Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPQ04DWD85387MSVVHK7E0

Run Details

Duration:
27.0s
Cost:
$0.003569
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement, each drop exploding into tiny crowns of silver under the flickering streetlamps. Harlow Quinn didn’t flinch. Her breath came steady, measured, as she rounded the corner of Greek Street, boots splashing through puddles deep enough to soak her ankles. The suspect—tall, lanky, dressed in a hooded jacket that flapped like a crow’s wings—ducked left, then right, weaving through the late-night stragglers with the ease of a man who knew these streets better than his own reflection. She didn’t. But she knew *hunting*. The neon glow of Soho’s signs bled into the wet air, smearing colours across the slick cobblestones. A laugh spilled from a pub as its door swung open, the warm yellow light cutting a rectangle into the downpour. The suspect glanced back. Just for a second. Long enough for Harlow to catch the glint of something metallic in his hand—a token, maybe, or a key—before he vanished down a set of stone steps half-hidden behind a dumpster. Her radio crackled. *"Quinn, where the hell are you? Backup’s two minutes out."* She didn’t answer. Two minutes was a lifetime. The steps were narrow, the rail rusted under her grip. The air changed as she descended, the stench of damp concrete and something older, something *wrong*, creeping into her nostrils. The rain’s drumming faded, replaced by the distant hum of voices, the clink of glass, the low throb of music with a rhythm that didn’t quite sync with her pulse. At the bottom, a tunnel stretched ahead, lit by flickering bulbs strung along the ceiling like a trail of dying fireflies. The suspect was already a shadow at the far end, slipping through a curtain of beaded chains that chimed as he passed. Harlow hesitated. This wasn’t the city she knew. This wasn’t *police work*. A hand shot out from the darkness beside her. She twisted, fist raised, but the man attached to it didn’t flinch. Olive skin, warm brown eyes, a Saint Christopher medallion glinting against his throat. “You don’t want to go in there, *detective*.” Tomás Herrera. Former paramedic. Current pain in her arse. She didn’t lower her guard. “That piece of shit just lifted a wallet with enough black-market charms in it to start a riot. So yeah. I *do*.” Tomás exhaled through his nose, a sound that might’ve been a laugh if the situation weren’t so far past funny. “That ‘piece of shit’ is Silvanus. He’s not a pickpocket. He’s a *courier*. And that”—he nodded toward the beaded curtain—“is the Veil Market. No cops allowed. Not even ones who don’t know when to quit.” The curtain swayed, the beads clicking like bones. Harlow’s fingers twitched toward her cuffs. “Try me.” Tomás stepped closer, close enough that she caught the scent of antiseptic under the damp, the faint metallic tang of old blood. His left forearm bore a jagged scar, pale against his skin. “You go in there, you won’t come out. Not as *you*.” His voice dropped. “Not after what happened to Morris.” The name hit like a gut punch. Her partner’s face flashed behind her eyes—his smirk, the way he’d toss her a coffee when she was running on fumes, the *scream* that had cut through the radio three years ago, the one that still woke her in the dark. She shoved past Tomás, shoulder checking him into the wall. The beads rattled as she pushed through, the cold metal biting her palms. The market unfolded before her like a living thing. Stalls lined the curved walls of the abandoned Tube station, their wares glowing under the sickly light of gas lamps. Jars of things that pulsed. Bottles of liquid that shifted colour when she blinked. A man with too many teeth grinned at her from behind a table of *eyes*—some glass, some not. The air smelled of burnt sugar and copper, of something sweet and rotten all at once. And then there was *him*. Silvanus. The courier. He stood at the far end, handing the stolen wallet—not a wallet, a *pouch*, she saw now, stitched with symbols that made her temples ache—to a woman draped in a cloak of what looked like *feathers*. Her fingers were too long. Her smile too wide. Harlow reached for her badge. Found her holster instead. A hand clamped around her wrist. Tomás, breath ragged, pulled her back into the shadows between two stalls. “You *idiot*.” His voice was a growl, low and urgent. “They *smell* cops here. You might as well have walked in wearing a neon sign.” She yanked free. “Then what the hell are *you* doing here?” His jaw tightened. The medallion at his throat caught the light as he shifted, the saint’s face blurred with time. “I *work* here. Off the books. For people who can’t exactly walk into A&E with a *cursed* knife wound.” He grabbed her arm again, this time above the elbow, his grip bruising. “Silvanus is small fry. But the woman he’s talking to? That’s *Madam Vex*. She trades in *souls*, Harlow. Not drugs. Not guns. *Souls*.” Harlow’s gaze flicked back to the transaction. The pouch had disappeared into Vex’s cloak. Silvanus was already melting into the crowd, but the woman’s eyes—black, pupil-less—locked onto Harlow’s hiding spot. Tomás cursed under his breath. “We’re out of time.” A whistle cut through the murmur of the market. High. Sharp. *Unnatural*. The crowd parted. Madam Vex glided toward them, her feathered cloak whispering against the ground. The gas lamps dimmed as she passed, as if drawing power from her presence. Tomás muttered something in Spanish, his fingers digging into Harlow’s arm. “Run?” Harlow didn’t move. Her pulse hammered in her throat, but her voice was steady. “Not without that pouch.” Vex stopped three paces away. Her smile didn’t reach her eyes. “Detective Quinn.” Her voice was silk over broken glass. “I was *wondering* when you’d find us.” Tomás made a choked sound. “You *know* her?” Vex’s laugh was a wet, clicking thing. “Oh, *Tomás*. Always the last to see what’s right in front of him.” She tilted her head, the feathers of her cloak rustling. “Your partner’s death wasn’t an accident, Detective. And that little pouch?” A long, bony finger pointed toward the curtained entrance. “It holds the *key* to what really happened to DS Morris.” The air left Harlow’s lungs. Vex’s smile widened. “Come. Let’s discuss *terms*.” Tomás’s grip on her arm turned vise-like. “Harlow, *don’t*—” But she was already stepping forward, the weight of her service weapon a cold comfort at her hip. The market swallowed them whole.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.174
leniency0.348
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.46% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1101
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1101
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"glint"
count1
2
word"throb"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"glinting"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count1
7
word"silk"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"glint"
2"throb"
3"pulse"
4"glinting"
5"pulsed"
6"flicked"
7"silk"
8"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences86
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans28
markdownWords39
totalWords1090
ratio0.036
matches
0"hunting"
1"\"Quinn, where the hell are you? Backup’s two minutes out.\""
2"wrong"
3"police work"
4"detective"
5"do"
6"courier"
7"you"
8"scream"
9"eyes"
10"him"
11"pouch"
12"feathers"
13"idiot"
14"smell"
15"you"
16"work"
17"cursed"
18"Madam Vex"
19"souls"
20"Souls"
21"Unnatural"
22"wondering"
23"know"
24"Tomás"
25"key"
26"terms"
27"don’t"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount867
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.15
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Quinn1
Greek1
Street1
Soho1
Harlow10
Saint1
Christopher1
Herrera1
Tomás9
Tube1
Vex5
Spanish1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Harlow"
2"Saint"
3"Christopher"
4"Herrera"
5"Tomás"
6"Vex"
places
0"Greek"
1"Street"
2"Soho"
3"Spanish"
globalScore0.923
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"quite sync with her pulse"
1"looked like *feathers*"
2"as if drawing power from her presence"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1090
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean24.77
std23.12
cv0.933
sampleLengths
080
12
24
377
413
58
660
743
82
910
1034
118
129
1327
1455
158
168
1753
1848
1923
209
2168
225
2348
249
256
2637
2711
2875
2930
309
3112
323
3326
3412
3518
3627
378
3861
395
407
419
4218
435
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs141
matches
0"was running"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences103
ratio0.058
matches
0"The suspect—tall, lanky, dressed in a hooded jacket that flapped like a crow’s wings—ducked left, then right, weaving through the late-night stragglers with the ease of a man who knew these streets better than his own reflection."
1"Long enough for Harlow to catch the glint of something metallic in his hand—a token, maybe, or a key—before he vanished down a set of stone steps half-hidden behind a dumpster."
2"Her partner’s face flashed behind her eyes—his smirk, the way he’d toss her a coffee when she was running on fumes, the *scream* that had cut through the radio three years ago, the one that still woke her in the dark."
3"A man with too many teeth grinned at her from behind a table of *eyes*—some glass, some not."
4"He stood at the far end, handing the stolen wallet—not a wallet, a *pouch*, she saw now, stitched with symbols that made her temples ache—to a woman draped in a cloak of what looked like *feathers*."
5"Silvanus was already melting into the crowd, but the woman’s eyes—black, pupil-less—locked onto Harlow’s hiding spot."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount877
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.03192702394526796
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0011402508551881414
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean10.58
std9
cv0.85
sampleLengths
016
14
223
337
42
54
617
721
84
94
1031
113
1210
133
145
1510
1620
1730
1821
1922
202
216
224
239
2412
2513
268
272
282
295
305
3122
3220
3335
348
356
362
3722
3811
3914
406
417
4241
4310
4413
459
4620
475
489
4918
66.34% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.42718446601941745
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners44
43.29% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"Just for a second."
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences77
matches
0"Her breath came steady, measured,"
1"Her radio crackled."
2"She didn’t answer."
3"She twisted, fist raised, but"
4"She didn’t lower her guard."
5"His left forearm bore a"
6"His voice dropped"
7"Her partner’s face flashed behind"
8"She shoved past Tomás, shoulder"
9"He stood at the far"
10"Her fingers were too long."
11"Her smile too wide."
12"His voice was a growl,"
13"She yanked free."
14"His jaw tightened."
15"He grabbed her arm again,"
16"Her pulse hammered in her"
17"Her smile didn’t reach her"
18"Her voice was silk over"
19"She tilted her head, the"
ratio0.26
31.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences77
matches
0"Harlow Quinn didn’t flinch."
1"Her breath came steady, measured,"
2"The suspect—tall, lanky, dressed in"
3"The neon glow of Soho’s"
4"A laugh spilled from a"
5"The suspect glanced back."
6"Her radio crackled."
7"She didn’t answer."
8"The steps were narrow, the"
9"The air changed as she"
10"The rain’s drumming faded, replaced"
11"The suspect was already a"
12"This wasn’t the city she"
13"This wasn’t *police work*."
14"A hand shot out from"
15"She twisted, fist raised, but"
16"Olive skin, warm brown eyes,"
17"She didn’t lower her guard."
18"Tomás exhaled through his nose,"
19"The curtain swayed, the beads"
ratio0.857
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
50.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The suspect—tall, lanky, dressed in a hooded jacket that flapped like a crow’s wings—ducked left, then right, weaving through the late-night stragglers with the…"
1"The rain’s drumming faded, replaced by the distant hum of voices, the clink of glass, the low throb of music with a rhythm that didn’t quite sync with her pulse…"
2"Her partner’s face flashed behind her eyes—his smirk, the way he’d toss her a coffee when she was running on fumes, the *scream* that had cut through the radio …"
3"The gas lamps dimmed as she passed, as if drawing power from her presence."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She tilted, the feathers of her cloak rustling"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
77.5044%