Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPGMMHCEPYVY18WM82FEFN

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Duration:
26.4s
Cost:
$0.003046
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against Rory’s collarbone, a slow, insistent warmth like a second heartbeat. She adjusted the strap of her bag, fingers brushing the worn leather of Isolde’s gift tucked inside. The air smelled of damp earth and something older—ozone and crushed herbs, the kind of scent that clung to the back of her throat. Nyx materialized beside her, their violet eyes flickering like embers in the dim light. "The stones remember us." Rory didn’t ask what that meant. The standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled oaks twisted into arches, bark etched with symbols that made her vision swim if she stared too long. The wildflowers at their feet shouldn’t have been blooming—not in November, not in London—but here they were, petals unfurling in hues too vivid to name. Isolde stepped between the stones first, her silver hair catching the light like spun glass. She didn’t look back. "Time is a fickle thing here. Best not to dawdle." Rory exhaled through her nose and followed. The moment she crossed the threshold, the world tilted. The sky above the grove deepened to twilight, though outside, the sun had been high. A breeze carried whispers—no, not whispers. Laughter. Distant, melodic, like wind chimes made of crystal. The grass beneath her boots was softer than it should’ve been, yielding like moss. Nyx’s form rippled, their edges blurring as they tested the air. "The Veil is thin here. I can taste it." Isolde knelt, pressing her palm to the earth. The soil darkened where she touched it, veins of silver spreading outward. "The Fae Courts do not forget trespassers. But they do not expect them either." Rory crouched beside her, tracing a finger over the silvered ground. It hummed beneath her skin. "How long do we have?" "Long enough." Isolde stood, brushing dirt from her skirts. "But the grove decides, not I." A path wound ahead, lined with mushrooms that glowed faintly blue. Rory stepped forward, and the caps flared brighter at her approach, as if welcoming her. The air thickened, heavy with the scent of honey and something metallic—like blood, but sweeter. Nyx drifted ahead, their shadow stretching unnaturally long. "There’s a structure. Not natural." Rory squinted. Through the trees, a shape emerged—a pavilion of white stone, its pillars carved with vines that seemed to writhe when she wasn’t looking directly at them. The roof was thatched with what looked like feathers, each one iridescent, shifting color as she moved. Isolde’s voice was quiet. "The Seer’s Hall. It has not been used in centuries." Rory’s pulse quickened. "You’ve been here before?" "Once." Isolde’s lavender eyes darkened. "The last time, I was not alone." The pavilion’s entrance was an archway draped with strands of beads—no, not beads. Teeth. Tiny, polished, strung together like a macabre curtain. Rory reached out, then hesitated. Nyx’s hand—cold, solid—closed over hers. "Don’t." She pulled back. "What are they?" "Memories," Isolde said. "The grove keeps them." Rory swallowed. The pendant at her throat burned hotter. Inside, the pavilion was larger than it had any right to be. The walls were lined with shelves, each one crammed with objects: a glass vial filled with swirling mist, a feather that shimmered like oil on water, a knife with a blade of black glass. At the center of the room stood a table of dark wood, its surface etched with a spiral that seemed to pull at her gaze. Nyx circled it, their fingers hovering just above the carvings. "This is a scrying table. But not for the future—for the past." Isolde ran her fingers along the edge. "The grove shows what it wishes. Sometimes, what it fears." Rory stepped closer. The spiral pulsed. "Can we use it?" Isolde didn’t answer. Instead, she pressed her palm to the wood. The table groaned. The spiral deepened, the lines widening into a pit that yawned beneath Rory’s feet. She stumbled back as the floor dissolved, replaced by a swirling void. Images flickered within it—flames, a woman’s scream, a knife flashing in the dark. Nyx’s voice was sharp. "Rory." She tore her gaze away. The pendant at her throat was now scalding. She yanked it off, holding it in her fist. The crimson stone glowed like a coal. Isolde’s breath hitched. "Where did you get that?" Rory’s wrist ached where the crescent scar pulsed in time with the pendant’s light. "I don’t know. It just… appeared." Nyx’s eyes narrowed. "That’s not just any trinket. That’s a key." The table’s void surged, the images sharpening—a man’s face, twisted in rage, a door opening into darkness, the scent of burning flesh. Rory’s stomach lurched. Isolde’s voice cut through the haze. "We need to leave. Now." The grove resisted. The path back twisted, the trees leaning in as if to block their way. The whispers grew louder, no longer laughter but voices—pleading, accusing. Rory’s boots sank into the earth, roots snaking around her ankles. Nyx’s form solidified, their fingers closing around her arm. "Run." She didn’t argue. The pendant burned in her grip as she lunged forward, the grove’s hold breaking with a wet, tearing sound. The standing stones loomed ahead, the air beyond them blessedly normal. They stumbled through, the grove’s whispers cutting off like a slamming door. Rory gasped, doubling over. The pendant in
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.12
leniency0.24
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount890
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount890
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"pulsed"
count3
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"loomed"
count2
3
word"etched"
count2
4
word"crystal"
count1
5
word"tracing"
count1
6
word"structure"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"quickened"
count1
9
word"macabre"
count1
10
word"shimmered"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"stomach"
count1
13
word"lurched"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"loomed"
3"etched"
4"crystal"
5"tracing"
6"structure"
7"pulse"
8"quickened"
9"macabre"
10"shimmered"
11"flickered"
12"stomach"
13"lurched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences76
matches
0"d in rage"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords878
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
48.65% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount740
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.03
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Rory15
Isolde11
November1
London1
Nyx8
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Rory"
2"Isolde"
3"Nyx"
places
0"November"
1"London"
globalScore0.486
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"as if welcoming her"
1"vines that seemed to writhe when she wasn’t looking directly at them"
2"looked like feathers, each one iridescent"
3"spiral that seemed to pull at her gaze"
86.10% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.139
wordCount878
matches
0"no longer laughter but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean22.51
std16.82
cv0.747
sampleLengths
056
118
256
329
47
553
620
734
821
915
1041
1113
1245
1314
147
1512
1632
171
186
197
209
2171
2222
2317
2410
2511
2642
275
2829
298
3020
3111
3225
3311
3438
3510
3633
3712
387
96.03% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences76
matches
0"was thatched"
1"were lined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs144
matches
0"wasn’t looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences98
ratio0.102
matches
0"The air smelled of damp earth and something older—ozone and crushed herbs, the kind of scent that clung to the back of her throat."
1"The wildflowers at their feet shouldn’t have been blooming—not in November, not in London—but here they were, petals unfurling in hues too vivid to name."
2"A breeze carried whispers—no, not whispers."
3"The air thickened, heavy with the scent of honey and something metallic—like blood, but sweeter."
4"Through the trees, a shape emerged—a pavilion of white stone, its pillars carved with vines that seemed to writhe when she wasn’t looking directly at them."
5"The pavilion’s entrance was an archway draped with strands of beads—no, not beads."
6"Nyx’s hand—cold, solid—closed over hers."
7"Images flickered within it—flames, a woman’s scream, a knife flashing in the dark."
8"The table’s void surged, the images sharpening—a man’s face, twisted in rage, a door opening into darkness, the scent of burning flesh."
9"The whispers grew louder, no longer laughter but voices—pleading, accusing."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount751
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"cold, solid—closed over hers."
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.03062583222370173
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.005326231691078562
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean8.96
std6.45
cv0.72
sampleLengths
015
117
224
314
44
56
625
725
815
94
1010
117
129
1315
146
151
168
1714
1811
199
208
2112
2214
2311
245
255
269
276
2811
2915
3015
318
325
332
3426
3517
364
3710
383
394
405
417
4213
431
448
455
465
471
483
493
49.66% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3469387755102041
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners34
46.95% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"Instead, she pressed her palm"
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences71
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"She didn’t look back."
2"It hummed beneath her skin."
3"She pulled back."
4"She stumbled back as the"
5"She tore her gaze away."
6"She yanked it off, holding"
7"She didn’t argue."
8"They stumbled through, the grove’s"
ratio0.127
2.25% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences71
matches
0"The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against"
1"She adjusted the strap of"
2"The air smelled of damp"
3"Nyx materialized beside her, their"
4"Rory didn’t ask what that"
5"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
6"The wildflowers at their feet"
7"Isolde stepped between the stones"
8"She didn’t look back."
9"Rory exhaled through her nose"
10"The moment she crossed the"
11"The sky above the grove"
12"A breeze carried whispers—no, not"
13"The grass beneath her boots"
14"Nyx’s form rippled, their edges"
15"Isolde knelt, pressing her palm"
16"The soil darkened where she"
17"Rory crouched beside her, tracing"
18"It hummed beneath her skin."
19"Isolde stood, brushing dirt from"
ratio0.915
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
99.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The air smelled of damp earth and something older—ozone and crushed herbs, the kind of scent that clung to the back of her throat."
1"The standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled oaks twisted into arches, bark etched with symbols that made her vision swim if she stared too long."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.04
leniency0.08
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.4404%