Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPQ7B8FHGBYFY2DBXNNDAG

Run Details

Model:
Mistral Small 3.2 24B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
22.4s
Cost:
$0.001094
Provider:
Mistral

Evaluation summary

Score Evaluator
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100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags (details)
56.93% AI-ism adverb frequency (details)
100.00% AI-ism character names (details)
100.00% AI-ism location names (details)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency (details)
33.33% Cliché density (details)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell) (details)
0.00% Filter word density (details)
100.00% Gibberish response detection (details)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse (details)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) (details)
100.00% Name drop frequency (details)
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing (details)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse (details)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) (details)
44.04% Paragraph length variance (details)
100.00% Passive voice overuse (details)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse (details)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse (details)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload) (details)
100.00% Repeated phrase echo (details)
100.00% Sentence length variance (details)
43.44% Sentence opener variety (details)
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts (details)
49.13% Pronoun-first sentence starts (details)
13.40% Subject-first sentence starts (details)
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts (details)
0.00% Technical jargon density (details)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions (details)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) (details)
61.3425% Overall

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air hummed with an unfamiliar energy as Aurora, Nyx, and Isolde stepped through the ancient oak standing stones, their forms shimmering briefly as they crossed the threshold into the Fae Grove. The sudden silence was deafening, a stark contrast to the bustling city they had left behind. Aurora's breath hitched as she took in the scene before her. The grove was a riot of colour, wildflowers blooming in profusion, their petals unfurling in a seemingly impossible display of nature's artistry. The trees stood tall and proud, their leaves rustling softly in a breeze that carried with it the scent of earth and something else—something ancient and magical. The sunlight filtered through the canopy, casting dappled shadows that danced and flickered like living things. "Remarkable," Aurora murmured, her bright blue eyes wide with wonder. She reached out a tentative hand, brushing her fingers against the petals of a flower that glowed faintly with an inner light. The sensation was electric, a tingling warmth that spread up her arm and settled in her chest. Nyx, their shadowy companion, shifted uneasily beside her. Their form flickered, the edges of their silhouette blurring and reforming as they struggled to maintain their solid shape in this alien environment. "This place... it is not like the others," they whispered, their voice a soft susurrus that seemed to blend with the rustling leaves. "The boundaries here are thin, the veil between realms barely a whisper." Isolde, the Half-Fae seer, smiled enigmatically, her pale lavender eyes reflecting the dappled light. "Welcome to the Grove," she said, her voice melodic and soothing. "A place between worlds, where time and space bend to the will of the Fae." Aurora turned to her, a question in her eyes. "How does time work here?" Isolde's smile deepened, her lips curving into a knowing smirk. "Time is a river here, Aurora. It flows and ebbs, sometimes swift, sometimes slow. An hour in the Grove could be a minute in the world beyond, or a day. It is as unpredictable as the Fae themselves." Aurora's fingers tightened around the Heartstone Pendant nestled at her throat, the deep crimson gem pulsing faintly in response to the magic that saturated the air. She could feel its warmth, a steady beat that echoed the rhythm of her own heart. It was a comforting presence, a reminder of the world she knew, even as she stood in the midst of this alien wonder. As they ventured deeper into the grove, the landscape shifted around them, the trees growing taller and more gnarled, their bark twisted into intricate patterns that seemed to tell a story. The flowers changed too, their colours deepening, their petals unfolding to reveal intricate designs that shimmered with an inner light. Aurora reached out, her fingers tracing the patterns on the bark of a nearby tree. The sensation was like nothing she had ever felt before, a strange mixture of warmth and cold that sent shivers down her spine. She could feel the tree's pulse, a steady rhythm that seemed to resonate with the magic that filled the air. Nyx's form flickered again, their silhouette stretching and contorting as they struggled to maintain their shape. "This place... it is too much," they whispered, their voice barely audible over the rustling leaves. "I can feel the magic here, pulling at me, trying to reshape me." Isolde turned to them, her expression softening. "You are a creature of shadow, Nyx. This place is light and life, a stark contrast to the darkness you inhabit. It is natural that you should feel uneasy." Nyx's form solidified, their silhouette darkening as they fought to maintain their shape. "I am not used to feeling... vulnerable," they admitted, their voice a low growl that rumbled through the air. Aurora turned to them, her expression concerned. "Can you... can you step back, Nyx? If this place is too much for you, we can find a way to help you." Nyx's form flickered again, their silhouette blurring and reforming as they struggled to maintain their shape. "No," they said, their voice firm. "I will not be left behind. I will face this... this challenge, and I will overcome it." Aurora nodded, her expression resolute. "Then we face it together," she said, her voice steady and strong. She reached out, her hand finding Nyx's shadowy form, her fingers tangling in the darkness. The sensation was strange, a coolness that seeped into her skin, a chill that spread up her arm and settled in her chest. As they continued their journey, the landscape around them shifted once more, the trees giving way to a clearing, a vast expanse of grass that stretched out before them, dotted with flowers that glowed with an inner light. At the centre of the clearing stood a stone circle, ancient and weathered, the stones standing tall and proud, their surfaces etched with intricate patterns that shimmered with magic. Aurora's breath caught in her throat as she took in the sight, her heart pounding in her chest. She could feel the magic here, a palpable force that seemed to hum in the air, a low vibration that resonated with the very core of her being. Isolde stepped forward, her silver hair catching the light as she moved, her form ethereal and otherworldly. She reached out, her fingers brushing against the surface of one of the standing stones, her expression softening as she traced the intricate patterns etched into the surface. "This is a place of power," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "A nexus of magic, a point where the veil between worlds is thin. Here, the boundaries between realms blur, and the magic of the Fae flows freely." Aurora stepped forward, her fingers brushing against the surface of another stone, her breath catching in her throat as she felt the magic that pulsed beneath her fingertips. She could feel the power here, a force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul. "This is... incredible," she murmured, her voice barely audible over the hum of magic that filled the air. She turned to Isolde, her expression awed. "How is this possible? How can a place like this exist, hidden away in the heart of London?" Isolde smiled, her expression enigmatic. "The Fae have always been a secretive people, Aurora. We hide our true nature, our true power, from the world. But here, in this place, we can be ourselves, free from the constraints of the mortal world." Aurora nodded, her expression thoughtful. She turned back to the standing stones, her fingers tracing the intricate patterns etched into the surface. She could feel the magic here, a force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul. As she stood there, her fingers brushing against the ancient stone, she felt a sudden surge of power, a wave of energy that washed over her, a force that seemed to lift her up, to carry her away. She gasped, her eyes widening as she felt the magic flow through her, a current that seemed to pull her towards the centre of the circle. Nyx's form flickered, their silhouette darkening as they stepped forward, their voice a low growl that rumbled through the air. "Aurora!" Aurora's eyes widened, her breath catching in her throat as she felt the magic pull her towards the centre of the circle. She could feel the power here, a force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul. Isolde stepped forward, her expression concerned. "Aurora, be careful," she warned, her voice barely above a whisper. "The magic here is strong, and it can be... unpredictable." Aurora nodded, her expression resolute. She stepped forward, her fingers brushing against the surface of the standing stones, her breath catching in her throat as she felt the magic flow through her, a current that seemed to pull her towards the centre of the circle. As she stepped into the centre of the circle, the magic surged around her, a wave of energy that seemed to lift her up, to carry her away. She gasped, her eyes widening as she felt the power flow through her, a force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul. The world around her blurred, the landscape shifting and changing as the magic pulled her deeper into the heart of the Grove. She could feel the power here, a force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul. As she stood there, her fingers brushing against the ancient stone, she felt a sudden surge of power, a wave of energy that washed over her, a force that seemed to lift her up, to carry her away. She gasped, her eyes widening as she felt the magic flow through her, a current that seemed to pull her towards the centre of the circle. Nyx's form flickered, their silhouette darkening as they stepped forward, their voice a low growl that rumbled through the air. "Aurora!" Aurora's eyes widened, her breath catching in her throat as she felt the magic pull her towards the centre of the circle. She could feel the power here, a force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul. Isolde stepped forward, her expression concerned. "Aurora, be careful," she warned, her voice barely above a whisper. "The magic here is strong, and it can be... unpredictable." Aurora nodded, her expression resolute. She stepped forward, her fingers brushing against the surface of the standing stones, her breath catching in her throat as she felt the magic flow through her, a current that seemed to pull her towards the centre of the circle. As she stepped into the centre of the circle, the magic surged around her, a wave of energy that seemed to lift her up, to carry her away. She gasped, her eyes widening as she felt the power flow through her, a force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul. The world around her blurred, the landscape shifting and changing as the magic pulled her deeper into the heart of the Grove. She could feel the power here, a force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul. As she stood there, her fingers brushing against the ancient stone, she felt a sudden surge of power, a wave of energy that washed over her, a force that seemed to lift her up, to carry her away. She gasped, her eyes widening as she felt the magic flow through her, a current that seemed to pull her towards the centre of the circle. Nyx's form flickered, their silhouette darkening as they stepped forward, their voice a low growl that rumbled through the air. "Aurora!" Aurora's eyes widened, her breath catching in her throat as she felt the magic pull her towards the centre of the circle. She could feel the power here, a force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul. Isolde stepped forward, her expression concerned. "Aurora, be careful," she warned, her voice barely above a whisper. "The magic here is strong, and it can be... unpredictable." Aurora nodded, her expression resolute. She stepped forward, her fingers brushing against the surface of the standing stones, her breath catching in her throat as she felt the magic flow through her, a current that seemed to pull her towards the centre of the circle. As she stepped into the centre of the circle, the magic surged around her, a wave of energy that seemed to lift her up, to carry her away. She gasped, her eyes widening as she felt the power flow through her, a force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul. The world around her blurred, the landscape shifting and changing as the magic pulled her deeper into the heart of the Grove. She could feel the power here, a force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul. As she stood there, her fingers brushing against the ancient stone, she felt a sudden surge of power, a wave of energy that washed over her, a force that seemed to lift her up, to carry her away. She gasped, her eyes widening as she felt the magic flow through her, a current that seemed to pull her towards the centre of the circle. Nyx's form flickered, their silhouette darkening as they stepped forward, their voice a low growl that rumbled through the air. "Aurora!" Aurora's eyes widened, her breath catching in her throat as she felt the magic pull her towards the centre of the circle. She could feel the power here, a force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul. Isolde stepped forward, her expression concerned. "Aurora, be careful," she warned, her voice barely above a whisper. "The magic here is strong, and it can be... unpredictable." Aurora nodded, her expression resolute. She stepped forward, her fingers brushing against the surface of the standing stones, her breath catching in her throat as she felt the magic flow through her, a current that seemed to pull her towards the centre of the circle. As she stepped into the centre of the circle, the magic surged around her, a wave of energy that seemed to lift her up, to carry her away. She gasped, her eyes widening as she felt the power flow through her, a force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul. The world around her blurred, the landscape shifting and changing as the magic pulled her deeper into the heart of the Grove. She could feel the power here, a force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul.
created_at"2026-02-20T14:19:36.181Z" 2/20/2026, 2:19:36 PM
model"mistralai/mistral-small-3.2-24b-instruct-2506"
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streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency2194
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time22206
tokens_prompt1816
tokens_completion3540
native_tokens_prompt1783
native_tokens_completion3054
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning0
native_tokens_cached512
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
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is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
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usage0.0010945
router(null)
provider_responses
0
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.406
leniency0.813
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
56.93% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2438
totalAiIsmAdverbs21
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count15
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count5
highlights
0"softly"
1"very"
2"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2438
totalAiIsms88
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"stark"
count2
2
word"flickered"
count8
3
word"remarkable"
count1
4
word"electric"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count3
6
word"whisper"
count6
7
word"could feel"
count13
8
word"echoed"
count15
9
word"comforting"
count1
10
word"reminder"
count1
11
word"intricate"
count5
12
word"shimmered"
count2
13
word"tracing"
count2
14
word"sent shivers down"
count1
15
word"pulse"
count1
16
word"chill"
count1
17
word"etched"
count3
18
word"pounding"
count1
19
word"palpable"
count1
20
word"resonated"
count1
21
word"otherworldly"
count1
22
word"traced"
count1
23
word"pulsed"
count1
24
word"depths"
count14
25
word"enigmatic"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"stark"
2"flickered"
3"remarkable"
4"electric"
5"warmth"
6"whisper"
7"could feel"
8"echoed"
9"comforting"
10"reminder"
11"intricate"
12"shimmered"
13"tracing"
14"sent shivers down"
15"pulse"
16"chill"
17"etched"
18"pounding"
19"palpable"
20"resonated"
21"otherworldly"
22"traced"
23"pulsed"
24"depths"
25"enigmatic"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count4
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences103
matches
0"e with wonder"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount34
narrationSentences103
filterMatches
0"wonder"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences122
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2436
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount2105
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.9
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Nyx"
discoveredNames
Aurora19
Nyx10
Isolde11
Fae2
Grove5
Half-Fae1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
3"Pendant"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences95
glossingSentenceCount35
matches
0"unfurling in a seemingly impossible display"
1"susurrus that seemed to blend with the rustling leaves"
2"patterns that seemed to tell a story"
3"rhythm that seemed to resonate with the magic that filled the air"
4"force that seemed to hum in the air, a low vibration that resonated with the very core of her being"
5"force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul"
6"force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul"
7"force that seemed to lift her up, to carry her away"
8"current that seemed to pull her towards the centre of the circle"
9"force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul"
10"current that seemed to pull her towards the centre of the circle"
11"energy that seemed to lift her up, to carry her away"
12"force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul"
13"force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul"
14"force that seemed to lift her up, to carry her away"
15"current that seemed to pull her towards the centre of the circle"
16"force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul"
17"current that seemed to pull her towards the centre of the circle"
18"energy that seemed to lift her up, to carry her away"
19"force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul"
20"force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul"
21"force that seemed to lift her up, to carry her away"
22"current that seemed to pull her towards the centre of the circle"
23"force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul"
24"current that seemed to pull her towards the centre of the circle"
25"energy that seemed to lift her up, to carry her away"
26"force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul"
27"force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul"
28"force that seemed to lift her up, to carry her away"
29"current that seemed to pull her towards the centre of the circle"
30"force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul"
31"current that seemed to pull her towards the centre of the circle"
32"energy that seemed to lift her up, to carry her away"
33"force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul"
34"force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2436
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences122
matches(empty)
44.04% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean46.85
std14.25
cv0.304
sampleLengths
059
165
249
366
440
514
648
765
851
958
1045
1136
1232
1330
1439
1555
1667
1746
1845
1941
2057
2143
2242
2351
2464
2521
2651
2727
2845
2964
3051
3164
3221
3351
3427
3545
3664
3751
3864
3921
4051
4127
4245
4364
4451
4564
4621
4751
4827
4945
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs365
matches
0"was deafening"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences122
ratio0.008
matches
0"The trees stood tall and proud, their leaves rustling softly in a breeze that carried with it the scent of earth and something else—something ancient and magical."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2107
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount71
adverbRatio0.03369719981015662
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.007119126720455624
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences122
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences122
mean19.97
std10.52
cv0.527
sampleLengths
032
116
211
322
427
516
610
722
817
98
1023
1123
1212
1314
1411
1515
169
175
1810
1938
2026
2116
2223
2331
2420
2515
2623
2720
2816
2916
3013
317
3229
3313
3419
357
3623
3716
386
3917
405
4112
4215
4323
4438
4529
4618
4728
4817
4928
43.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.16393442622950818
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners20
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
ratio0
49.13% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences103
matches
0"She reached out a tentative"
1"Their form flickered, the edges"
2"they whispered, their voice a"
3"she said, her voice melodic"
4"She could feel its warmth,"
5"It was a comforting presence,"
6"She could feel the tree's"
7"they whispered, their voice barely"
8"they admitted, their voice a"
9"they said, their voice firm"
10"she said, her voice steady"
11"She reached out, her hand"
12"She could feel the magic"
13"She reached out, her fingers"
14"she said, her voice barely"
15"She could feel the power"
16"she murmured, her voice barely"
17"She turned to Isolde, her"
18"She turned back to the"
19"She could feel the magic"
ratio0.427
13.40% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount92
totalSentences103
matches
0"The air hummed with an"
1"The sudden silence was deafening,"
2"Aurora's breath hitched as she"
3"The grove was a riot"
4"The trees stood tall and"
5"The sunlight filtered through the"
6"Aurora murmured, her bright blue"
7"She reached out a tentative"
8"The sensation was electric, a"
9"Nyx, their shadowy companion, shifted"
10"Their form flickered, the edges"
11"they whispered, their voice a"
12"Isolde, the Half-Fae seer, smiled"
13"she said, her voice melodic"
14"Aurora turned to her, a"
15"Isolde's smile deepened, her lips"
16"Aurora's fingers tightened around the"
17"She could feel its warmth,"
18"It was a comforting presence,"
19"The flowers changed too, their"
ratio0.893
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences74
technicalSentenceCount46
matches
0"The air hummed with an unfamiliar energy as Aurora, Nyx, and Isolde stepped through the ancient oak standing stones, their forms shimmering briefly as they cros…"
1"The grove was a riot of colour, wildflowers blooming in profusion, their petals unfurling in a seemingly impossible display of nature's artistry."
2"The trees stood tall and proud, their leaves rustling softly in a breeze that carried with it the scent of earth and something else—something ancient and magica…"
3"She reached out a tentative hand, brushing her fingers against the petals of a flower that glowed faintly with an inner light."
4"Their form flickered, the edges of their silhouette blurring and reforming as they struggled to maintain their solid shape in this alien environment."
5"Aurora's fingers tightened around the Heartstone Pendant nestled at her throat, the deep crimson gem pulsing faintly in response to the magic that saturated the…"
6"She could feel its warmth, a steady beat that echoed the rhythm of her own heart."
