Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPFB4B69DX5FVY2VG6A0GA

Run Details

Duration:
33.6s
Cost:
$0.002992
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolt scraped back with a sound like a knife being drawn. Rory’s breath hitched, fingers tightening around the edge of the door. The chain rattled, the last barrier between her and the hallway’s dim light. Lucien stood there, one hand resting on the ivory head of his cane, the other adjusting the cuff of his charcoal suit. His amber eye caught the light from the stairwell, sharp as a blade. The black one swallowed it whole. "You’re not Eva." Rory’s pulse hammered in her throat. "No. She’s at work." A beat. The scent of bergamot and something darker, like burnt sugar, curled into the flat. Ptolemy wound between Lucien’s ankles, tail flicking, but the cat’s usual hiss was absent. Traitor. Lucien’s gaze flicked past her, taking in the clutter of scrolls on the coffee table, the half-empty mug of cold tea, the way Rory’s hoodie swallowed her frame. "May I come in?" "No." The word hung between them, brittle. Lucien exhaled through his nose, a sound that might’ve been a laugh if it weren’t so hollow. "I didn’t think you’d answer the door if I called first." "You didn’t call. You just showed up." Rory’s fingers ached from gripping the door. "What do you want?" "To talk." "About what?" "About why you’ve been avoiding me for three months." The accusation landed like a punch. Rory’s jaw set. "I haven’t been avoiding you." "Then why haven’t I seen you at Silas’? Why do your deliveries to the Golden Empress suddenly go to the back door instead of the front? Why—" His voice cracked, just once. "Why did you leave without saying goodbye?" The air in the flat turned thick, suffocating. Rory’s wrist burned where the crescent scar sat, a ghost of old pain. She stepped back, not inviting him in, but not shutting the door either. "You know why." Lucien’s knuckles whitened around his cane. "Because of what happened at the docks." "Because you lied to me." "I didn’t lie." "You didn’t tell me the truth." A muscle twitched in his jaw. "Would you have believed me if I had?" Rory’s chest tightened. She remembered the way his skin had burned under her touch that night, the way his pupils had slit like a cat’s in the dark. The way he’d looked at her when she’d pulled away, like she’d driven a knife between his ribs. Ptolemy meowed, breaking the silence. Lucien’s gaze dropped to the cat, then back to Rory. "I came because I need your help." Of course. Rory’s laugh was bitter. "Right. Because that’s what this is about. Not the fact that you kissed me and then acted like it never happened." Lucien’s breath came out sharp. "I didn’t act like it never happened." "You didn’t act like it *meant* anything." The words hung there, raw. Lucien’s throat worked. "It meant something." Rory’s pulse roared in her ears. "Then why didn’t you say that? Why did you let me walk away?" "Because I thought you needed space!" Lucien’s voice rose, then dropped, rough. "Because I thought if I pushed, you’d run. And I was right, wasn’t I?" Rory’s nails dug into her palms. "You don’t get to decide what I need." "No. But I do get to decide whether I’m going to let you pretend I don’t exist." Lucien’s gaze burned into hers. "So. Are you going to let me in, or are we doing this in the hallway?" The flat suddenly felt too small, the walls pressing in. Rory stepped aside. Lucien moved past her, his shoulder brushing hers, the contact electric. The door clicked shut behind him. He didn’t sit. Neither did she. The silence stretched, taut as a wire. Lucien broke it first. "I need your help with something. Something dangerous." Rory crossed her arms. "Of course you do." His mouth twisted. "Not like that. Not just because you’re good at thinking on your feet. Because you’re the only one who knows the full truth about me." Rory’s stomach twisted. "And what truth is that?" "That I’m not just some fixer." Lucien’s voice was low, controlled. "That I’m half-demon. That my father’s realm is coming for me. And that if I don’t stop it, London burns." Rory’s breath left her in a rush. She’d known, of course. She’d *seen* it. But hearing him say it out loud made it real in a way it hadn’t been before. Lucien watched her, waiting. "You’re the only one who knows. The only one who can help me without running the other way." Rory’s fingers curled into fists. "And what happens after? When this is over? Do you go back to pretending I don’t exist?" Lucien’s gaze darkened. "I never pretended that." "Then what was that night at the docks? What was the kiss?" His jaw tightened. "A mistake." The word hit like a slap. Rory’s chest ached. "Right. Of course." Lucien’s hands flexed at his sides. "That’s not what I meant." "Then what did you mean?" "I meant—" He cut himself off, frustration flashing across his face. "I meant I shouldn’t have done it. Not like that. Not when you were vulnerable." Rory’s laugh was hollow. "I wasn’t vulnerable." "You’d just found out what I was." "And that changes things?" "Yes!" Lucien’s voice cracked. "It changes *everything*." Rory’s breath came fast. "Why? Because I’m human? Because I’m not some demon from Avaros?" Lucien’s eyes burned. "Because you’re *you*." The words hung between them, heavy. Rory’s pulse pounded in her throat. Lucien stepped closer. "I didn’t kiss you because I thought you were vulnerable. I kissed you because I couldn’t *not* kiss you. And then I let you walk away because I thought it was the right thing to do. But I was wrong." Rory’s heart hammered. "What are you saying?" Lucien’s gaze dropped to her mouth. "I’m saying I don’t want to pretend anymore." The air between them crackled. Rory’s lips parted, but no words came. Lucien’s hand lifted, his fingers brushing her jaw, tilting her face up. His touch was fire and ice, sending a shiver down her spine. "Tell me to stop." Rory’s breath hitched. She should. She *should*. But she didn’t. Lucien’s mouth crashed into hers, hungry, desperate. Rory’s hands flew to his chest, not pushing him away, but gripping his lapels, pulling him closer. His cane clattered to the floor, forgotten. His hands tangled in her hair, tilting her head, deepening the kiss. Rory’s mind spun. This was wrong. This was reckless. This was— Lucien pulled back just enough to whisper against her lips. "Tell me to stop." Rory’s fingers curled into his shirt. "Shut up." His laugh was dark, triumphant. Then his mouth was on hers again, and the world narrowed to the heat of his body, the taste of him, the way his hands mapped her like she was something precious. Ptolemy yowled, startling them both. Lucien broke the kiss, breathing hard, his forehead resting against hers. Rory’s pulse roared in her ears. Lucien’s thumb brushed her cheek. "We should talk." Rory’s laugh was shaky. "Yeah. We should." But neither of them moved.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"His voice cracked just [just]"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.082
leniency0.164
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.033
91.55% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1184
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count2
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.55% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1184
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"pulse"
count4
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"electric"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"down her spine"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"flicked"
2"silence"
3"electric"
4"stomach"
5"down her spine"
6"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences96
matches
0"was bitter"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences96
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences150
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords6
totalWords1182
ratio0.005
matches
0"meant"
1"seen"
2"everything"
3"you"
4"not"
5"should"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions56
wordCount694
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity4.03
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity6.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien25
Rory28
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Rory"
2"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
30.80% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.692
wordCount1182
matches
0"not inviting him in, but not shutting the door either"
1"not pushing him away, but gripping his lapels, pulling him closer"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences150
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs71
mean16.65
std12.19
cv0.732
sampleLengths
036
141
23
310
431
532
61
734
818
92
102
119
1214
1339
1437
1513
165
173
186
1914
2046
2122
2227
2312
247
2511
2619
2726
2814
2938
3013
3123
327
3312
348
3528
368
3731
3831
3922
4022
417
4212
435
4412
4511
465
4726
487
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"being drawn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs135
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences150
ratio0.007
matches
0"This was—"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount695
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.03884892086330935
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0014388489208633094
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences150
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences150
mean7.88
std6.63
cv0.842
sampleLengths
012
111
213
322
413
56
63
76
84
92
1014
1114
121
1328
144
151
166
1717
1811
1914
204
212
222
239
246
253
265
2732
287
298
3013
3113
323
336
347
355
363
376
386
398
403
4125
4218
435
4410
457
462
474
4821
495
43.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.23333333333333334
totalSentences150
uniqueOpeners35
37.04% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences90
matches
0"Then his mouth was on"
ratio0.011
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences90
matches
0"His amber eye caught the"
1"His voice cracked, just once"
2"She stepped back, not inviting"
3"She remembered the way his"
4"He didn’t sit."
5"His mouth twisted."
6"She’d known, of course."
7"She’d *seen* it."
8"His jaw tightened."
9"He cut himself off, frustration"
10"His touch was fire and"
11"His cane clattered to the"
12"His hands tangled in her"
13"His laugh was dark, triumphant."
ratio0.156
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences90
matches
0"The deadbolt scraped back with"
1"Rory’s breath hitched, fingers tightening"
2"The chain rattled, the last"
3"Lucien stood there, one hand"
4"His amber eye caught the"
5"The black one swallowed it"
6"Rory’s pulse hammered in her"
7"The scent of bergamot and"
8"Ptolemy wound between Lucien’s ankles,"
9"Lucien’s gaze flicked past her,"
10"The word hung between them,"
11"Lucien exhaled through his nose,"
12"Rory’s fingers ached from gripping"
13"The accusation landed like a"
14"Rory’s jaw set."
15"His voice cracked, just once"
16"The air in the flat"
17"Rory’s wrist burned where the"
18"She stepped back, not inviting"
19"Lucien’s knuckles whitened around his"
ratio0.956
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
ratio0
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Lucien’s hand lifted, his fingers brushing her jaw, tilting her face up."
1"Rory’s hands flew to his chest, not pushing him away, but gripping his lapels, pulling him closer."
2"His hands tangled in her hair, tilting her head, deepening the kiss."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He cut, frustration flashing across his face"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
77.8279%