Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPG28CBWYH6X6KNCT26C1B

Run Details

Duration:
29.6s
Cost:
$0.003938
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked. A chain rattled. The door swung open just wide enough to reveal a sliver of Eva’s face—eyes narrowed, hair piled into a messy bun—before it stopped dead. Aurora froze, fingers still curled around the bottle of wine she’d grabbed from the off-licence. The air between them thickened, heavy with the kind of silence that only came when two people had too much to say and no idea where to start. Eva exhaled through her nose, arms crossing over a faded band T-shirt. “Well. This is a surprise.” Aurora lifted the bottle a fraction, like it might explain everything. “Thought you could use a drink.” A beat. Then Eva’s mouth twitched, not quite a smile. “You always did have terrible timing.” The door opened wider, just enough to let Aurora slip inside. The flat smelled the same—incense and old paper, with the faint tang of curry from the restaurant below. Ptolemy, the tabby, wound around her ankles before darting off into the shadows. Eva didn’t move from the doorway. “You look like hell.” Aurora set the wine on the cluttered coffee table, her scarred wrist catching the light. “Thanks. You look…” *The same. Exactly the same.* “Busy.” Books teetered in stacks along the walls, scrolls unrolled across the sofa like a half-finished puzzle. A single lamp cast long shadows, turning Eva’s sharp features into something almost unreadable. “Busy’s an understatement.” Eva finally stepped back, shutting the door with a firm click. “What are you doing here, Rory?” The nickname hit like a punch to the ribs. No one else called her that anymore. Aurora turned, fingers brushing the spine of a book on demonic sigils—Lucien’s handiwork, probably. “Needed to talk.” “About?” “Everything.” Eva’s laugh was dry, humourless. “That’s not an answer.” Aurora faced her fully then, the weight of the last two years pressing between them. Eva’s dark eyes flickered over her, taking in the delivery jacket still slung over one shoulder, the way her hair had grown out since the last time they’d seen each other. Since the last time they’d *spoken*. “Fine.” Eva crossed her arms again. “Talk.” The words stuck in Aurora’s throat. She’d rehearsed this a dozen times on the Tube ride over, but now, under Eva’s stare, they all sounded stupid. *I missed you. I was wrong. I shouldn’t have left like that.* Instead, she reached into her pocket and pulled out the crumpled note she’d found tucked into her last pay packet from the Golden Empress. Eva’s name was scrawled across it in Yu-Fei’s precise handwriting. Eva didn’t take it. “What’s that?” “A warning.” Aurora unfolded it, smoothing the creases. “Yu-Fei thinks someone’s been asking about you. Someone dangerous.” The flat went still. Even the hum of the fridge seemed to quiet. Eva’s fingers twitched at her sides. “And you believed her?” “She’s never lied to me before.” A muscle in Eva’s jaw tightened. “Neither have I.” The words hung there, heavy and unspoken. *Until you did.* Aurora swallowed. “I know.” Eva turned away first, snatching the note from her hand. She scanned it, then tossed it onto the pile of papers on the desk. “Great. Another problem.” “You’re not even going to ask who it is?” “Does it matter?” Eva’s voice was sharp, but her back was to Aurora now, shoulders tense. “It’s always *someone*. Always something.” Aurora stepped closer. “It matters to me.” Eva whirled around. “Why? Because you suddenly care again?” The words stung. Aurora met her gaze head-on. “I never stopped.” Eva’s breath hitched. For a second, the anger in her eyes wavered, something raw and hurt flickering beneath. Then she shut it down, her expression smoothing into something unreadable. “Bullshit.” Aurora reached for her. Eva flinched back. “Don’t.” Aurora’s hand dropped. “I came because I was worried.” “You came because you *felt guilty*.” Eva’s voice was low, controlled. “There’s a difference.” Aurora’s fingers curled into fists. “Maybe I did. Maybe I do. But that doesn’t change the fact that you’re in trouble.” Eva’s laugh was bitter. “I’ve been in trouble since the day I met you.” The words cut deep. Aurora took a step back, her hip knocking against the desk. A stack of books wobbled. She steadied them, her pulse hammering in her throat. “Then let me help.” “Help?” Eva’s voice cracked. “You want to help *now*?” Aurora met her gaze. “Yes.” Eva stared at her for a long moment, her chest rising and falling too fast. Then she turned away, rubbing her temples like she could press the frustration out of her skull. “You can’t just walk back in here after two years and act like nothing happened.” “I know.” “Do you?” Eva’s voice was quiet now, dangerous. “Because it sure as hell doesn’t feel like it.” Aurora’s throat tightened. “I made a mistake.” “No.” Eva faced her again, eyes burning. “You made a *choice*.” The air between them was electric, charged with everything they’d never said. Aurora could feel the heat of her, the way Eva’s breath came faster when she was angry, the way her fingers flexed like she was fighting the urge to reach out—or push away. “I was scared,” Aurora admitted. Eva’s laugh was hollow. “Scared? Of what?” “Of this.” Aurora gestured between them. “Of how much I—” She stopped herself. Too much. Too soon. Eva’s expression shuttered. “Don’t.” Aurora’s hands clenched. “I can’t just pretend it didn’t happen.” “Then why did you?” The question hung there, sharp and unanswered. Aurora looked away first, her gaze landing on the half-empty teacup on the desk, the way the dregs had stained the porcelain. “Because I thought it was easier.” Eva’s voice dropped to a whisper. “For who?” The silence stretched. Aurora could hear her own heartbeat in her ears. Then Eva exhaled, long and slow, like she was letting go of something. “You should go.” Aurora didn’t move. “Not until we fix this.” “There’s nothing to fix.” Eva’s voice was tired now, the fight draining out of her. “You left. That’s it.” “It’s not that simple.” “It is.” Eva turned away, her back rigid. “People leave, Rory. That’s what they do.” Aurora reached for her again, this time catching her wrist. Eva stiffened but didn’t pull away. “Not this time,” Aurora said. Eva’s breath hitched. Her fingers curled into Aurora’s sleeve, just for a second, before she let go. The flat was too small, the air too thick. Aurora could see the pulse in Eva’s throat, the way her lips parted like she wanted to say something but couldn’t. Then the moment broke. Eva stepped back, her voice steady again. “Fine. You want to help? Then help. But don’t expect this to change anything.” Aurora nodded, the weight in her chest easing just a fraction. “Deal.” Eva grabbed a jacket from the back of a chair, shoving her arms into the sleeves. “We’ll start with Yu-Fei. If she’s warning you, she knows more than she’s saying.” Aurora followed her to the door, the space between them still charged, still unresolved. Eva paused with her hand on the knob, her back to Aurora. “And Rory?” “Yeah?” Eva didn’t turn around. “Next time you run, make sure I don’t find you.” Then she was gone, the door clicking shut behind her. Aurora stood there for a long moment, the echo of Eva’s words settling into her bones. She wasn’t running anymore.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva turned away [away]"
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.145
leniency0.29
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.029
95.96% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1238
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.26% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1238
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"unreadable"
count2
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"unspoken"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"wavered"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count2
8
word"electric"
count1
9
word"charged"
count2
10
word"could feel"
count1
11
word"porcelain"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count1
13
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"unreadable"
2"weight"
3"flickered"
4"unspoken"
5"scanned"
6"wavered"
7"pulse"
8"electric"
9"charged"
10"could feel"
11"porcelain"
12"whisper"
13"echo"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences106
matches
0"was bitter"
1"was angry"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences106
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences159
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans8
markdownWords26
totalWords1228
ratio0.021
matches
0"The same. Exactly the same."
1"spoken"
2"I missed you. I was wrong. I shouldn’t have left like that."
3"Until you did."
4"someone"
5"felt guilty"
6"now"
7"choice"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions80
wordCount925
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity4.32
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity6.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva40
Aurora33
Exactly1
Books1
Lucien1
Tube1
Golden1
Empress1
Yu-Fei1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Aurora"
2"Books"
3"Lucien"
places
0"Golden"
1"Yu-Fei"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite a smile"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1228
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences159
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs83
mean14.8
std10.94
cv0.74
sampleLengths
031
143
217
317
416
542
610
724
830
920
1016
1117
121
131
149
1552
167
1738
1824
1910
206
2117
2213
2310
246
259
2610
274
2827
299
3021
317
329
3311
3429
351
367
371
389
3914
4021
4114
4229
434
449
455
4632
4715
482
4917
98.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences106
matches
0"was scrawled"
1"was gone"
83.04% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs171
matches
0"was fighting"
1"was letting"
2"wasn’t running"
70.98% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences159
ratio0.025
matches
0"The door swung open just wide enough to reveal a sliver of Eva’s face—eyes narrowed, hair piled into a messy bun—before it stopped dead."
1"The flat smelled the same—incense and old paper, with the faint tang of curry from the restaurant below."
2"Aurora turned, fingers brushing the spine of a book on demonic sigils—Lucien’s handiwork, probably."
3"Aurora could feel the heat of her, the way Eva’s breath came faster when she was angry, the way her fingers flexed like she was fighting the urge to reach out—or push away."
82.54% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount934
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount56
adverbRatio0.059957173447537475
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0053533190578158455
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences159
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences159
mean7.72
std6.02
cv0.779
sampleLengths
04
13
224
315
428
512
65
711
86
92
108
116
1211
1318
1413
156
164
1715
185
194
2016
2114
2214
236
249
257
2614
273
281
291
305
314
3215
3331
346
356
361
376
3820
393
403
416
4224
4310
444
452
468
479
484
499
51.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences159
uniqueOpeners53
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount9
totalSentences99
matches
0"Then Eva’s mouth twitched, not"
1"Exactly the same.*"
2"Instead, she reached into her"
3"Even the hum of the"
4"Then she shut it down,"
5"Then she turned away, rubbing"
6"Then Eva exhaled, long and"
7"Then the moment broke."
8"Then she was gone, the"
ratio0.091
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences99
matches
0"She’d rehearsed this a dozen"
1"*I missed you."
2"I was wrong."
3"I shouldn’t have left like"
4"She scanned it, then tossed"
5"She steadied them, her pulse"
6"She stopped herself"
7"Her fingers curled into Aurora’s"
8"She wasn’t running anymore."
ratio0.091
25.66% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences99
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked."
1"A chain rattled."
2"The door swung open just"
3"Aurora froze, fingers still curled"
4"The air between them thickened,"
5"Eva exhaled through her nose,"
6"Aurora lifted the bottle a"
7"The door opened wider, just"
8"The flat smelled the same—incense"
9"Ptolemy, the tabby, wound around"
10"Eva didn’t move from the"
11"Aurora set the wine on"
12"Books teetered in stacks along"
13"A single lamp cast long"
14"Eva finally stepped back, shutting"
15"The nickname hit like a"
16"Aurora turned, fingers brushing the"
17"Eva’s laugh was dry, humourless."
18"Aurora faced her fully then,"
19"Eva’s dark eyes flickered over"
ratio0.869
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Eva stared at her for a long moment, her chest rising and falling too fast."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Eva faced, eyes burning"
1"Eva turned away, her back rigid"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Aurora admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.029
leniency0.058
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.029
81.8745%