Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPJV5V4CMJBX4ZAHJY64DE

Run Details

Duration:
23.0s
Cost:
$0.002225
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain came down in sheets, turning the London streets into a slick, reflective maze. Quinn’s boots splashed through puddles as she rounded the corner, her breath coming in sharp, controlled bursts. The neon glow of a pub sign flickered ahead—*The Raven’s Nest*—its green light bleeding into the wet pavement. She didn’t slow. The suspect had ducked inside, but the back alley was her only shot at cutting him off. Her fingers twitched near her holster. The weight of her service weapon was a familiar comfort, but the rules blurred when the chase led underground. She’d lost too many already. Morris’ face flashed in her mind—pale, wide-eyed, the last time she’d seen him alive. She shoved the memory down. The alley reeked of stale beer and cigarette smoke. A fire escape ladder dangled just out of reach, rusted rungs glistening. Quinn jumped, fingers scraping metal before she hauled herself up. The suspect’s shadow flickered ahead, boots pounding against the rooftop. She followed, her own steps silent, practiced. A gap yawned between buildings. Quinn didn’t hesitate. She leapt, landing hard on the other side, knees bending to absorb the impact. The suspect glanced back, eyes wide in the dim light. He was young, wiry, his dark curls plastered to his forehead. Not the usual lowlife she chased. Something about him was off—too calm, too sure of himself. He vaulted over a low wall, disappearing into the darkness below. Quinn cursed, sprinting to the edge. A rusted ladder led down into a narrow service tunnel, the kind that spiderwebbed beneath the city. The air smelled of damp concrete and something sharper—copper, maybe, or ozone. She hesitated. The tunnel was a dead end. It had to be. But the suspect had gone in without hesitation. Quinn adjusted her grip on her torch, the beam cutting through the gloom. The walls were slick with moisture, graffiti scrawled in jagged lines. A symbol caught her eye—a circle with a line through it, the same one she’d seen scrawled near Morris’ body. Her stomach twisted. The tunnel sloped downward, the air growing thicker, warmer. The sound of distant voices echoed ahead, muffled but urgent. A flicker of light—candles, maybe, or lanterns—danced against the walls. Quinn’s pulse hammered in her throat. She knew this place. Or at least, she’d heard whispers. The Veil Market. She’d dismissed the rumors as urban legends—superstitious nonsense from the kind of people who saw ghosts in every shadow. But the suspect had led her here like he knew exactly where he was going. The tunnel opened into a cavernous space, the ceiling lost in darkness. Stalls lined the walls, their wares hidden beneath tattered cloths. The scent of herbs and burning incense clogged the air, mingling with the metallic tang of something older, something wrong. A man with too many teeth grinned at her from behind a counter, his fingers toying with a string of what looked like human teeth. Quinn’s hand drifted toward her radio before she remembered—no backup. Not here. Not where the rules didn’t apply. The suspect was already moving deeper into the market, weaving between stalls with the ease of someone who belonged. Quinn followed, her boots silent on the packed earth. A woman in a tattered shawl hissed as she passed, her eyes milky white. "You don’t belong here, copper," she spat. Quinn ignored her. The suspect was getting away. She ducked beneath a low-hanging lantern, its flame burning an unnatural blue. The crowd thickened, bodies pressing in around her. A hand brushed her arm, fingers cold as ice. She jerked away, but the touch was already gone. The suspect glanced back, his expression unreadable. Then he turned and slipped between two stalls, vanishing into the shadows. Quinn broke into a run, shoving past a group of cloaked figures. The market seemed to shift around her, paths twisting, stalls rearranging themselves. She skidded to a halt in front of a dead end—a wall of crates stacked high. No sign of the suspect. A low chuckle echoed from the darkness. "Looking for someone?" Quinn spun. The suspect leaned against a stall, arms crossed, his Saint Christopher medallion glinting in the dim light. Tomás Herrera. The name clicked into place. Paramedic. Off-the-books. The kind of guy who knew how to disappear. "You’re under arrest," Quinn said, her voice steady despite the adrenaline. Herrera smirked. "For what? Running?" "For whatever you’re hiding." She took a step forward. "And for whatever happened to my partner." The smirk faded. Herrera’s fingers tightened around the medallion. "You don’t know what you’re walking into, Detective." Quinn’s torch flickered. The shadows around them seemed to deepen, pressing in. She could turn back. Call for backup. Pretend she’d never seen this place. But Morris’ face was still there, in the back of her mind. And the symbol on the wall was the same one she’d found on his body. She adjusted her grip on her torch. "Then I guess I’ll find out."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount839
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
10.61% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount839
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"flickered"
count3
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"glistening"
count1
4
word"pounding"
count1
5
word"gloom"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count2
8
word"flicker"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"unreadable"
count1
11
word"glinting"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"weight"
2"familiar"
3"glistening"
4"pounding"
5"gloom"
6"stomach"
7"echoed"
8"flicker"
9"pulse"
10"unreadable"
11"glinting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences86
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords3
totalWords826
ratio0.004
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
64.47% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount760
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.71
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London1
Raven1
Veil1
Market1
Quinn13
Saint1
Christopher1
Herrera3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Market"
2"Quinn"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"Herrera"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.645
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like human teeth"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount826
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean31.77
std19.17
cv0.603
sampleLengths
070
149
248
359
446
520
647
745
83
934
1067
1118
1249
138
1438
1519
1645
1710
1837
1911
205
2116
2217
2325
2427
2513
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs139
matches
0"was going"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences92
ratio0.087
matches
0"The neon glow of a pub sign flickered ahead—*The Raven’s Nest*—its green light bleeding into the wet pavement."
1"Something about him was off—too calm, too sure of himself."
2"The air smelled of damp concrete and something sharper—copper, maybe, or ozone."
3"A symbol caught her eye—a circle with a line through it, the same one she’d seen scrawled near Morris’ body."
4"A flicker of light—candles, maybe, or lanterns—danced against the walls."
5"She’d dismissed the rumors as urban legends—superstitious nonsense from the kind of people who saw ghosts in every shadow."
6"Quinn’s hand drifted toward her radio before she remembered—no backup."
7"She skidded to a halt in front of a dead end—a wall of crates stacked high."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount123
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount3
adverbRatio0.024390243902439025
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.008130081300813009
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean8.98
std5.21
cv0.581
sampleLengths
015
117
218
33
417
56
619
75
814
95
109
1112
1210
1310
147
155
163
1714
1810
1911
206
2110
2211
236
2417
2512
262
276
284
298
3013
3111
3220
333
349
3510
3610
376
384
396
403
4119
4215
4312
4410
4520
4625
4710
482
496
46.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.2717391304347826
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners25
43.29% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"Then he turned and slipped"
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences77
matches
0"She didn’t slow."
1"Her fingers twitched near her"
2"She’d lost too many already."
3"She shoved the memory down."
4"She followed, her own steps"
5"She leapt, landing hard on"
6"He was young, wiry, his"
7"He vaulted over a low"
8"It had to be."
9"Her stomach twisted."
10"She knew this place."
11"She’d dismissed the rumors as"
12"She ducked beneath a low-hanging"
13"She jerked away, but the"
14"She skidded to a halt"
15"She took a step forward"
16"She could turn back."
17"She adjusted her grip on"
ratio0.234
24.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences77
matches
0"The rain came down in"
1"Quinn’s boots splashed through puddles"
2"The neon glow of a"
3"She didn’t slow."
4"The suspect had ducked inside,"
5"Her fingers twitched near her"
6"The weight of her service"
7"She’d lost too many already."
8"She shoved the memory down."
9"The alley reeked of stale"
10"A fire escape ladder dangled"
11"Quinn jumped, fingers scraping metal"
12"The suspect’s shadow flickered ahead,"
13"She followed, her own steps"
14"A gap yawned between buildings."
15"Quinn didn’t hesitate."
16"She leapt, landing hard on"
17"The suspect glanced back, eyes"
18"He was young, wiry, his"
19"Something about him was off—too"
ratio0.87
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She’d dismissed the rumors as urban legends—superstitious nonsense from the kind of people who saw ghosts in every shadow."
1"The market seemed to shift around her, paths twisting, stalls rearranging themselves."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Quinn said, her voice steady despite the adrenaline"
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she spat (spit)"
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.25
77.1682%