| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.51% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1054 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 5.12% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1054 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "throb" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "chill" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "flicker" | | 8 | "racing" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "scanning" | | 11 | "searing" | | 12 | "vibrated" | | 13 | "pounding" | | 14 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 115 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 115 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 116 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 6 | | markdownWords | 25 | | totalWords | 1046 | | ratio | 0.024 | | matches | | 0 | "For when the Hel portals open." | | 1 | "Get in, find out what this thing wants, get out." | | 2 | "Turn back. Turn back now." | | 3 | "scream" | | 4 | "Little thief." | | 5 | "screamed" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 18 | | wordCount | 1043 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.77 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Aurora | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Rory | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.956 | | wordCount | 1046 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the gradual chill of nightfall, but a sudden, bone-deep cold" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 26.15 | | std | 21.66 | | cv | 0.828 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 74 | | 1 | 58 | | 2 | 85 | | 3 | 34 | | 4 | 60 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 61 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 42 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 36 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 51 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 29 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 46 | | 25 | 40 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 44 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 35 | | 34 | 43 | | 35 | 33 | | 36 | 30 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 9 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.05% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 187 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn’t playing" | | 1 | "were screaming" | | 2 | "was waiting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 116 | | ratio | 0.078 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn’t asked for the thing—hadn’t even known it existed until it arrived in a padded envelope with no return address, just a single line scrawled on the inside flap: *For when the Hel portals open.* That had been three days ago." | | 1 | "The air smelled wrong—too sweet, like rotting peaches left in the sun." | | 2 | "The distant hoot of an owl—too early in the evening, too close." | | 3 | "Then—another flicker." | | 4 | "She reached for it again, fingers brushing the silver chain—" | | 5 | "Then—laughter." | | 6 | "She gasped, stumbling back—" | | 7 | "It had no eyes that she could see—just shadows, pooling where its face should be." | | 8 | "The gemstone pulsed, its crimson light flaring—" |
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| 95.04% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1051 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 48 | | adverbRatio | 0.04567078972407231 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0028544243577545195 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 116 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 116 | | mean | 9.02 | | std | 6.32 | | cv | 0.701 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 42 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 37.07% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.25862068965517243 | | totalSentences | 116 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the path winding back" | | 1 | "Just the sound of her" | | 2 | "Just the standing stones, their" | | 3 | "Too fast to be human." | | 4 | "Too solid to be a" | | 5 | "Always trusted her instincts." | | 6 | "Just a sound, like dry" | | 7 | "Too tall to be human." | | 8 | "Too still to be alive." | | 9 | "Then it spoke." |
| | ratio | 0.097 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn’t asked for the" | | 1 | "She’d come for answers." | | 2 | "She exhaled, forcing her fingers" | | 3 | "Her breath fogged in front" | | 4 | "She tucked it back beneath" | | 5 | "She turned, heart hammering, but" | | 6 | "Her voice sounded small, swallowed" | | 7 | "She shouldn’t have come alone." | | 8 | "She’d always worked alone." | | 9 | "She reached for it again," | | 10 | "It came from everywhere and" | | 11 | "She spun, scanning the darkness." | | 12 | "She tightened her grip, knuckles" | | 13 | "She gasped, stumbling back—" | | 14 | "It stood just beyond the" | | 15 | "Its limbs bent at wrong" | | 16 | "She should run." | | 17 | "She should *scream*." | | 18 | "It had no eyes that" | | 19 | "It recoiled, its form unravelling" |
| | ratio | 0.262 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against" | | 1 | "She hadn’t asked for the" | | 2 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 3 | "The air smelled wrong—too sweet," | | 4 | "A breeze that didn’t exist" | | 5 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 6 | "She’d come for answers." | | 7 | "The pendant had led her" | | 8 | "The distant hoot of an" | | 9 | "The snap of a twig" | | 10 | "She exhaled, forcing her fingers" | | 11 | "The moment she crossed the" | | 12 | "Her breath fogged in front" | | 13 | "The wildflowers, so vibrant a" | | 14 | "Rory took another step, her" | | 15 | "The pendant flared hot against" | | 16 | "The crimson gemstone glowed brighter" | | 17 | "She tucked it back beneath" | | 18 | "Something moved at the edge" | | 19 | "She turned, heart hammering, but" |
| | ratio | 0.67 | |
| 48.54% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing at the edge" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 66.87% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed ahead, their ancient oaks twisted into shapes that made her eyes ache if she stared too long." | | 1 | "A breeze that didn’t exist outside the grove stirred the wildflowers at her feet, their petals trembling as if something had just passed through them." | | 2 | "The crimson gemstone glowed brighter now, casting long shadows that stretched and twisted like grasping fingers." | | 3 | "The sound vibrated inside her skull, a wet, clicking rasp that made her teeth ache." | | 4 | "It recoiled, its form unravelling at the edges, shadows peeling away like smoke in a gale." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |