| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.294 | | leniency | 0.588 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.64% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 534 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 34.46% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 534 | | totalAiIsms | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "electric" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 34 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 34 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 5 | | totalWords | 527 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "watched" | | 1 | "is" | | 2 | "other" | | 3 | "between" | | 4 | "light" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 51.96% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 408 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.96 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | English | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Rory | 8 | | Nyx | 6 | | Ahead | 1 | | Isolde | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.52 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 60.71% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "something like a smile" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 527 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 16 | | mean | 32.94 | | std | 18.26 | | cv | 0.554 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 64 | | 1 | 43 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 49 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 55 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 52 | | 9 | 41 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 41 | | 14 | 47 | | 15 | 2 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 34 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 45 | | ratio | 0.111 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled of wet earth and something older—something electric, like the moment before a storm." | | 1 | "Nyx’s lips—if the shifting darkness could be called lips—curved into something like a smile." | | 2 | "The trees twisted, their trunks spiraling upward like the threads of a screw, their leaves shimmering in hues of emerald and gold and something *other*—colors Rory had no name for." | | 3 | "The moment she crossed the threshold, the temperature shifted—no longer the crisp bite of autumn, but something softer, balmier, like the breath of a living thing." | | 4 | "But it wasn’t water that filled it—it was *light*, liquid and shimmering, shifting through colors like a prism." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 415 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 11 | | adverbRatio | 0.02650602409638554 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00963855421686747 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 45 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 45 | | mean | 11.71 | | std | 6.65 | | cv | 0.567 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 2 |
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| 56.30% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.37777777777777777 | | totalSentences | 45 | | uniqueOpeners | 17 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 31 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 31 | | matches | | 0 | "they murmured, their voice a" | | 1 | "She left no footprints in" | | 2 | "she said, her voice lilting" | | 3 | "She flexed her fingers, half-expecting" | | 4 | "she said, beckoning" | | 5 | "they said, their voice barely" | | 6 | "She pressed a hand to" |
| | ratio | 0.226 | |
| 24.52% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 31 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed like" | | 1 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "The air smelled of wet" | | 3 | "Nyx materialized beside her, their" | | 4 | "The faint violet glow of" | | 5 | "they murmured, their voice a" | | 6 | "Rory exhaled, fog curling from" | | 7 | "Isolde stepped between the stones" | | 8 | "She left no footprints in" | | 9 | "she said, her voice lilting" | | 10 | "Rory shot Nyx a look." | | 11 | "Nyx’s lips—if the shifting darkness" | | 12 | "The trees twisted, their trunks" | | 13 | "The air hummed, a low" | | 14 | "She flexed her fingers, half-expecting" | | 15 | "Isolde glided forward, her bare" | | 16 | "she said, beckoning" | | 17 | "Rory followed, her boots sinking" | | 18 | "The moment she crossed the" | | 19 | "The scent of blossoms thickened," |
| | ratio | 0.871 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 31 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 20 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The trees twisted, their trunks spiraling upward like the threads of a screw, their leaves shimmering in hues of emerald and gold and something *other*—colors R…" | | 1 | "Isolde glided forward, her bare feet barely disturbing the carpet of wildflowers that bloomed in impossible profusion." | | 2 | "She pressed a hand to her chest, as if she could still its rhythm." | | 3 | "But it wasn’t water that filled it—it was *light*, liquid and shimmering, shifting through colors like a prism." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "they murmured, their voice a whisper carried on the wind" | | 1 | "she said, her voice lilting with the cadence of riddles" |
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| 91.18% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.294 | | leniency | 0.588 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.118 | |