Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPJ4PAJWX8F7JXR6RWDWDY

Run Details

Duration:
33.3s
Cost:
$0.000974
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter adjusted the strap of her backpack, the weight of the Fae-Forged Blade tucked securely inside pressing against her shoulder. She glanced at her companions, Nyx's shadowy form shifting restlessly beside her, and Isolde, her silver hair catching the faint, amber light filtering through the ancient standing stones. The air hummed with an otherworldly energy, raising the fine hairs on Aurora's arms. "This way," Isolde murmured, her voice like wind chimes in a gentle breeze. She stepped forward, her bare feet making no sound on the soft moss beneath. Aurora followed, her boots sinking slightly into the verdant ground. The scent of wildflowers and something else—something ancient and earthy—filled her lungs. Nyx moved silently at Aurora's side, their shadowy form flickering like a candle flame in a draft. "This place... it's old," they whispered, their voice carrying an echo of ages past. "Older than Dymas, older than the Fae Courts." Aurora reached out, her fingers brushing against the rough bark of a towering oak. The tree pulsed with a faint, rhythmic light, as if it breathed. "It's alive," she breathed, her bright blue eyes wide with wonder. "Not like anything on Earth." Isolde turned to her, her pale lavender eyes reflecting the ambient glow. "This is the heart of the Grove," she said, her voice a soft melody. "A place where time and reality are... fluid." As they ventured deeper, the trees grew denser, their trunks twisting into intricate patterns that seemed to tell stories of their own. The air grew cooler, the amber light dimming to a soft, ethereal glow. Aurora pulled her jacket tighter around her, the warmth of the Heartstone Pendant at her neck a comforting contrast to the chill. Nyx reached out, their shadowy hand passing through the trunk of a tree. "There's something here," they murmured, their form flickering with agitation. "Something... wrong." Aurora frowned, her hand instinctively going to the pendant. It pulsed faintly, its warmth intensifying. "You feel that too?" she asked, looking at Nyx. Nyx nodded, their form solidifying slightly. "A disturbance. Like a ripple in the air." Isolde stopped suddenly, her head tilting to the side. "We are not alone," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. Aurora's hand went to the Fae-Forged Blade, her fingers wrapping around the cold hilt. She drew it out, the moon-silver blade gleaming faintly in the dim light. The trees seemed to lean in, their leaves rustling softly, as if whispering warnings. A soft, melodic hum filled the air, growing louder with each passing second. The ground beneath their feet vibrated slightly, the ancient stones humming in response. Aurora's heart pounded in her chest, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. Then, as suddenly as it had begun, the humming stopped. The Grove fell silent, the only sound the soft rustle of leaves above. Aurora exhaled sharply, her grip on the blade relaxing slightly. Isolde turned to them, her eyes reflecting a mix of concern and curiosity. "We must be cautious," she said. "This place... it is not what it seems." Aurora nodded, her eyes scanning the dense foliage around them. "Lead the way," she said, her voice steady despite the unease coiling in her stomach. Isolde turned, her silver hair catching the faint light as she moved. Aurora followed, her eyes wide, her senses on high alert. Nyx brought up the rear, their shadowy form flickering like a dark flame. The deeper they went, the more the Grove seemed to shift around them. Trees twisted and turned, paths appearing and disappearing as if alive. The air grew thicker, the scent of wildflowers replaced by something musky and ancient. Aurora's pendant pulsed again, its warmth spreading through her chest. She reached up, her fingers brushing against the smooth surface. "We're close," she murmured, her eyes scanning the dense foliage. Nyx reached out, their shadowy hand passing through a thicket of thorns. "There," they whispered, their voice barely audible. "A clearing." Aurora followed Nyx's gaze, her eyes widening as she took in the sight before her. The trees parted, revealing a vast clearing bathed in a soft, ethereal light. At the center stood a massive tree, its trunk twisted and gnarled with age. Its branches stretched out like welcoming arms, leaves shimmering with a faint, otherworldly glow. Around the tree, the ground was covered in a thick layer of moss, soft and inviting. Strange, luminescent flowers dotted the landscape, their petals pulsing gently with light. The air hummed with energy, the scent of ancient magic thick and intoxicating. Aurora stepped forward, her boots sinking into the soft moss. The tree seemed to hum in response, its branches rustling softly. She reached out, her fingers brushing against the rough bark. The tree pulsed beneath her touch, its light intensifying. "This place..." she breathed, her eyes wide with wonder. "It's incredible." Isolde stepped beside her, her eyes reflecting the tree's glow. "This is the heart of the Grove," she said, her voice a soft melody. "The source of its power." Nyx moved to stand on Aurora's other side, their shadowy form flickering with curiosity. "And the disturbance?" they asked, their voice a whisper on the wind. Isolde's eyes darkened slightly, her gaze shifting to the tree's massive trunk. "It is here," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "But it is not alone." Aurora's hand tightened around the Fae-Forged Blade, her eyes scanning the clearing. The air seemed to thicken, the hum of energy growing louder, more insistent. The tree's branches rustled softly, as if whispering warnings. Then, from the shadows of the tree's massive trunk, a figure emerged. Tall and slender, their form seemed to shift and change, like smoke on the wind. Their eyes glowed faintly, a deep, violet hue that seemed to pierce through the dim light. Aurora's heart pounded in her chest, her breath catching in her throat. She tightened her grip on the blade, her knuckles whitening. Beside her, Nyx's form flickered with agitation, their shadowy hand reaching out as if to ward off the approaching figure. The figure stopped a few feet away, their eyes scanning the group before settling on Isolde. "Seer," they said, their voice like the rustling of leaves. "You have returned." Isolde's eyes narrowed slightly, her gaze unwavering. "I have come to understand," she said, her voice steady. "To see what has been hidden." The figure's eyes flickered, their form shifting slightly. "Much has changed," they said, their voice a soft whisper. "Much has been lost." Aurora's eyes narrowed, her grip on the blade tightening. "Who are you?" she demanded, her voice echoing through the clearing. The figure turned to her, their eyes glowing faintly in the dim light. "I am the Guardian," they said, their voice like the rustling of ancient leaves. "The protector of this place." Nyx's form flickered with curiosity, their shadowy hand reaching out slightly. "And the disturbance?" they asked, their voice a whisper on the wind. The Guardian's eyes darkened slightly, their form shifting like smoke. "A shadow," they said, their voice barely above a whisper. "A darkness that seeks to consume." Aurora's eyes widened, her heart pounding in her chest. She glanced at Isolde, who nodded slightly, her eyes reflecting a mix of concern and determination. "We must stop it," Aurora said, her voice steady despite the unease coiling in her stomach. "Before it's too late." The Guardian's eyes flickered, their form shifting slightly. "Then come," they said, their voice a soft whisper. "The heart of the Grove awaits." With that, the Guardian turned, their form dissolving into the shadows of the massive tree. Aurora took a deep breath, her eyes scanning the clearing one last time before following. Nyx fell in beside her, their shadowy form flickering with anticipation. Isolde brought up the rear, her eyes reflecting the tree's glow, her steps sure and steady. As they ventured deeper into the heart of the Grove, the air grew thicker, the scent of ancient magic intoxicating. The tree's branches rustled softly, their leaves shimmering with a faint, otherworldly glow. The ground beneath their feet pulsed with energy, the moss soft and inviting. Aurora's pendant pulsed in time with the tree's rhythm, its warmth spreading through her chest. She reached up, her fingers brushing against the smooth surface. The tree seemed to hum in response, its branches rustling softly. Then, as they rounded a bend, the tree's massive trunk came into view. At its base, a dark shadow pulsed, its edges writhing like smoke. The air around it seemed to warp, the very fabric of reality twisting and turning. Aurora's heart pounded in her chest, her breath catching in her throat. She tightened her grip on the Fae-Forged Blade, her knuckles whitening. Beside her, Nyx's form flickered with agitation, their shadowy hand reaching out as if to ward off the approaching darkness. The Guardian turned to them, their eyes glowing faintly in the dim light. "This is the source," they said, their voice like the rustling of ancient leaves. "The heart of the disturbance." Aurora's eyes narrowed, her gaze fixed on the writhing shadow. "What is it?" she demanded, her voice echoing through the clearing. The Guardian's eyes darkened slightly, their form shifting like smoke. "A remnant," they said, their voice barely above a whisper. "A piece of the past that should have remained buried." Isolde stepped forward, her eyes reflecting the shadow's dark glow. "It is a piece of the Veil," she said, her voice steady. "A tear that should not be." Aurora's eyes widened, her heart pounding in her chest. She glanced at Isolde, who nodded slightly, her eyes reflecting a mix of concern and determination. "We must close it," Aurora said, her voice steady despite the unease coiling in her stomach. "Before it consumes this place." The Guardian's eyes flickered, their form shifting slightly. "Then you must act quickly," they said, their voice a soft whisper. "The solstice approaches, and with it, the Veil weakens." Aurora took a deep breath, her eyes scanning the writhing shadow. She tightened her grip on the Fae-Forged Blade, her knuckles whitening. Beside her, Nyx's form flickered with anticipation, their shadowy hand reaching out slightly. Isolde's eyes reflected the shadow's dark glow, her steps sure and steady. Together, they stepped forward, their eyes fixed on the writhing darkness. The air hummed with energy, the scent of ancient magic thick and intoxicating. The tree's branches rustled softly, their leaves shimmering with a faint, otherworldly glow. As they approached the shadow, the air seemed to thicken, the very fabric of reality twisting and turning. Aurora's pendant pulsed in time with the shadow's rhythm, its warmth spreading through her chest. She reached up, her fingers brushing against the smooth surface. Then, with a sudden burst of light, the shadow erupted, its dark tendrils lashing out like whips. Aurora barely had time to react, her blade flashing as she parried the first strike. Nyx's form flickered, their shadowy hand reaching out to deflect another tendril. Isolde's eyes glowed faintly, her hands weaving intricate patterns in the air as she chanted softly. The battle was joined, the heart of the Grove echoing with the clash of blade and shadow, the hum of ancient magic and the rustle of ancient leaves. Aurora's heart pounded in her chest, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. But she did not falter, her eyes fixed on the writhing darkness, her blade flashing as she fought to protect the heart of the Grove.
created_at"2026-02-20T14:16:49.62Z" 2/20/2026, 2:16:49 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags30
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.577
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
14.02% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1919
totalAiIsmAdverbs33
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count15
1
adverb"suddenly"
count2
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count4
3
adverb"softly"
count7
4
adverb"sharply"
count1
5
adverb"gently"
count1
6
adverb"very"
count2
7
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
2"barely above a whisper"
3"softly"
4"sharply"
5"gently"
6"very"
7"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1919
totalAiIsms60
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"otherworldly"
count4
2
word"echo"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count8
4
word"rhythmic"
count1
5
word"intricate"
count2
6
word"warmth"
count5
7
word"comforting"
count1
8
word"chill"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count9
10
word"gleaming"
count1
11
word"vibrated"
count1
12
word"scanning"
count6
13
word"stomach"
count3
14
word"flickered"
count8
15
word"unwavering"
count1
16
word"echoing"
count3
17
word"pounding"
count2
18
word"anticipation"
count2
highlights
0"weight"
1"otherworldly"
2"echo"
3"pulsed"
4"rhythmic"
5"intricate"
6"warmth"
7"comforting"
8"chill"
9"whisper"
10"gleaming"
11"vibrated"
12"scanning"
13"stomach"
14"flickered"
15"unwavering"
16"echoing"
17"pounding"
18"anticipation"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches9
maxInWindow7
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count4
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count5
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
1"eyes narrowed"
2"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells4
narrationSentences141
matches
0"e with wonder"
1"e with wonder"
2"g with anticipation"
3"d with anticipation"
41.54% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount10
narrationSentences141
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences163
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1911
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions32
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
58.07% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions86
wordCount1686
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.84
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Fae-Forged5
Blade5
Nyx15
Isolde16
Aurora31
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Grove5
Guardian6
persons
0"Carter"
1"Blade"
2"Nyx"
3"Isolde"
4"Aurora"
5"Grove"
6"Guardian"
places
0"Fae-Forged"
1"Pendant"
globalScore0.581
windowScore0.833
77.01% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences137
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"patterns that seemed to tell stories of their own"
1"as if whispering warnings"
2"as if whispering warnings"
3"hue that seemed to pierce through the dim light"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1911
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences163
matches(empty)
60.50% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean34.13
std12.34
cv0.362
sampleLengths
063
149
239
342
434
557
625
724
814
921
1041
1139
1233
1327
1425
1535
1638
1730
1821
1956
2041
2140
2211
2329
2426
2528
2634
2743
2842
2929
3023
3122
3220
3332
3423
3526
3625
3720
3823
3957
4046
4136
4240
4343
4432
4521
4630
4728
4825
4921
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences141
matches
0"was covered"
1"was joined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs287
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences163
ratio0.006
matches
0"The scent of wildflowers and something else—something ancient and earthy—filled her lungs."
