| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.12 | | leniency | 0.24 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 890 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 890 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "crystal" | | 5 | "tracing" | | 6 | "structure" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "quickened" | | 9 | "macabre" | | 10 | "shimmered" | | 11 | "flickered" | | 12 | "stomach" | | 13 | "lurched" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 98 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 878 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 48.65% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 740 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 2.03 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Rory | 15 | | Isolde | 11 | | November | 1 | | London | 1 | | Nyx | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.486 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "as if welcoming her" | | 1 | "vines that seemed to writhe when she wasn’t looking directly at them" | | 2 | "looked like feathers, each one iridescent" | | 3 | "spiral that seemed to pull at her gaze" |
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| 86.10% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.139 | | wordCount | 878 | | matches | | 0 | "no longer laughter but" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 22.51 | | std | 16.82 | | cv | 0.747 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 56 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 56 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 53 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 34 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 41 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 45 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 32 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 71 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 42 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 29 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 38 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 33 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 7 |
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| 96.03% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "was thatched" | | 1 | "were lined" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 144 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 98 | | ratio | 0.102 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled of damp earth and something older—ozone and crushed herbs, the kind of scent that clung to the back of her throat." | | 1 | "The wildflowers at their feet shouldn’t have been blooming—not in November, not in London—but here they were, petals unfurling in hues too vivid to name." | | 2 | "A breeze carried whispers—no, not whispers." | | 3 | "The air thickened, heavy with the scent of honey and something metallic—like blood, but sweeter." | | 4 | "Through the trees, a shape emerged—a pavilion of white stone, its pillars carved with vines that seemed to writhe when she wasn’t looking directly at them." | | 5 | "The pavilion’s entrance was an archway draped with strands of beads—no, not beads." | | 6 | "Nyx’s hand—cold, solid—closed over hers." | | 7 | "Images flickered within it—flames, a woman’s scream, a knife flashing in the dark." | | 8 | "The table’s void surged, the images sharpening—a man’s face, twisted in rage, a door opening into darkness, the scent of burning flesh." | | 9 | "The whispers grew louder, no longer laughter but voices—pleading, accusing." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 751 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "cold, solid—closed over hers." |
| | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.03062583222370173 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005326231691078562 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 98 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 98 | | mean | 8.96 | | std | 6.45 | | cv | 0.72 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 49.66% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.3469387755102041 | | totalSentences | 98 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 46.95% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she pressed her palm" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "She didn’t look back." | | 2 | "It hummed beneath her skin." | | 3 | "She pulled back." | | 4 | "She stumbled back as the" | | 5 | "She tore her gaze away." | | 6 | "She yanked it off, holding" | | 7 | "She didn’t argue." | | 8 | "They stumbled through, the grove’s" |
| | ratio | 0.127 | |
| 2.25% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against" | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "The air smelled of damp" | | 3 | "Nyx materialized beside her, their" | | 4 | "Rory didn’t ask what that" | | 5 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 6 | "The wildflowers at their feet" | | 7 | "Isolde stepped between the stones" | | 8 | "She didn’t look back." | | 9 | "Rory exhaled through her nose" | | 10 | "The moment she crossed the" | | 11 | "The sky above the grove" | | 12 | "A breeze carried whispers—no, not" | | 13 | "The grass beneath her boots" | | 14 | "Nyx’s form rippled, their edges" | | 15 | "Isolde knelt, pressing her palm" | | 16 | "The soil darkened where she" | | 17 | "Rory crouched beside her, tracing" | | 18 | "It hummed beneath her skin." | | 19 | "Isolde stood, brushing dirt from" |
| | ratio | 0.915 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 99.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled of damp earth and something older—ozone and crushed herbs, the kind of scent that clung to the back of her throat." | | 1 | "The standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled oaks twisted into arches, bark etched with symbols that made her vision swim if she stared too long." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.04 | | leniency | 0.08 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |