| 54.55% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 21 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said simply [simply]" | | 1 | "His gaze snapped back [back]" | | 2 | "his fingers tightened around [around]" | | 3 | "he said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 55 | | tagDensity | 0.382 | | leniency | 0.764 | | rawRatio | 0.19 | | effectiveRatio | 0.145 | |
| 77.88% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1356 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "really" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "slightly" | | 4 | "barely above a whisper" | | 5 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 44.69% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1356 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flicked" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "lilt" | | 3 | "tracing" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "implication" | | 6 | "jaw clenched" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "charged" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "scanning" | | 11 | "stark" | | 12 | "reminder" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "jaw/fists clenched" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "jaw clenched" | | 1 | "sent a jolt through" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 107 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 107 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 141 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 10 | | markdownWords | 17 | | totalWords | 1347 | | ratio | 0.013 | | matches | | 0 | "his" | | 1 | "Malphora" | | 2 | "chérie" | | 3 | "click" | | 4 | "projects" | | 5 | "Mon Dieu" | | 6 | "The Lesser Key of Solomon" | | 7 | "you" | | 8 | "chérie" | | 9 | "I see you." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 23 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 1084 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.83 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Moreau | 3 | | Evan | 3 | | French | 1 | | Lesser | 1 | | Key | 1 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Lucien | 9 | | Should | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Moreau" | | 1 | "Evan" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Should" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.742 | | wordCount | 1347 | | matches | | 0 | "not a strand dare out of place, but the faint shadow of stubble along his jaw suggested he hadn’" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 61 | | mean | 22.08 | | std | 18.12 | | cv | 0.821 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 58 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 64 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 58 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 49 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 53 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 53 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 59 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 35 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 50 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 31 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 28 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 37 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 65 | | 43 | 25 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | |
| 98.48% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 197 | | matches | | 0 | "was looking" | | 1 | "was looking" | | 2 | "was standing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 141 | | ratio | 0.064 | | matches | | 0 | "Should’ve remembered the way his voice could curl around her ribs like smoke, how his heterochromatic gaze—one eye amber, one black as a bruise—could make her forget every reason she’d walked away." | | 1 | "“Rory.” Her name in his mouth was a sin—smooth, deliberate, with just enough of an accent to make it sound like a secret." | | 2 | "His cane tapped once against the floor—*click*—and she knew the blade inside was already unsheathed in his mind." | | 3 | "“Is it?” He took a step closer, the bergamot scent stronger now, mixed with something metallic—his cologne, or maybe just the taste of her own pulse in her mouth." | | 4 | "“Projects? *Mon Dieu*, you always did have a flair for understatement.” He reached out, his fingers brushing the spine of a book on the nearest stack—*The Lesser Key of Solomon*, its leather cover worn." | | 5 | "But the way he was looking at her—like she was a puzzle he’d spent years trying to solve, like she was the only thing in the world worth figuring out—made her stomach twist." | | 6 | "If he found her now—" | | 7 | "But the way he was looking at her—like she was the only thing in the world worth fighting for—made her want to lean in." | | 8 | "But the photo was a reminder—some threats didn’t care about strength or pride." |
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| 85.37% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1093 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 62 | | adverbRatio | 0.056724611161939616 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01463860933211345 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 141 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 141 | | mean | 9.55 | | std | 7.53 | | cv | 0.788 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 32 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 40 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 29 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 52.72% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.3333333333333333 | | totalSentences | 141 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, his gaze flicked past" | | 1 | "Instead, his hand closed around" | | 2 | "Instead, she said," | | 3 | "Then his phone buzzed in" | | 4 | "Instead, he turned the phone" |
| | ratio | 0.051 | |
| 38.18% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 45 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "She should’ve known better than" | | 1 | "His platinum hair was slicked" | | 2 | "Her name in his mouth" | | 3 | "Her fingers twitched toward the" | | 4 | "He didn’t answer." | | 5 | "She didn’t move." | | 6 | "She stepped back before she" | | 7 | "He stepped inside, the door" | | 8 | "His cane tapped once against" | | 9 | "She crossed her arms." | | 10 | "His gaze dropped to the" | | 11 | "He’d never asked about it." | | 12 | "he said simply" | | 13 | "He took a step closer," | | 14 | "His voice dropped, the French" | | 15 | "She should’ve known he’d find" | | 16 | "she said, chin lifting" | | 17 | "His laugh was a dark," | | 18 | "He reached out, his fingers" | | 19 | "His gaze snapped back to" |
| | ratio | 0.455 | |
| 86.26% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt clicked like" | | 1 | "Rory’s fingers stilled on the" | | 2 | "The distorted fishbowl view showed" | | 3 | "She should’ve known better than" | | 4 | "The chain rattled as she" | | 5 | "The door swung open before" | | 6 | "Lucien Moreau leaned against the" | | 7 | "The scent of bergamot and" | | 8 | "His platinum hair was slicked" | | 9 | "Both were equally likely." | | 10 | "Her name in his mouth" | | 11 | "Her fingers twitched toward the" | | 12 | "He didn’t answer." | | 13 | "She didn’t move." | | 14 | "A slow smile curved his" | | 15 | "The word hit like a" | | 16 | "She stepped back before she" | | 17 | "He stepped inside, the door" | | 18 | "The space suddenly felt too" | | 19 | "His cane tapped once against" |
| | ratio | 0.747 | |
| 50.51% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "It was standing on her doorstep, breathing down her neck." |
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| 29.76% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 21 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "He stepped, the door clicking shut behind him with finality" | | 1 | "His voice dropped, the French lilt thickening" | | 2 | "she asked, voice steadier than she felt" | | 3 | "she said, her voice barely above a whisper" |
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| 95.45% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "His gaze snapped back (snap)" | | 1 | "Lucien agreed (agree)" | | 2 | "she demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 55 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0.273 | | effectiveRatio | 0.109 | |