87.55% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1694
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"inside pressing against her"
adverbCount67
adverbRatio0.03955135773317592
lyAdverbCount47
lyAdverbRatio0.027744982290436836
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences163
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
85.41% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences163
mean11.72
std4.26
cv0.364
sampleLengths
021
128
214
313
414
510
612
717
814
98
1014
1112
1211
135
1412
1514
168
1722
1813
1922
2013
2110
222
239
246
259
266
278
289
2912
3014
3113
3214
3313
3413
3513
3610
3713
3810
3913
406
418
4210
4315
4412
4510
4613
4713
4811
4914
46.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.22085889570552147
totalSentences163
uniqueOpeners36
95.24% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences140
matches
0"Then, as suddenly as it"
1"Then, from the shadows of"
2"Then, as they rounded a"
3"Then, with a sudden burst"
ratio0.029
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences140
matches
0"She glanced at her companions,"
1"She stepped forward, her bare"
2"they whispered, their voice carrying"
3"she breathed, her bright blue"
4"she said, her voice a"
5"they murmured, their form flickering"
6"It pulsed faintly, its warmth"
7"she asked, looking at Nyx"
8"she said, her voice barely"
9"She drew it out, the"
10"she said, her voice steady"
11"She reached up, her fingers"
12"she murmured, her eyes scanning"
13"they whispered, their voice barely"
14"Its branches stretched out like"
15"She reached out, her fingers"
16"she breathed, her eyes wide"
17"she said, her voice a"
18"they asked, their voice a"
19"she said, her voice barely"
ratio0.293
24.29% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount122
totalSentences140
matches
0"Aurora Carter adjusted the strap"
1"She glanced at her companions,"
2"The air hummed with an"
3"Isolde murmured, her voice like"
4"She stepped forward, her bare"
5"Aurora followed, her boots sinking"
6"The scent of wildflowers and"
7"Nyx moved silently at Aurora's"
8"they whispered, their voice carrying"
9"Aurora reached out, her fingers"
10"The tree pulsed with a"
11"she breathed, her bright blue"
12"Isolde turned to her, her"
13"she said, her voice a"
14"The air grew cooler, the"
15"Aurora pulled her jacket tighter"
16"Nyx reached out, their shadowy"
17"they murmured, their form flickering"
18"Aurora frowned, her hand instinctively"
19"It pulsed faintly, its warmth"
ratio0.871
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences140
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.26% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences98
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"As they ventured deeper, the trees grew denser, their trunks twisting into intricate patterns that seemed to tell stories of their own."
1"The trees seemed to lean in, their leaves rustling softly, as if whispering warnings."
2"Trees twisted and turned, paths appearing and disappearing as if alive."
3"Beside her, Nyx's form flickered with agitation, their shadowy hand reaching out as if to ward off the approaching figure."
4"The figure stopped a few feet away, their eyes scanning the group before settling on Isolde."
5"She glanced at Isolde, who nodded slightly, her eyes reflecting a mix of concern and determination."
6"Aurora took a deep breath, her eyes scanning the clearing one last time before following."
7"Beside her, Nyx's form flickered with agitation, their shadowy hand reaching out as if to ward off the approaching darkness."
8"She glanced at Isolde, who nodded slightly, her eyes reflecting a mix of concern and determination."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags30
uselessAdditionCount23
matches
0"they whispered, their voice carrying an echo of ages past"
1"she said, her voice a soft melody"
2"they murmured, their form flickering with agitation"
3"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
4"she said, her voice steady despite the unease coiling in her stomach"
5"she murmured, her eyes scanning the dense foliage"
6"they whispered, their voice barely audible"
7"she breathed, her eyes wide with wonder"
8"she said, her voice a soft melody"
9"they asked, their voice a whisper on the wind"
10"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
11"she said, her voice steady"
12"they said, their voice a soft whisper"
13"she demanded, her voice echoing through the clearing"
14"they asked, their voice a whisper on the wind"
15"they said, their voice barely above a whisper"
16"Aurora said, her voice steady despite the unease coiling in her stomach"
17"they said, their voice a soft whisper"
18"she demanded, her voice echoing through the clearing"
19"they said, their voice barely above a whisper"
20"she said, her voice steady"
21"Aurora said, her voice steady despite the unease coiling in her stomach"
22"they said, their voice a soft whisper"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags30
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
1"they whispered (whisper)"
2"she breathed (breathe)"
3"they murmured (murmur)"
4"she murmured (murmur)"
5"they whispered (whisper)"
6"she breathed (breathe)"
7"she demanded (demand)"
8"she demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.577
leniency1
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.3
68.9062%