7"As they ventured deeper into the grove, the landscape shifted around them, the trees growing taller and more gnarled, their bark twisted into intricate patterns…"
8"The flowers changed too, their colours deepening, their petals unfolding to reveal intricate designs that shimmered with an inner light."
9"Nyx's form flickered again, their silhouette blurring and reforming as they struggled to maintain their shape."
10"The sensation was strange, a coolness that seeped into her skin, a chill that spread up her arm and settled in her chest."
11"As they continued their journey, the landscape around them shifted once more, the trees giving way to a clearing, a vast expanse of grass that stretched out bef…"
12"At the centre of the clearing stood a stone circle, ancient and weathered, the stones standing tall and proud, their surfaces etched with intricate patterns tha…"
13"She could feel the magic here, a palpable force that seemed to hum in the air, a low vibration that resonated with the very core of her being."
14"She reached out, her fingers brushing against the surface of one of the standing stones, her expression softening as she traced the intricate patterns etched in…"
15"Aurora stepped forward, her fingers brushing against the surface of another stone, her breath catching in her throat as she felt the magic that pulsed beneath h…"
16"She could feel the power here, a force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul."
17"She could feel the magic here, a force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul."
18"As she stood there, her fingers brushing against the ancient stone, she felt a sudden surge of power, a wave of energy that washed over her, a force that seemed…"
19"She gasped, her eyes widening as she felt the magic flow through her, a current that seemed to pull her towards the centre of the circle."
20"Nyx's form flickered, their silhouette darkening as they stepped forward, their voice a low growl that rumbled through the air."
21"She could feel the power here, a force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul."
22"She stepped forward, her fingers brushing against the surface of the standing stones, her breath catching in her throat as she felt the magic flow through her, …"
23"She gasped, her eyes widening as she felt the power flow through her, a force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the…"
24"She could feel the power here, a force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul."
25"As she stood there, her fingers brushing against the ancient stone, she felt a sudden surge of power, a wave of energy that washed over her, a force that seemed…"
26"She gasped, her eyes widening as she felt the magic flow through her, a current that seemed to pull her towards the centre of the circle."
27"Nyx's form flickered, their silhouette darkening as they stepped forward, their voice a low growl that rumbled through the air."
28"She could feel the power here, a force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul."
29"She stepped forward, her fingers brushing against the surface of the standing stones, her breath catching in her throat as she felt the magic flow through her, …"
30"She gasped, her eyes widening as she felt the power flow through her, a force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the…"
31"She could feel the power here, a force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul."
32"As she stood there, her fingers brushing against the ancient stone, she felt a sudden surge of power, a wave of energy that washed over her, a force that seemed…"
33"She gasped, her eyes widening as she felt the magic flow through her, a current that seemed to pull her towards the centre of the circle."
34"Nyx's form flickered, their silhouette darkening as they stepped forward, their voice a low growl that rumbled through the air."
35"She could feel the power here, a force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul."
36"She stepped forward, her fingers brushing against the surface of the standing stones, her breath catching in her throat as she felt the magic flow through her, …"
37"She gasped, her eyes widening as she felt the power flow through her, a force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the…"
38"She could feel the power here, a force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul."
39"As she stood there, her fingers brushing against the ancient stone, she felt a sudden surge of power, a wave of energy that washed over her, a force that seemed…"
40"She gasped, her eyes widening as she felt the magic flow through her, a current that seemed to pull her towards the centre of the circle."
41"Nyx's form flickered, their silhouette darkening as they stepped forward, their voice a low growl that rumbled through the air."
42"She could feel the power here, a force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul."
43"She stepped forward, her fingers brushing against the surface of the standing stones, her breath catching in her throat as she felt the magic flow through her, …"
44"She gasped, her eyes widening as she felt the power flow through her, a force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the…"
45"She could feel the power here, a force that seemed to resonate with the very core of her being, a call that echoed in the depths of her soul."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount10
matches
0"she said, her voice melodic and soothing"
1"they whispered, their voice barely audible over the rustling leaves"
2"they admitted, their voice a low growl that rumbled through the air"
3"they said, their voice firm"
4"she said, her voice steady and strong"
5"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
6"she warned, her voice barely above a whisper"
7"she warned, her voice barely above a whisper"
8"she warned, her voice barely above a whisper"
9"she warned, her voice barely above a whisper"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"Aurora murmured (murmur)"
1"they whispered (whisper)"
2"they whispered (whisper)"
3"they admitted (admit)"
4"she murmured (murmur)"
5"she warned (warn)"
6"she warned (warn)"
7"she warned (warn)"
8"she warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.406
leniency0.813
rawRatio0.692
effectiveRatio0.563
61.3425%