Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPF8TF5PQ4AT2GH3GTX465

Run Details

Duration:
33.6s
Cost:
$0.002867
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone Pendant lay heavy against Rory’s collarbone, its crimson glow bleeding through her shirt like a slow, stubborn ember. She adjusted the strap of her delivery bag—empty now, the last of Yu-Fei’s orders dropped off hours ago—and stepped past the standing stones. The air thickened the moment she crossed the boundary. Not like humidity, not like fog, but something denser, something that clung to her skin and made her breath shallow. The wildflowers at her feet should’ve been dormant this late in autumn, but they unfurled in the dim light, petals trembling without wind. She exhaled. "Right. Time to get this over with." Her voice didn’t carry. It died between one syllable and the next, swallowed by the grove. Rory had come for answers. The pendant had led her here—pulsing, insistent, its warmth seeping into her sternum like a second heartbeat. She’d ignored it for weeks, chalking it up to static or bad wiring in the flat. But last night, it had burned. Not like fire, not like pain, but like a brand pressed too close, too deep. And then the dreams started. Not dreams. Memories that weren’t hers. A woman’s voice, whispering in a language that made her teeth ache. *Find the gate before the gate finds you.* She didn’t believe in gates. Or Fae. Or whatever the hell this place was. The trees here grew too straight, their bark too smooth, like polished bone. No underbrush, no fallen branches, just a carpet of moss that muffled her steps. The silence wasn’t quiet. It hummed. A low, subsonic vibration that rattled her ribs. Rory stopped. Listened. A twig snapped. She spun. Nothing. Just the trees, their branches knitting together overhead like fingers lacing tight. The pendant flared against her skin, a sudden spike of heat. She yanked it out from under her shirt. The crimson stone pulsed once, twice, then dimmed to a sullen glow. "Okay," she muttered. "That’s not ominous at all." She kept walking. The grove stretched. That was the only way to describe it. Every step should’ve brought her closer to the center—wherever the hell that was—but the trees just... multiplied. The path behind her vanished. The path ahead split, then split again, each fork identical. Rory’s pulse thudded in her throat. She flexed her fingers, shook out her wrists. "Not lost. Just... disoriented." A laugh bubbled up from somewhere to her left. High. Childlike. It cut off mid-note. She froze. "Hello?" No answer. The moss drank her voice. Then, from the right: a whisper. Too close. Too wet. Like lips brushing her ear. *"Aurora."* She whirled. Nothing. Just the trees, the flowers, the endless damn moss. The pendant burned. Rory clutched it, her breath coming fast. "Who’s there?" Silence. Then, from behind her: a giggle. Not a child’s. Something older. Something that had forgotten how to laugh right. She didn’t turn this time. She walked faster. The trees thinned. Ahead, a clearing. Moonlight—too bright, too white—spilled over a ring of mushrooms, their caps glistening like wet teeth. In the center, a stone. Flat. Smooth. Like an altar. The pendant seared her palm. Rory approached. The stone wasn’t empty. Something lay on it. A bundle. Cloth, maybe. Or skin. She reached out. The bundle moved. Rory jerked back. The cloth—no, the *thing*—unfolded. Limbs. Too many limbs. Too long. Too jointed. It sat up with a sound like tearing paper. She stumbled, her heel catching on a root. She went down hard, her tailbone cracking against the moss. The thing on the stone tilted its head. No face. Just a smooth stretch of skin where features should’ve been. The pendant blazed. Rory scrambled back, her fingers digging into the earth. The thing stood. It didn’t walk so much as *flow*, its limbs bending in ways that made her stomach lurch. It took a step. Then another. She bolted. Branches lashed her arms, her face. The grove twisted, the path narrowing, the trees pressing in like walls. Behind her, the thing made no sound. No footsteps. No breath. Just the wet, tearing noise of its body moving. The pendant was a brand against her chest. Rory burst into another clearing. This one smaller. A dead end. The trees here were black, their bark peeling like burnt flesh. In the center, a well. Stone. Ancient. The water inside was still. Too still. She skidded to a stop. The thing was behind her. She could feel it. Not hear it. Not see it. But it was there, in the way the air thickened, in the way the pendant screamed against her skin. She turned. Nothing. The well gurgled. Rory backed up until her spine hit the trees. The water in the well rippled. Something surfaced. A hand. Pale. Too long. Fingers brushing the stone. Then another hand. And another. The thing from the altar stepped into the clearing. Rory’s breath hitched. She pressed herself against the tree, her nails splintering against the bark. The thing’s head tilted. The smooth expanse of its face split. A mouth. Too wide. Too many teeth. The hands in the well reached up. Grabbed the edge. Pulled. A head emerged. Another faceless thing. Then another. And another. The pendant burned so hot Rory thought it might melt into her skin. The first thing took a step toward her. She didn’t think. She ran. The grove blurred. The trees bent, their branches reaching, their roots snaking across the path. The pendant was a live coal in her fist. She clutched it, her breath ragged, her legs burning. A sound. Not behind her. Not beside her. Above. Rory looked up. The trees were full of them. Dozens. Hundreds. Faceless things, their limbs tangled in the branches, their bodies swaying like wind chimes. One detached. Dropped. Landed in a crouch in front of her. She screamed. The thing lunged. The pendant flared white-hot. Rory’s vision whited out. A sound like a thousand voices screaming at once filled her skull. The thing recoiled, its body writhing, its limbs twisting in on themselves. Then silence. Rory blinked. The grove was still. The trees stood straight. The moss was just moss. The wildflowers drooped, their petals brown at the edges. The pendant was cold. She didn’t wait. She ran. The standing stones loomed ahead, the boundary between here and there, between real and not. She didn’t look back. She didn’t breathe. She crossed. The air lightened. The hum of the grove faded. Rory collapsed onto the damp grass of Richmond Park, her chest heaving, her hands shaking. The pendant lay dull against her skin. She didn’t know what had just happened. She didn’t want to know. But the dreams would come back. She knew that now. And next time, the pendant might not save her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1136
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.78% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1136
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"silence"
count3
2
word"pulsed"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"glistening"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"lurch"
count1
8
word"footsteps"
count1
9
word"could feel"
count1
10
word"loomed"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"silence"
2"pulsed"
3"pulse"
4"whisper"
5"glistening"
6"stomach"
7"lurch"
8"footsteps"
9"could feel"
10"loomed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences200
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences200
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences206
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords11
totalWords1125
ratio0.01
matches
0"Find the gate before the gate finds you."
