| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.071 | | leniency | 0.143 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.58% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1187 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 24.18% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1187 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "trembled" | | 5 | "echoes" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "searing" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "loomed" | | 10 | "chill" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 117 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 117 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 143 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 5 | | totalWords | 1178 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | 0 | "aware" | | 1 | "shifted" | | 2 | "Shadows" | | 3 | "alive" | | 4 | "him" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 36.15% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 58 | | wordCount | 1054 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 2.28 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 3 | | Rory | 24 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 1 | | Veil | 2 | | Courts | 1 | | Isolde | 11 | | Park | 1 | | Nyx | 9 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Veil" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.361 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 56.25% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as if tasting her" | | 1 | "as if deciding she wasn’t worth the effort" | | 2 | "tasted like lightning, like the first bre" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.396 | | wordCount | 1178 | | matches | | 0 | "not down, but sideways, as if the ground had dissolved beneath her" | | 1 | "neither hot nor" | | 2 | "not sweet, not sour, but *alive*" | | 3 | "not sour, but *alive*" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 143 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 52 | | mean | 22.65 | | std | 18.4 | | cv | 0.812 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 49 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 44 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 85 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 46 | | 10 | 41 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 60 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 43 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 34 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 48 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 49 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 39 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 47 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 45 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 52 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 22 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 30 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 46 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 99.27% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 190 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 143 | | ratio | 0.063 | | matches | | 0 | "The air here smelled different—thick with the scent of damp earth and something older, something wild." | | 1 | "For a heartbeat, she was falling—not down, but sideways, as if the ground had dissolved beneath her." | | 2 | "Above, the sky wasn’t sky at all—it was a canopy of interwoven branches, their leaves translucent, filtering the light into something golden and liquid." | | 3 | "The ground wasn’t just soft—it was alive." | | 4 | "The clearing didn’t just split—it *shifted*." | | 5 | "The chasm below wasn’t empty—it was filled with mist, swirling in patterns that made her eyes ache if she stared too long." | | 6 | "The bark wasn’t bark at all—it was smooth, like polished bone." | | 7 | "Flavor exploded across her tongue—not sweet, not sour, but *alive*." | | 8 | "Beyond it, she glimpsed other realms—some bright and burning, others dark and suffocating." |
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| 97.96% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1063 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 45 | | adverbRatio | 0.04233301975540922 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00658513640639699 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 143 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 143 | | mean | 8.24 | | std | 5.05 | | cv | 0.612 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 45.10% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.2867132867132867 | | totalSentences | 143 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 29.76% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "Then her boots hit soft" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "She was too busy staring" | | 2 | "Her voice was a melody," | | 3 | "She stepped through first." | | 4 | "It was warmer now, almost" | | 5 | "She was already walking, her" | | 6 | "It clung to her skin," | | 7 | "She took the bridge." | | 8 | "They pulsed faintly, like veins." | | 9 | "They slithered up her legs," | | 10 | "She yanked her foot back," | | 11 | "She reached into her bag," | | 12 | "Its trunk was silver, its" | | 13 | "It pulsed in her palm," | | 14 | "She held the fruit out" | | 15 | "She bit down." | | 16 | "It tasted like lightning, like" | | 17 | "She saw the Veil." | | 18 | "It shimmered at the edges" | | 19 | "He stood at the edge" |
| | ratio | 0.214 | |
| 4.64% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 102 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against" | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "The air here smelled different—thick" | | 3 | "Nyx materialized beside her, their" | | 4 | "Rory didn’t answer." | | 5 | "She was too busy staring" | | 6 | "The bark shimmered faintly, as" | | 7 | "Isolde stepped forward, her silver" | | 8 | "Her voice was a melody," | | 9 | "Rory exhaled, fog curling in" | | 10 | "She stepped through first." | | 11 | "The world tilted." | | 12 | "The clearing stretched before them," | | 13 | "Wildflowers bloomed in hues she" | | 14 | "Nyx let out a sound" | | 15 | "Rory’s fingers twitched toward the" | | 16 | "It was warmer now, almost" | | 17 | "Isolde didn’t answer." | | 18 | "She was already walking, her" | | 19 | "Rory followed, her sneakers sinking" |
| | ratio | 0.911 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "She was too busy staring at the standing stones ahead, their gnarled oaks twisted into shapes that shouldn’t exist." | | 1 | "For a heartbeat, she was falling—not down, but sideways, as if the ground had dissolved beneath her." | | 2 | "Its trunk was silver, its branches heavy with fruit that glowed like embers." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |