| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.56 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 87.68% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1218 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "really" | | 2 | "quickly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 30.21% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1218 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "the last thing" | | 6 | "gleaming" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "beacon" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "trembled" | | 11 | "charged" | | 12 | "depths" | | 13 | "searing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 90.37% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 18 | | markdownWords | 66 | | totalWords | 1204 | | ratio | 0.055 | | matches | | 0 | "\"This place is older than memory,\"" | | 1 | "\"And it does not like us.\"" | | 2 | "safe" | | 3 | "permitted" | | 4 | "Hel’s mark" | | 5 | "\"This is not a gift. It is a test.\"" | | 6 | "courtesy" | | 7 | "hell" | | 8 | "\"A guardian,\"" | | 9 | "\"Or a hunter. The Fae do not distinguish.\"" | | 10 | "moved" | | 11 | "what" | | 12 | "\"One of the Old Ones, buried before mortals learned to name the sky.\"" | | 13 | "tear" | | 14 | "they" | | 15 | "feel" | | 16 | "\"We should not have come,\"" | | 17 | "\"Some doors should never be opened.\"" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 70.71% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 1009 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.59 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Isolde | 8 | | Rory | 16 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Nyx | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.707 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "as if breathing" | | 1 | "reds that seemed to bleed when she blinked" | | 2 | "looked like crushed gemstones" | | 3 | "something like hunger" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1204 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 38.84 | | std | 27.48 | | cv | 0.708 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 57 | | 2 | 40 | | 3 | 75 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 42 | | 6 | 71 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 94 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 53 | | 11 | 63 | | 12 | 75 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 40 | | 16 | 77 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 67 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 87 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 62 | | 25 | 57 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 32 | | 28 | 29 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 8 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 173 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 96 | | ratio | 0.104 | | matches | | 0 | "The scent was thick, cloying—like overripe fruit left to ferment in the sun, laced with something darker, something metallic." | | 1 | "The trees here were not oaks, not really—not like the ones that marked the boundary." | | 2 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground, petals in colors Rory had no name for—blues that hurt to look at, reds that seemed to bleed when she blinked." | | 3 | "Ahead, the trees thinned, revealing a clearing—and Rory’s breath caught." | | 4 | "And at the head of the table, a throne of twisted roots, empty but for the crown resting upon its seat—a circlet of antlers, still slick with blood." | | 5 | "Then—movement." | | 6 | "Not a fall—no, the earth simply *moved*, rolling beneath their feet like a living thing." | | 7 | "Bridges of woven vines spanned the gap, each leading to a different path—a door of moss-crusted stone, a curtain of hanging roots, a mirror of still water suspended in midair." | | 8 | "She could *feel* it—the pull of the chasm, the whisper of the bones, the grove’s breath on the back of her neck." | | 9 | "Nyx’s hand—cool and insubstantial—brushed her shoulder." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1023 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "same eerie green light" |
| | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.02737047898338221 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006842619745845552 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 96 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 96 | | mean | 12.54 | | std | 7.16 | | cv | 0.571 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 25 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 32 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 51.39% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.3645833333333333 | | totalSentences | 96 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 84.39% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the ground gave way." | | 1 | "Only Isolde remained untouched, her" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Her fingers twitched toward the" | | 1 | "they murmured, their voice the" | | 2 | "Their trunks were too smooth," | | 3 | "She gestured to the path" | | 4 | "She pressed a hand to" | | 5 | "Her fingers itched to reach" | | 6 | "She took a bite, juice" | | 7 | "She gestured to the table" | | 8 | "It had no face, only" | | 9 | "It tilted its head, considering" | | 10 | "She tossed the apple core" | | 11 | "It vanished before it hit" | | 12 | "She looked up at Rory," | | 13 | "She could *feel* it—the pull" | | 14 | "It was alive." | | 15 | "She gestured to the bridges" | | 16 | "She exhaled, slow and steady," |
| | ratio | 0.215 | |
| 35.95% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled wrong the" | | 1 | "Rory exhaled sharply, her breath" | | 2 | "The scent was thick, cloying—like" | | 3 | "Her fingers twitched toward the" | | 4 | "The grove had swallowed them" | | 5 | "Nyx’s form rippled at her" | | 6 | "they murmured, their voice the" | | 7 | "Isolde stepped forward, her silver" | | 8 | "The trees here were not" | | 9 | "Their trunks were too smooth," | | 10 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground, petals" | | 11 | "Rory muttered, though she kept" | | 12 | "The last thing she wanted" | | 13 | "Isolde turned, her lavender eyes" | | 14 | "She gestured to the path" | | 15 | "The deeper they walked, the" | | 16 | "The air hummed, a low" | | 17 | "The Heartstone at her throat" | | 18 | "She pressed a hand to" | | 19 | "*Hel’s mark*, Nyx had called" |
| | ratio | 0.848 | |
| 63.29% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Before them yawned a chasm," |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 49.69% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde stepped forward, her silver hair catching the strange, dappled light that filtered through the canopy above." | | 1 | "Their trunks were too smooth, too pale, their bark etched with sigils that pulsed faintly, as if breathing." | | 2 | "It tilted its head, considering them, before melting back into the foliage." | | 3 | "Rory gasped, windmilling her arms as the world tilted, but the roots of the trees lashed out, coiling around her ankles, steadying her." | | 4 | "Ribs like the arches of a cathedral, a skull the size of a carriage, its hollow eye sockets filled with the same eerie green light that tinted the air." | | 5 | "The Heartstone was a furnace now, its heat searing through her shirt, branding her skin." |
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| 17.86% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "they murmured, their voice the whisper of dead leaves skittering across stone" | | 1 | "Isolde said, her voice distant, as if she spoke through water" | | 2 | "She looked up, her eyes wide, pupils blown black with something like hunger" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "they murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.24 | | leniency | 0.48 | | rawRatio | 0.833 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |