Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPFKEFYTGM68PQ5MTYD83V

Run Details

Duration:
40.8s
Cost:
$0.000501
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest hummed with the low murmur of conversation and the occasional clink of glasses. The scent of aged wood and spilled ale mingled with the faint, lingering aroma of tobacco, a remnant of the bar's past. Aurora Carter, or Rory as she was known to her friends, pushed open the heavy door, the green neon sign above flickering slightly as she stepped inside. The dim light cast long shadows, and the walls, adorned with old maps and black-and-white photographs, seemed to whisper stories of the past. She scanned the room, her bright blue eyes adjusting to the dimness. The bar was a familiar sight, a place she had frequented in her younger days, though she hadn't set foot in it for years. The Raven's Nest had a way of making one feel both at home and out of place, a sentiment that suited her current mood. "Well, look what the cat dragged in." The voice was deep, familiar, and laced with a hint of amusement. Rory turned to see Silas Blackwood standing behind the bar, his hazel eyes crinkling at the corners as he smiled. His grey-streaked auburn hair was neatly combed, and his beard, matching his hair, was neatly trimmed. He leaned slightly on his left leg, a slight limp evident in his gait. "Silas," Rory acknowledged, her voice steady despite the surprise. She walked over to the bar, her boots clicking softly on the worn wooden floor. "I didn't know you'd taken over this place." Silas chuckled, a warm sound that seemed to fill the room. "Took over? More like inherited. Old Man Raven retired and left it to me. Figured I'd give it a shot." He gestured to the barstool in front of him. "Sit. It's been ages." Rory hesitated for a moment before sliding onto the stool. The leather was worn smooth, and it creaked slightly under her weight. She glanced around the bar, taking in the changes and the things that had stayed the same. "It's been what, five years?" "Six," Silas corrected gently. He poured her a glass of whiskey, the amber liquid glinting in the dim light. "Neat, right?" Rory nodded, her fingers brushing the glass as he slid it towards her. She took a sip, the burn familiar and comforting. "You remember." "Of course I remember," Silas said, his voice soft. "You think I'd forget how my best friend takes her whiskey?" The word "friend" hung in the air between them, heavy with unspoken meaning. Rory looked down at her glass, tracing the rim with her finger. "A lot has changed, Silas." Silas leaned against the bar, his hazel eyes studying her. "You've changed," he said finally. "Not in a bad way. Just... different." Rory met his gaze, her bright blue eyes searching his. "I left Cardiff," she said. "After... everything. I couldn't stay there anymore." Silas nodded, understanding in his eyes. "Evan?" Rory's fingers tightened around her glass. "Yeah. Evan." She took another sip of her whiskey, the burn a welcome distraction. "I couldn't stay. Not after what he did." Silas reached out, his hand covering hers. His touch was warm, familiar. "I'm sorry, Rory. I should have been there." Rory shook her head, her black hair swaying slightly. "You couldn't have known. None of us could." Silas sighed, his gaze drifting to the photographs on the wall. "Time has a way of changing things, doesn't it?" Rory followed his gaze, her eyes lingering on a photograph of the two of them, young and carefree. "We were so young," she said softly. Silas chuckled, a bitter sound. "And stupid. God, we were stupid." Rory smiled, a small, sad smile. "We were happy." Silas looked at her, his eyes soft. "We were. For a while, at least." The silence that followed was comfortable, filled with the weight of shared history and unspoken regrets. Rory took another sip of her whiskey, the liquid warming her from the inside out. "What about you, Silas? What happened to you?" Silas leaned back, his gaze drifting to the ceiling. "I retired," he said. "After Prague. The knee was never the same, and I couldn't keep up with the field work." Rory nodded, her eyes flickering to the slight limp in his gait. "I'm sorry, Silas." Silas shrugged, a small, sad smile on his lips. "It is what it is. I opened this place, kept in touch with old contacts. It's not a bad life." Rory looked around the bar, her eyes taking in the details. "It suits you," she said finally. Silas chuckled, a warm sound that filled the room. "Thanks, Rory. That means a lot coming from you." Rory smiled, a genuine smile that lit up her face. "I mean it. You've built something here, Silas. Something real." Silas looked at her, his eyes soft. "So have you, Rory. You've built a life, a new start. That's something to be proud of." Rory looked down at her glass, her fingers tracing the rim. "I don't know about that," she said softly. "I'm still figuring things out." Silas reached out, his hand covering hers. "We all are, Rory. We all are." The silence that followed was comfortable, filled with the weight of shared history and unspoken hopes. Rory looked up at Silas, her bright blue eyes meeting his hazel ones. "It's good to see you, Silas," she said softly. Silas smiled, a warm, genuine smile that reached his eyes. "It's good to see you too, Rory. It's good to see you too." The Raven's Nest continued to hum with the low murmur of conversation and the occasional clink of glasses, a testament to the passage of time and the weight of unspoken regrets. But in that moment, in that dimly lit bar, two old friends found a sense of peace, a sense of home. And for now, that was enough.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount6
adverbTags
0"Silas corrected gently [gently]"
1"he said finally [finally]"
2"she said softly [softly]"
3"she said finally [finally]"
4"she said softly [softly]"
5"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.293
leniency0.585
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.293
54.03% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount979
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count4
1
adverb"softly"
count4
2
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount979
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"whisper"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count4
3
word"weight"
count4
4
word"glinting"
count1
5
word"comforting"
count1
6
word"unspoken"
count4
7
word"tracing"
count2
8
word"silence"
count2
9
word"comfortable"
count2
10
word"testament"
count1
11
word"sense of"
count2
highlights
0"whisper"
1"scanned"
2"familiar"
3"weight"
4"glinting"
5"comforting"
6"unspoken"
7"tracing"
8"silence"
9"comfortable"
10"testament"
11"sense of"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences62
matches(empty)
96.77% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences62
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords976
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount705
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.41
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven3
Nest3
Carter1
Rory17
Silas17
Blackwood1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Rory"
4"Silas"
5"Blackwood"
places(empty)
globalScore0.294
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sound that seemed to fill the room"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount976
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean27.89
std17.18
cv0.616
sampleLengths
088
160
27
362
432
544
644
721
824
920
1030
1122
1222
137
1428
1520
1617
1720
1825
1911
209
2114
2239
2330
2415
2529
2617
2718
2820
2924
3024
3114
3238
3323
3458
99.60% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"was known"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs111
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences90
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount708
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.029661016949152543
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.01977401129943503
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean10.84
std6.13
cv0.566
sampleLengths
016
122
227
323
412
524
624
77
812
920
1016
1114
129
1315
148
1511
1629
174
1810
1912
2017
215
224
2315
242
2513
269
272
289
2911
3013
3112
325
3310
345
357
3610
375
387
396
401
416
4214
438
447
455
468
479
488
4911
48.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3111111111111111
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners28
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences60
matches
0"She scanned the room, her"
1"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
2"He leaned slightly on his"
3"She walked over to the"
4"He gestured to the barstool"
5"She glanced around the bar,"
6"He poured her a glass"
7"She took a sip, the"
8"he said finally"
9"She took another sip of"
10"His touch was warm, familiar."
11"she said softly"
12"she said finally"
13"she said softly"
14"she said softly"
ratio0.25
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences60
matches
0"The Raven's Nest hummed with"
1"The scent of aged wood"
2"Aurora Carter, or Rory as"
3"The dim light cast long"
4"She scanned the room, her"
5"The bar was a familiar"
6"The Raven's Nest had a"
7"The voice was deep, familiar,"
8"Rory turned to see Silas"
9"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
10"He leaned slightly on his"
11"Rory acknowledged, her voice steady"
12"She walked over to the"
13"Silas chuckled, a warm sound"
14"He gestured to the barstool"
15"Rory hesitated for a moment"
16"The leather was worn smooth,"
17"She glanced around the bar,"
18"Silas corrected gently"
19"He poured her a glass"
ratio0.967
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The silence that followed was comfortable, filled with the weight of shared history and unspoken regrets."
1"The silence that followed was comfortable, filled with the weight of shared history and unspoken hopes."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Rory acknowledged, her voice steady despite the surprise"
1"Silas said, his voice soft"
2"She took, the burn a welcome distraction"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Rory acknowledged (acknowledge)"
1"Silas corrected gently (correct)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.244
leniency0.488
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.098
73.8533%