Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPNGS5NSMPAGTW09WKB79Y

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58.7s
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$0.002079
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Mistral

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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

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Aurora Carter, or Rory as her friends called her, adjusted the strap of her bag, the weight of the Fae-forged blade tucked within pressing against her side. She stepped through the ancient oak standing stones, the air around her humming with an energy that raised the fine hairs on her arms. The Heartstone pendant around her neck pulsed warmly, a steady beat against her collarbone. Beside her, Nyx shifted, their shadowy form flickering like a candle in a draft. "This place... it's old," they murmured, their voice a whisper carried on the wind. "Older than Dymas, older than Hel itself." Rory glanced at them, her bright blue eyes reflecting the ethereal glow of the grove. "How can you tell?" Nyx turned to her, their faintly glowing violet eyes reflecting the luminescent flora. "The shadows here... they remember. They whisper of ancient things, of forgotten times." Ahead of them, Isolde moved gracefully, her silver hair cascading down her back like a shimmering waterfall. She paused, looking back at them, her pale lavender eyes holding a depth of knowledge that made Rory's stomach twist with unease. "Beware, seekers," she cautioned, her voice echoing slightly, as if carried by an unseen wind. "The grove reveals what it will, when it will. Time here is... fluid." Rory swallowed hard, her grip tightening on the strap of her bag. She could feel the weight of the Fae-forged blade, its coldness seeping through the fabric, grounding her. She took a deep breath, the air sweet and heavy with the scent of wildflowers that bloomed year-round. The grove was a stark contrast to the grimy streets of London she was used to, the alien beauty both exhilarating and unsettling. As they ventured deeper, the trees grew taller, their trunks twisting and gnarled, bark etched with runes that pulsed faintly with a soft light. The ground beneath their feet was soft, a carpet of moss and wildflowers that seemed to shift and change with each step, as if the very earth was alive. Rory reached out, her fingers brushing against the trunk of a nearby tree. The bark was warm, pulsating gently, like a heartbeat. She gasped, snatching her hand back. "It's alive," she breathed, her eyes wide. Nyx chuckled, a sound like rustling leaves. "Of course it is. This is no ordinary grove, Rory. It's a place where the Veil is thin, where the boundaries between realms blur. The trees here... they're sentinels, guardians of the secrets that lie within." Isolde turned to them, her expression inscrutable. "The grove is a living entity, a reflection of the Fae realm. It responds to the intentions of those who enter. Show respect, and it will reveal its wonders. Approach with malice, and it will defend itself." Rory nodded, her eyes scanning the grove, taking in the luminescent flowers, the twisted trees, the faint shimmer of the Veil that hung like a curtain in the distance. She could feel the power here, the raw, untamed magic that thrummed in the air like a living thing. As they continued, the grove seemed to shift around them, the path ahead changing, twisting, as if the very earth was guiding their steps. Rory's heart pounded in her chest, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. She could feel the unease in the pit of her stomach, the gnawing worry that they were treading on ground that was not meant for mortal feet. Nyx paused, their form flickering, their eyes scanning the shadows that danced and twisted around them. "Something's wrong," they murmured, their voice barely audible. "The shadows... they're disturbed." Rory's hand instinctively went to the Fae-forged blade, her fingers curling around the hilt. She could feel the coldness seeping into her skin, the power of the blade humming beneath her touch. "What is it?" she asked, her voice steady despite the fear that coiled in her belly. Nyx's form flickered again, their eyes narrowing as they stared into the shadows. "Something's coming," they whispered. "Something old, something... hungry." Isolde turned to them, her expression grave. "The grove is testing us," she said, her voice echoing slightly. "It seeks to know our intentions, to know if we are worthy to walk its paths." Rory swallowed hard, her grip tightening on the blade. She could feel the power of the grove, the raw, untamed magic that thrummed in the air like a living thing. She could feel the unease in the pit of her stomach, the gnawing worry that they were treading on ground that was not meant for mortal feet. As they continued, the grove seemed to shift around them, the path ahead changing, twisting, as if the very earth was guiding their steps. The trees grew taller, their branches twisting and gnarled, the runes etched into their bark pulsing with a soft light. The flowers bloomed and withered in a cycle that seemed to span seconds, their petals falling to the ground like snow, only to bloom anew moments later. Rory's breath caught in her throat as they stepped into a clearing, the ground beneath their feet smooth and flat, like a dance floor carved from stone. In the center of the clearing stood a stone altar, its surface etched with runes that pulsed with a soft light. The air around the altar hummed with power, the very air seeming to shimmer and distort. Isolde approached the altar, her steps slow and measured. She reached out, her fingers tracing the runes etched into the stone. "This is a place of power," she murmured, her voice barely audible. "A place where the Veil is thin, where the boundaries between realms blur." Rory approached the altar, her eyes scanning the runes, the symbols alien and unfamiliar. She could feel the power that pulsed from the stone, the raw, untamed magic that thrummed in the air like a living thing. She reached out, her fingers brushing against the stone, the runes pulsing beneath her touch. A vision flashed before her eyes, a glimpse of a world beyond the Veil, a realm of twisted trees and shadowy figures, a place of darkness and despair. She gasped, snatching her hand back, her heart pounding in her chest. "What was that?" she breathed, her eyes wide with fear. Isolde turned to her, her expression grave. "A glimpse of what lies beyond the Veil," she said, her voice steady. "A reminder of the power that lies within this grove, of the dangers that lurk beyond the boundaries of our world." Nyx approached the altar, their form flickering, their eyes scanning the runes etched into the stone. "This is a place of transition," they murmured, their voice barely audible. "A place where the boundaries between realms blur, where the Veil is thin. It is a place of power, a place of danger." Rory nodded, her eyes scanning the clearing, taking in the twisted trees, the stone altar, the faint shimmer of the Veil that hung like a curtain in the distance. She could feel the power here, the raw, untamed magic that thrummed in the air like a living thing. She could feel the unease in the pit of her stomach, the gnawing worry that they were treading on ground that was not meant for mortal feet. As they continued, the grove seemed to shift around them, the path ahead changing, twisting, as if the very earth was guiding their steps. The trees grew taller, their branches twisting and gnarled, the runes etched into their bark pulsing with a soft light. The flowers bloomed and withered in a cycle that seemed to span seconds, their petals falling to the ground like snow, only to bloom anew moments later. Rory's breath caught in her throat as they stepped into another clearing, this one bathed in a soft, ethereal glow. In the center of the clearing stood a pool of water, its surface smooth and still, like a mirror. The air around the pool hummed with power, the very air seeming to shimmer and distort. Isolde approached the pool, her steps slow and measured. She reached out, her fingers brushing against the surface of the water. The water rippled, the surface distorting, revealing a vision of a world beyond the Veil, a realm of twisted trees and shadowy figures, a place of darkness and despair. Rory approached the pool, her eyes scanning the vision that played out on the water's surface. She could see the twisted trees, the shadowy figures, the darkness that seemed to consume everything in its path. She could feel the power that pulsed from the pool, the raw, untamed magic that thrummed in the air like a living thing. Nyx approached the pool, their form flickering, their eyes scanning the vision that played out on the water's surface. "This is a place of revelation," they murmured, their voice barely audible. "A place where the truths of the past and future are laid bare." Isolde turned to them, her expression grave. "The grove has shown us its power," she said, her voice steady. "It has shown us the dangers that lie beyond the Veil, the darkness that threatens to consume our world. We must be vigilant, we must be prepared. For the battle that lies ahead will be one of power and cunning, of light and shadow." Rory nodded, her eyes scanning the pool, taking in the vision that played out on the water's surface. She could feel the power here, the raw, untamed magic that thrummed in the air like a living thing. She could feel the unease in the pit of her stomach, the gnawing worry that they were treading on ground that was not meant for mortal feet. As they continued, the grove seemed to shift around them, the path ahead changing, twisting, as if the very earth was guiding their steps. The trees grew taller, their branches twisting and gnarled, the runes etched into their bark pulsing with a soft light. The flowers bloomed and withered in a cycle that seemed to span seconds, their petals falling to the ground like snow, only to bloom anew moments later. Rory's breath caught in her throat as they stepped into yet another clearing, this one bathed in a soft, ethereal glow. In the center of the clearing stood a stone archway, its surface etched with runes that pulsed with a soft light. The air around the archway hummed with power, the very air seeming to shimmer and distort. Isolde approached the archway, her steps slow and measured. She reached out, her fingers tracing the runes etched into the stone. "This is a gateway," she murmured, her voice barely audible. "A doorway to another realm, a place of power and danger." Rory approached the archway, her eyes scanning the runes, the symbols alien and unfamiliar. She could feel the power that pulsed from the stone, the raw, untamed magic that thrummed in the air like a living thing. She reached out, her fingers brushing against the stone, the runes pulsing beneath her touch. A vision flashed before her eyes, a glimpse of a world beyond the Veil, a realm of twisted trees and shadowy figures, a place of darkness and despair. She gasped, snatching her hand back, her heart pounding in her chest. "What was that?" she breathed, her eyes wide with fear. Isolde turned to her, her expression grave. "A glimpse of what lies beyond the gateway," she said, her voice steady. "A reminder of the power that lies within this grove, of the dangers that lurk beyond the boundaries of our world." Nyx approached the archway, their form flickering, their eyes scanning the runes etched into the stone. "This is a place of transition," they murmured, their voice barely audible. "A place where the boundaries between realms blur, where the Veil is thin. It is a place of power, a place of danger." Rory nodded, her eyes scanning the clearing, taking in the twisted trees, the stone archway, the faint shimmer of the Veil that hung like a curtain in the distance. She could feel the power here, the raw, untamed magic that thrummed in the air like a living thing. She could feel the unease in the pit of her stomach, the gnawing worry that they were treading on ground that was not meant for mortal feet. As they continued, the grove seemed to shift around them, the path ahead changing, twisting, as if the very earth was guiding their steps. The trees grew taller, their branches twisting and gnarled, the runes etched into their bark pulsing with a soft light. The flowers bloomed and withered in a cycle that seemed to span seconds, their petals falling to the ground like snow, only to bloom anew moments later. Rory's breath caught in her throat as they stepped into yet another clearing, this one bathed in a soft, ethereal glow. In the center of the clearing stood a stone pedestal, its surface etched with runes that pulsed with a soft light. The air around the pedestal hummed with power, the very air seeming to shimmer and distort. Isolde approached the pedestal, her steps slow and measured. She reached out, her fingers tracing the runes etched into the stone. "This is a place of power," she murmured, her voice barely audible. "A place where the Veil is thin, where the boundaries between realms blur." Rory approached the pedestal, her eyes scanning the runes, the symbols alien and unfamiliar. She could feel the power that pulsed from the stone, the raw, untamed magic that thrummed in the air like a living thing. She reached out, her fingers brushing against the stone, the runes pulsing beneath her touch. A vision flashed before her eyes, a glimpse of a world beyond the Veil, a realm of twisted trees and shadowy figures, a place of darkness and despair. She gasped, snatching her hand back, her heart pounding in her chest. "What was that?" she breathed, her eyes wide with fear. Isolde turned to her, her expression grave. "A glimpse of what lies beyond the Veil," she said, her voice steady. "A reminder of the power that lies within this grove, of the dangers that lurk beyond the boundaries of our world." Nyx approached the pedestal, their form flickering, their eyes scanning the runes etched into the stone. "This is a place of revelation," they murmured, their voice barely audible. "A place where the truths of the past and future are laid bare." Isolde turned to them, her expression grave. "The grove has shown us its power," she said, her voice steady. "It has shown us the dangers that lie beyond the Veil, the darkness that threatens to consume our world. We must be vigilant, we must be prepared. For the battle that lies ahead will be one of power and cunning, of light and shadow." Rory nodded, her eyes scanning the pedestal, taking in the runes that pulsed with a soft light. She could feel the power here, the raw, untamed magic that thrummed in the air like a living thing. She could feel the unease in the pit of her stomach, the gnawing worry that they were treading on ground that was not meant for mortal feet. As they continued, the grove seemed to shift around them, the path ahead changing, twisting, as if the very earth was guiding their steps. The trees grew taller, their branches twisting and gnarled, the runes etched into their bark pulsing with a soft light. The flowers bloomed and withered in a cycle that seemed to span seconds, their petals falling to the ground like snow, only to bloom anew moments later. Rory's breath caught in her throat as they stepped into yet another clearing, this one bathed in a soft, ethereal glow. In the center of the clearing stood a stone archway, its surface etched with runes that pulsed with a soft light. The air around the archway hummed with power, the very air seeming to shimmer and distort. Isolde approached the archway, her steps slow and measured. She reached out, her fingers tracing the runes etched into the stone. "This is a gateway," she murmured, her voice barely audible. "A doorway to another realm, a place of power and danger." Rory approached the archway, her eyes scanning the runes, the symbols alien and unfamiliar. She could feel the power that pulsed from the stone, the raw, untamed magic that thrummed in the air like a living thing. She reached out, her fingers brushing against the stone, the runes pulsing beneath her touch. A vision flashed before her eyes, a glimpse of a world beyond the Veil, a realm of twisted trees and shadowy figures, a place of darkness and despair. She gasped, snatching her hand back, her heart pounding in her chest. "What was that?" she breathed, her eyes wide with fear. Isolde turned to her, her expression grave. "A glimpse of what lies beyond the gateway," she said, her voice steady. "A reminder of the power that lies within this grove, of the dangers that lurk beyond the boundaries of our world." Nyx approached the archway, their form flickering, their eyes scanning the runes etched into the stone. "This is a place of transition," they murmured, their voice barely audible. "A place where the boundaries between realms blur, where the Veil is thin. It is a place of power, a place of danger." Rory nodded, her eyes scanning the clearing, taking in the twisted trees, the stone archway, the faint shimmer of the Veil that hung like a curtain in the distance. She could feel the power here, the raw, untamed magic that thrummed in the air like a living thing. She could feel the unease in the pit of her stomach, the gnawing worry that they were treading on ground that was not meant for mortal feet. As they continued, the grove seemed to shift around them, the path ahead changing, twisting, as if the very earth was guiding their steps. The trees grew taller, their branches twisting and gnarled, the runes etched into their bark pulsing with a soft light. The flowers bloomed and withered in a cycle that seemed to span seconds, their petals falling to the ground like snow, only to bloom anew moments later. Rory's breath caught in her throat as they stepped into yet another clearing, this one bathed in a soft, ethereal glow. In the center of the clearing stood a stone pedestal, its surface etched with runes that pulsed with a soft light. The air around the pedestal hummed with power, the very air seeming to shimmer and distort. Isolde approached the pedestal, her steps slow and measured. She reached out, her fingers tracing the runes etched into the stone. "This is a place of power," she murmured, her voice barely audible. "A place where the Veil is thin, where the boundaries between realms blur." Rory approached the pedestal, her eyes scanning the runes, the symbols alien and unfamiliar. She could feel the power that pulsed from the stone, the raw, untamed magic that thrummed in the air like a living thing. She reached out, her fingers brushing against the stone, the runes pulsing beneath her touch. A vision flashed before her eyes, a glimpse of a world beyond the Veil, a realm of twisted trees and shadowy figures, a place of darkness and despair. She gasped, snatching her hand back, her heart pounding in her chest. "What was that?" she breathed, her eyes wide with fear. Isolde turned to her, her expression grave. "A glimpse of what lies beyond the Veil," she said, her voice steady. "A reminder of the power that lies within this grove, of the dangers that lurk beyond the boundaries of our world." Nyx approached the pedestal, their form flickering, their eyes scanning the runes etched into the stone. "This is a place of revelation," they murmured, their voice barely audible. "A place where the truths of the past and future are laid bare." Isolde turned to them, her expression grave. "The grove has shown us its power," she said, her voice steady. "It has shown us the dangers that lie beyond the Veil, the darkness that threatens to consume our world. We must be vigilant, we must be prepared. For the battle that lies ahead will be one of power and cunning, of light and shadow." Rory nodded, her eyes scanning the pedestal, taking in the runes that pulsed with a soft light. She could feel the power here, the raw, untamed magic that thrummed in the air like a living thing. She could feel the unease in the pit of her stomach, the gnawing worry that they were treading on ground that was not meant for mortal feet. As they continued, the grove seemed to shift around them, the path ahead changing, twisting, as if the very earth was guiding their steps. The trees grew taller, their branches twisting and gnarled, the runes etched into their bark pulsing with a soft light. The flowers bloomed and withered in a cycle that seemed to span seconds, their petals falling to the ground like snow, only to bloom anew moments later. Rory's breath caught in her throat as they stepped into yet another clearing, this one bathed in a soft, ethereal glow. In the center of the clearing stood a stone archway, its surface etched with runes that pulsed with a soft light. The air around the archway hummed with power, the very air seeming to shimmer and distort. Isolde approached the archway, her steps slow and measured. She reached out, her fingers tracing the runes etched into the stone. "This is a gateway," she murmured, her voice barely audible. "A doorway to another realm, a place of power and danger." Rory approached the archway, her eyes scanning the runes, the symbols alien and unfamiliar. She could feel the power that pulsed from the stone, the raw, untamed magic that thrummed in the air like a living thing. She reached out, her fingers brushing against the stone, the runes pulsing beneath her touch. A vision flashed before her eyes, a glimpse of a world beyond the Veil, a realm of twisted trees and shadowy figures, a place of darkness and despair. She gasped, snatching her hand back, her heart pounding in her chest. "What was that?" she breathed, her eyes wide with fear. Isolde turned to her, her expression grave. "A glimpse of what lies beyond the gateway," she said, her voice steady. "A reminder of the power that lies within this grove, of the dangers that lurk beyond the boundaries of our world." Nyx approached the archway, their form flickering, their eyes scanning the runes etched into the stone. "This is a place of transition," they murmured, their voice barely audible. "A place where the boundaries between realms blur, where the Veil is thin. It is a place of power, a place of danger." Rory nodded, her eyes scanning the clearing, taking in the twisted trees, the stone archway, the faint shimmer of the Veil that hung like a curtain in the distance. She could feel the power here, the raw, untamed magic that thrummed in the air like a living thing. She could feel the unease in the pit of her stomach, the gnawing worry that they were treading on ground that was not meant for mortal feet. As they continued, the grove seemed to shift around them, the path ahead changing, twisting, as if the very earth was guiding their steps. The trees grew taller, their branches twisting and gnarled, the runes etched into their bark pulsing with a soft light. The flowers bloomed and withered in a cycle that seemed to span seconds, their petals falling to the ground like snow, only to bloom anew moments later. Rory's breath caught in her throat as they stepped into yet another clearing, this one bathed in a soft, ethereal glow. In the center of the clearing stood a stone pedestal, its surface etched with runes that pulsed with a soft light. The air around the pedestal hummed with power, the very air seeming to shimmer and distort. Isolde approached the pedestal, her steps slow and measured. She reached out, her fingers tracing the runes etched into the stone. "This is a place of power," she murmured, her voice barely audible. "A place where the Veil is thin, where the boundaries between realms blur." Rory approached the pedestal, her eyes scanning the runes, the symbols alien and unfamiliar. She could feel the power that pulsed from the stone, the raw, untamed magic that thrummed in the air like a living thing. She reached out, her fingers brushing against the stone, the runes pulsing beneath her touch. A vision flashed before her eyes, a glimpse of a world beyond the Veil, a realm of twisted trees and shadowy figures, a place of darkness and despair. She gasped, snatching her hand back, her heart pounding in her chest. "What was that?" she breathed, her eyes wide with fear. Isolde turned to her, her expression grave. "A glimpse of what lies beyond the Veil," she said, her voice steady. "A reminder of the power that lies within this grove, of the dangers that lurk beyond the boundaries of our world." Nyx approached the pedestal, their form flickering, their eyes scanning the runes etched into the stone. "This is a place of revelation," they murmured, their voice barely audible. "A place where the truths of the past and future are laid bare." Isolde turned to them, her expression grave. "The grove has shown us its power," she said, her voice steady. "It has shown us the dangers that lie beyond the Veil, the darkness that threatens to consume our world. We must be vigilant, we must be prepared. For the battle that lies ahead will be one of power and cunning, of light and shadow." Rory nodded, her eyes scanning the pedestal, taking in the runes that pulsed with a soft light. She could feel the power here, the raw, untamed magic that thrummed in the air like a living thing. She could feel the unease in the pit of her stomach, the gnawing worry that they were treading on ground that was not meant for mortal feet. As they continued, the grove seemed to shift around them, the path ahead changing, twisting, as if the very earth was guiding their steps. The trees grew taller, their branches twisting and gnarled, the runes etched into their bark pulsing with a soft light. The flowers bloomed and withered in a cycle that seemed to span seconds, their petals falling to the ground like snow, only to bloom anew moments later. Rory's breath caught in her throat as they stepped into yet another clearing, this one bathed in a soft, ethereal glow. In the center of the clearing stood a stone archway, its surface etched with runes that pulsed with a soft light. The air around the archway hummed with power, the very air seeming to shimmer and distort. Isolde approached the archway, her steps slow and measured. She reached out, her fingers tracing the runes etched into the stone. "This is a gateway," she murmured, her voice barely audible. "A doorway to another realm, a place of power and danger." Rory approached the archway, her eyes scanning the runes, the symbols alien and unfamiliar. She could feel the power that pulsed from the stone, the raw, untamed magic that thrummed in the air like a living thing. She reached out, her fingers brushing against the stone, the runes pulsing beneath her touch. A vision flashed before her eyes, a glimpse of a world beyond the Veil, a realm of twisted trees and shadowy figures, a place of darkness and despair. She gasped, snatching her hand back, her heart pounding in her chest. "What was that?" she breathed, her eyes wide with fear. Isolde turned to her, her expression grave. 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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags44
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences82
tagDensity0.537
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
75.16% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount4831
totalAiIsmAdverbs24
found
0
adverb"warmly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"very"
count20
3
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"warmly"
1"slightly"
2"very"
3"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount4831
totalAiIsms187
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"pulsed"
count22
2
word"whisper"
count2
3
word"cascading"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count12
5
word"echoing"
count2
6
word"could feel"
count33
7
word"stark"
count1
8
word"etched"
count34
9
word"sentinels"
count1
10
word"scanning"
count29
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"grave"
count13
13
word"dance"
count1
14
word"measured"
count9
15
word"tracing"
count8
16
word"pounding"
count8
17
word"reminder"
count8
highlights
0"weight"
1"pulsed"
2"whisper"
3"cascading"
4"stomach"
5"echoing"
6"could feel"
7"stark"
8"etched"
9"sentinels"
10"scanning"
11"flickered"
12"grave"
13"dance"
14"measured"
15"tracing"
16"pounding"
17"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
93.75% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells9
narrationSentences240
matches
0"t with unease"
1"e with fear"
2"e with fear"
3"e with fear"
4"e with fear"
5"e with fear"
6"e with fear"
7"e with fear"
8"e with fear"
17.86% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount21
narrationSentences240
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences278
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords4827
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions59
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions95
wordCount3856
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.93
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Rory36
Fae-forged3
Heartstone1
Nyx14
Isolde24
London1
Veil15
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Nyx"
3"Isolde"
places
0"Fae-forged"
1"London"
2"Veil"
globalScore1
windowScore1
28.32% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences226
glossingSentenceCount11
matches
0"wildflowers that seemed to shift and change with each step, as if the very earth was alive"
1"cycle that seemed to span seconds, their petals falling to the ground like snow, only to bloom anew moments later"
2"cycle that seemed to span seconds, their petals falling to the ground like snow, only to bloom anew moments later"
3"darkness that seemed to consume everything in its path"
4"cycle that seemed to span seconds, their petals falling to the ground like snow, only to bloom anew moments later"
5"cycle that seemed to span seconds, their petals falling to the ground like snow, only to bloom anew moments later"
6"cycle that seemed to span seconds, their petals falling to the ground like snow, only to bloom anew moments later"
7"cycle that seemed to span seconds, their petals falling to the ground like snow, only to bloom anew moments later"
8"cycle that seemed to span seconds, their petals falling to the ground like snow, only to bloom anew moments later"
9"cycle that seemed to span seconds, their petals falling to the ground like snow, only to bloom anew moments later"
10"cycle that seemed to span seconds, their petals falling to the ground like snow, only to bloom anew moments later"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount4827
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences278
matches(empty)
25.08% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs91
mean53.04
std12.61
cv0.238
sampleLengths
065
135
219
326
467
570
653
735
843
944
1048
1164
1228
1348
1421
1534
1657
1771
1864
1946
2052
2150
2241
2351
2475
2571
2655
2750
2858
2944
3063
3164
3271
3358
3442
3552
3650
3741
3851
3975
4071
4158
4246
4352
4450
4541
4641
4763
4863
4971
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences240
matches
0"was used"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount21
totalVerbs623
matches
0"was guiding"
1"were treading"
2"were treading"
3"was guiding"
4"were treading"
5"was guiding"
6"were treading"
7"was guiding"
8"were treading"
9"was guiding"
10"were treading"
11"was guiding"
12"were treading"
13"was guiding"
14"were treading"
15"was guiding"
16"were treading"
17"was guiding"
18"were treading"
19"was guiding"
20"were treading"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences278
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount3860
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount83
adverbRatio0.021502590673575128
lyAdverbCount36
lyAdverbRatio0.00932642487046632
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences278
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences278
mean17.36
std7.37
cv0.424
sampleLengths
027
124
214
314
414
57
615
74
813
913
1017
1122
1215
1313
1412
1517
1618
1723
1824
1929
2013
219
226
237
247
2536
267
2737
2829
2919
3024
3113
3227
3316
348
354
3614
3718
3816
3913
404
414
427
4311
4416
459
4621
4727
4824
4920
36.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats38
diversityRatio0.0683453237410072
totalSentences278
uniqueOpeners19
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences239
matches(empty)
ratio0
42.59% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount106
totalSentences239
matches
0"She stepped through the ancient"
1"they murmured, their voice a"
2"She paused, looking back at"
3"she cautioned, her voice echoing"
4"She could feel the weight"
5"She took a deep breath,"
6"She gasped, snatching her hand"
7"she breathed, her eyes wide"
8"She could feel the power"
9"She could feel the unease"
10"they murmured, their voice barely"
11"She could feel the coldness"
12"she asked, her voice steady"
13"she said, her voice echoing"
14"She could feel the power"
15"She could feel the unease"
16"She reached out, her fingers"
17"she murmured, her voice barely"
18"She could feel the power"
19"She reached out, her fingers"
ratio0.444
6.03% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount217
totalSentences239
matches
0"Aurora Carter, or Rory as"
1"She stepped through the ancient"
2"The Heartstone pendant around her"
3"they murmured, their voice a"
4"Rory glanced at them, her"
5"Nyx turned to her, their"
6"She paused, looking back at"
7"she cautioned, her voice echoing"
8"Rory swallowed hard, her grip"
9"She could feel the weight"
10"She took a deep breath,"
11"The grove was a stark"
12"The ground beneath their feet"
13"Rory reached out, her fingers"
14"The bark was warm, pulsating"
15"She gasped, snatching her hand"
16"she breathed, her eyes wide"
17"Nyx chuckled, a sound like"
18"Isolde turned to them, her"
19"Rory nodded, her eyes scanning"
ratio0.908
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences239
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences169
technicalSentenceCount61
matches
0"She stepped through the ancient oak standing stones, the air around her humming with an energy that raised the fine hairs on her arms."
1"She paused, looking back at them, her pale lavender eyes holding a depth of knowledge that made Rory's stomach twist with unease."
2"She could feel the weight of the Fae-forged blade, its coldness seeping through the fabric, grounding her."
3"She took a deep breath, the air sweet and heavy with the scent of wildflowers that bloomed year-round."
4"The ground beneath their feet was soft, a carpet of moss and wildflowers that seemed to shift and change with each step, as if the very earth was alive."
5"Rory nodded, her eyes scanning the grove, taking in the luminescent flowers, the twisted trees, the faint shimmer of the Veil that hung like a curtain in the di…"
6"As they continued, the grove seemed to shift around them, the path ahead changing, twisting, as if the very earth was guiding their steps."
7"Nyx paused, their form flickering, their eyes scanning the shadows that danced and twisted around them."
8"As they continued, the grove seemed to shift around them, the path ahead changing, twisting, as if the very earth was guiding their steps."
9"The trees grew taller, their branches twisting and gnarled, the runes etched into their bark pulsing with a soft light."
10"She reached out, her fingers brushing against the stone, the runes pulsing beneath her touch."
11"She gasped, snatching her hand back, her heart pounding in her chest."
12"Nyx approached the altar, their form flickering, their eyes scanning the runes etched into the stone."
13"Rory nodded, her eyes scanning the clearing, taking in the twisted trees, the stone altar, the faint shimmer of the Veil that hung like a curtain in the distanc…"
14"As they continued, the grove seemed to shift around them, the path ahead changing, twisting, as if the very earth was guiding their steps."
15"The trees grew taller, their branches twisting and gnarled, the runes etched into their bark pulsing with a soft light."
16"Rory approached the pool, her eyes scanning the vision that played out on the water's surface."
17"She could see the twisted trees, the shadowy figures, the darkness that seemed to consume everything in its path."
18"Nyx approached the pool, their form flickering, their eyes scanning the vision that played out on the water's surface."
19"As they continued, the grove seemed to shift around them, the path ahead changing, twisting, as if the very earth was guiding their steps."
20"The trees grew taller, their branches twisting and gnarled, the runes etched into their bark pulsing with a soft light."
21"She reached out, her fingers brushing against the stone, the runes pulsing beneath her touch."
22"She gasped, snatching her hand back, her heart pounding in her chest."
23"Nyx approached the archway, their form flickering, their eyes scanning the runes etched into the stone."
24"Rory nodded, her eyes scanning the clearing, taking in the twisted trees, the stone archway, the faint shimmer of the Veil that hung like a curtain in the dista…"
25"As they continued, the grove seemed to shift around them, the path ahead changing, twisting, as if the very earth was guiding their steps."
26"The trees grew taller, their branches twisting and gnarled, the runes etched into their bark pulsing with a soft light."
27"She reached out, her fingers brushing against the stone, the runes pulsing beneath her touch."
28"She gasped, snatching her hand back, her heart pounding in her chest."
29"Nyx approached the pedestal, their form flickering, their eyes scanning the runes etched into the stone."
30"Rory nodded, her eyes scanning the pedestal, taking in the runes that pulsed with a soft light."
31"As they continued, the grove seemed to shift around them, the path ahead changing, twisting, as if the very earth was guiding their steps."
32"The trees grew taller, their branches twisting and gnarled, the runes etched into their bark pulsing with a soft light."
33"She reached out, her fingers brushing against the stone, the runes pulsing beneath her touch."
34"She gasped, snatching her hand back, her heart pounding in her chest."
35"Nyx approached the archway, their form flickering, their eyes scanning the runes etched into the stone."
36"Rory nodded, her eyes scanning the clearing, taking in the twisted trees, the stone archway, the faint shimmer of the Veil that hung like a curtain in the dista…"
37"As they continued, the grove seemed to shift around them, the path ahead changing, twisting, as if the very earth was guiding their steps."
38"The trees grew taller, their branches twisting and gnarled, the runes etched into their bark pulsing with a soft light."
39"She reached out, her fingers brushing against the stone, the runes pulsing beneath her touch."
40"She gasped, snatching her hand back, her heart pounding in her chest."
41"Nyx approached the pedestal, their form flickering, their eyes scanning the runes etched into the stone."
42"Rory nodded, her eyes scanning the pedestal, taking in the runes that pulsed with a soft light."
43"As they continued, the grove seemed to shift around them, the path ahead changing, twisting, as if the very earth was guiding their steps."
44"The trees grew taller, their branches twisting and gnarled, the runes etched into their bark pulsing with a soft light."
45"She reached out, her fingers brushing against the stone, the runes pulsing beneath her touch."
46"She gasped, snatching her hand back, her heart pounding in her chest."
47"Nyx approached the archway, their form flickering, their eyes scanning the runes etched into the stone."
48"Rory nodded, her eyes scanning the clearing, taking in the twisted trees, the stone archway, the faint shimmer of the Veil that hung like a curtain in the dista…"
49"As they continued, the grove seemed to shift around them, the path ahead changing, twisting, as if the very earth was guiding their steps."
50"The trees grew taller, their branches twisting and gnarled, the runes etched into their bark pulsing with a soft light."
51"She reached out, her fingers brushing against the stone, the runes pulsing beneath her touch."
52"She gasped, snatching her hand back, her heart pounding in her chest."
53"Nyx approached the pedestal, their form flickering, their eyes scanning the runes etched into the stone."
54"Rory nodded, her eyes scanning the pedestal, taking in the runes that pulsed with a soft light."
55"As they continued, the grove seemed to shift around them, the path ahead changing, twisting, as if the very earth was guiding their steps."
56"The trees grew taller, their branches twisting and gnarled, the runes etched into their bark pulsing with a soft light."
57"She reached out, her fingers brushing against the stone, the runes pulsing beneath her touch."
58"She gasped, snatching her hand back, her heart pounding in her chest."
59"Nyx approached the archway, their form flickering, their eyes scanning the runes etched into the stone."
60"Rory nodded, her eyes scanning the clearing, taking in the twisted trees, the stone archway, the faint shimmer of the Veil that hung like a curtain in the dista…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags44
uselessAdditionCount41
matches
0"they murmured, their voice a whisper carried on the wind"
1"she breathed, her eyes wide"
2"they murmured, their voice barely audible"
3"she said, her voice echoing slightly"
4"she murmured, her voice barely audible"
5"she breathed, her eyes wide with fear"
6"she said, her voice steady"
7"they murmured, their voice barely audible"
8"they murmured, their voice barely audible"
9"she said, her voice steady"
10"she murmured, her voice barely audible"
11"she breathed, her eyes wide with fear"
12"she said, her voice steady"
13"they murmured, their voice barely audible"
14"she murmured, her voice barely audible"
15"she breathed, her eyes wide with fear"
16"she said, her voice steady"
17"they murmured, their voice barely audible"
18"she said, her voice steady"
19"she murmured, her voice barely audible"
20"she breathed, her eyes wide with fear"
21"she said, her voice steady"
22"they murmured, their voice barely audible"
23"she murmured, her voice barely audible"
24"she breathed, her eyes wide with fear"
25"she said, her voice steady"
26"they murmured, their voice barely audible"
27"she said, her voice steady"
28"she murmured, her voice barely audible"
29"she breathed, her eyes wide with fear"
30"she said, her voice steady"
31"they murmured, their voice barely audible"
32"she murmured, her voice barely audible"
33"she breathed, her eyes wide with fear"
34"she said, her voice steady"
35"they murmured, their voice barely audible"
36"she said, her voice steady"
37"she murmured, her voice barely audible"
38"she breathed, her eyes wide with fear"
39"she said, her voice steady"
40"they murmured, their voice barely audible"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags43
fancyCount29
fancyTags
0"they murmured (murmur)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
2"they murmured (murmur)"
3"they whispered (whisper)"
4"she murmured (murmur)"
5"she breathed (breathe)"
6"they murmured (murmur)"
7"they murmured (murmur)"
8"she murmured (murmur)"
9"she breathed (breathe)"
10"they murmured (murmur)"
11"she murmured (murmur)"
12"she breathed (breathe)"
13"they murmured (murmur)"
14"she murmured (murmur)"
15"she breathed (breathe)"
16"they murmured (murmur)"
17"she murmured (murmur)"
18"she breathed (breathe)"
19"they murmured (murmur)"
20"she murmured (murmur)"
21"she breathed (breathe)"
22"they murmured (murmur)"
23"she murmured (murmur)"
24"she breathed (breathe)"
25"they murmured (murmur)"
26"she murmured (murmur)"
27"she breathed (breathe)"
28"they murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences82
tagDensity0.524
leniency1
rawRatio0.674
effectiveRatio0.674
60.8372%