Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPN9S2C2M3V5JAZPY9TCB6

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door creaked open, revealing a sliver of warm light that cut through the dimly lit hallway. Aurora Carter stood there, her bright blue eyes widening in surprise as she recognised the figure on her doorstep. Lucien Moreau, impeccably dressed in a tailored charcoal suit, stood holding a small, worn suitcase. His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—met hers, and for a moment, time seemed to stand still. "Lucien," Aurora breathed, her voice barely above a whisper. She stepped back, allowing him to enter. The scent of his cologne, a mix of sandalwood and something uniquely him, filled the small flat. "What are you doing here?" Lucien stepped inside, his ivory-handled cane tapping lightly against the wooden floor. He glanced around the cramped space, taking in the stacks of books and scrolls that covered every surface. "I needed to see you, Rory," he said, his voice low and steady. "We have unfinished business." Aurora closed the door behind him, her heart pounding in her chest. She remembered the last time they had seen each other, the hurt in his eyes when she had walked away. "Lucien, we said everything that needed to be said," she replied, her voice firm despite the turmoil inside her. Lucien set his suitcase down and turned to face her. "Did we?" he asked, his gaze intense. "Because I don't remember leaving anything unsaid between us." Aurora crossed her arms over her chest, her fingers brushing against the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. She remembered the nights they had spent talking, the way his laughter had filled the room, the way his touch had made her feel alive. But she also remembered the pain, the betrayal, the way he had looked at her when she had told him she couldn't do this anymore. "You left," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "You left, and you didn't come back." Lucien's expression softened, and he took a step closer to her. "I had to, Rory," he said, his voice gentle. "You know why I had to leave." Aurora looked away, her eyes landing on the tabby cat, Ptolemy, who was watching them from his perch on the back of the couch. She took a deep breath, steeling herself for what she knew she had to say. "It doesn't matter why you left, Lucien," she said, her voice steady. "What matters is that you did. And now you're here, and I don't know what to do with that." Lucien reached out, his hand cupping her cheek. His touch was warm, familiar, and Aurora felt a shiver run down her spine. "I know you don't," he said softly. "But I'm here now, and I'm not going anywhere. Not until we've talked, not until we've figured this out." Aurora closed her eyes, leaning into his touch. She knew she should pull away, knew she should tell him to leave, but she couldn't bring herself to do it. Not yet. "We can't just pretend nothing happened, Lucien," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. Lucien's hand dropped, and he took a step back. "I know," he said, his voice serious. "But we can't pretend nothing is happening now either. We can't ignore this, Rory. Not anymore." Aurora looked at him, really looked at him, and saw the determination in his eyes. She knew he was right. They couldn't ignore this, couldn't pretend that nothing had changed. But she also knew that whatever they had, whatever they could have, it wouldn't be easy. There were too many hurt feelings, too many unspoken words, too much history between them. "Fine," she said, her voice steady. "We'll talk. But not here. Not now. I have to work tonight." Lucien nodded, his expression unreadable. "Where?" he asked, his voice low. Aurora hesitated for a moment before answering. "Golden Empress," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "I work there. I deliver food." Lucien's eyes widened in surprise, but he nodded nonetheless. "I'll be there," he said, his voice firm. "We'll talk then." Aurora watched as he picked up his suitcase and turned to leave. She knew she should feel relieved, should feel happy that he was gone, but all she felt was a sense of dread. She knew that whatever happened next, whatever they said to each other, it would change everything. And she wasn't sure she was ready for that. But as the door clicked shut behind Lucien, Aurora knew she had no choice. She had to be ready. Because Lucien was back, and he wasn't going anywhere. And she had to face him, had to face the past, had to face the future. No matter what it cost her. She took a deep breath, steeling herself for what was to come. She had a job to do, a life to live, and she couldn't let Lucien's sudden reappearance derail her. She grabbed her jacket and headed out the door, her mind racing with thoughts of what the night would bring. The streets of East London were bustling with activity as Aurora made her way to the Golden Empress. The scent of spices and fried food filled the air, and the sound of laughter and chatter spilled out from the restaurants and bars that lined the streets. Aurora loved this part of the city, loved the energy, the life, the constant movement. It was a far cry from the quiet, orderly streets of Cardiff, where she had grown up. As she walked, she thought about Lucien, about the way he had looked at her, the way he had touched her. She remembered the way he had made her feel, the way he had made her laugh, the way he had made her feel alive. But she also remembered the pain, the betrayal, the way he had looked at her when she had told him she couldn't do this anymore. She pushed the thoughts away, focusing instead on the task at hand. She had a job to do, and she couldn't let her personal life get in the way of that. She arrived at the Golden Empress, the warm glow of the restaurant spilling out onto the street. She could see the familiar faces of the staff inside, could hear the clatter of dishes and the hum of conversation. She took a deep breath, steeling herself for what was to come. She had to be strong, had to be focused, had to be ready for whatever Lucien had in store for her. She pushed open the door and stepped inside, the warmth of the restaurant enveloping her. She was home, and she was ready to face whatever came her way. But as she made her way through the kitchen, grabbing her delivery bag and checking her orders, she couldn't shake the feeling of unease that settled in the pit of her stomach. She knew that Lucien was out there, somewhere, waiting for her. And she knew that whatever he had to say, whatever he wanted from her, it wouldn't be easy. But she was ready. She had to be. She finished her preparations and headed out into the night, her mind focused on the task at hand. She had deliveries to make, customers to please, and a life to live. And she wasn't going to let Lucien Moreau derail any of that. Not tonight, not ever. But as she made her way through the streets of East London, she couldn't shake the feeling that her life was about to change in ways she couldn't even begin to imagine. And she wasn't sure she was ready for that. Not yet. Maybe not ever. She pushed the thoughts away, focusing instead on the warmth of the night, the scent of the city, the sound of laughter and music that filled the air. She was alive, she was free, and she was ready for whatever came her way. And that was all that mattered. But as she turned a corner, she saw him. Lucien, leaning against a lamppost, his eyes fixed on her. She felt her heart skip a beat, felt her breath catch in her throat. She knew she should turn away, should walk away, should leave him there. But she couldn't. She was rooted to the spot, unable to move, unable to look away. He pushed off from the lamppost and walked towards her, his eyes never leaving hers. She could see the determination in his gaze, the intensity, the unspoken promise of what was to come. And she knew, in that moment, that her life was about to change forever. "Rory," he said, his voice low, his accent thick. "We need to talk." She swallowed hard, her heart pounding in her chest. She knew he was right. They needed to talk. They needed to face the past, to confront the hurt, to deal with the pain. But she wasn't sure she was ready for that. Not yet. Maybe not ever. But as he reached out, his hand cupping her cheek, she knew she had no choice. She had to face him, had to face the past, had to face the future. No matter what it cost her. "Okay," she whispered, her voice barely audible. "Let's talk." And as he led her away, into the night, she knew that her life would never be the same again. And she wasn't sure she was ready for that. Not yet. Maybe not ever. But she was ready to find out. Ready to face whatever came her way. Ready to face Lucien Moreau, and the past that bound them together. No matter what it cost her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.552
leniency1
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.063
78.19% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1605
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count4
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
1"lightly"
2"softly"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.93% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1605
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"whisper"
count4
1
word"pounding"
count2
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"down her spine"
count1
4
word"unspoken"
count2
5
word"unreadable"
count1
6
word"sense of"
count1
7
word"racing"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count2
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"intensity"
count1
highlights
0"whisper"
1"pounding"
2"familiar"
3"down her spine"
4"unspoken"
5"unreadable"
6"sense of"
7"racing"
8"warmth"
9"stomach"
10"intensity"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"sense of foreboding"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"a sense of dread"
89.39% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells5
narrationSentences117
matches
0"g in surprise"
1"felt a shiver"
2"d in surprise"
3"a sense of dread"
4"the feeling of unease"
81.81% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences117
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"feel, feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"begin to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1601
