Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPHNSGJQ1RNSNM2AH3AB8G

Run Details

Duration:
16.1s
Cost:
$0.001699
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest smelled of aged whiskey and polished wood. Rory wiped her hands on her apron, the crescent scar on her wrist catching the dim light as she reached for another glass. The evening crowd had thinned, leaving only a few regulars nursing their drinks in the corners. She glanced at the clock—nearly midnight. The door creaked open. A man stepped inside, shaking rain from his coat. His auburn hair, streaked with grey, was slick with moisture, and his hazel eyes scanned the room with the quiet precision of someone who missed nothing. He moved with a slight limp, favoring his left leg, and his right hand bore a silver signet ring that glinted under the neon glow of the bar’s sign. Rory froze. Silas. His gaze landed on her, and for a moment, neither of them moved. The years between them stretched like a taut wire, humming with everything unsaid. Then he smiled. "Rory Carter. Still slinging drinks, I see." She exhaled, forcing her fingers to unclench from the glass. "Silas Blackwood. Still lurking in the shadows, I see." He chuckled, low and rough, and slid onto a stool. "Some habits die hard." She poured him a whiskey without asking. The amber liquid sloshed into the glass, catching the light like liquid fire. "You look different." "Older." "Not just that." She pushed the drink toward him. "You’re softer." His fingers stilled around the glass. "Soft?" "Less like a man who’d break your fingers for looking at him wrong." A beat of silence. Then he laughed, sharp and sudden. "You always did have a way with words." She leaned against the counter, arms crossed. "What brings you back to the Nest? Thought you’d retired to some villa in the south of France." "Missed the rain, I suppose." He took a sip, eyes never leaving hers. "And you? Still running from Cardiff?" Her jaw tightened. "I don’t run." "No?" His voice was quiet, probing. "Then what do you call it?" She looked away, fingers tracing the scar on her wrist. "Surviving." Silas set his glass down. "Evan still in the picture?" The name hit like a punch. She swallowed. "No." "Good." He didn’t press. Didn’t need to. The air between them thickened, heavy with the weight of years. She remembered the last time they’d spoken—her, fresh out of university, him, already deep in the shadows of MI6. She’d been angry then, furious at the life he’d chosen, the secrets he kept. He’d been distant, untouchable. Now, he was just a man with a limp and a barstool. "You ever think about how things could’ve been different?" she asked. He swirled his drink. "Every damn day." She wanted to ask what he meant. Wanted to dig into the regret she heard in his voice. But the door swung open again, and a group of laughing patrons spilled inside, breaking the moment. Silas stood, adjusting his coat. "I should go." She nodded, suddenly aware of how much she didn’t want him to. He hesitated, then reached into his pocket. A small, worn photograph slid across the counter—a younger version of them, grinning in some long-forgotten pub. "For old times’ sake." She picked it up, fingers brushing the edges. "You kept this?" "Some things are worth holding onto." Then he was gone, the door swinging shut behind him, leaving only the scent of rain and whiskey in his wake. Rory stared at the photograph, the past and present blurring in her hands.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.154
leniency0.308
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.42% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount583
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
65.69% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount583
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"silence"
2"tracing"
3"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences48
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences48
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences69
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords579
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions9
wordCount453
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.66
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Didn1
Rory3
Silas3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences33
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount579
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean16.54
std14.35
cv0.868
sampleLengths
055
14
264
32
41
526
610
719
814
923
101
1111
127
1313
1418
1525
1619
176
1812
1911
2010
219
227
2348
2412
2511
267
2735
288
2912
3028
3111
326
3321
3413
97.95% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences48
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs82
matches(empty)
18.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences69
ratio0.043
matches
0"She glanced at the clock—nearly midnight."
1"She remembered the last time they’d spoken—her, fresh out of university, him, already deep in the shadows of MI6."
2"A small, worn photograph slid across the counter—a younger version of them, grinning in some long-forgotten pub."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount457
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.037199124726477024
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0087527352297593
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences69
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences69
mean8.39
std6.12
cv0.73
sampleLengths
010
123
216
36
44
59
626
729
82
91
1013
1113
123
137
1410
159
1610
174
187
1913
203
211
229
232
246
251
2613
274
286
298
307
3118
3213
336
343
353
366
376
3810
391
405
415
426
432
441
454
463
4711
4819
4914
68.60% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.42028985507246375
totalSentences69
uniqueOpeners29
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences44
matches
0"Then he smiled."
1"Then he laughed, sharp and"
2"Then he was gone, the"
ratio0.068
10.91% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences44
matches
0"She glanced at the clock—nearly"
1"His auburn hair, streaked with"
2"He moved with a slight"
3"His gaze landed on her,"
4"She exhaled, forcing her fingers"
5"He chuckled, low and rough,"
6"She poured him a whiskey"
7"She pushed the drink toward"
8"His fingers stilled around the"
9"She leaned against the counter,"
10"He took a sip, eyes"
11"Her jaw tightened."
12"His voice was quiet, probing"
13"She looked away, fingers tracing"
14"He didn’t press"
15"She remembered the last time"
16"She’d been angry then, furious"
17"He’d been distant, untouchable."
18"He swirled his drink."
19"She wanted to ask what"
ratio0.523
39.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount37
totalSentences44
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest smelled of"
1"Rory wiped her hands on"
2"The evening crowd had thinned,"
3"She glanced at the clock—nearly"
4"The door creaked open."
5"A man stepped inside, shaking"
6"His auburn hair, streaked with"
7"He moved with a slight"
8"His gaze landed on her,"
9"The years between them stretched"
10"She exhaled, forcing her fingers"
11"He chuckled, low and rough,"
12"She poured him a whiskey"
13"The amber liquid sloshed into"
14"She pushed the drink toward"
15"His fingers stilled around the"
16"A beat of silence."
17"She leaned against the counter,"
18"He took a sip, eyes"
19"Her jaw tightened."
ratio0.841
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences44
matches
0"Now, he was just a"
ratio0.023
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"His auburn hair, streaked with grey, was slick with moisture, and his hazel eyes scanned the room with the quiet precision of someone who missed nothing."
1"He moved with a slight limp, favoring his left leg, and his right hand bore a silver signet ring that glinted under the neon glow of the bar’s sign."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He took, eyes never leaving hers"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.038
leniency0.077
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.5863%