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Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPKMGRW4BQ6FFTHS66W49H
Run Details
Model:
Mistral Small 3.2 24B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
16.8s
Cost:
$0.000731
Provider:
Mistral
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
0.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
50.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
73.38%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
48.52%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
56.62%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
99.05%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
95.44%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
42.81%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
43.42%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
50.09%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
9.69%
Technical jargon density
(details)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
42.86%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
67.0625%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The door creaked open, revealing
Aurora Carter, her bright blue eyes widening in surprise. "Lucien? What are you doing here?"
Lucien Moreau stood in the
doorway, his heterochromatic eyes
scanning
her face, taking in the sight of her.
He was dressed in one
of his tailored charcoal suits, the ivory-handled cane in his hand. "Aurora,"
he greeted, his voice smooth
as
silk
. "May I come in?"
Rory hesitated, her fingers tightening
around the door handle.
The last time they'd seen
each other, things had
been left
unsaid, feelings unexpressed. But the look in his eyes was one she couldn't ignore.
She stepped aside, allowing him
to enter.
The flat was small, cluttered
with books and scrolls, every surface covered in notes and research.
Lucien's gaze swept over the
room, taking in the details. "You've been busy,"
he commented, spotting the familiar
symbols and diagrams scattered across the coffee table.
Rory closed the door behind
him, her heart
pounding
in her chest. "What do you want, Lucien?"
she asked, her voice steady
despite the turmoil inside her. He turned to face her, his expression
unreadable
. "I needed to see you,"
he admitted, his voice low
. "There are things we need to discuss."
Rory crossed her arms over
her chest, her eyes narrowing. "Like what?" Lucien took a step closer, his cane tapping
softly
against the wooden floor. "Like why you left without a word,"
he said, his voice barely
above a
whisper
. "Like why you've been avoiding me."
Rory looked away, her eyes
landing on a framed photograph on the bookshelf.
It was a picture of
her and Eva, taken years ago.
She could feel Lucien's gaze
on her, the
intensity
of it making her skin prickle. "I had my reasons,"
she said, her voice barely
audible. Lucien reached out, his fingers brushing against her scarred wrist. "I know,"
he said softly
. "But I need to hear them from you." Rory pulled her hand away, her eyes flashing. "Why, Lucien? Why does it matter now?" Lucien's expression darkened, his eyes flashing with something she couldn't
quite decipher
. "Because I care about you, Aurora,"
he said, his voice fierce
. "Because I've missed you." Rory's breath hitched, her heart
pounding
in her chest. She wanted to believe him, to
believe that he
cared. But the hurt and the betrayal were still fresh, still raw. "Prove it,"
she challenged, her voice steady
despite the turmoil inside her. Lucien's eyes searched hers, his expression softening. "I will," he promised. "I'll prove it to you, Aurora. Just give me a chance."
Rory looked away, her eyes
landing on the tabby cat curled up on the armchair. Ptolemy blinked up at her, his eyes half-lidded. She took a deep breath, her fingers brushing against the cat's soft fur. "Stay for dinner,"
she said, her voice barely
above a
whisper
. "We can talk." Lucien's eyes lit up, a small smile playing on his lips. "I'd like that,"
he said, his voice warm
. Rory nodded, her heart
pounding
in her chest.
She couldn't believe she was
doing this, inviting him in, giving him a chance. But she knew she had to, for her own sake as much as his. As she moved to the kitchen, she
could feel
Lucien's gaze on her, the
weight
of it making her skin prickle. She took a deep breath, her fingers trembling as she reached for a pot. "Tell me about your day,"
she said, her voice steady despite the turmoil inside her
. Lucien leaned against the counter, his eyes never leaving her. "It was eventful,"
he said, his voice smooth
. "I had to deal with a particularly stubborn client." Rory raised an
eyebrow
, her lips curling into a small smile. "And how did that go?" Lucien chuckled, the sound warm and rich. "Let's just say, I'm not in the mood for any more surprises today." Rory laughed, the sound
echoing
through the small flat. She
could feel
the
tension
easing, the ice between them melting away. As she cooked, Lucien told her about his day, his voice low and soothing. She listened, her heart
pounding
in her chest, her fingers trembling as she stirred the pot. When the food was ready, they sat down at the small table, the scent of curry filling the air. Rory took a deep breath, her eyes meeting Lucien's. "Thank you," she said
softly
. "For coming here. For giving me a chance." Lucien reached out, his fingers brushing against hers. "Thank you,"
he said, his voice barely
above a
whisper
. "For letting me in. For giving me a chance." Rory smiled, her heart
pounding
in her chest. She knew this was just the beginning, that there were still hurdles to overcome. But for the first time in a long time, she
felt hopeful
, like maybe, just maybe, they could make this work. As they ate, they talked, their voices low and soft. The conversation flowed easily, the
tension
between them easing with each passing moment. Rory
could feel
the connection between them, the spark that had always been there, igniting once again. When they finished eating, Lucien helped her clean up, his fingers brushing against hers as they washed the dishes. Rory
could feel
the heat of his touch, the electricity that passed between them. As they stood in the small kitchen, the scent of soap and water filling the air, Lucien turned to her, his eyes searching hers. "Aurora,"
he said softly
, his voice
barely above a whisper
. "I need to tell you something." Rory's
heart pounded in her chest
, her eyes meeting his. "What is it?"
she asked, her voice barely audible
. Lucien reached out, his fingers brushing against her cheek. "I've never stopped caring about you,"
he said, his voice fierce
. "I've never stopped loving you." Rory's breath hitched, her heart
pounding
in her chest. She wanted to believe him, to
believe that he
loved her. But the hurt and the betrayal were still fresh, still raw. "Prove it,"
she challenged, her voice steady
despite the turmoil inside her. Lucien's eyes searched hers, his expression softening. "I will," he promised. "I'll prove it to you, Aurora. Just give me a chance." Rory nodded, her heart
pounding
in her chest. She knew this was just the beginning, that there were still hurdles to overcome. But for the first time in a long time, she
felt hopeful
, like maybe, just maybe, they could make this work. As they stood in the kitchen, the scent of soap and water filling the air, Rory reached out, her fingers brushing against Lucien's. She
could feel
the heat of his touch, the electricity that passed between them. "I'll give you that chance,"
she said softly, her voice barely above a whisper
. "But you have to be patient. You have to understand that I need time." Lucien nodded, his eyes never leaving hers. "I understand,"
he said, his voice steady
. "I'll wait for you, Aurora. As long as it takes." Rory smiled, her heart
pounding
in her chest. She knew this was just the beginning, that there were still hurdles to overcome. But for the first time in a long time, she
felt hopeful
, like maybe, just maybe, they could make this work. As they stood in the kitchen, the scent of soap and water filling the air, Rory reached out, her fingers brushing against Lucien's. She
could feel
the heat of his touch, the electricity that passed between them. "I'll give you that chance,"
she said softly, her voice barely above a whisper
. "But you have to be patient. You have to understand that I need time." Lucien nodded, his eyes never leaving hers. "I understand,"
he said, his voice steady
. "I'll wait for you, Aurora. As long as it takes." Rory smiled, her heart
pounding
in her chest. She knew this was just the beginning, that there were still hurdles to overcome. But for the first time in a long time, she
felt hopeful
, like maybe, just maybe, they could make this work. As they stood in the kitchen, the scent of soap and water filling the air, Rory reached out, her fingers brushing against Lucien's. She
could feel
the heat of his touch, the electricity that passed between them. "I'll give you that chance,"
she said softly, her voice barely above a whisper
. "But you have to be patient. You have to understand that I need time." Lucien nodded, his eyes never leaving hers. "I understand,"
he said, his voice steady
. "I'll wait for you, Aurora. As long as it takes." Rory smiled, her heart
pounding
in her chest. She knew this was just the beginning, that there were still hurdles to overcome. But for the first time in a long time, she
felt hopeful
, like maybe, just maybe, they could make this work. As they stood in the kitchen, the scent of soap and water filling the air, Rory reached out, her fingers brushing against Lucien's. She
could feel
the heat of his touch, the electricity that passed between them. "I'll give you that chance,"
she said softly, her voice barely above a whisper
. "But you have to be patient. You have to understand that I need time." Lucien nodded, his eyes never leaving hers. "I understand,"
he said, his voice steady
. "I'll wait for you, Aurora. As long as it takes." Rory smiled, her heart
pounding
in her chest. She knew this was just the beginning, that there were still hurdles to overcome. But for the first time in a long time, she
felt hopeful
, like maybe, just maybe, they could make this work.
created_at
"2026-02-20T14:17:38.596Z"
2/20/2026, 2:17:38 PM
model
"mistralai/mistral-small-3.2-24b-instruct-2506"
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182717
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cancelled
false
latency
264
moderation_latency
(null)
generation_time
16656
tokens_prompt
1034
tokens_completion
2365
native_tokens_prompt
959
native_tokens_completion
2116
native_tokens_completion_images
(null)
native_tokens_reasoning
0
native_tokens_cached
896
num_media_prompt
(null)
num_input_audio_prompt
(null)
num_media_completion
0
num_search_results
(null)
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"https://ncbench.com/"
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false
finish_reason
"stop"
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"stop"
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provider_responses
0
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"23fd6b91-74d8-45fc-ac00-cf141ec7f4a5"
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false
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264
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"mistralai/mistral-small-3.2-24b-instruct-2506"
provider_name
"Mistral"
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
0.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
29
adverbTagCount
7
adverbTags
0
"he said softly [softly]"
1
"she said softly [softly]"
2
"he said softly [softly]"
3
"she said softly [softly]"
4
"she said softly [softly]"
5
"she said softly [softly]"
6
"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences
55
tagDensity
0.527
leniency
1
rawRatio
0.241
effectiveRatio
0.241
50.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1600
totalAiIsmAdverbs
16
found
0
adverb
"softly"
count
8
1
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
8
highlights
0
"softly"
1
"barely above a whisper"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1600
totalAiIsms
38
found
0
word
"scanning"
count
1
1
word
"silk"
count
1
2
word
"familiar"
count
1
3
word
"pounding"
count
11
4
word
"unreadable"
count
1
5
word
"whisper"
count
8
6
word
"could feel"
count
9
7
word
"intensity"
count
1
8
word
"weight"
count
1
9
word
"eyebrow"
count
1
10
word
"echoing"
count
1
11
word
"tension"
count
2
highlights
0
"scanning"
1
"silk"
2
"familiar"
3
"pounding"
4
"unreadable"
5
"whisper"
6
"could feel"
7
"intensity"
8
"weight"
9
"eyebrow"
10
"echoing"
11
"tension"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"heart pounded in chest"
count
1
highlights
0
"heart pounded in her chest"
73.38%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
7
narrationSentences
113
matches
0
"g in surprise"
1
"felt hopeful"
2
"felt hopeful"
3
"felt hopeful"
4
"felt hopeful"
5
"felt hopeful"
6
"felt hopeful"
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
113
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
139
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
24
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1598
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
31
unquotedAttributions
1
matches
0
"As she cooked, Lucien told her about his day, his voice low and soothing."
48.52%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
55
wordCount
1281
uniqueNames
6
maxNameDensity
2.03
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
3
worstWindowName
"Rory"
discoveredNames
Aurora
1
Carter
1
Moreau
1
Rory
25
Eva
1
Lucien
26
persons
0
"Aurora"
1
"Carter"
2
"Moreau"
3
"Rory"
4
"Eva"
5
"Lucien"
places
(empty)
globalScore
0.485
windowScore
0.667
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
100
glossingSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"quite decipher"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1598
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
2
totalSentences
139
matches
0
"believe that he"
1
"believe that he"
56.62%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
56
mean
28.54
std
9.94
cv
0.348
sampleLengths
0
20
1
46
2
41
3
42
4
27
5
25
6
12
7
34
8
39
9
10
10
23
11
15
12
27
13
30
14
12
15
22
16
36
17
14
18
19
19
36
20
35
21
15
22
27
23
16
24
20
25
21
26
30
27
28
28
13
29
27
30
43
31
40
32
33
33
40
34
19
35
25
36
31
37
12
38
22
39
43
40
37
41
28
42
24
43
43
44
37
45
28
46
24
47
43
48
37
49
28
99.05%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
113
matches
0
"was dressed"
1
"been left"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
238
matches
0
"was doing"
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
139
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
95.44%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1283
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
58
adverbRatio
0.04520654715510522
lyAdverbCount
19
lyAdverbRatio
0.014809041309431021
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
139
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
139
mean
11.5
std
4.67
cv
0.406
sampleLengths
0
14
1
6
2
18
3
16
4
8
5
4
6
9
7
14
8
11
9
7
10
16
11
10
12
16
13
12
14
15
15
8
16
10
17
7
18
10
19
2
20
13
21
15
22
6
23
13
24
11
25
15
26
10
27
10
28
5
29
8
30
8
31
7
32
12
33
11
34
4
35
9
36
10
37
11
38
12
39
7
40
4
41
11
42
15
43
8
44
13
45
11
46
3
47
11
48
8
49
8
42.81%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
10
diversityRatio
0.19424460431654678
totalSentences
139
uniqueOpeners
27
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
111
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
43.42%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
49
totalSentences
111
matches
0
"He was dressed in one"
1
"he greeted, his voice smooth"
2
"She stepped aside, allowing him"
3
"he commented, spotting the familiar"
4
"she asked, her voice steady"
5
"He turned to face her,"
6
"he admitted, his voice low"
7
"he said, his voice barely"
8
"It was a picture of"
9
"She could feel Lucien's gaze"
10
"she said, her voice barely"
11
"he said softly"
12
"he said, his voice fierce"
13
"She wanted to believe him,"
14
"she challenged, her voice steady"
15
"She took a deep breath,"
16
"she said, her voice barely"
17
"he said, his voice warm"
18
"She couldn't believe she was"
19
"She took a deep breath,"
ratio
0.441
50.09%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
91
totalSentences
111
matches
0
"The door creaked open, revealing"
1
"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
2
"He was dressed in one"
3
"he greeted, his voice smooth"
4
"Rory hesitated, her fingers tightening"
5
"The last time they'd seen"
6
"She stepped aside, allowing him"
7
"The flat was small, cluttered"
8
"Lucien's gaze swept over the"
9
"he commented, spotting the familiar"
10
"Rory closed the door behind"
11
"she asked, her voice steady"
12
"He turned to face her,"
13
"he admitted, his voice low"
14
"Rory crossed her arms over"
15
"Lucien took a step closer,"
16
"he said, his voice barely"
17
"Rory looked away, her eyes"
18
"It was a picture of"
19
"She could feel Lucien's gaze"
ratio
0.82
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
111
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
9.69%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
59
technicalSentenceCount
11
matches
0
"When they finished eating, Lucien helped her clean up, his fingers brushing against hers as they washed the dishes."
1
"Rory could feel the heat of his touch, the electricity that passed between them."
2
"As they stood in the small kitchen, the scent of soap and water filling the air, Lucien turned to her, his eyes searching hers."
3
"As they stood in the kitchen, the scent of soap and water filling the air, Rory reached out, her fingers brushing against Lucien's."
4
"She could feel the heat of his touch, the electricity that passed between them."
5
"As they stood in the kitchen, the scent of soap and water filling the air, Rory reached out, her fingers brushing against Lucien's."
6
"She could feel the heat of his touch, the electricity that passed between them."
7
"As they stood in the kitchen, the scent of soap and water filling the air, Rory reached out, her fingers brushing against Lucien's."
8
"She could feel the heat of his touch, the electricity that passed between them."
9
"As they stood in the kitchen, the scent of soap and water filling the air, Rory reached out, her fingers brushing against Lucien's."
10
"She could feel the heat of his touch, the electricity that passed between them."
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
29
uselessAdditionCount
24
matches
0
"he greeted, his voice smooth as silk"
1
"she asked, her voice steady despite the turmoil inside her"
2
"he admitted, his voice low"
3
"he said, his voice barely above a whisper"
4
"she said, her voice barely audible"
5
"he said, his voice fierce"
6
"she challenged, her voice steady despite the turmoil inside her"
7
"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
8
"he said, his voice warm"
9
"she said, her voice steady despite the turmoil inside her"
10
"he said, his voice smooth"
11
"he said, his voice barely above a whisper"
12
"he said softly, his voice barely above a whisper"
13
"she asked, her voice barely audible"
14
"he said, his voice fierce"
15
"she challenged, her voice steady despite the turmoil inside her"
16
"she said softly, her voice barely above a whisper"
17
"he said, his voice steady"
18
"she said softly, her voice barely above a whisper"
19
"he said, his voice steady"
20
"she said softly, her voice barely above a whisper"
21
"he said, his voice steady"
22
"she said softly, her voice barely above a whisper"
23
"he said, his voice steady"
42.86%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
28
fancyCount
6
fancyTags
0
"he commented (comment)"
1
"he admitted (admit)"
2
"she challenged (challenge)"
3
"he promised (promise)"
4
"she challenged (challenge)"
5
"he promised (promise)"
dialogueSentences
55
tagDensity
0.509
leniency
1
rawRatio
0.214
effectiveRatio
0.214
67.0625%