| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 974 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 28.13% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 974 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "glistening" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "traced" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "resonated" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "eyebrow" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 100 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 107 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 11 | | markdownWords | 11 | | totalWords | 961 | | ratio | 0.011 | | matches | | 0 | "off" | | 1 | "thing" | | 2 | "through" | | 3 | "wrong" | | 4 | "pulled" | | 5 | "flowed" | | 6 | "cold" | | 7 | "tasted" | | 8 | "screamed" | | 9 | "it" | | 10 | "lunged" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 0 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 79.96% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 928 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1.4 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 13 | | Grove | 4 | | London | 1 | | Eva | 3 | | Laughter | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.8 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 68.03% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if listening" | | 1 | "looked like a face, lips parted in a sile" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 961 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 22.88 | | std | 21.06 | | cv | 0.92 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 63 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 60 | | 5 | 42 | | 6 | 54 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 35 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 54 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 58 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 55 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 37 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 65 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 60 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 30 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 46 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 30 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 18 |
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| 98.25% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "been crushed" | | 1 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 168 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn’t looking" | | 1 | "wasn’t behaving" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 107 | | ratio | 0.093 | | matches | | 0 | "Not rotten, not sour—just *off*, like the scent of rain on hot pavement when no storm had come." | | 1 | "The *thing* in question was a book—Eva’s book, stolen by someone who shouldn’t have been able to find this place, let alone take anything from it." | | 2 | "Not from a breeze—there wasn’t one—but as if something had passed *through* the light." | | 3 | "Rory reached for it—" | | 4 | "The beam caught movement—a shift in the dark, something tall and too thin stepping behind a tree." | | 5 | "The ground didn’t just give—it *pulled*, soil clinging to her boots like tar." | | 6 | "Rory stumbled back, fingers scrambling for the torch—useless, dead weight." | | 7 | "A hand—*cold*, too many fingers—brushed her shoulder." | | 8 | "And the thing—*it*—unfolded, its form stretching, elongating, until it filled the space between the trees, its void-face tilting as if curious." | | 9 | "Then—" |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 941 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.03825717321997875 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004250797024442083 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 107 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 107 | | mean | 8.98 | | std | 6.7 | | cv | 0.746 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 36.92% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.2803738317757009 | | totalSentences | 107 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the creak of ancient" | | 1 | "Just the flowers, too still," | | 2 | "Then she saw it." | | 3 | "Just the creak of branches," | | 4 | "More like the crack of" |
| | ratio | 0.06 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, fingers brushing the" | | 1 | "Its usual faint warmth had" | | 2 | "She exhaled through her nose." | | 3 | "She spun, torchlight skittering over" | | 4 | "Her breath fogged in the" | | 5 | "She forced her legs forward," | | 6 | "She scratched at it absently," | | 7 | "She jerked back, torch swinging" | | 8 | "She snatched the book, shoving" | | 9 | "She took a step." | | 10 | "It didn’t walk." | | 11 | "It *flowed*, seeping across the" | | 12 | "It didn’t need to." | | 13 | "She ripped it off, hurling" | | 14 | "She didn’t think." | | 15 | "She *lunged*, fingers clawing at" | | 16 | "She snatched it up, chain" | | 17 | "She looked up." |
| | ratio | 0.214 | |
| 43.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 70 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled wrong the" | | 1 | "She paused, fingers brushing the" | | 2 | "Its usual faint warmth had" | | 3 | "The wildflowers underfoot should’ve been" | | 4 | "She exhaled through her nose." | | 5 | "The Grove had always been" | | 6 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 7 | "The torch beam cut a" | | 8 | "The *thing* in question was" | | 9 | "Rory had traced it here," | | 10 | "The path that should’ve been" | | 11 | "A snap of a twig." | | 12 | "She spun, torchlight skittering over" | | 13 | "Her breath fogged in the" | | 14 | "She forced her legs forward," | | 15 | "The deeper she went, the" | | 16 | "The torch flickered." | | 17 | "Rory’s scar itched." | | 18 | "She scratched at it absently," | | 19 | "The pendant’s glow bled through" |
| | ratio | 0.833 | |
| 59.52% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, the silence pressed too" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 6.80% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The wildflowers underfoot should’ve been crushed by her boots, but they sprang back unharmed, petals glistening with something that wasn’t dew." | | 1 | "The torch beam cut a ragged path ahead, illuminating patches of moss that shifted when she wasn’t looking directly at them." | | 2 | "The path that should’ve been straight now coiled, trees leaning in as if listening." | | 3 | "Eva’s handwriting curled across the parchment, ink shimmering as though still wet." | | 4 | "Just the creak of branches, the rustle of leaves that hadn’t been there a second ago." | | 5 | "The pendant’s heat bordered on pain now, its glow casting long, writhing shadows that didn’t match the shapes around her." | | 6 | "The trees did it for her, roots snaking across her path, vines lashing at her ankles." | | 7 | "And the thing—*it*—unfolded, its form stretching, elongating, until it filled the space between the trees, its void-face tilting as if curious." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |