Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPE6KJ76DF2YDKVZTZQG80

Run Details

Duration:
1m 10s
Cost:
$0.003401
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against Rory’s collarbone, a slow, insistent warmth like a second heartbeat. She adjusted the strap of her bag, fingers brushing the worn leather where the Fae blade lay hidden. The air here smelled different—thick with the scent of damp earth and something older, something wild. Nyx materialized beside her, their violet glow flickering like a guttering candle. "The stones remember us." Rory didn’t answer. She was too busy staring at the standing stones ahead, their gnarled oaks twisted into shapes that shouldn’t exist. The bark shimmered faintly, as if dusted with starlight. Between them, the air rippled like heat off pavement, but colder. Much colder. Isolde stepped forward, her silver hair catching the dim light. "The Grove does not welcome all who knock." Her voice was a melody, but the words carried weight. "It chooses." Rory exhaled, fog curling in front of her. "Then let’s hope it chooses us." She stepped through first. The world tilted. For a heartbeat, she was fallingnot down, but sideways, as if the ground had dissolved beneath her. Then her boots hit soft moss, and the air rushed back into her lungs. The clearing stretched before them, impossibly vast. Wildflowers bloomed in hues she had no name for, their petals shifting between blue and violet like a living sunset. Above, the sky wasn’t sky at all—it was a canopy of interwoven branches, their leaves translucent, filtering the light into something golden and liquid. Nyx let out a sound that might have been a laugh. "Time moves differently here." Rory’s fingers twitched toward the pendant. It was warmer now, almost hot. "How much time?" Isolde didn’t answer. She was already walking, her bare feet leaving no prints on the moss. Rory followed, her sneakers sinking slightly with each step. The ground wasn’t just soft—it was alive. Tiny tendrils of grass curled around her ankles, then retreated, as if tasting her. Ahead, a pool of water shimmered, its surface perfectly still. Rory crouched, dipping her fingers in. The water was neither hot nor cold, but *aware*. It clung to her skin, then pulled back, as if deciding she wasn’t worth the effort. Nyx knelt beside her. "It’s not water." Rory didn’t ask what it was. Some things were better left unknown. Isolde stopped at the edge of the pool, her lavender eyes fixed on something beyond it. "The path splits here." Rory stood, wiping her damp fingers on her jeans. The clearing didn’t just split—it *shifted*. One moment, there was a narrow trail winding through the trees. The next, it was gone, replaced by a bridge of woven roots arching over a chasm she hadn’t seen before. The air hummed, low and constant, like the distant thrum of a plucked string. Nyx’s shadow stretched long and thin, pooling at their feet. "The Grove is testing us." Rory adjusted her bag again. "Then let’s not keep it waiting." She took the bridge. The roots beneath her feet were warm, almost feverish. They pulsed faintly, like veins. The chasm below wasn’t empty—it was filled with mist, swirling in patterns that made her eyes ache if she stared too long. Halfway across, the bridge trembled. Rory froze. Isolde’s voice came from behind her, calm. "It’s not the bridge that’s moving." Rory looked down. The mist had risen, tendrils of it curling around her boots. Not mist. *Shadows*. They slithered up her legs, cold and insistent. She yanked her foot back, but the shadows clung, tightening like ropes. Nyx’s voice cut through the hum. "They’re not yours." Rory didn’t wait. She reached into her bag, fingers closing around the Fae blade’s hilt. The moment the metal cleared the leather, the shadows recoiled, hissing like steam on a hot pan. The blade’s glow was faint, but it was enough. The shadows dissolved, retreating into the chasm. The bridge stilled. Rory exhaled, her breath shaky. "What the hell was that?" Isolde stepped past her, unperturbed. "Echoes. Memories the Grove hasn’t let go of." Nyx’s silhouette flickered, their edges less defined than before. "Or warnings." The other side of the bridge opened into a glade. At its center stood a tree unlike any Rory had ever seen. Its trunk was silver, its branches heavy with fruit that glowed like embers. The air here was thicker, sweet with the scent of honey and something metallic. Isolde stopped at the tree’s base. "The Heartwood." Rory reached out, then hesitated. The bark wasn’t bark at all—it was smooth, like polished bone. "What is this place?" Isolde plucked one of the glowing fruits. It pulsed in her palm, casting flickering light across her face. "A crossroads. A prison. A cradle." She held the fruit out to Rory. "Eat, and the Grove will answer your questions." Rory took it. The skin was warm, yielding. She bit down. Flavor exploded across her tongue—not sweet, not sour, but *alive*. It tasted like lightning, like the first breath after surfacing from deep water. The world around her sharpened. The hum of the Grove became a chorus of voices, whispering in languages she didn’t know but somehow understood. She saw the Veil. It shimmered at the edges of her vision, a fragile curtain between worlds. Beyond it, she glimpsed other realms—some bright and burning, others dark and suffocating. Hel. The Fae Courts. Places that weren’t places, where the rules of reality bent like reeds in the wind. And then she saw *him*. A man in a long coat, his face obscured by shadow. He stood at the edge of a vineyard, his fingers brushing the leaves of a plant that writhed at his touch. The air around him warped, the Veil thinning like worn fabric. The Heartstone Pendant burned against Rory’s skin, searing hot. She gasped, the vision dissolving. The fruit fell from her fingers, rolling into the grass. Isolde’s voice was soft. "The Grove shows what it wills." Rory’s hands trembled. "Who was that?" Nyx’s glow flickered, their voice barely a whisper. "Trouble." The tree’s branches rustled, though there was no wind. The ground beneath them trembled, just once, like a held breath finally released. Isolde turned, her silver hair catching the light. "The Grove has spoken. Now we leave." Rory didn’t argue. She followed Isolde back across the bridge, the shadows parting before them like water. The standing stones loomed ahead, the air between them rippling like a mirage. Nyx paused at the threshold. "Time moves differently here." Rory glanced back. The glade was already fading, the silver tree dissolving into mist. "How much time passed out there?" Isolde stepped through the stones. "Enough." The world tilted again. Rory braced herself, but this time, the fall was shorter. She stumbled onto damp grass, the scent of rain and earth filling her lungs. Richmond Park stretched around them, ordinary and quiet. The standing stones were just stones now, their magic dormant. Rory touched the Heartstone Pendant. It was cold again. Nyx solidified beside her, their edges sharp once more. "We’re not done here." Rory exhaled, watching her breath fog in the chill air. "No. We’re not."
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num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.071
leniency0.143
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.58% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1187
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
24.18% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1187
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"pulsed"
count3
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"shimmered"
count3
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"trembled"
count3
5
word"echoes"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count2
7
word"searing"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"loomed"
count1
10
word"chill"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"shimmered"
3"weight"
4"trembled"
5"echoes"
6"flickered"
7"searing"
8"whisper"
9"loomed"
10"chill"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences117
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences143
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords5
totalWords1178
ratio0.004
matches
0"aware"
1"shifted"
2"Shadows"
3"alive"
4"him"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
36.15% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions58
wordCount1054
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.28
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone3
Pendant3
Rory24
Fae3
Grove1
Veil2
Courts1
Isolde11
Park1
Nyx9
persons
0"Rory"
1"Grove"
2"Veil"
3"Isolde"
4"Nyx"
places
0"Park"
globalScore0.361
windowScore0.5
56.25% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as if tasting her"
1"as if deciding she wasn’t worth the effort"
2"tasted like lightning, like the first bre"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords3.396
wordCount1178
matches
0"not down, but sideways, as if the ground had dissolved beneath her"
1"neither hot nor"
2"not sweet, not sour, but *alive*"
3"not sour, but *alive*"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences143
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean22.65
std18.4
cv0.812
sampleLengths
049
116
244
330
414
54
685
715
815
946
1041
117
1212
1320
1460
1515
1611
174
1843
1913
203
2134
229
2348
243
2510
2613
2711
2849
298
3020
3139
3211
3347
344
3545
365
3752
3815
3910
406
419
4222
4315
4430
459
4620
476
4846
499
99.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences117
matches
0"was gone"
1"was filled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs190
matches
0"was falling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences143
ratio0.063
matches
0"The air here smelled different—thick with the scent of damp earth and something older, something wild."
1"For a heartbeat, she was falling—not down, but sideways, as if the ground had dissolved beneath her."
2"Above, the sky wasn’t sky at all—it was a canopy of interwoven branches, their leaves translucent, filtering the light into something golden and liquid."
3"The ground wasn’t just soft—it was alive."
4"The clearing didn’t just split—it *shifted*."
5"The chasm below wasn’t empty—it was filled with mist, swirling in patterns that made her eyes ache if she stared too long."
6"The bark wasn’t bark at all—it was smooth, like polished bone."
7"Flavor exploded across her tongue—not sweet, not sour, but *alive*."
8"Beyond it, she glimpsed other realms—some bright and burning, others dark and suffocating."
97.96% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1063
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.04233301975540922
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.00658513640639699
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences143
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences143
mean8.24
std5.05
cv0.612
sampleLengths
015
118
216
312
44
53
619
79
811
92
1010
1118
122
138
146
154
163
1717
1814
197
2020
2124
2211
234
246
256
263
273
2813
299
307
3114
3210
336
349
3516
364
373
386
396
4016
414
429
436
4411
4520
4614
4710
485
495
45.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.2867132867132867
totalSentences143
uniqueOpeners41
29.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences112
matches
0"Then her boots hit soft"
ratio0.009
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences112
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"She was too busy staring"
2"Her voice was a melody,"
3"She stepped through first."
4"It was warmer now, almost"
5"She was already walking, her"
6"It clung to her skin,"
7"She took the bridge."
8"They pulsed faintly, like veins."
9"They slithered up her legs,"
10"She yanked her foot back,"
11"She reached into her bag,"
12"Its trunk was silver, its"
13"It pulsed in her palm,"
14"She held the fruit out"
15"She bit down."
16"It tasted like lightning, like"
17"She saw the Veil."
18"It shimmered at the edges"
19"He stood at the edge"
ratio0.214
4.64% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount102
totalSentences112
matches
0"The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against"
1"She adjusted the strap of"
2"The air here smelled different—thick"
3"Nyx materialized beside her, their"
4"Rory didn’t answer."
5"She was too busy staring"
6"The bark shimmered faintly, as"
7"Isolde stepped forward, her silver"
8"Her voice was a melody,"
9"Rory exhaled, fog curling in"
10"She stepped through first."
11"The world tilted."
12"The clearing stretched before them,"
13"Wildflowers bloomed in hues she"
14"Nyx let out a sound"
15"Rory’s fingers twitched toward the"
16"It was warmer now, almost"
17"Isolde didn’t answer."
18"She was already walking, her"
19"Rory followed, her sneakers sinking"
ratio0.911
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She was too busy staring at the standing stones ahead, their gnarled oaks twisted into shapes that shouldn’t exist."
1"For a heartbeat, she was falling—not down, but sideways, as if the ground had dissolved beneath her."
2"Its trunk was silver, its branches heavy with fruit that glowed like embers."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
76.1629%