sounds of the Grove enveloped them—a symphony of rustling leaves, the distant trickle of water, and the occasional melodic chirp of unseen birds."
1"She couldn't shake the feeling that something—or someone—was watching her from the other side."
2"The sounds of the Grove enveloped them—a symphony of rustling leaves, the distant trickle of water, and the occasional melodic chirp of unseen birds."
3"She couldn't shake the feeling that something—or someone—was watching her from the other side."
4"The sounds of the Grove enveloped them—a symphony of rustling leaves, the distant trickle of water, and the occasional melodic chirp of unseen birds."
5"She couldn't shake the feeling that something—or someone—was watching her from the other side."
6"The sounds of the Grove enveloped them—a symphony of rustling leaves, the distant trickle of water, and the occasional melodic chirp of unseen birds."
7"She couldn't shake the feeling that something—or someone—was watching her from the other side."
8"The sounds of the Grove enveloped them—a symphony of rustling leaves, the distant trickle of water, and the occasional melodic chirp of unseen birds."
9"She couldn't shake the feeling that something—or someone—was watching her from the other side."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount4353
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount113
adverbRatio0.025959108660693776
lyAdverbCount49
lyAdverbRatio0.011256604640477832
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences408
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
98.23% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences408
mean13.46
std5.32
cv0.396
sampleLengths
020
120
220
315
411
515
612
715
811
921
108
1117
1223
1326
148
1513
1610
1711
1824
1924
2011
2111
2215
236
249
2521
2612
2717
2819
2915
3012
3112
3211
339
345
3511
3619
377
387
393
4016
417
429
4316
4410
455
4610
4713
4814
4910
40.93% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats37
diversityRatio0.056372549019607844
totalSentences408
uniqueOpeners23
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences310
matches(empty)
ratio0
61.29% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount123
totalSentences310
matches
0"She glanced at her companions,"
1"She withdrew her hand, rubbing"
2"they whispered, their voice carrying"
3"she murmured, surprised by the"
4"She looked up, her bright"
5"they murmured, their voice tinged"
6"she explained, her voice soft"
7"She could feel its pulse,"
8"They came upon a clearing,"
9"she invited, cupping her hands"
10"She looked up, her eyes"
11"she said, her voice steady"
12"they called out, their voice"
13"She could feel the power"
14"It shimmered, the faint distortion"
15"they whispered, their voice filled"
16"She could see movement on"
17"she asked, her voice barely"
18"She could feel the power"
19"She withdrew her hand, rubbing"
ratio0.397
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount286
totalSentences310
matches
0"Aurora Carter adjusted the strap"
1"She glanced at her companions,"
2"The ancient oak standing stones"
3"Isolde murmured, her voice like"
4"Aurora reached out, her fingers"
5"A faint hum resonated beneath"
6"She withdrew her hand, rubbing"
7"Nyx stepped forward, their shadowy"
8"they whispered, their voice carrying"
9"Isolde led the way, her"
10"The trees here were ancient,"
11"The ground beneath their feet"
12"Aurora knelt, brushing her fingers"
13"she murmured, surprised by the"
14"She looked up, her bright"
15"The sounds of the Grove"
16"Nyx reached out, their shadowy"
17"The leaves shimmered, their edges"
18"they murmured, their voice tinged"
19"Isolde paused, her pale lavender"
ratio0.923
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences310
matches(empty)
ratio0
5.74% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences224
technicalSentenceCount43
matches
0"The ancient oak standing stones loomed before them, their gnarled surfaces etched with runes that pulsed faintly, as if breathing."
1"She withdrew her hand, rubbing her fingers together as if to dispel the lingering tingles."
2"The ground beneath their feet was soft, a carpet of wildflowers in full bloom, their petals unfurling in vibrant hues that seemed to defy the season."
3"Isolde approached the edge, her reflection shimmering and distorting as she knelt."
4"She could feel the power radiating from it, a palpable force that seemed to push against her very soul."
5"She withdrew her hand, rubbing her fingers together as if to dispel the lingering tingles."
6"She turned away, her heart pounding in her chest, the Heartstone Pendant pulsing warmly against her skin."
7"The ground beneath their feet was soft, a carpet of wildflowers in full bloom, their petals unfurling in vibrant hues that seemed to defy the season."
8"The ground beneath their feet was soft, a carpet of wildflowers in full bloom, their petals unfurling in vibrant hues that seemed to defy the season."
9"She could feel the magic of the Grove, a palpable force that seemed to wrap around her, comforting and protective."
10"She withdrew her hand, rubbing her fingers together as if to dispel the lingering tingles."
11"She stepped back, her heart pounding in her chest, the Heartstone Pendant pulsing warmly against her skin."
12"Isolde approached the edge, her reflection shimmering and distorting as she knelt."
13"She could feel the power radiating from it, a palpable force that seemed to push against her very soul."
14"She withdrew her hand, rubbing her fingers together as if to dispel the lingering tingles."
15"She turned away, her heart pounding in her chest, the Heartstone Pendant pulsing warmly against her skin."
16"The ground beneath their feet was soft, a carpet of wildflowers in full bloom, their petals unfurling in vibrant hues that seemed to defy the season."
17"The ground beneath their feet was soft, a carpet of wildflowers in full bloom, their petals unfurling in vibrant hues that seemed to defy the season."
18"She could feel the magic of the Grove, a palpable force that seemed to wrap around her, comforting and protective."
19"She withdrew her hand, rubbing her fingers together as if to dispel the lingering tingles."
20"She stepped back, her heart pounding in her chest, the Heartstone Pendant pulsing warmly against her skin."
21"Isolde approached the edge, her reflection shimmering and distorting as she knelt."
22"She could feel the power radiating from it, a palpable force that seemed to push against her very soul."
23"She withdrew her hand, rubbing her fingers together as if to dispel the lingering tingles."
24"She turned away, her heart pounding in her chest, the Heartstone Pendant pulsing warmly against her skin."
25"The ground beneath their feet was soft, a carpet of wildflowers in full bloom, their petals unfurling in vibrant hues that seemed to defy the season."
26"The ground beneath their feet was soft, a carpet of wildflowers in full bloom, their petals unfurling in vibrant hues that seemed to defy the season."
27"She could feel the magic of the Grove, a palpable force that seemed to wrap around her, comforting and protective."
28"She withdrew her hand, rubbing her fingers together as if to dispel the lingering tingles."
29"She stepped back, her heart pounding in her chest, the Heartstone Pendant pulsing warmly against her skin."
30"Isolde approached the edge, her reflection shimmering and distorting as she knelt."
31"She could feel the power radiating from it, a palpable force that seemed to push against her very soul."
32"She withdrew her hand, rubbing her fingers together as if to dispel the lingering tingles."
33"She turned away, her heart pounding in her chest, the Heartstone Pendant pulsing warmly against her skin."
34"The ground beneath their feet was soft, a carpet of wildflowers in full bloom, their petals unfurling in vibrant hues that seemed to defy the season."
35"The ground beneath their feet was soft, a carpet of wildflowers in full bloom, their petals unfurling in vibrant hues that seemed to defy the season."
36"She could feel the magic of the Grove, a palpable force that seemed to wrap around her, comforting and protective."
37"She withdrew her hand, rubbing her fingers together as if to dispel the lingering tingles."
38"She stepped back, her heart pounding in her chest, the Heartstone Pendant pulsing warmly against her skin."
39"Isolde approached the edge, her reflection shimmering and distorting as she knelt."
40"She could feel the power radiating from it, a palpable force that seemed to push against her very soul."
41"She withdrew her hand, rubbing her fingers together as if to dispel the lingering tingles."
42"She turned away, her heart pounding in her chest, the Heartstone Pendant pulsing warmly against her skin."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags75
uselessAdditionCount21
matches
0"she explained, her voice soft yet carrying a weight of ancient knowledge"
1"she said, her voice steady"
2"they called out, their voice echoing slightly"
3"Isolde murmured, her voice barely audible"
4"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
5"she said, her voice steady"
6"they called out, their voice echoing slightly"
7"Isolde murmured, her voice barely audible"
8"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
9"she said, her voice steady"
10"they called out, their voice echoing slightly"
11"Isolde murmured, her voice barely audible"
12"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
13"she said, her voice steady"
14"they called out, their voice echoing slightly"
15"Isolde murmured, her voice barely audible"
16"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
17"she said, her voice steady"
18"they called out, their voice echoing slightly"
19"Isolde murmured, her voice barely audible"
20"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags70
fancyCount50
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
1"they whispered (whisper)"
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