1"\"Aurora.\""
2"thing"
3"flow"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
77.54% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1104
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.45
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Rory16
Yu-Fei1
Fae1
Richmond1
Park1
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Rory"
2"Yu-Fei"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.775
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords3.556
wordCount1125
matches
0"Not like humidity, not like fog, but something denser, something"
1"not like fog, but something denser, something"
2"Not like fire, not like pain, but like a brand pressed too close, too deep"
3"not like pain, but like a brand pressed too close, too deep"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences206
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs69
mean16.3
std16.59
cv1.017
sampleLengths
043
152
29
316
490
514
641
73
83
946
108
113
1243
1318
1415
152
161
177
1815
191
2012
213
229
2320
248
2531
265
2716
283
293
3024
3138
323
3335
342
3538
368
3736
385
3934
402
411
423
4326
445
459
4633
4711
4810
4913
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences200
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs195
matches(empty)
73.51% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences206
ratio0.024
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of her delivery bag—empty now, the last of Yu-Fei’s orders dropped off hours ago—and stepped past the standing stones."
1"The pendant had led her here—pulsing, insistent, its warmth seeping into her sternum like a second heartbeat."
2"Every step should’ve brought her closer to the center—wherever the hell that was—but the trees just..."
3"Moonlight—too bright, too white—spilled over a ring of mushrooms, their caps glistening like wet teeth."
4"The cloth—no, the *thing*—unfolded."
81.41% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1115
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"lay heavy against Rory’s"
1"lay dull against her"
adverbCount53
adverbRatio0.04753363228699552
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0008968609865470852
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences206
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences206
mean5.46
std4.55
cv0.833
sampleLengths
020
123
29
320
423
52
67
74
812
95
1017
1116
126
1315
145
152
164
1712
188
195
202
217
2213
2314
244
252
268
272
281
293
302
311
3212
3311
348
3512
363
375
383
393
408
4116
421
435
4410
456
468
474
489
491
36.41% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats28
diversityRatio0.2669902912621359
totalSentences206
uniqueOpeners55
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount9
totalSentences139
matches
0"Just the trees, their branches"
1"Then, from the right: a"
2"Just the trees, the flowers,"
3"Then, from behind her: a"
4"Too many limbs."
5"Just a smooth stretch of"
6"Just the wet, tearing noise"
7"Then another hand."
8"Too many teeth."
ratio0.065
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences139
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"Her voice didn’t carry."
2"It died between one syllable"
3"She’d ignored it for weeks,"
4"She didn’t believe in gates."
5"She yanked it out from"
6"She kept walking."
7"She flexed her fingers, shook"
8"It cut off mid-note."
9"She didn’t turn this time."
10"She walked faster."
11"She reached out."
12"It sat up with a"
13"She stumbled, her heel catching"
14"She went down hard, her"
15"It didn’t walk so much"
16"It took a step."
17"She skidded to a stop."
18"She could feel it."
19"She pressed herself against the"
ratio0.201
78.71% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount106
totalSentences139
matches
0"The Heartstone Pendant lay heavy"
1"She adjusted the strap of"
2"The air thickened the moment"
3"The wildflowers at her feet"
4"Her voice didn’t carry."
5"It died between one syllable"
6"Rory had come for answers."
7"The pendant had led her"
8"She’d ignored it for weeks,"
9"Memories that weren’t hers."
10"A woman’s voice, whispering in"
11"She didn’t believe in gates."
12"The trees here grew too"
13"The silence wasn’t quiet."
14"A low, subsonic vibration that"
15"A twig snapped."
16"The pendant flared against her"
17"She yanked it out from"
18"The crimson stone pulsed once,"
19"She kept walking."
ratio0.763
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences139
matches(empty)
ratio0
4.61% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Not like humidity, not like fog, but something denser, something that clung to her skin and made her breath shallow."
1"The pendant had led her here—pulsing, insistent, its warmth seeping into her sternum like a second heartbeat."
2"No underbrush, no fallen branches, just a carpet of moss that muffled her steps."
3"The trees bent, their branches reaching, their roots snaking across the path."
4"The thing recoiled, its body writhing, its limbs twisting in on themselves."
5"Rory collapsed onto the damp grass of Richmond Park, her chest heaving, her hands shaking."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.286
80.0700%