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount1435
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.18
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Moreau3
Aurora13
Lucien17
Ptolemy1
East2
London2
Golden2
Empress2
Cardiff1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Moreau"
2"Aurora"
3"Lucien"
places
0"East"
1"London"
2"Golden"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore0.908
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences93
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1601
matches(empty)
0.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount7
totalSentences130
matches
0"scrolls that covered"
1"pretend that nothing"
2"knew that whatever"
3"knew that whatever"
4"knew that Lucien"
5"knew that whatever"
6"knew that her"
79.38% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean44.47
std19.03
cv0.428
sampleLengths
067
138
247
351
426
569
617
727
870
948
1046
1132
1261
1318
1411
1523
1620
1759
1850
1951
2078
2170
2269
2361
2469
2547
2646
2749
2862
2947
3013
3147
3237
339
3434
3532
99.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences117
matches
0"was gone"
1"was rooted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs276
matches
0"was watching"
1"wasn't going"
2"were bustling"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences130
ratio0.008
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—met hers, and for a moment, time seemed to stand still."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1439
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.03127171646977067
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.008339124391938846
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean12.32
std6.66
cv0.541
sampleLengths
017
119
215
316
49
57
617
75
812
918
1013
114
1212
1320
1419
1510
167
179
1819
1925
2025
2110
227
2311
249
257
2624
2715
2812
2919
308
3114
327
3319
348
3521
362
3715
389
397
4016
4115
425
4310
4416
4515
466
4712
485
496
33.85% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats21
diversityRatio0.2153846153846154
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners28
88.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences113
matches
0"Maybe not ever."
1"Maybe not ever."
2"Maybe not ever."
ratio0.027
18.23% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount57
totalSentences113
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
1"She stepped back, allowing him"
2"He glanced around the cramped"
3"he said, his voice low"
4"She remembered the last time"
5"she replied, her voice firm"
6"he asked, his gaze intense"
7"She remembered the nights they"
8"she said, her voice barely"
9"he said, his voice gentle"
10"She took a deep breath,"
11"she said, her voice steady"
12"His touch was warm, familiar,"
13"he said softly"
14"She knew she should pull"
15"she said, her voice barely"
16"he said, his voice serious"
17"She knew he was right."
18"They couldn't ignore this, couldn't"
19"she said, her voice steady"
ratio0.504
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount80
totalSentences113
matches
0"The door creaked open, revealing"
1"Aurora Carter stood there, her"
2"Lucien Moreau, impeccably dressed in"
3"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
4"Aurora breathed, her voice barely"
5"She stepped back, allowing him"
6"The scent of his cologne,"
7"Lucien stepped inside, his ivory-handled"
8"He glanced around the cramped"
9"he said, his voice low"
10"Aurora closed the door behind"
11"She remembered the last time"
12"she replied, her voice firm"
13"Lucien set his suitcase down"
14"he asked, his gaze intense"
15"Aurora crossed her arms over"
16"She remembered the nights they"
17"she said, her voice barely"
18"Lucien's expression softened, and he"
19"he said, his voice gentle"
ratio0.708
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount4
totalSentences113
matches
0"Because Lucien was back, and"
1"No matter what it cost"
2"No matter what it cost"
3"No matter what it cost"
ratio0.035
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences66
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Aurora looked away, her eyes landing on the tabby cat, Ptolemy, who was watching them from his perch on the back of the couch."
1"But as she made her way through the kitchen, grabbing her delivery bag and checking her orders, she couldn't shake the feeling of unease that settled in the pit…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount14
matches
0"Aurora breathed, her voice barely above a whisper"
1"he said, his voice low and steady"
2"he asked, his gaze intense"
3"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
4"he said, his voice gentle"
5"she said, her voice steady"
6"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
7"he said, his voice serious"
8"she said, her voice steady"
9"he asked, his voice low"
10"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
11"he said, his voice firm"
12"he said, his voice low, his accent thick"
13"she whispered, her voice barely audible"
87.50% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Aurora breathed (breathe)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.552
leniency1
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.125
81.4678%