Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPETR7569W7MVBAEEH68P8

Run Details

Duration:
28.1s
Cost:
$0.003096
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air smelled wrong the moment Rory stepped past the standing stones. Not rotten, not sour—just *off*, like the scent of rain on hot pavement when no storm had come. She paused, fingers brushing the crimson pendant at her throat. Its usual faint warmth had sharpened into a pulse, steady as a second heartbeat. The wildflowers underfoot should’ve been crushed by her boots, but they sprang back unharmed, petals glistening with something that wasn’t dew. She exhaled through her nose. "Stupid. You’ve been here before." But not at night. The Grove had always been a refuge, a place where the hum of London faded into the rustle of leaves and the distant chime of unseen things. Now, the silence pressed too hard, like a hand clamped over her ears. No owls. No wind. Just the creak of ancient oaks, their gnarled roots twisting into shapes that looked almost deliberate. Rory adjusted the strap of her bag, knuckles white. The torch beam cut a ragged path ahead, illuminating patches of moss that shifted when she wasn’t looking directly at them. She swallowed. "Focus. In and out. Grab the damn thing and leave." The *thing* in question was a book—Eva’s book, stolen by someone who shouldn’t have been able to find this place, let alone take anything from it. Rory had traced it here, the pendant’s pull unmistakable. But the Grove wasn’t behaving. The path that should’ve been straight now coiled, trees leaning in as if listening. A snap of a twig. She spun, torchlight skittering over the undergrowth. Nothing. Just the flowers, too still, their colours too bright in the dark. Her breath fogged in the cold air, though the pendant against her skin burned hotter. "Right. Moving." She forced her legs forward, boots sinking into soil that gave too easily, like wet sponge. The deeper she went, the more the air thickened, each inhale laced with the taste of iron and something sweet, cloying. The torch flickered. Not from a breeze—there wasn’t one—but as if something had passed *through* the light. Rory’s scar itched. She scratched at it absently, the crescent-shaped mark flaring white under her fingertips. The pendant’s glow bled through her shirt, casting ruddy shadows on the bark ahead. Then she saw it. The book lay open on a flat stone, pages splayed like wings. Eva’s handwriting curled across the parchment, ink shimmering as though still wet. Rory reached for it— A whisper slithered past her ear. Not words. Not quite. A sound like fingers dragging over glass, slow and deliberate. She jerked back, torch swinging wild. The beam caught movement—a shift in the dark, something tall and too thin stepping behind a tree. The bark there was *wrong*, the grooves forming a pattern that looked like a face, lips parted in a silent scream. Rory’s lungs locked. "Who’s there?" No answer. Just the creak of branches, the rustle of leaves that hadn’t been there a second ago. She snatched the book, shoving it into her bag. The moment her fingers left the pages, the torch died. Darkness swallowed her whole. The pendant’s glow was the only light now, a dull crimson pulse against her chest. Rory turned in a slow circle, skin prickling. The trees had moved. The path behind her was gone, replaced by a wall of roots knitted together like a gate. The air hummed, a low vibration that resonated in her teeth. Something laughed. Not a human sound. More like the crack of ice on a frozen lake, sharp and brittle. Rory’s breath hitched. "Eva’s gonna kill me for this." She took a step. The ground didn’t just give—it *pulled*, soil clinging to her boots like tar. The pendant’s heat bordered on pain now, its glow casting long, writhing shadows that didn’t match the shapes around her. A shadow detached from the others. Taller than the trees, its edges blurred as if smudged by an unsteady hand. It didn’t walk. It *flowed*, seeping across the ground toward her. Rory stumbled back, fingers scrambling for the torch—useless, dead weight. The thing had no face, just a darker void where one should’ve been, and when it raised an arm, the branches above twisted in response, forming a cage of thorns. Rory’s pulse hammered in her throat. "Yeah, no. Not today." She bolted. The Grove shifted around her, paths twisting mid-step. The standing stones should’ve been just ahead, but the pendant’s pull yanked her left, then right, then left again, like a fishhook caught in her ribs. The thing behind her didn’t chase. It didn’t need to. The trees did it for her, roots snaking across her path, vines lashing at her ankles. A hand—*cold*, too many fingers—brushed her shoulder. Rory screamed, whirling. Nothing there. But the air *tasted* like it, like copper and spoiled honey. The pendant seared her skin. She ripped it off, hurling it into the dark. The moment it left her hand, the world *screamed*. The trees split open, bark peeling back like flesh, revealing glistening black hollows where sap should’ve been. The ground heaved, wildflowers bursting into rot mid-bloom. And the thing—*it*—unfolded, its form stretching, elongating, until it filled the space between the trees, its void-face tilting as if curious. Rory’s back hit something solid. The standing stones. The boundary. She didn’t think. She *lunged*, fingers clawing at the moss-slick surface. The moment she crossed, the Grove’s scream cut off like a severed breath. Silence. Then— Laughter. Soft. Human. Rory collapsed to her knees, gasping. The pendant lay in the dirt at her feet, its glow faded to a dull ember. She snatched it up, chain burning her palm. A twig snapped. She looked up. Eva stood at the edge of the tree line, arms crossed, one eyebrow arched. "Took you long enough."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount974
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
28.13% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount974
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count3
2
word"glistening"
count2
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"resonated"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"eyebrow"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"pulse"
2"glistening"
3"silence"
4"traced"
5"flickered"
6"whisper"
7"resonated"
8"weight"
9"eyebrow"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences100
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans11
markdownWords11
totalWords961
ratio0.011
matches
0"off"
1"thing"
2"through"
3"wrong"
4"pulled"
5"flowed"
6"cold"
7"tasted"
8"screamed"
9"it"
10"lunged"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
79.96% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount928
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.4
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory13
Grove4
London1
Eva3
Laughter1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Grove"
2"Eva"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.8
windowScore1
68.03% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if listening"
1"looked like a face, lips parted in a sile"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount961
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean22.88
std21.06
cv0.92
sampleLengths
012
163
210
34
460
542
654
75
835
92
1054
1130
124
1328
146
1558
165
1718
1819
194
2055
212
2226
2337
246
2565
2610
272
2860
297
3030
319
3246
3310
3424
351
361
373
3830
393
403
4118
98.25% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences100
matches
0"been crushed"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs168
matches
0"wasn’t looking"
1"wasn’t behaving"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences107
ratio0.093
matches
0"Not rotten, not sour—just *off*, like the scent of rain on hot pavement when no storm had come."
1"The *thing* in question was a book—Eva’s book, stolen by someone who shouldn’t have been able to find this place, let alone take anything from it."
2"Not from a breeze—there wasn’t one—but as if something had passed *through* the light."
3"Rory reached for it—"
4"The beam caught movement—a shift in the dark, something tall and too thin stepping behind a tree."
5"The ground didn’t just give—it *pulled*, soil clinging to her boots like tar."
6"Rory stumbled back, fingers scrambling for the torch—useless, dead weight."
7"A hand—*cold*, too many fingers—brushed her shoulder."
8"And the thing—*it*—unfolded, its form stretching, elongating, until it filled the space between the trees, its void-face tilting as if curious."
9"Then—"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount941
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.03825717321997875
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004250797024442083
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean8.98
std6.7
cv0.746
sampleLengths
012
118
210
314
421
55
65
74
827
913
102
112
1216
139
1421
152
1610
1726
189
195
2014
215
227
231
2412
2515
262
2716
2821
293
3014
313
3213
3314
344
3512
3612
374
386
392
402
4110
426
4317
4421
453
462
472
4816
499
36.92% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.2803738317757009
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners30
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences84
matches
0"Just the creak of ancient"
1"Just the flowers, too still,"
2"Then she saw it."
3"Just the creak of branches,"
4"More like the crack of"
ratio0.06
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences84
matches
0"She paused, fingers brushing the"
1"Its usual faint warmth had"
2"She exhaled through her nose."
3"She spun, torchlight skittering over"
4"Her breath fogged in the"
5"She forced her legs forward,"
6"She scratched at it absently,"
7"She jerked back, torch swinging"
8"She snatched the book, shoving"
9"She took a step."
10"It didn’t walk."
11"It *flowed*, seeping across the"
12"It didn’t need to."
13"She ripped it off, hurling"
14"She didn’t think."
15"She *lunged*, fingers clawing at"
16"She snatched it up, chain"
17"She looked up."
ratio0.214
43.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences84
matches
0"The air smelled wrong the"
1"She paused, fingers brushing the"
2"Its usual faint warmth had"
3"The wildflowers underfoot should’ve been"
4"She exhaled through her nose."
5"The Grove had always been"
6"Rory adjusted the strap of"
7"The torch beam cut a"
8"The *thing* in question was"
9"Rory had traced it here,"
10"The path that should’ve been"
11"A snap of a twig."
12"She spun, torchlight skittering over"
13"Her breath fogged in the"
14"She forced her legs forward,"
15"The deeper she went, the"
16"The torch flickered."
17"Rory’s scar itched."
18"She scratched at it absently,"
19"The pendant’s glow bled through"
ratio0.833
59.52% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"Now, the silence pressed too"
ratio0.012
6.80% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The wildflowers underfoot should’ve been crushed by her boots, but they sprang back unharmed, petals glistening with something that wasn’t dew."
1"The torch beam cut a ragged path ahead, illuminating patches of moss that shifted when she wasn’t looking directly at them."
2"The path that should’ve been straight now coiled, trees leaning in as if listening."
3"Eva’s handwriting curled across the parchment, ink shimmering as though still wet."
4"Just the creak of branches, the rustle of leaves that hadn’t been there a second ago."
5"The pendant’s heat bordered on pain now, its glow casting long, writhing shadows that didn’t match the shapes around her."
6"The trees did it for her, roots snaking across her path, vines lashing at her ankles."
7"And the thing—*it*—unfolded, its form stretching, elongating, until it filled the space between the trees, its void-face tilting as if curious."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.0314%